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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

so cute... 😳
N this is how bihaan should carry Thapki n should run away from Pandey zoo 😉



😆😆😆

Maybe I will end my FF with this pic...as in the last scene will be Bihaan carrying Thapki like this and going on a honeymoon or somewhere...dont know..😆😆

Originally posted by: sukanksha


You and your gifs' 😉
Anyway... Romance se kabhi bore nahi hote sahib...
N Romance is what lacking in the show... So the only Sahara is this ff.
N I toh was going to give you ideas which places are left to romance (don't worry sanskari romance) 😆



I sooo sooo wanted to write a shower sequence between these two☺️..I had it planned ...but I I had to cut that scene ...

also I had a scene with Sheena-Dhruv-Thapki-Bihaan where Bihaan would be trying to get Thapki jealous by flirting with Sheena but instead he himself gets super jealous when Dhruv tucks Thapki's hair behind her ear...so Bihaan just storms off in anger but Thapki runs after him and then they kind of started making out in the tabela ☺️... I cut this scene out tooo...

too much making out these two do all the time already...

Edited by dushturain - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb!!!

Good to know that after knowing Thahaan's relationship Dhruv was okay with it but I did feel sorry for him...


Anyways what is Vasu up to know?...Why do I get the feeling you have planned something very shocking...😲...eager to know what happens next...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh god I just loved the first part where dhruv witnessed thahaan kiss scene 😳
Honestly I want this type of scene in show also...maja aa jayega 🤣

Plz bhar bhar ke romantic scene include karna ☺️ bcz only FF/Os are ours shara ...and update soon plz 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dushturain

How cute is this photo??


This is awsome 😳

Isse tara vaga do dono ko PZ se 😆
Edited by Nijhum19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dushturain

sooo sooo wanted to write a shower sequence between these two☺️..I had it planned ...but I I had to cut that scene ...

also I had a scene with Sheena-Dhruv-Thapki-Bihaan where Bihaan would be trying to get Thapki jealous by flirting with Sheena but instead he himself gets super jealous when Dhruv tucks Thapki's hair behind her ear...so Bihaan just storms off in anger but Thapki runs after him and then they kind of started making out in the tabela ☺️... I cut this scene out tooo...

too much making out these two do all the time already...


Y r u cutting these both scene...plz add them..u know we r not getting anything in show...u can let us imagine n make happy with ur writing..
Edited by Namu87 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

As usual my bestie was to my rescue and she glued my writing together.

A shout out to Chickee bear ❤️ meanwhile I am going to hide just in case. Enjoy!!


The Storm

Bihaan followed Vasundhara nervously to the Pandey Nivas Mandir where she stopped in front of Matarani. Bihaan was feeling edgy, what was Ma upto? Does she want to send me out of city again? Maybe this time for months... he wondered nervously.

But instead of telling him anything of that sort, Vasu looked at Bihaan with a smile and offered him a manila envelope.

Not taking it from her, he instead asked calmly "What is this Ma?" However inside he was feeling anything but calm, the moment he saw the huge envelope his heart started to beat fast and he started to sweat. He began to pray earnestly to Matarani that the envelope did not contain what he think it contains.

"See it yourself."

"Do I need to deliver it somewhere for you?" Bihaan asked still not touching it.


Vasu took hold of Bihaan's hand and put the envelope on his hand. When Bihaan didn't close his hand around it...Vasu made his fingers close around the envelope herself, "No, It's for you Beta, this holds your ticket to freedom"

"Ticket to freedom? What do you mean by that??" Bihaan still played dumb.

"Open it and see it yourself...you will be very happy" Vasu urged him to open, a sly smile on her face.

Bihaan suddenly slapped his forehead, "Main kitna bhulakkad huun" He moved to drop the envelope at Matarani's feet, "I have to go to Mr Mehta's house by 11 am and I am already late. Thank you Ma for whatever that is inside the envelope but I will open it once I come back." Bihaan turned to leave.

Vasu stopped him by grabbing his arm. "If you are already late it won't matter if you become late few minutes more. Waise bhi, it will only take few minutes to finish up this business. Now pick up the envelope and open it."

Seeing no other way around, Bihaan picked up the envelope and started to open it grudgingly.

It was his and Thapki's annulment papers. What a surprise! He groaned.

Bihaan looked around to see was there anyone around who could help him get out of this mess right now. No one except Matarani... Help me Matarani please!... Is that a pen in her hand? Think Bihaan Think...Think hard...

"Oh! It is my and Thapki's annulment papers" Bihaan tried to fake surprise...

Vasu nodded, "Yes, and today in front of Matarani I want you to end your pretense of the relationship you share with Thapki once and for all" She offered him the pen.

Bihaan started to read the document instead, trying to stall for time. It was 36 pages of full legal documentation.

