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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear
Lovely part...finaly riddhima is oplpening infront of armaan. The way armaan was concerned fr her was sweet...finally wedding prep starts looking forward for their marriage
Update next part soon
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Sania
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
wow a cute and lovely story i loved this
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Life Not A Fairy Tale

Part-14

After having their lunch everyone proceeds towards girls section but now not in pairs...girls are busy in themselves leaving boys alone

At: lo bhai ab pta nhi kitne ghnte in k peeche ghumna padega

Ra: shi kha yar...hamari shopping to 2hrs me ho gyi inki to bhagwan hi jane kitni der me hogi

A: bhai aisa kyu bol re ho...girls k paas choices jyada hoti h to unhe time lgta h decide krne me...we boys don't have much options in clothes

Sh: armaan tumhara kehna to shi h...bt jab shadi hogi to ache se experience ho jaega

At: jiju ho skta h is mamle me armaan lucky rhe..kyunki riddhi ko to shopping jyada pasand nhi h...ajtk uski dress phle papa late the...fr kirti...or aaj bhi Anji or kirti hi mostly choose krte h

Sh: shi kha armaan u r lucky...kirti ka to khud ka boutique hai to pucho mat kitna fashion ka problem hota h...even antra ki dress choose krne me b ghnto lgte h

Ra: shukr k aniv is a boy...muski uske kapdo me tym nhi lgaegi

Everyone had a laugh..but armaan was thinking how can a girl didn't like shopping much...but he keep his thoughts at side and suggested everyone

A: waise agar hum yha Time waste krne ki bajae agar girls ki help krenge to jyada better hoga...hum thoda jldi free ho jaenge

At: gud idea

Then they proceeds towards girls helping and suggesting them about their dresses...girls are sitting in front and their husbands are standing behind them..armaan was also standing behind riddhima...salesman is showing dresses when armaan bent forward to pick up a dress his front touches riddhima's back...she immediately turned side way and her lips came in contact with his cheek...she turned around and was breathing heavily..armaan was in shock but look around as anyone noticed but all r busy in their dresses..his heart is also beating fast...

A: umm riddhima wo red dress dkhna

R: ji...she looks at it but girls didn't like it much

Suddenly armaan eyes catch a green dress gown+lehnga style without duppata...but he didn't said anything as his earlier dress was rejected...riddhima was feeling sorry as everyone rejected his dress and she look towards armaan for apology but she saw him watching a dress keenly

R: bhaiya wo wali dikhaie

SM: ji

All turned to see the dress...armaan is feeling happy as riddhima too likes the dress...Everyone also praises the dress but when riddhima 's eyes catch the price tag she rejected it

R: Nhi ye thodi over hi h

Armaan notice this as he is standing behind this

K:riddhi teri engagement h...ab kuch to heavy lena hi padega

M: ha riddhi dress to achi lag ri h...tu try to kar

R: But

A: yes riddhima u should try this even I like it

R: ok

Anji: ohooo...armaan k kehne par kitni jldi raji ho gyi

R: bhabhi...mai dress try krungi but bahr nhi aungi agar achi lagegi to bta dungi

K: But

At: it's ok kirti...try krne do na uski engagement h..ab to use kuch uski pasand ka lene do

Ra: right

She move towards trial room...others got busy with their dresses...armaan making excuse of a call move from their

A to self: yar i wanna see her in that dress...mjhe pta h ye dress nhi legi...pta nhi price kyu dkh rhi thi...le kr to hmne deni h na...armaan relax yar tu kyu hyper hora h...but still I wanna see her in that dress.

He move towards trial room and with hesitation knock the door.
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R: kon

A: riddhima

R: ji

A: have u tried the dress..wo

R: haa maine pehni hui h...but achi nhi h...mai change kr k ati hu

A: riddhima..plzzz ope..open the d..door

R: kya...she said loudly

A: please I wanna se u in the dress

R: BUT armaan sab bahr h mai nhi..wo

A: u just open the lock...

She opened the lock but didn't open the door..armaan look around..none is watching his side so he slowly open the door and move inside and immediately lock the door...she was startled for a second but relax as she saw armaan but a fear run her body as armaan locked the door...he noticed her expression..then look her attire

A: magnificent

R: uh

A: u looking very beautiful in this...the dress suites u

She is now blushing and turn her back towards armaan

R: thanks

He stood very close to her

A: please agree to wear this dress on our engagement

R: But armaan ye..wo

A: mehnga h haina

She immediately look in his eyes through mirror

A: I saw u watching price tag

R: nhi..wo..

