Rishbala FF ~ Realization ~ Thread 3 (Chap 29- Page 77)24th Aug

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Okk.. Maina abhi tak read nahi kia hai agar aap continue kar rahi ho toa read karungi..

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When will you update?

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So happy !Thanks for continuing.

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So happy !Thanks for continuing.

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Yaayy!! finally posting this story.. I really enjoyed while writing, I hope you will like it. Here goes the update.

Chapter 22

Madhu came to kitchen to prepare the breakfast, at the same time Radha too came. "Maa? What should I make today?" Madhu asked. "Anything beta.." She smiled but after a while later she said, "Actually you can make Rishu's favourite breakfast.." Madhu smiled slightly and shook her head. D she stared collecting the ingredients when Radha asked, "By the way Madhu.. Did Rishu give you any complement after having the dinner??" Hearing this Madhu stopped her work and recalled how RK was ignoring her, Radha saw her lost, so she shook her asking, "Madhu? Is everything alright??" Madhu came back to her sense and nodded. "No!! You are lying. Tell me what happen? Did Rishu tell you anything?" "No mummyji.. Actually RK didn't have the dinner yesterday, he had night shoot, he came back this morning." Radha made her turn at her and caressed her face saying, "Don't be sad Madhu. May be he had important shoot." Madhu nodded with a smile.

RK slept whole day or you can say he was pretending to sleep. It was almost 1pm, Madhu walked in the room and found RK still sleeping, she slowly went to him and admired him sleeping, she slowly bend on her knees and just staring at him and recalling their every moment from marriage to the special moment which they shared. She slowly raised her hand and placed on his head, she set his ruffled hair when feeling her touch RK opened his eyes and their eyes met, they shared an intense eye lock when feeling shy Madhu gets up and was going to leave but RK held her hand and pulled at his side with a force that she fall on him, he immediately placed his hand on her waist to support her and with the other hand he slowly tucked her hairs behind her ear which were blocking him to see her beautiful face.

Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi...
Tujhse hoke judaa sun zara...
Bin tere mujhse naaraaz tha dil...
Tu mila hai toh hai keh raha...

Main toh tere rang mein...
Rang chuka hoon...
Bas tera ban chuka hoon...
Mera mujhme kuch nahi sab tera...

Main toh tere dhang mein...
Dhal chuki hoon...
Bas teri ban chuki hoon...
Mera mujhme kuch nahi...
Sab tera, sab tera..
Sab tera, sab tera..

RK pulled her little close to him with a jerk when Madhu came back to her sense, "Did I day dreaming??" She looked at RK who was sleeping peacefully, she smiled and hit her head for thinking so much. After that, she finished her work silently and then left the room. After few minutes later, RK woke up from his sleep and looked around when he didn't find her, he went to freshen up, after taking bath he walked out wrapping his towel around waist, as he stepped out at the same time Madhu walked in and seeing him she shyly turned uttering, "I am sorry." She thought may be RK will argue over the thing but to her shock, he only said, "It's okay." he was going to take his shirt when Madhu said, "I kept them on couch." RK looked at the couch where his t-shirt was lying. "No. I won't wear them. I will go out." "Oh!! Then you wait.. I will take out your shirt." saying this she was going to turn but RK stopped her saying, "No. It's okay.. I will manage." Madhu nodded and came out from room but still stay there with the hope that may be RK will call her, but when she didn't get any call from him, she peeped inside and found him ready, so she left from there.

Madhu came downstairs, at the dining place where Mohan was taking a seat and Radha was arranging the table, "Maa!! You sit. I will serve him." Madhu took the bowl from her hand and started serving them when Radha asked, "Madhu? Where's Rishu?" "He is getting ready." Just then RK arrived and took a sit there, Madhu served him too but all the time he didn't bother to look at her. "Arey Madhu... Serve him the daal that you made for him. You know Rishu.. She made this especially for you." RK didn't response on this, meanwhile Madhu brought the bowl from kitchen and was going to serve him but he said, "No. I don't like to have it now." "Rishu? Just try it once. She made it with love." Meanwhile Madhu was at the verge to cry but she controlled herself and once again she was going to serve him as Radha insist her but this time RK pushed the bowl yelling, "Why don't you understand when I say on that means NO." but he pushed it in a manner that the bowl turned upside down and the hot daal fall on her hand, "Ahhh!!" She moaned, RK fumed and gets up from chair, meanwhile Madhu started crying as hey hand burnt but still RK didn't bother to look at her, he tightened his fist to control himself and left the place, Madhu noticed and it hurt her badly. "Rishu? Please bring.." Radha looked up but didn't find him, she wasn't in the state to think anything, so she quickly rushed to her room to get the first aid box.