"Oh stop it Bihaan, you don't have to read it now... just sign at the allotted places" She pointed at the documents.

"But how can I just sign like that, Ma?? I have to read it, understand it, and check whether there are any mistakes----" Bihaan said matter of factly.

"I have read it and there are no mistakes... you trust your Mother, no beta? NOW SIGN" she urged him to take the pen again. If Bihaan was playing a game so was Vasu and she seemed fast losing patience.

"I was thinking maybe Thapki and I should read it and sign it together", he mumbled looking desperately for a way out.

"Don't worry about her, she will be taken care of...now sign"

"Ma, let her come back with Dhruv today after that..."

"JUST SIGN AS I AM SAYING"" Vasu's sweet and motherly facade seemed to slip.

Bihaan looked around again for help...

With a huff Vasu began to jab the pen into Bihaan's hand with vicious force. "Sign it ...sign it right now, I am ordering you to sign it now..."

Bihaan noticed the crazed look on her face...

She began to bark, "HOLD THE PEN BIHAAN, SIGN THE PAPERS...YOUR MOTHER IS COMMANDING YOU TO SIGN"

"No." Bihaan said simply. He won't sign it and his decision was made long time back. Saying no was just a formality.

"What did you just say?" she looked at him incredulously.

"No Ma, I will not sign these papers" Bihaan said firmly again.

"TERI ITNI HIMMAT, MA SEY ZUBAAN LADATA HAIN??"

Bihaan remained silent.

Seemingly crazed, she again started to jab the pen into Bihaan's hand not caring it was hurting him. "SIGN KAR, MEIN KEH RAHI HUUN"

Bihaan shook his head, remaining silent but standing firm in his decision.

Vasu slapped him, Bihaan didn't make a noise, and he kept looking at the floor... She slapped him again...

"I will show you how you will not sign," *Slap* * Slap*

Bihaan's silence seemed to inflame her further. She gripped Bihaan's hair and began to tear them out... SIGN KAR, SIGN KAR she kept saying.

"No I won't, and these papers won't work for us anyways... we can't go for annulment anymore, we need to get divorced" These words flew from Bihaan's mouth before he could think better of it.

Vasu stopped her mauling at that piece of information. She was calm for a moment and she nodded her head. She looked around her as if searching for something her eyes shining with an unnatural glaze.

Then she suddenly stopped as if she knew what to do. Reaching down she picked it up; the medium sized solid brass diya which was burning at Matarani's feet. Picking it up she swung it right into a stunned Bihaan with brutal force, sending him reeling backward. Witht a glazed look in his eyes he fell with a thud into the floor. The hot ghee sloshed into his face but thankfully the fire was out before the diya could hit him.

Vasu hit him repeatedly with it... a manic look in her eyes. Bihaan began to crawl backwards, he felt dizzy because the first blow has hit his head...he could feel blood trickling down his eyes...his vision was becaming hazy... he kept retreating slowly, painfully, but Vasu kept advancing shouting fiercely "APNE BHAI KI BIWI PAR DORE DALTA HAI TU? USKE AMANAT PAR? NAMAK HARAM" *strike* "KUTTE" *strike*

"No she is my wife and I love her" Bihaan must have got a death wish to be still talking.

"YOU ARE NOTHING BUT A STREETDOG, YOU DARE TO LOVE A GIRL LIKE THAPKI, YOUR BROTHER'S LOVE?" *strike* "TERI AUKAUT KEYA HAI?"

Bihaan had crawled back to living space by now and Vasu's voice could have brought the dead back.

"Thapki is mine" Bihaan spit the blood from his mouth and braced himself for the next blow... He saw Vasu lunging the diya but instead something soft and warm hurled towards him, enveloping him.

He smelled her before he could see her. He tried to throw Thapki away from him before Ma could strike but he was too late. Vasu's strike fell on her back...Thapki flinched at the strike but didn't make a sound...she kept covering Bihaan holding his bloodied face into her bosom trying to protect him with her body as much as she could.

Vasu dropped her weapon on the ground with a clank.

"Thapki Beta, yeh kya kiya tumne, I am so sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you...move away...move away from this dog...don't get yourself dirty" she muttered incoherently, trying to reach out towards the crouching figures on the floor.

Thapki didn't hear anything... She was looking at her Bihaan, she cradled his head and caressed his beautiful face gently with one hand, not trying to hurt him. His left eye was swelling shut, a viscous gash continued from corner of that eye to his temple, his hair was slick wet with blood, and there was another slash on his right cheek... Thapki looked down to his chest... the bright yellow t-shirt Bihaan was wearing was dirty brown colour now clinging to his body wet with blood... Thapki tried to blow gently on his wounds; his head seemed to be lolling on her hand. However, he was still conscious and he tried to smile at her baring his red stained teeth to assure her he was fine...