A: agar nhi h aisa to fir..agreed to buy this

She nodded..he smiled

A: u like this dress or not...plzz sach bolna

R: mjhe pasand h...fr bhi ek bar ..wo..

A: tmhe pasand hai to buss..I m buying it..that's final

Suddenly he took her pic with his camera through mirror which includes his too...she look at him

A: achi hai na pic

R: hmmm

Someone knocked the door...they both are shocked as what all will think if they come to know about them

R: k..kon

At: riddhima kitni der lgaegi

R: bss.bh..bhai aai

At: jldi kar sab tera wait kr rhe hai...agar help chaie to kisi ko bheju

R: n..nhii bhai bss.ari hu..ap chlo

At: thk h jaldi ana

R: jii

Atul move away..armaan very carefully come out of the trial room and move towards all after few minutes riddhima too come and agreed to buy the dress..others also purchased their dresses and then all match the jewellery with their dresses.buy new foot wears..here too armaan insists riddhima to buy whatever she like..then they move to jewellery shop for rings purchasing..

K: I think ring purchase k lie hume in dono ko akele chod dena chaie

Ra: ji dii...armaan riddhima tum dono decide kro tab tak hum log cafe chlte hai...bhut bhukh lgi h...7 bj gye

At: ya chlo

They move away and didn't give armaan riddhima any chance to speak...the situation was little awkward for them but armaan try to Break the silence

A: kyu na hum couple rings dekhe...

R: hmm nice idea

They saw many rings some are very heavy and some very light but then both pic the same rings together..their hands touched ..they look at each other..

SM : nice choice

They broke their eye lock

A: tumhe pasand aai

R: ji...or apko

A: mjhe bhi

Then they give their size for the ring..owner informed them to pick the ring next say in evening..they took the bill and move out of the shop...armaan enquired from rahul where they are and proceeds towards them but walking really slowly...she too was matching his speed

A: riddhima tmhe sach me sab kuch pasand to aya na

R: ha armaan...

A: pkka..mere kehne par jabardasti to nhi lia na kuch

R: nhi armaan sab kuch maine apni pasand se lia hai

A: then it's ok

She smiled at him and they talk randomly and reached cafe...all had some snacks and bid bye to each other..reached their home and told discuss everything with their parents...had dinner and move to their rooms..

After some time riddhima's phone rings

A: Hi

R: hi
A: disturb to nhi kia

R: Nhi
A: kya kar rhi ho

R: buss kl college jane ki prep kr rhi thi...ap kya kar rhe ho

A: buss thoda office ka kaam tha use karke free hua hu

R: ok

Silence on both the ends

R: armaan
A: haa..

R: kuch bolo na
A: kya

R: kuch bhi

A: are aise kaise..kuch bhi bolu...btaao na kis bare me khu

R: kuch bhi...apne baare me btaao kuch...ur friends ..college ..work..

A: ok...and he narrated her his whole history..buss yhi h meri life
R: interesting h

A: hah..u like this all

R: yaa...itna mja kia apne apni life me

A: kyu tumne nhi kia kya

R: kia h but itna ni...papa k baad bss aisa hi rha

A: ohh...sad ho

R: nhi to

A: awaz se to lag rha h...ki papa ki death se tum aaj bhi disturb ho

R: n...nhi..wo..her voice is shivering...he sensed that she is crying

A: hey...plz don't cry...riddhima plzz

R: i'm ok...

A: I m sorry..I made u cry

R: nhi armaan wo to buss..papa ki yaad aa gyi islie...mai thik hu sachii

A: if u say...but promise u will not cry now

R: i'll not
A: good girl

R: hehe

A: acha suno..kal college jana hai so sleep...kafi late ho gya h its 1

R: kya ek baj gye

A: ha...ab so jao

R: yaa bye. .gud night

A: gud night...sd...and don't cry
R: ha

They hang up and sleep remembering their day..

Here's the next part...Hope u liked it
And if not liking it then tell me I'll stop posting it. Because the no. Of likes and comments are not sufficient.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Lovely part
Armaan select dress for Ridhima
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Superb update
Cute one
Luvd it.
Waiting for d nxt part.
Plzzz cont asap
T.c
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
nice update too good little romance but cute hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Nice part. Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Hey dear
Cuteee update...loved the way both selected the engagement dress nd way both talk on the phone was sweet.
Looking forward fr the next part
Love
Sania
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Life Not A Fairy Tale

PART-15

It's Sunday..the engagement day of armaan riddhima...everyone in Gupta house is relaxed and peacefully having their lunch...as all the arrangement have been done in hotel. Now only they have to get ready and proceeds towards the destination. Function is going to be start at 8pm and now its 3pm.

