Rewriting Yhm: Living for each other:pt-14;pg-129;15/11/16 - Page 65

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Nice shreya..IshRa enjoying their time..

Their love is visible to all..

Adi is comfortable with all now..

Ruhi is cute..

Last scene is too good..

Cont soon..

Originally posted by: lalibhaskar

Fantastic uodate

Ishita so happy with adi:s behavior changing towards her

She wanted to share it with raman

Raman could feel how happy she was from getting a hug from their son

Family always become haddi

Loved family moments

Ishita and ruhi pampering raman was just awesome

They r truly his angels

Adi wishing to be in raman place, wanting ishita to be his mother

Last scene was mind blowing

Perfect family

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

I absolutely loved loved this update

It was awesome lighthearted.

Family moments were lovely and blissful

Too good

Adi was really good

Continue really soon

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

congrats for 100 pages in advance dear

what an update dear fantastic ever

love it

love it

love it

love it so much dear

brilliant written dear 👏

while reading i am smiling throughout thank you so much for heart warming happiest update dear

ishra miss each other was so cute and ishu eagerly waiting to share her happiness as a mother of adi was fabulous dear

really ishra always mesmerized by their love their care and concern moreover trust on each other then ready to do anything for each other

really bow down of your writing to shown ishra love more deeply dear 👏

love ishra cute romance in 10 minutes break and then in dining table dear

what i love most are

ishu and ruhi pamper raman as their baby feed him with all their love for him that scene was so fabulous dear

raman fulfilled his baby wish giving a ice cream surprise with out going outside was so cute dear

romi want wife as his bhabi similar to was cute dear

mihika asked mihir to learn something from raman how sweet he is ? flying kiss to him was so lovely dear

when ishu mention "his gesture is sweeter than ice cream " then raman reply her first have this later have me on knight was so romantic lovely dear

ruman scene was so cute

ishru planned and giggling raman was so cute

love ishra hugs & kisses and love you to each other so much dear

adi is so cute ready to accept her as his mom was superb dear

raman hit mihir by pillow to disturb ishru sleep on him each side while he shout after matching end india win was so lovely dear

both ishru mumbled in their sleep love him witness by raman and both hold him tight was fabulous dear

all are worry about how would raman take both angle to their bedroom immediately with out thinking adi said you take aunty with you then i will take ruhi was fabulous dear

while adi helping sweet gestures he doing make ishu to hold his hand instead of ruhi hand and tuck the loose strand of hair behind her ears and take ruhi with him and raman take ishu with him was fabulous so lovely more cute dear

raman planned to tell this to ishu was so cute dear

love raman answer back to shagun superb dear

love whenever raman is in anger on anyone immediately he reduced his anger moreover his harsh words after hearing from her or seeing her

continue soon dear

overall the best cute update dear

Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

Aww the update was so cute

All the teasing part

Best was adi's reaction

And the cutest was adi tucking a strand off, ishita's face

Very cute

And ishru pampering raman was so cute

Over all the update was adorably cute😳

Originally posted by: Nits83

Sorry Shreya couldn't reply as I was not active on the forum.
Read all the 3 parts and it was amazing.
Raman's love & possessiveness for Ishita is a treat to watch.
Let Shagun burn in hell. Evil me😉
Good Adi is warming up to Ishita & Bhalla families love.
Loved how Ishru are pampering Raman.
Update the next part soon

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Part 10

"Hmm..." he moaned getting up from his sleep which was disturbed due to the drizzle from the wet locks of his beautiful wife. She was putting on her ear rings stand viewing her reflection in the mirror which indicated his wake. She turned around and expressed a chirpy Good morning.

"Good morning Ish..." he trailed off, smooching her lips and bent down to kiss her drumming heart.

She always felt her heart bursting with love whenever his lips brushed her chest. She closed her eyes as in a trance in which made him smile and peck her smiling flesh once again. She blushed at his act and commented

"Kya Raman?? Subah..subah chaalu!!??"

