Arshi drabble "ZID" LAST PART pg 122 6/11/2017 (COMPLETED) - Page 21

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Interesting teaser. 
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Interesting teaser. 
Updated soon.
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The character sketch looks interesting.
So you are incorporating two shows's characters in this story! Good, though I don't watch the otehr show.
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The teaser looks interesting.
Khushi became feisty! 
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Originally posted by: sohara

The character sketch looks interesting.

So you are incorporating two shows's characters in this story! Good, though I don't watch the otehr show.


yah i put them just like that but there is not much scens of them its only about khushi and arnav...that khushi's zid is arnav...😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello guysss ...here is update...sorry for late update...


                          Part 1
                       (painfull life)

at late night 1.am

khushi enter is her big mansion with thrimbling legs...maid hold her before she fall...
khushi shout...
khushi: dont...dont you dare touch me you maid...
maid: mam you are not well mam let me help you please...
khushi: no way... i dont want anyone's help...
maid: mam please
khushi smile and sit on sofa and finding something in bag...like carzy girl finding choclates...
maid: mam are you finding tablets? let me bring new bottle mam..
before maid go to bring new pills bottle then khushi fell on sofa and faint in no time...
maid: mammm...oh no i'll call doctor...ramu,hp,op take mam in her room...
they came and took khushi and layed her on her king size bed...

maid called doctor
maid: hello doctor sahab pl..please come to mansion mam's faint...
doctor: dont worry i am comming just make sure she won't up before i came there
maid: jii doctor 

maid went to her room...
khushi open her half eyes...
khushi: pills...pills...leave mee leave me you rascal...
maid got panic to see khushi like this so she took phone and called sawra ragini...
maid: hel...hello sawra mam please come home mam is not well...
sawra: whattt ok i am comming dont worry call doctor ...
maid: i called she'll come in sometime...
sawra: ok ok...

sawra cut call and called ragini to come khushi's mansion...

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at khushi's mansion...
doctor checking khushi still she was mumring in half open eyes...
khushi: leave me leave me please leave me nooo
and she faint fully...
sawra: doctor
doc: sawra she again saw something which make her like this...
sawra: doctor why she always saw something like that  she gone crazy behave like she is some mental pecient ...
ragini: doctor when she'll forget that inccident  we cant see our best friend like this...
doc: i know you both very cancerd about her...i cant say anything like i told you she want love a love of men her life partner whom love her very deeply then she will cameback like she was before 10 years...
sawra: doctor is she fine now?
doc: i inject her she will fine by 48 hours..
ragini: thank you doctor...

doctor leave...sawra ragini sit on sofa and staring at her bestfriend...
ragini: sawra i cant see khushi like that...
sawra: me too ragini...dont know when she will fall in love whom love her...

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next day at office..
sanskar: hey buddies...
arnav,lucky: hi dude...
arnav: looks like today that hitttler boss did not came?
lucky: she is so hot and beautifull arnav...
sanskar: shut up lucky should i tell ragini...
arnav start laughing...
lucky: are you friend or enamy?
sanskar: both
 three start laughing khushi's PA CAME TO THEM...
jiggi: hello arnav...
arnav rolled his eyes ...
arnav: hi...what you want?
jiggi; how rude arnav why you dont like me?
sanskar: because you open girl and he dont like open girl...
jiggi counfused then ask...
jiggi: i did not get you sanskar?
lucky: he mean that you are showing everything to everyone that is it...
arnav: stop it guyss... jiggi you have no work today?
jiggi: aah actually today mam did not came cuz she is very unwelll 
arnav: oh look at the first day boss get sick...
sanskar: yeah sawra told me she is not well from last night so she will come tommorow...
lucky: how sawra know about her?
sanskar: because sawra and ragini is best friend of K...

arnav still dont know who is boss and how she looks like...yesterday he missed to see khushi's face...thats why she is talking about her boss...other wise he hate to take her name ...
arnav: oh yah i forgot...

at night after office...
 raizada house... 

anjali: chotte bring pari's choclats she is shouting countinusly...
arnav: give her phone...
anjali: take it chotte want to talk you...
pari took phone ...
pari: hello pink panther ...you promise me you'll bring me park..
arnav: pari my darling i was busy in work you know na i want you to walk and run and play with your friends...
pari: ok ok dont change the topic pink panther bring my choclate if you forget then i won't give you night kiss and also morning one...
arnav: ok ok meri maa i'll...
pari: thats like my pink panther...
anjali: if you finish then give me the phone...
pari: ya ya here you go...
anjali smile at pari and took phone...
anjali: chotte is everything ok ..
arnav: no di i'll came home then i'll tell you...
anjali: ok tc...
arnav: hmm...

anjali cut the call...

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HERE IS PART END
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thnx
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very nice...
loved it..
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow great story please update soon 
I'm really looking forward to the next part of your story and i hope everything is going to be ok with khushi soon