RK came out from mansion and kicked the Caribbean wheel angrily, "Damn RK!! How can you be so careless?? You always end up by hurting her." he again banged his first on the car angrily. "No. No. I shouldn't leave like this. I should check her. She got hurt for me." RK was going to leave but again stopped as those moments flushed on his mind. "No. I don't want to face her, I haven't that courage. No!!" Saying this he again kicked on car wheel.

"Madhu? Please consult with a doctor.. Your hand burnt badly, though I applied ointment but it will be better if you once visit with a doctor." Radha said with concern and like a obedient student Madhu shook her head. "Wait.. Let me call Rishu and ask him to take you to the doctor." Radha was going to call when Madhu said, "No mummyji.. It's okay. I will manage. Don't bother him please." "Are you angry on him Madhu?" Radha asked lifting her chin, "Actually you should be.. Is it a way to behave with your wife? And moreover when he saw you in pain, he just left from here, heights of irresponsibility. Let him come today!!" "No mummyji. Please don't say him anything. It wasn't his fault, I.. I shouldn't force him. I know he didn't done this intentionally." Madhu said very calmly then Radha hugged her.

Madhu went to visit a doctor as Radha insist her, after meeting with the doctor, she was returning home when suddenly she spotted RK's car, "RK??" She asked driver to stop the car and then she looked around when she spotted him near to the restaurant door with a lady, he was smiling happily and then hugged that lady. Madhu's blood boiled, and she immediately took leave from there.

"Thank you Ria.." RK said to the lady who was with him. "Don't thank me RK!! I am telling you what I feel.. You should express your feelings to her. We girls are like this, we never express our love but always expect it to hear from him." Ria said patting on his shoulder. "Yes you girls are mad.. When you say yes, when you say no, you yourself never know.." RK said recalling Madhu's antics over few things, Ria smiled replying, "Yes. We are like this. Now don't waste your time, and go back to home." RK nodded and was going to leave when Ria again said, "RK?? Don't forget what I told you." RK nodded in a serious way and took leave.

RK was on his way to home, today he didn't went to studio as his mood wasn't week but he felt so relief, finally he decided to express his feelings to her, he is going to say her how much he loves her, how much he wants her in his life. RK was waiting at the traffic when a small kid knocked on the window, he looked at him, "Uncle.. Please buy this flowers." RK looked at the bunch of red roses, he buy them happily and inhaled the smell, after that he started driving and then stopped near a shop to buy chocolate box.

Flashback starts

Madhu was furiously walking here and there in their room, RK arrived and stopped at the door and looked at her furious face, "This jungli billi will eat me alive." He prayed to God for his life and walked in taking small steps, seeing him Madhu glared at him placing her hands on her hip and was going to say something when RK covered his face with a chocolate box, he closed his eyes to get scold from her but to his shock, she smiled happily and snatched the box from his hand and started eating it like small kid. "Biwi??" RK called her with hesitation but he didn't get any response from her as she was busy in her chocolates, he again asked, "Biwi.. Are you fine?" Madhu didn't answer, just shook her head. "You mean you aren't angry on me anymore??" Madhu looked up at him in a serious way and then smiled saying, "No.. Actually I was angry but when I saw you brought chocolates, I calm myself and forgive you." "Really?? You mean if I ever do any mistake and after that if you give you chocolate, you will forgive me??" He asked suspiciously and she nodded with a smile.

End of flashback

RK smiled remembering the moment when shop keeper asked, "RK sir!! What do you want??" He just came back to his sense and buy few chocolate boxes and again get into his car. At the other side, Madhu reached at home and she directly went to her room and closed the door and slide down on floor crying, she recalled how RK behaved with her in these day, how he shouted on her and then the hug... She cried, "Now I understand RK!! Why are you avoiding me!!" She cried.

RK was on his way to home when suddenly rain started, he was so happy and enjoying the weather that he turned on the radio, "So guys it's raining outside, this atmosphere is completely romantic, so let's tune into some romantic songs.. Here a song to dedicating the people those who aren't express their feelings to their loved ones. Guys!! Don't hold yourself, just go and confess your love." RK smiled hearing this. He looked at the flower and chocolate.