[What is this Raman??In the morning..]

"Waise subah se yaad ayi raat kho mei yahan kaise.." she was cut off by him,

[By the way, how did I reach here!?? As far as i remember I slept in the hall itself!!]

"Madam aapka husband jho hai unhone aapko uthakar upar laaya hai!!" he said running his hand around her waist and pulling her closer.

[Madam!! Your husband bought you here!!]

"kya Raman sabke saamne?? Ab kaisa face karungi papaji, mummyji kho??" she asked nestling her face into his chest.

[How shall I face Mummiji and Papaji now?]

"Ab iss choti si baath ke liye tum tho plastic surgery todhi na karwaogi na!! Toh issi shakal se hi face karna!!" he said laughing when she smacked him playfully.

[You are not planning to undergo a plastic surgery for this petty issue!! So face them with this face only!!]

"Yeh sab chodo aur suno..." he said seriously. She only raised her round eyes letting her head stay on his chest listening to the music of his heart. He smiled at her, tightening his hold around her and exclaimed his happiness over Adi's behaviour.

[Leave this and listen to me...]

"Adi humara... jaldi ho jayega Raman..." told a misty eyed Ishitha with her face decked up with a contended smile.

[Adi will be ours soon Raman..very soon!!]

"Jaldi hi..." he repeated.

[Very soon...]

They were desperate parents who wished nothing but their children's love and affection. It has been one of the dream-coming-true moments for them. They celebrated their moment in each other arms stealing some kisses in between. When Ishitha noticed the change in his touches she drew herself out of his arms and pushed him gently into the bathroom.

The drawing room of Bhalla's was too close to a circus with loud laughs and much louder bickering. She smiled at the sight in front of her and joined them. When she was busy in selecting the attire for Mihika for her upcoming Mehendi and Sangeet functions, Raman came into the hall and winked at her, once she acknowledged his presence while she lowered her long lashes blushing.

It was when the bell rang Ishitha opened it to welcome a person holding a huge bouquet of beautiful white lilies and tulips.

"Yeh..?" she stated confused.

"Maam!! Yeh Mrs. Raman Kumar Bhalla khe liye!! Sir ne bhejwaya!!" he replied smiling.

[Maam!! This is for Mrs. Raman Kumar Bhalla!! Sir has sent this for you!!]

"Woh...Actually shaadi ke liye jab set design karwane ke liye gaya tha yeh flowers dekha tho tumhare liye order kiye!!! Tumhe pasand hena white flowers!!" Raman said looking into his phone and making way towards her.

[When I went to select the decorations of functions I saw these flowers!! I ordered them for you as you like white flowers!!]

"Aww.. so romantic!!" hooted the young band while the elders smiled slyly.

Raman raised his head to answer his family but the sight in front of him annoyed too much to bother his family. The assistant of the event manager who had come was ogling at his wife while his innocent wife was too busy blushing and adoring the bouquet. As her back was facing to him, she was unable to know the thoughts of him. But she was quick enough to find the change in the demeanour of her man, he was angry.

Before she could even respond Raman reached and stood in between them holding her tightly in his arms. The movement broke the trance of person behind her.

"Maam!! Toh mein apne Boss se kahu ki wahi set final kare?" he asked smiling extra-sweetly towards Ishitha who was shying and wriggling out of Raman's arms only to fail.

[Maam!! So are the decorations you have selected is your final decision?? Shall I tell him so?]

"Joh bolna hain me tera Manager se boldunga!! Tumhara kaam hogaya!!! Toh ab..." he roared and the man started leaving from there.

[I'll tell the manager what I have to!! Your work is done!! So..]

"Raman!! Kya tha woh?? Achanak kya hogaya?" Ishitha asked bewildered while the whole family was in the same state of hers.

[Raman!! What was that?]

"Mein kya kar raha tha?? Pagal aurath!! Woh aadmi tum par line mar raha tha aur tum yeh phoolon me phasi ho!!" he said angrily.

