Watch

TEAM

Channel V Dil Dosti Dance Forum Thumbnail

Channel V Dil Dosti Dance India Forums

|| SwaRon FF : I Hate To Love You || NEW THREAD LINK IN THE INDEX- Page 77

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Created

11years

Last reply

8years

Replies

Views

Users

Likes

Frequent Posters

LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: angels007
Hellooo... i'm new here bcoz I love swaron and I read your ff & I love this ff pls update soon...:-) 😊

New reader.

Thank you dear. Will be updating soon.

Quote

NUPUR AGARWAL

@--NupurSwaron--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#762

Finally done reading all the parts and m just loving dis FF more n more ...

Swaron married but its a contarct marriage where Sharon loves him madly bt he fails to see the care n love and just for the sake of revenge he broke her heart ...i always wanted to read dis sort of story on swaron and u written it beautifully describing each n every emotions and the way u described swayam turmoil of how he missed her and after seeing her after so many months he feels he started living once again

The transformation of sharon being independent and strong headed and swayam getting vulnerable it was actual a role reversal but felt sad for him the way he was determined to win sharon back bt still he is confused between his mind and heart and sharon gets ready to come wid him as she knws tani's condition of gettng married and she doesnt want tani to go through the pain cz of dem

hope swayam wins her love back and make her realise dat he loves her too like she does

Waiting for the nxt part ...Update sooner 😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

mythreyii

@mythreyii

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#763

Please update this one took

Pls

Quote

LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#764

Originally posted by: --NupurSwaron--
Finally done reading all the parts and m just loving dis FF more n more ...
Swaron married but its a contarct marriage where Sharon loves him madly bt he fails to see the care n love and just for the sake of revenge he broke her heart ...i always wanted to read dis sort of story on swaron and u written it beautifully describing each n every emotions and the way u described swayam turmoil of how he missed her and after seeing her after so many months he feels he started living once again

The transformation of sharon being independent and strong headed and swayam getting vulnerable it was actual a role reversal but felt sad for him the way he was determined to win sharon back bt still he is confused between his mind and heart and sharon gets ready to come wid him as she knws tani's condition of gettng married and she doesnt want tani to go through the pain cz of dem

hope swayam wins her love back and make her realise dat he loves her too like she does