Everyone had gathered in the living room by now, hearing the ruckus... Bauji, Dadima, Preity Bhabi, Suman Bhabi, Ashwin Bhaiya, Sanjay Bhaiya...she could hear sobbing...it must be the bhabis...Thapki spied Dhruv sir standing on the balcony overlooking the living space shock etched his face...

"Thapki beta, move away from him, you are ruining your dress, you have to go out remember?? Dhruv must be waiting...let me deal with this animal-don't concern yourself" Vasu spoke in a calm voice, as if nothing had happened.

That did it! Vasu's voice finally pierced through her mind. Thapki turned towards Vasu, gently laying Bihaan's head gently on her shoulder.

She looked at Vasu and laughed, though tears wear pouring down her eyes, "Animal?" she questioned softly. She pointed towards Bihaan and asked, "Animal? L-Look again Ma... Look who is the animal h-here..."

"Thapki beta, don't worry your poor little heart, nothing happened to him...he is overacting trying to trap you by gaining your sympathy...You are innocent and naive...you don't know the likes of him...the cunning minds of street trash...they don't have any values, compassion, morals...they are selfish, disloyal treacherous and they only know how to trap young innocent girls like you and fleece them of their innocence----" Vasu said in an eerily sweet voice.

"And y-y-you have them?"Thapki asked.

Vasu looked perplexed for a second.

Thapki elaborated, "D-Do you h-have compassion, v-values, m-morality inside you?" Not waiting for an answer she continued, "Do know what a person who is selfish, t-treacherous, and disloyal is called?"

Someone gasped in the living room, but Thapki was too furious to notice or care.

"That p-person is c-called VASUNDHARA PANDEY" Thapki finished in scream.

"Thapki stop it, Ma sey aise baat nehi karte. She is my mother, she can beat me as much she likes...it's her right to beat me...her blood flows in my veins...its for her I am alive" Bihaan wheezed, trying to put a stop to this drama.

"No I w-won't stop it today B-Bihaan. You c-can't stop me..." Thapki shook her head, " You think she gave you blood because she loves you,out of goodness of her heart? WRONG...she gave blood because she made a bargain with me...she agreed to give you blood only if I gave you divorce...she made a deal with me."


Everyone present gasped at the revelation...but Thapki wasn't quite finished yet,"This lady is not your m-mother...She n-never was... she n-never will be...even if y-you give your life for h-her she will n-not accept you as her s-son...get o-over it Bihaan...she w-will never a-accept you..."

"Thapki shut up" Bihaan made to sat up without her support.

Thapki gave a harsh laugh, "Don't be d-dishearten Bihaan, be g-glad she is not your m-mother...think of D-Dhruv Sir see how un-unlucky he is...he g-got a mother like her, a w-woman who doesn't have any c-clue about the meaning of the word 'mother' "


"These b-bruises??" She pointed at Bihaan's wounds, "These are n-nothing ..these will h-heal...but just look at D-Dhruv sir, she is all set to k-kill him for l-life... T-This woman, she is r-ruining his life bit by bit.. first she forced the girl he loved out of his life, then r-ruined his life further by g--getting him married to a g-girl like Shraddha, but she is still not s-satisfied, now s-she is all set to ruin w-whatever life remained in h-him by forcing a g-girl in love with someone e-else back into his l-life...so see B-Bihaan, you fared better than D-Dhruv sir...shukur manau aisi g-ghatiya , k-khudgarz aur ehsan f-farmosh aurat t-tumhari-- "

Bihaan clamped his hand over her mouth to stop her from speaking. "Thapki for god's sake shut it now, don't say any more. You can see she is not herself ... she needs ... "


His words were stalled as they heard a soft thud.

They both turned to look towards where everyone moved as if in slow motion, to Vasu, crumpled in a heap on the floor.



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Chapter 17 - The Aftermath


Edited by dushturain - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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when we will get the next update?hope one day thapki will stand for bihaan in show like this..
this is for you..❤️
👏👍🏼
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Loved this update...it's sad and infuriating at the same time!!!...😒

Firstly Vasu acted like a maniac to get Bihaan to sign the papers 😡...and to be honest it is in line with her character..poor Bihaan he loves her so much but she...😭😭😭


Glad that Thapki spoke up against her and did not back down Vasu certainly needed this reality check...Bihaan was Bihaan when he tried to stop her...he has unconditional love for her...



And Vasu collapsing did she really have a breakdown or was it another one of her dramas?...do update soon.
Edited by fun4ever89 - 9 years ago
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Omg , you take my heart out...omg...its so tragic butbi so wanted it...this women is piety full...she is not in her self..hher live ia her obsessions. The obsessions, which made her to consult a doctor.
Omg...thapki say LESS ,she should say something more..plx uasap...
Waiting for next...
Plx don't made dhurve slap his mom...
I just can't take THIS kind of immortalities..

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