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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: prachikwr

I thought only bihaan is frustrated here thapki too...i like this normal thapki...loved this chapter...thanks for updating so soon 😃


Their situation honestly:😆

Edited by dushturain - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kowsi

This is just too good!! As soon as you mentioned his dimples you lost me!! Truly those dimples are just...

And Thpaki OMG she has hormones that's nice!!

Do update soon!!


Those dimples

Maybe those lines I was writing for myself instead of Thapki...☺️ writing in First person helped too ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Marital Status

Dhaba-Taste of authentic Punjabi streetfood, Triangular Square Park:

"Thank you sir for visiting, please come back again with your girlfriend" the waiter said with a smile as he handed Bihaan the parcelled food packets.


"Girlfriend? Bhaiya, Mujhse ek patni samhal nehi jaati, yeh girlfriend kaha se tapak padi?"


The waiter uncomfortably shifted his eyes towards the pretty girl who was standing by the door of the shop looking at them with eyes as big as saucers. She was listening to them.


The waiter gulped; they can't be brother and sister. My eyes can never judge wrong. They are in love. "No Sir, I was referring to..." the waiter cleared his throat, the girl is his wife...Oops! Error in judgement...awkward...I get it now "...since Madam is not wearing any ...I meant...woh actually... " he continued painfully, " any signs to indicate her marital status... so I thought...well, I am really sorry Sir" he turned towards the girl, "Sorry, madam please do visit our shop with your husband again. I am sorry." He finished hastily embarrassed.


"Arey Bhaiya, sorry kyon bol rahe ho? Even I don't feel like I have a wife most of the time. Girls nowadays have become modern, they don't have that traditional values in them anymore" He eyed his wife who had turned red with corner of his eyes and continued," Girls don't wear vermilion these days because their hair will get damaged, refuse to wear mangalsutra because it doesn't go with their dress. Image is more important than a husband's lifespan. What to do Bhaiya? It is called modernization. Tarakki" Bihaan finished casually and looked at Thapki who seemed to burst into flames any second.


She stomped outside with a huff and Bihaan couldn't hide his smile anymore. He loved to irritate his chuk chuk gadi so much! He followed her out to his bike.

"What r-r-rubbish was that, R- Rampyaare?" Thapki muttered angrily the moment she could think coherently. She was so mad at Bihaan. She was going to kill him. She wouldl not go home with this brute. She refused to sit with him in his goddamn motorcycle behind him.

"Eh?" Bihaan missed inserting his key to ignition. Rampyaare? Has she finally lost it? "What are you talking about?"

"You kn-kn-know why I d-d-dont wear ma-ma-mangalsutra and si-si-sindoor." Anger was making her stammer twice as much. "How c-c an you insult m-m-e so, R-Rampyaare, infront of that m-m-man saying I don't value t-t-traditions or c-c-care how long you live?"

"Gajaab... Have I said anything wrong? Do you care I live or die? And anyways do you want me to tell that man our whole life story, why you really don't wear them?" Bihaan quirked his brow.

Thapki's eyes began to water as she stared at the beautiful monster, Does he really thinks I don't care whether he lives or die? "You are n-nothing but an unfeeling, in-in-insolent brute who..."

" Haan , Haan, I know I know, I am the worst person you have ever met...old story...will you please shut up now and care to sit so that we can go home? I am hungry."

Thapki hopped to sit behind him. "I hate you Rampyaare"

Bihaan started his motorcycle. "What's with this Rampyaare?"

"I ate more than one-third p-portion of what I ordered; hence you are R-R-Rampyaare from now on, on your own accord"

"You did not"

"Did too"

"Did not"

"Did too"

And so it continued...

When they entered Pandey Nivas they were still bickering.

Quite a few days had passed, Vasundhara finally mustered up the strength to leave her room. Physically she looked like her own old self but emotionally she was a mess. She couldn't bear to face anyone after what she had done. God! What have I done? I have ruined my saja huya sangsaar in my own two hands. She was leaning against the balustrade on the balcony and berating herself which was all she had been doing lately...


She saw the bickering couple enter the house. Bihaan looked exasperated and Thapki looked like she wanted to tear all of Bihaan's hair. I have not only ruined my Dhruv's life but also two others.


As she continued watching the bickering couple from the balcony an idea began to form in her mind. She just knew how to redeem herself in eyes of her family members and get back Dhruv's love. She could make everything right! She could get back everything just as it was. She would make everything all right she vowed.


She smiled.


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Chapter 4 : Red mark


Note: please dont be hurt if I don't reply all of you. If you see my like in your reply that means I have read it, and I love you already. Its just that I am really really lazy and It takes me forever to think of a reply...and I get distracted or fall asleep or sth while thinking of a reply...I am a lazy bum! Thank you everyone for the love you guys have shown me. Its more than I ever expected. Love you all.

And you guys too don't have to comment if you dont want to...I am all for being silent readers. If you guys like the update you may just like it and leave it at that, or if you don't want to thats fine as well. I won't mind at all. Cheers!! Just remember if you are reading this line I am already in love with you.


Edited by dushturain - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
😛 just awesome and pls update soon. ...waiting. ... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Before reading third chap.. I m going to comment for previous one.
Love at first read this happens with me... I read it n fell in love with your ss/ff (as you say ;))
I loved their thoughts...
Him calling her witch yet a doll... N many more such...
N she awww. ... One more time awww...
N I m also like that waiter (like you too) I do that often observe the couples lol sometimes the lonely souls like me too hehehe
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Superrr update.. Loved how bihaan teased thapki in front of the waiter.. 😊😃.. N also that Rampyare thing.. 😆😆..
They are so cute in your story..
Loved the update..
Nxt part soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Oye hoye... Yeh Bihaan taunt maarta lekin yh sajja k... ;)
Rampyaare <3
So now we have chuk chuk gaadi n rampyaare Ki love story...
This vasu... Stupid ideas lagayegi... Unite Tha----ruv... :'(
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Raampyaare???? Seriously??? I am ROFLing right now..

Loved it. Please update soon! And don't worry, you need not to reply..lol!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
its so sweet.bindaas bihaan was superb.vasu n her plans🤢update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Oh dhustu diii...it was awesome , i read the 3 parts in a single stretch...loved it...such a cute love story...
The way she called raaam pyaari...omg!!!!!
Hope sucg things happen in epi also...y did u stop there????and stupid vasu crap...here also she started her work!!!!!
Hmmmhmmm...me crying for tat idiot vasu chudail...
Acha this will make them express their feelings naa then ok...
Update soon diii...

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