[What am I doing? You are mad!! He was ogling at you and you were busy in flowers to notice him!!]

"Raman.." she was cut off by him.

"Dekho tum meri ho!! koyi tume dekha tho uska isi haal banadunga ki woh kabhi kisi ladki kho nahi dekhega!!!"

[See you are my wife and I can't allow some random man to eye you!!]

"Arey baba!!! Itna gussa!??Bp bad jayegi!! It's ok!! Chodo unhe aur khana kaalo!!" she tried to divert his mind while he stood still sulking like a kid.

[This much anger!?? Leave him and have your breakfast!!]

"Raman!!" she said knowing well what would distract him and went too close to him and adjusted his already good collar only for him to hold her waist. He chuckled at his wife's excuses of coming close to him in presence of his family and sat down with everyone.

"Too possessive haa Raman!!" Vandu said laughing loud while all the others joined her and started the couple.

But Raman didn't enjoy even a bit of it. He was ashamed of his behaviour. He was worried of what would Ishitha think of him. He was scared what if she thinks that his behaviour is because of the past betrayal which he knows is not true. He knows this is too new to him. He trusts Ishitha a lot. But, he couldn't justify himself.

"I'm not possessive!!" he said in a higher notch making everyone shut their voices.

Ishitha was shocked at that. She knew that he would never conceal his emotions despite the place and people around, then why was he denying this? She knew that something was wrong and wanted to clear it. But she was late and he left stating an important meeting.

Shagun, who had seen the whole situation, had accepted her defeat that she could never win Raman over Ishitha. She understood that this is not her Raman who would allow his love to even dance with other man which she took advantage of. So she thought of a new plan. Adi was her only weapon whom she would use to full extent to snatch the happiness of Raman and Ishitha.

The whole day went in a worry for both Raman and Ishitha even though for different reasons. Raman had neither called her nor texted unusual to himself as he didn't have the courage to face her. While Ishitha was too busy with the preparations to note the difference in their day.

When he returned home at the day, a look at her and he knew that a confrontation was on their way. He couldn't even justify himself and how could he answer her questions. He felt frustrated and immediately got into their room followed by Ishitha.

"Raman...Subah.." she started only to get pinned to the door and interrupted by him.

[Raman...in the morning...]

"I'm not possessive", he hissed against her lips angrily for which she smiled and pecked his lips slightly. He was shocked as this is the first time she took the initiative in intimacy, when he hadn't expected at all.

"Thanks Raman!! Mujhe yeh prove karne keliye khi me valuable!! Koyi kisi ke liye iss liye possessive hotha hai kyunki woh valuable hothe hai aur usse bahoth pyaar karthe hai!!" she said stressing the word possessive.

[Thanks Raman for proving that I'm valuable!! One feels possessive towards the people whom he feels valuable and loves them unconditionally!!!]

"Lekin Ishitha!! Mein possessive nahi hoon!!" he whispered like a child which made her smile at his lie.

[But Ishitha!! I'm not possessive!!]

"Ishitha! Mei apni betrayal ya past khi wajhese nahi hoon possessive!! Patha nahi kyun mein hoon possessive tumhare liye, Ruhi ke liye!!" he continued lowering his head.

[I'm not possessive of you because of my past or betrayal!! I don't know why I'm too possessive towards you and Ruhi!!]

"kyunki aap hamse jyada pyaar karthe hai" she stated simply.

[Because you love us the most!!]

"I thought...Meine socha tum mujhe misunderstand karogi ki shgun ki vajha se mein.." he trailed off.

[ I thought that you will assume that I'm possessive because of Shagun..]

"Raman!! Mei judgmental nahi hoon!! Dekhiye I know I was Judgemental in past!! Aapne hi tho kaha khi aap mere sath rah kar bahooth badal gaye ho!! toh meine bhi badal gayi aapko dekhke!! Jaisa apka gussa kam hua meine bhi realise kiya ki me jyada conclusions pe aa jathi hoon bina poora pathaake!! Ab aisa kuch nahi sochungi apni aap, bina aapse puchke!!" she explained.