P: Riddhi beta lunch k baat tu thoda rest kar lena fr tjhe 5 bje parlour bhi jana hai...jab se college start hue h fursat hi nhi h tjhe to..shukar h shopping phle kr li thi wrnw to pta nhi kya hota

R: maa itna hyper kyu hore ho..sb kuch ho gya hai na...now relax

K: ha maa tension mat lo

P: ok but tum or anjali bhi tym se ready ho jana smjhe..kyunki riddhi se jyada tym to tum log hi loge

Anji: yes mom

They all have their lunch discussing about the engagement and it's preparation.

On the other side in Malik house no one is seen in living room as everyone is in their room having some rest after the lunch or u can say before getting ready for engagement.

Armaan was laying on his bed busy playing games in his mobile with a sulking face...the reason is non other than riddhima. After shopping day they didn't met and b'coz of her college she also not talk much with him on phone. Armaan was not liking it as just in 10 days it became his habit to talk to her whenever he is free...now also he msgd her but she didn't reply..huh..

Suddenly his phone beeped a msg he immediately closed his game and look at the msg

A: oh so finally u got time to give me a small Hii

R: what happened?

A: I should ask u what happened to you?

R: mjhe kya hua...aap hi gusse me ho.

A: gussa na hou to kya kru u r not talking to me properly from 4 days

R: apko pta hai na college ka kitna pending work tha wo complete kr rhi thi

A: ha to sab kam ek 7 krna tha...thoda time to nikal skti thi...din me msg kro to u r in college..shaam ko u r completing ur work..then had talk with ur family about engagement then u r tired and want to sleep

R:

A: what?

R: Nothing

A: Gud now instead of saying a sorry u r saying nothing

R: y should i say sorry...isme meri galti kya hai..college late join kia to kaam to hoga hi na or use pura bhi mjhe hi krna pdega..or engagement discussion hamari hi ho rhi h kisi or ki nhi...or iss sbk baad..mai insaan hi hu so I need rest...and she send the msg..

She is really frustrated as he is blaming her and her thoughts got a break when her phone rang...she picked it but was shocked to listen the voice

A: u know what...I think so tmhe mjhse baat krne me interest hi nhi h ...college...uska kaam...family..chat...engagement...lekin what about me...mai ko vella nhi hu...I have business to look after..But fr bhi mai hamare relation ko time dena chah rha tha...lekin tmhe to koi farak hi nhi padta na...thk h abse I will not call u or msg u...or ha abhi bhi time hai engagement ko soch lo u wanna do it or u r also busy for that.

And he disconnected the call...he was not in his senses as he blurted everything in anger...But after he revised his words he was feeling guilty as what he said.

Here tears brim in her eyes..as she rewind his words..he blamed her for everything..don't even understand her as how hectic it is for her to cooperate with everything and also face her past in the college everyday.

R: schi mai aaj itna khushi ka din tha mere lie lekin ek pal k liye mai bhul gyi thi ki mjhe jab bhi koi khushi mili hai to uske 7 gum muft me mila hai...kaise bhul gyi mai apnii is kismat ko jisme shayad hi koi khushi hai mere lie...maine socha tha shayad ab meri jindagi badal jaegi...shayad ab mai khush reh paungi pr nhi...I can't be happy...armaan bhi sabki tarah hi h...bina meri galti hote hue bhi hmesha mjhe hi kyu saja milti hai bhagwan kyu...akhir kya kia hai maine...aisa kya kia hai...and she cried and cried...she took her father pic placed under her pillow and hugged it and cried silently as anyone can hear her outside...she drifted to sleep.

She woke up at 5pm and neglect the phone call..as its armaan and go to washroom when padma call her

P: riddhi kha hai jldi kar tjhe parlour jana h

R: aai maa..

P: tera samaan sab ready hai na

R: ha maa bed k paas jo bag pda hai usme sab samaan hai..

P: thik h mai ye neeche bhijwa rhi hu...car me rkh dete h tu jaldi aa jaa

R: ji..

Padma turn to leave when her phone rings

P: riddhi armaan ka phone hai

R: maa mjhe do min lagenge

So padma pick up the call

P: hello

A: Hello...riddhima?