Waiting for the nxt part ...Update sooner 😊

Thank you so much Nupur. 🤗

even i always wanted to read a story like this. 😛

Quote

LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#765

Originally posted by: mythreyii
Please update this one took
Pls

Will do by tonight. 😃

Quote

LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#766

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN

Three days had passed since Swayam acceded to Sharon's demand. After that day, they have not talked much, but only once when Sharon interrogated him for locking her inside his farmhouse. Most of the time, they were aloof towards each other; he used to go to his office even before she wakes up and come back after making sure that she had fallen asleep. His rudeness did not bother her much; she did not care about either his presence or absence.
Swayam was running away from his problems, he was apprehensive to face his dad, he knew, it would not be easy for them to act in front of his family, it is a difficult task and after what he did, he was not at all ready to face anything.
When she said about the contract, it hurt him, he came to know the pain Sharon would have felt on their wedding night, he cursed himself for being such a dork towards Sharon. He even knows Sharon wants to talk to him, but something was stopping him from doing it, he was afraid to face her, face her taunts. She is bringing vulnerability in him; he is exposed in front of her, even her smile hurts him when he thinks that he snatched it for a mere revenge. He had noticed a change in him too, that he is falling for her irrevocably, he admitted that to himself. Sharon is not making things easy for him, her presence near him brings out butterflies in his tummy, that she makes him nervous.
"Where the hell is he?" Sharon muttered under her breath when the clock struck 12 am. She was adamant to talk to him tonight. Even though she had fallen asleep more than two times on the couch, her sleep never longed more than fifteen minutes.
She stood up from the couch and walked towards the door, another half an hour passed, yet swayam did not show up.
"What if something had happened to him?" a fear crept inside her slowly, she anxiously waited for his arrival.
It became 1 am when swayam came back. Because of the darkness spread in the hall, he could not see Sharon waiting for him. As a normal night, he just walked towards her room to check on her, he has been checking on her before he goes to sleep. However, to his surprise, she was not in the room.
"Where is she?" he looked around the room, standing at the door.
"Are you looking for me?" The sudden voice startled him.
"What the hell Sharon?..." he whispers-yelled at her after turning to see her, "... You just scared me." He mumbled mostly to himself.
"Sorry,"
"Why are you still awake?" he asked little irritated.
They both were standing in front of Sharon's bedroom, facing each other, in the dim light, they could not see each other properly, but could hear other's heartbeats.
"I was waiting for you."
Butterflies erupted inside his tummy when she said that. If Sharon were not standing beside him, he would have jumped in ecstasy. He was happy beyond limits to know that she was waiting for him.
"We are meeting dad tomorrow."
"Tomorrow?"
"Yeah! Don't come up with your meetings." After saying what she had to, she went up to her room and locked it.
Swayam stood in front of her bedroom door without moving for a second. That is when it hit him that, it is time to face the volcano.
He smiled weakly and moved towards his room.
*** Next morning!
"Dad, did Bhai give you a call?" Taani asked while descending the steps, urgently.
"When did he give me a call in the last six months?" Rishi scorns painfully and continued to read his newspaper.
"Dad"
Rishi jumped out of his chair when he heard Swayam's voice after many days.
***I absolutely love this place, my house, where I lived for only a few months. Though the time I spend here is the worse phase of my life I love this place, the atmosphere, the love, the care, the warmth, everything about this place holds a huge share of my heart, I was in love with it. It would be a lie if I say that I never enjoyed being here, I did. Being with Taani, Rey and dad was the best phase of my life. This place witnessed the best and the worse of my life. It has given me beautiful and at the same time haunting memories.
I was nervous to meet them, too nervous that I did not realize that swayam already moved into the hall. I stood at the door, staring at the place, from where my life started, for the first time I entered into this house in the arms of my love, and I walked out of this place alone.
Many memories rushed into my brain, my marriage with swayam, the love I had for him, the memories I created with those two beautiful souls. As someone said, a relation can end, a person can die but the memories neither die nor end.
"...Sharon..." Someone mumbled enough for me to hear, I knew it was Taani. I did not grasp that I was inside the hall until she called my name. A sudden happiness with sorrow rushed through me when I breathe in this air.
"Oh my god Sharon," Yelling Tanni rushed towards me in a jet speed, I stumbled few steps back when she hugged me. She squeezed me with all the strength she has, I could easily understand her state of mind.
No one spoke anything, there was pure silence, I was aware of the presence of swayam and dad. I did not look up, I could not meet the pair of accusing eyes, those were filled with unshed tears, they accused me of leaving them behind.
I slowly separated Taani from me; her black eyes shined with tears, without saying anything I moved towards the one person who has always loved me more than anyone. When I stayed with him under the same roof I never tried to understand the relation I shared with Rishi Shekhawat; undoubtedly, he was a father figure to me, but there was a connection between us, as I know him since ages.
I stood beside swayam waiting for a movement from dad; but he did not move from his place, I know he was shocked beyond to react. That was when I took a step, I must say a bold step, and I intertwined my fingers with Swayam's. I could feel the tension build inside swayam. I pressed my palm against him to let him know that, it is going to be fine, I wanted a reaction from dad, and with this he will react I know.
"Why did you come back?" He yelled at my face after a few minutes.
"You moved out of our life like we meant nothing, then why did you come back, Sharon?" I shivered at the intensity of his anger.
He has the right to be angry, after all, I moved out of his house on that engagement day like they meant nothing, I didn't wait for anyone to meet or talk. I moved out, as that was my decision.
"I thought I loved you more than enough to share your problems, and you thought to hide what this shameless son of mine did to you?"
I cringed when he called swayam shameless, it is weird to hear someone calling names to the person we once loved.
"Dad I'm sorry. I know what i did was a big mistake, and I regret it, I really do." Swayam spoke for the first time.
"You never treated us your own Sharon, if you did then you could not move out like that." He ignored swayam and spoke to me while eyeing our intertwined hands.
"I told her to do that, it was because of me."
I felt bad for swayam when he mumbled that, I know I should not, he does not deserve it yet I felt bad.
"Yeah exactly, you did everything..." he took a deep sigh "...now what is this new drama going on here?" He asked pointing his fingers at our hands.
"Dad... Now I know the depth of my mistakes, I'm realizing that what I did is unforgivable; it is unforgettable for us, but I just need a chance, a second chance." Swayam said in a low tone.
I looked at him, amazed with the truthfulness of his words. It felt so genuine that I again became confused about his loyalty.
"And I want to give him a chance." Those words slipped out of my mouth when I deciphered what swayam just said. My voice was laced with fear, the fear of the outcome.
"What? Are you out of your mind, how could you just forget what he did?" Taani exploded as a volcano behind me, I was expecting that.
"I could because I love him." I turned to look at her, Swayam also turned with me. I could feel the three pair of eyes looking at me, as I said something unbelievable.
"I can't believe it." After saying that, she walked away, may be upset with me that I forgave her brother. I smiled at my destiny. What an eventful life.
"You could forget it because your love is strong and you have a big heart, but we don't."
Before dad complete, I ran towards his embrace and silently cried in his arms, it was soothing as always.
***
I looked at them in pure hatred. I felt so empty when she pulled her palm away and ran to dad. It was unbearable to stand like this, I yearned to be in her place, I yearned to hug my dad, and I yearned to be soothed by him. The complete hatred I had subsided inside me hit me hard. I hated that sight; I hated her for loving my dad, for being with him, for providing him, the comfort. I hated her for snatching him from me, for snatching my rights.
"But you love her swayam," Someone reminded me.
***

Edited by Keechu. - 9 years ago

Quote

hoPe_kk

@hoPe_kk

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#767

NOTE

Hi Guys!🤗
Yes , don't be surprised, It is the truth, Finally i updated. 😆
I was unwell, that is why it delayed.
I hope you guys like this part, it was something i liked... there was something huge, and i hope you guys got the hint. 😉
Don't forget to hit likes and give me lots of comments.
Please Buddy this account for further pms.
Thank you. ☺️

Edited by Keechu.Pms - 10 years ago