ShraMan FF Bitter Sweet Symphony #Thread 1

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: EDKV_Ciara
Amazing!! Can't wait for the chapter 17... Make it soon!!!

Uploading the next chap in fifteen minutes. 😃

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#732

Reply in blue

Originally posted by: Sugarbabe14
Wow
Chapter 16...
I loved the part when shravan said " I told u not to move"
Showed shravan's concern for sumo
Yep, he still has a soft corner for Sumo. 😳

Totally awsum I bow down for ur writing
Oh... speechless.

When happiness will come in sumo's life
Hopefully soon. Or not. Let's see...

Nd sharvu's POV
I haven't decided yet. As long as I've planned, there'll be Suman's POV for a long time until the otherwise is needed. 😕

Update soon
In fifteen minutes. 😃

Waiting for next part
Love Ishita
Love yaa too, Ishita.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: andy1245
its a vry nic stry i read all d chaps n one go n i really lovd it plz pm me n comt sopn

I've so glad you're enjoying the story so far. Sure, will pm you. 😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Poor Suman
They got married finally but not the way they wanted
They are going to live separately
I just cant understand Shravan
One side he shows his hatred and other he shows his concern
Please clear his misconception soon
Suman's broken self made me cry
Now waiting for family reaction to their marriage and what more future holds for Suman
Thank you for the pm
Update soon

The misunderstandings will clear, yes,

but when and how - let's see.

He's acting conflicting, I know, it's his anger vs his care for Suman.

Let's see what awaits next. 😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: ANSHEL
no no no for two episodes i was away and dis is wat happened in my absence ...shravan uhhh how cold he ..cant he see the truth of suman in her actions nd her helplessness ...sooo much for all his claims of being her best friend for so many years nd den luvin her too ...i officially am hating this shravaan nd suman we know that destiny hass pushed you too much nd doomed the very basis of your existence, but babes we luv ur courageous form when no m,atter how big the blow is ,u stand up , unscathed or otherwise,all so bravely ,with a much greatr force and will to counter attack...we luvv u dat way nd we want that way. dont give shravan sooo much of rights to emotionally nd mentally bruise u jst because u hav a family to support ..coz if u urself wont take stand ..none wud do it for u

Exactly. Suman is courageous. She needs to reestablish that courage inside her again and pick her self up. That's the way.

That'll be the key fact in the next chapter. I hope you will like it. 😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: _Eternity_
Hey lara..
Amazing yr...
You are a great writer and each update is awesome..
Enjoying every part..
Sumo condition..poor girl..feel sad for her..
But no punch for shra..he cares but not showing...
Waiting for that day when he will express himself...
Waiting for next update and ShraMan married life..
Thanks for pm dear...

Hey! 😊

Thanks a lot. 😳

That day - when Shravan will truly express his feeling for her - let's see when that arrives. Maybe soon... and eventually, short steps each day and then all of the sudden. 😉

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: ezbeedscrittore
OMG I finished all the chapters in one go
You are amazeballs, totally cool
I love the way the story is going
ShraMan are awesome in your story
I get that Shravan is acting like an ass, but he's a cute one at that...
Can't wait for the next part, please post soon

-Ezbee

Thanks a lot! 🤗

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. 😳

Hmmm... Shravan - cute a**, 😆 I like that.

Next chapter in a minute.

Thanks again, Ezbee.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#738

Dedicating this chapter to " ---awe10some--- ". 🤗

*Removed*

That's it for now. 😊

The key-facts in this chapter:

*Her recent nightmare has taken a complete different turn, besides her injuries from the Khurana incident is probably getting worse because of ignorance.

* Suman finds the strength in herself.

* She may be in a deep mess, but she is now definitely ready to battle out of it.Her journey to earn two and a half crore begins.

*And at the end of this journey - she's planning to leave Shravan, their marital home, and this marriage

(drum roll) 🥳

But the giant problem is - the curious case of Shravan Malhotra. 🤢 How will he function along the way while his new wife starts an impossible journey to a happily ever after? An ever after, that doesn't have him included in it. 💔

What do you think?

We also got introduced to some new characters who will make it bearable for Suman to stay in the house, or not. Meethi and the watchman - we will know more about them later.

And, how can I forget - PUSHKAR. He's back in the scenario. Did you all enjoy Suman and his conversation? He's not leaving. Yuhuuu! I just can't let him leave yet, because his cupid tasks are not done yet. But you know what, whenever someone tries to play a nosey cupid for Shraman in this story, the exact opposite always happens. (Ramnath's marriage conspiracy!) Now let's see what's waiting ahead.

You can give me suggestions about how Suman can earn the two and a half crore money. I've some things in mind, but some help / suggestions / opinions will really be helpfull. Let's help the girl fight for her self respect. What say?

And thanks everyone for liking and commenting on the last chapter. You know, I was so emotional at your wonderful response that I couldn't help but read your comments again and again. 😳 They boosted my spirit to write further in an unbelievable way. So, thank you so much! You guys made it possible that we've completed more than hundred pages of this thread already. I'm so grateful to you all. (jumping in joy) Thank you so much. 🤗 ❤️

Let's party... 🥳🥳

🤗Massive hugs to the silent readers who have commented. When you lovely people came forward and let me know that you were compelled to comment reading my author's note in the last chapter, and gave me those wonderful compliments about this story - I was so so so utterly happy, that right now it's becoming really difficult for me to express my emotions. (something's clogged up in my throat, oh... happy tears.) THANK YOU! ❤️ I'll be eagerly waiting to hear more from you guys and know that, just like I've said in the last chapter - my heart will never stop looking forward to locate a new silent reader joining this thread - letting me know about their precious views.

So, please... like and comment, everyone.

Love yaa all,
Lara.

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#739

Res
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Excellent excellent excellent 👏

Though I missed Mr.giant 😆 shravan in this update

Once again a beautiful chapter 😳

Edited by --fero-- - 9 years ago

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Sidhi

@ArtThouTheBest

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#740

Fanx dr for dedicating this chapter to me 😊
Feeling honoured 😳 😳

Cming to the update; that was just flawless. Loved how u incorporated shravan in that dream!! N that question that shravan saved her frm khuranna bt who will save her frm him.
N that decision of suman of leaving that hell of hers with dignity after paying ramnath. Was so apt.
Loved pushkar. The cutie ever 😳 😳. I rilly want a pushkar-shravan confrontation.
Luking frward to the entry of shravan n his reaction!!
Hpe that suman doesn't be like those typical patni n be a doormat. Nw she nids to be in full on sumo mode!! N gve chaman a dose of his own medecine!! N cn we get an ignorance track. Wud like suman to ignore vakil saab like never be4.
Cncerning hw cn she win that two n half crores (i guess that was the amt); my nt so creative mind got the idea of making her participate in a competition (such as a cooking one). N i guess with that only she wn't be able to gather the required amt n so during that competition she cn get noticed by a big shot hotelier n the rest u'll knw hw to shape it.
Cntinue soon n fanx 4 pm dr

Love;
Sidhi

Edited by ---awe10some--- - 9 years ago

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