[Raman!! I'm not judgemental!! Yeah I know I was judgemental in the past regarding you!! But I've changed because of you like you have changed for with me!!! I realised that I quickly come into conclusions without learning the whole truth!! As your anger diminished, I don't assume anything till I get confirmed by you!!]

He couldn't even know how to react. He knew she was judgemental sometimes but ignored it. She not only recognised it herself but also changed herself for the well being of their relation. He understood how much care she does take to keep their relation healthy.

While Raman was still in his thoughts, Ishitha tip toed and started sucking his upper lip licking the groove above it. He tightened his hand around her waist bringing her closer. Her chest was just touching his as if teasing him as his another arm had ran across her midriff hinged at the elbow to pin her earlier. He tried to take his hand off her to bring her closer but she was too immersed in her kiss to loosen her hold around his neck. Having no other way he curled his fingers at the side of her midriff and squeezed it arousing her to a higher extent. He let her have his way till he lost his control and kissed her wildly further.

When they felt the lack of air they parted only for him to intently look at his blushing wife. Her flushed cheeks, swollen lips and the pallav of her purple saree on her neck exposing her red blouse completely due to the assault of his hand below it. Her dishevelled form tempted him to latch onto her lips once again. This time removing his arm which was in between them, he held her from her back with his fingers randomly running over her silky skin. He then started nuzzling her throat which made her moan and rake her nails into his scalp.

Continuous knocking of their door bought them out of their encounter. Ishitha quickly wiping of her lipstick mark above his lips left to washroom while Raman told the curious Mihika that they would come to dinner within few minutes. Both of them were flushed and couldn't control their desires anymore. This dinner had been too silent unlike their family.

Even though they knew something was up with the couple they didn't probe much. Raman and Ishitha quickly completed their dinner. While Ishitha was still cleaning the kitchen Raman gave the lamest reason of something important to talk and asked Ishitha to follow him making the family laugh at them.

Ishitha was spooned from behind as she had entered into their room. Raman quickly dropped her onto their bed with one hand still around her waist and another one supporting his weight without letting her feel it. She cupped his face with both her palms looking into his darkened eyes. He closed the distance between them making another night of them colourful.

Next morning Ishitha woke up late and reached the living room only to find Raman, Ruhi making a mess of kitchen and themselves while Mihir was reading something from his mobile and instructing them.

"Ayyo murgan!! Yeh kya ho raha hai?" Ishitha asked gaining the attention of everyone present there.

[Oh god!! What's happening??]

The father- daughter duo looked as if they were caught red- handed doing a crime, while Mihir sheepishly told

"Bhabhi!! Actually hum dosa bana rahe hai!!"

[Bhabhi!! We are making Dosa!!]

"Dosa kyun??" asked Ishitha looking at Raman and Ruhi whose clothes had big stains of batter.

[Why dosa??]

" Woh actually bhabhi!! Mihika kho khana banana nahi aatha na isliye me hi Dosa banana sikh raha hoon!!" mihir said sincerely only to hear the laughter of the Bhalla and Iyer clan behind them. Ishitha tried to hide her smile and asked Ruhi what she was doing.

[Actually Bhabhi Mihika doesn't know how to cook so I'm learning it!!]

"Woh ishima!! Papa mihir chachu kho dosa banana seekha rahe hai!! Aur me unka help kar rahi hoon!!" Ruhi said smiling.

[Ishima!! Papa is teaching Chachu how to make Dosa!!]

"Aap...Kyun??" asked Ishitha bewildered.

[What?? Why you??]

"Woh kya haina Ishu Raman bhol raha tha ki Dosa banana bohuth easy n blah blah blah!! Isliye hum sab milkar yeh arrangement kar rahe hai!!" answered Vandu.