P: nhi beta mai padma

A: oh..Namaste maa...kaisi hai aap

P: mai thik hu tum btaao

A: fn...wo maa riddhima?

P: Ha beta wo washroom ne hai abhi ati hai to mai baat kra deti hu..kuch urgent to nhi h na

A: nhi maa...aisa kuch nhi h mai baad me call kr lunga

P: ok...are lo riddhima aa gyi

A: ji

She handover the phone to riddhima and asked her to come down fast after the call..riddhima hesitatingly took phone and put it on her ear

R: h..he..hello

A: riddhima..wo mai

R: ji boliye

A: he took a deep breath...I m sorry riddhima...I should have not shouted on u...i'm really sorry

R: it's ok..she said weakly

A: ha

R: ya it's ok

A: u r upset na...I'm sorry on our engagement day I made u sad...plzz forgive me I'm really sorry

R: it's ok armaan galti meri thi.but ab mai dhyaan rakhunhi...

A: nhi riddhima I was wrong...mjhe samjhna chaie tha ki

P: Riddhimaaa..padma call her from downstairs

R: aaai maaa...armaan mai wo

A: it's ok tum jaao...we will talk later

R: wo mjhe parlour jana hai ready hone so

A: it's ok riddhima I understand...tum jaao we will meet at venue...and yaa sorry once again.

R: hmmm

A: acha suno...

R: ji...

A: jab tum ready ho jaugi to plzzz...snd me ur pic then...plz.plzz

R: hmm..ji..ok

A: thanks...bye..and sorry once again

R: Bye

And she rushed towards parlour as she don't have much time to thought about anything right now and here armaan feel relaxed and thought to have a small nap..as after yelling at riddhima he..was thinking how to call her and ask for an apology.

Later it was 8 armaan reached hotel with his family and friends...they are welcomed by the Gupta family..armaan sat on the stage where a two seater sofa was placed specially for the couple. He is surrounded by his friends who are pulling his legs. The Hall around him is beautifully decorated with flowers and curtains specially of blue and white color...some guests are relishing welcome snacks and some meeting each other..talking laughing...children's are enjoying on dj dancing and playing when armaan open his whatsapp and there is her msg for which he was waiting eagerly...

He immediately download the image and his heart beat got fast as she is looking beautiful in the attire and he also remember their trial room moments..He was admiring her pic when his friends howl as he look forward he saw her...proceeding towards the stage with kirti..anji..muski..nikki...she was walking slowly her eyes casted down...armaan stand up straight and came to the edge of the stage..his friends leave the stage..

Now riddhima is standing down the stage near stairs and armaan on the stage...all girls leave riddhima and back off...only camera man is near the stage except armaan riddhima..armaan forward his hands for riddhima..she look towards him..their eyes met..armaan is smiling whole heartedly and riddhima too was smiling but there is a little hesitation in her eyes which armaan noticed...He asked her through eyes what happened...she nodded in no and put her hand in his and dj played the song..

Mere hath me tera hath ho sari jannatein mere paas ho

They came in the centre..still hand in hand..then kirti and nikki came on stage from different ends with trays in their hands having the rings and made armaan riddhima sit on sofa..then forward them the ring..first armaan took the ring and forward her hand asking her to give her hand she happily give her hand in his and he very softly placed ring in her left hand engagement finger..Everyone around clapped then riddhima took ring and asked for armaan's hand and he too gave her his right hand..she slipped ring in his finger..all gave a big round of applause.

Then the family members came on stage...armaan riddhima took blessings from elders...everyone posed for camera..all are one by one coming on stage blessing the couple. After that the couple move towards dj...it plays a slow no. They both dances closely..riddhima and armaan both were feeling shy..then the song change...it plays some punjabi songs then they do some bhangra with family.

Then cameraman asked them to come in a separate room for some pics...nikki and anji go along with them. First they give some solo poses and then together...they were feeling shy...as poses are very intimate type...then anji got call from atul and she left with nikki

Anji: armaan hum jaa 're hai...tum log bhi jaldi aa jana ok

A: ji bhabi

Then their photo session got over camera man left from their

A: uhmm riddhima u wait..mai washroom ho k aya.

R: ji.

He left and riddhima sat on the bed relaxing her body.

Finally they are engaged.
Hope you like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear
Lovely part as always ... feels bad fr ridz bt hope armaan will clear her misconception ... finally both are engaged. Hope they have strong relationship.
Looking forward for the next part.
Love
Sania

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