Itni mohabbat karo na...
Main doob na jaaun kahin...
Waapas kinaare pe apna...
Main bhool na jaaun kahin...

RK recalled how Madhu always support him, always bear his unusual tantrums, anger and always handled him, took care of him.

Dekha jabse chehra Tera...
Main toh hafton se soya nahin...

He recalled how for the first time Madhu fall in his arm before their marriage and unknowingly the vermilion fall on his forehead, he smiled realizing that God destined them to be together.

Bol do na zara...
Dil mein jo hai chhipa...
Main kisi se kahunga nahi..
Main kisi se kahunga nahi...

He recalled how Madhu was anxiously waited for him last night, he felt that whether Madhu had something to say...

Mujhe neend aati nahi hai akele...
Khawabon mein aaya karo...

RK remembered Madhu's face in the morning once he opened his eyes, he always found her admiring herself at the mirror.

Nahi chal sakunga tumhare bina main...
Mera tum sahara bano...

RK recalled how Madhu helped him, support him when he had met with accident, she fed him, she scolded him for not having his medicines, automatically a curve came on his lips.

Ik tumhe chahne ke alaawa...
Aur kuch humse hoga nahi...

Bol do na zara...
Dil mein jo hai chhipa...
Main kisi se kahunga nahi...
Main kisi se kahunga nahi...

RK stopped the car near to the RK mansion and looked up at their room with a smile, he took the flower and chocolate and gets down from the car and started to walk inside. RK happily entered in their room when he heard some sobs, automatically his feet stopped right there, he looked at Madhu who was sitting at the edge of the bed, she was facing her beck to him so he didn't get whether she was crying or not when RK was going to walk inside when he found her holding Ranveer's photo, the floor slipped from his feet, he took few steps back and without staying there anymore he left the room leaving her alone.

RK was driving the car aimlessly and finally stopped at the beach, he went to the sea side, still it was raining heavily that within few seconds RK gets drenched completely, he looked at the flowers and the chocolates and then throw them into the water and broke down on his knees. "Once again you were going to mistake RK.. See!! How much she is in pain for you. It was my fault, I should have control myself on that day, I.. I ruined everything. She has no place for you RK, she has no feelings for you. She still loves bro!! You are no one for her. Accept it now." He started banging his fist on the sand crying.

At the other side, Madhu cried and then caressed Ranveer's photo, "Today I am missing you Ranveer. You were my only friend with whom I shared everything. Today I am feeling very lonely. You know, I never thought that I would fall in love again but RK's honesty, his respect win my heart. He didn't take your place but he made his own place in my heart and today I feel so proud to be his wife, his BIWI.. But I don't know what happened with him, he is behaving like a stranger. When I had no interest in him, when I never want to talk with him, he always teased me, always irritate me, fought with me but when I am trying to initialize the conversation, he simply ignored me, I can sense he is going away from me. You tell me Ranveer what should I do now?? Because you know your brother better than me. Please help me.." She cried.

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How's it?? I added the most beautiful songs, I hope you all like it. Waiting for comments and likes.

Thank you.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Me first.
BT u q itni der laga RI ho dono k realization me..
Nice updt

Edited by pirl18 - 9 years ago

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jalebi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Firstly thanks for considering our requests & continuing this wonderful story...

Loved the update dear...

It was so enotional...

I felt so bad for madhu when her hand got burnt... I know rk didnt do that intentionally but stills its not the way to treat the one u love...

Ignoring her will never be a solution... He shld try to understand & talk out things with her...

God! These two always misunderstand things... When i thought okay... Today he will propose her or she will propose him... But nah! Nothing goes smothly with this couple... Poor girl was just missing her frnd.. But she is not in love with him... But Rk mistook it as her to be in love with her bro... & madhu thought rk is avoiding her bcos he has found someone in his life but Ria was just helping him to little expressive with his biwi!

Wondering When the inevitable REALIZATION will happen!

Thanks for the lovely update...

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#29

Originally posted by: pirl18
Res
Unres
😛
Me first.
BT u q itni der laga RI ho dono k realization me..
Nice updt

Just because this story basically based on it so I took time for proper realization.. 😊 and thank u..

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shruthi murali

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Thank you thank you for continuing!!!

Why madhu why at wrong time u need to watch ranveers photo! Emotional update!! Rk yaar jo mann me hai ek baar bol deta!! Just waiting for the realization day! Thanks for pm.

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