[ He was blabbering that making Dosa is easy!! So we did this arrangement!!]

"Kya Akka aap bhi!?" Ishitha brushed off the topic and taking the tisues wiped off the batter from Raman and Ruhi's faces.

[What is this akka?]

"Me banaaloongi!!" she asked them to move away.

[I'll do it!!]

"Ishima!! Hume sikhna hai!! Yeh aapke liye bhi surprise hai!!" said Ruhi biting her tongue at her revelation.

[Ishima!! We have to learn!! It's a surprise for you!!!!]

"Oh!! Toh Raman yeh sab Ishu keliye tha!! Tum na Best Pati award keliye mujhse hi compete kar rahe ho?? Not fair haan!!" said Bala chuckling.

[Oh!! So everything was for Ishu!! You are competing with me in Best pati award!! This is not fair!!!]

"Arey Bala stop it yaar!! Aur tu Madrasan batao kaisa banana hai!!" Raman asked quickly diverting the topic.

[Stop it Bala!! And you teach us how to make it!!]

Ishitha showed them how to get the dosa into the shape while Raman was tugging her elbow saying he knows everything and he would complete for her. Finally after having the Dosa made by Raman and fed by Ruhi, Ishitha went to her clinic.

In the evening, Ruhi ran into the arms of Raman who has come early from office for making the arrangements of upcoming functions.

"papa!! Mujhe nail polish karna hai!! Aap kar donge pls!!" pleaded Ruhi which Raman could never reject.

[Papa!! Will you paint my nails??]

He took the pink bottle from her hands and sat down on the couch to do the task in hand.

"papa!! Aap bahar bhi colour kar raho ho!! Mere fingers karab hojayenge!!" ruhi shouted while raman was seeing himself in his daughter's anger.

[Papa!! You are spoiling my fingers by painting outside my nails!!]

"kya hua ruhi!??" asked Adi who had heard her yelling.

[What happened Ruhi??]

"yeh dekho bhaiya!!" ruhi showed her fingers which were painted were worst painted.

[See this Bhaiya!!]

"Why don't you ask someone experienced?" Adi said smiling while Raman glared.

"Ghar me sab busy hai bhaiya!! Ishima bhi nahi hain!!" she said sadly.

[Everybody are busy!!! Ishima is not home yet!!]

"shagun mamma?" he asked casually.

"woh bol rahe yeh colour acha nahi hain aur doosra paint karenge!! Lekin mujhe yehi pasand hai!!" she whined while Adi was upset over his mom's behaviour and Raman shook his head at her ways of rubbing her choice over others.

[She is telling this colour doesn't suit me!! But I like this one!!!]

"It's ok!! Let me try!!" Adi said and painted to get the same result like his father's.

"Kya ho rahi hain?" Ishitha who had just returned home asked them.

[Whats happening??]

"Ishima!! Dekho!!" Ruhi exclaimed almost at the verge of crying while the men looked at her apologetically.

[Ishima!! See this!!!]

"Arey koyi nai baba!! Mei tikh kardoonga!!". Ishitha cleaned the polish and started painting her nails again showing them the strokes and asking them always coat it to complete the polish.

[I'll make it fine!! Don't worry!!!]

"Arey Ruhi aaj aapke Ishima humari teacher bangayi!! Subah dosa aur ab yeh!!" Raman joked while ishitha pouted and Adi leaned onto her shoulder laughing.

[Ruhi your Ishima has become a teacher for us!! In the morning she taught us Dosa and now painting nails!!]

Guys!!! This is the result of my night out!! Dont know how it turned out!!Tell me whether to end this story within 2 more parts or 4!!! If u ppl r interested pls let me know!! Or else i wud end within 2 more parts!!!

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Wow...
Awesome...
Raman z soo possesive over ishita...
Shagun should know that even if she use adi to get raman...
It vl never happen...
As now adi started loving ishita as well...
Amazing..

Congo for crossing 100 pages..