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thanku soo much Shamoo🤗
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Thanks shamoo well jaldi hi update denge
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Orphan. Self independent girl. Short tempered but respects elders.
Teacher at Littel Angels Orphanage. Loves to spend time with children.
Lively and friendly girl. Chirpy and brave.
She loves her bhaiya i.e. Samar who had saved her live once.
She knows Samars past and wants to help him in every possible way.





Bade Bhaiya of Shruti. Though not related by blood but both share a sweet bro-sis bond. In search of his family and friends who he lost a while ago.
Loves Shruti and can do anything for her.
He works at the Little Angels Orphanage.
Extremely friendly and charming in nature.
The kids of the orphanage love him.

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Part 11 - When East meets West

It's been days after Megha's relevantion ...
Manav was in colony garden..doing exercise..


Manav-(in mind) kya karu jise sharad atleast megha se baat toh Kare...kuch sochna hoga ...


Manav was lost in his own world when Jacky comes..


Manav - Jacky..kya hua plan ne kaam kiya ...


Jacky- nahi Manav..kuch bhi nahi hua..Sharad ne toh help bhi nahi ki Megha ki...aur main hall se chala gaya Gusse mein..


Manav- hame kuch aur sochna hoga Jacky aur aisa kuch sochna hoga jisse woh dono pehle ki tarah phirse dost banne...


They both sit on a bench..


Jacky- lekin Manav,dost toh tab bannege na jab Sharad aur Megha ek dusre se baat karenge..Sharad toh Megha ko dekh ke hi gussa hojaata hai aur muh mod leta hai..toh baat kaha se karenge..

Manav- agar woh dono baat nahi karte toh hum undono ki baat karavange kaise bhi karke ..


Jacky- ek idea hai Manav ,kyu naa unhe hum ek kamre mein bandh karde...taaki woh ek dusre baat karne lage...


Manav- idea acha hai par bahut purana hai Jacky yeh kaam nahi karega ...


Jacky- Ab toh ek hi raasta mujhe dikhai de raha hai Manav ..undono ki koi ek common fav chiz hum chupa dete hain hum aur kahenge ki saath mein dhoodhni hogi woh khoi hui chiz...


Something strikes in manav mind..

Manav - Jacky kya idea diya hai...bahut hi acha idea hai...


Jacky- toh manav mein undono ke fav chize gum kar doon...


Manav- nai nai Jacky..hum undono ki fav chizze gum nahi karenge.. Unhe yaha se kahi bahaar lejaayenge..yani ki koi nazdik wali jagah par hum lejaayenge aur phir hum dono undono ko akela chod denge waha..aur hame dhoondhne ke chakkar woh log ek dusre se saath baat karenge... Hooon


Jacky- hooon... Par Manav hum unhein kaha lejaayenge aur unhein ek saath kyuki ek saath toh woh log jaayenge hi nahi.


Manav- uska solution bhi hai mere pass.. Bas Ab jagah decide karni hain...


Jacky- hum mele mein lejaaye??


Manav- Jacky yaha kaha mela hoga ...koi aur jagah socho ...


Manav was thinking when he sees a poster was lying on ground..

He picks up the poster.. And reads it


Manav- mil gayi hame hamari jagah Jacky..


Jacky- konsi jagah...manav


Manav- 'little Angel's orphange' hum yahi jaayenge yeh dekho iss orphange ka poster yaha ground pe pada tha unhe charity ke liye ek programme rakha hai .


Jacky-lekin yeh programme ki date toh nikal gai haina Manav..


Manav- date nikal gayi hai programme ki yeh baat toh sirf mujhe aur tumhe hi patah hai Jacky...Sharad or Megha ko nahi..


Jacky- samajh gaya mein Manav par Ab sabse badi muskil ka kaam hai..


Manav- haan ,Jacky undono ko convince karna aane keliye..Jacky tum Megha ko convince karo aur mein Sharad ko convince karta hoon..aur suno aage kya karna hai...

Manav tells his plan to Jacky...


Manav- hoon


Jacky- hooon,ishaaba


Manav- ishaaba..


Jacky- tumhe yeh word kaise patah manav?


Manav- Hemant ne mujhe sikhaya hai...Jacky..acha chalo Ab hum hamara plan execute karte hain..


Here at,

'Little Angel's orphanage'


The girl is talking with head warden...of orphanage...


In office room,


Warden- Shruti..shruti suno..tumhe naye volunteer's mile.


Shruti- nahi abhi tak nahi mile.mein dekhti hoon ..agar koi miljaaye toh mein unse baat kar loongi...chalo mein chalti hoon..class lene jaa rahi hoon


Warden- haan..thik hain.. Agar koi mile toh bataa dena mujhe...


Here at Sunshine colony,


Manav and Jacky were trying it hard to manao Mesha..


At ghotala house,


Megha- nai..Jacky..mein ne kaha na mujhe kahi nahi jana..mera mann nahi kar raha ...tum chale jao...Manav ya Pluto ke saath...


Jacky- areee par Megha , tumhara Mann phir se mmm hojaayega.. Issliye keh raha hoon bahaar chalte hain ghumne..


At ohja house,


Sharad- nai Manav...mera bilkul bhi Mann nahi hai kahi bahaar jaane ko .


Manav- Sharad,Sharad..dekho mujhe patah hain tumhara Mann nahi hai..aur mujhe wajah bhi patah hai...Sharad..issliye keh raha hoon thodi der bahaar ghumne jaate hain toh tumhe bhi acha lagega


Sharad- Manav...par..mein nahi...


Manav- Sharad, bahaane mat banaao..dekho hame 2015 ke baare mein bhi sochna hai..hame dhoondhna hai usse..toh hum yaha nahi baat kar sakte .koi bhi sun lega ..issliye keh raha hoon...bahaar chalte hain..hum koi raasta sochte hain ...aur sirf hum dono jaayenge..


Sharad- hmmm thik hain..par hum kaha jaayenge..


Manav- little Angel's orphanage


Here at ghotala house,


Megha- tum kehna kya chahte ho Jacky..

Jacky- mein yahi kehna chahta hoon.ki dekho hum bahaar ghumne jaa rahe hain..thik hai..toh hum 2015 ke baare mein baat kar sakte haina usse..kaise dhoondhna hai..ya koi raasta nikaal sakte hain...agar yaha baat ki toh koi bhi sun lega hamari baat..


Megha- par hum hamari language mein baat kar sakte hain yahaa..


Jacky - agar Pritesh ne sunn liya toh ..tab toh usse mauka mil jaayega na..issliye keh rahaa hoon ..bahaar chalte hain.. Tumhara mood bhi thik hojaayega aur hum baat bhi kar sakte hain 2015 ke baare mein


Megha- hmm thik hain...par hum jaa kaha rahe hain..


Jacky- little angels orphanage.


As per plan both Manav and Jacky leaves for orphanage at different time with Sharad and Megha ...so that Sharad and Megha don't see each other..



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At little angels orphanage ...


Manav- (in mind) yeh Jacky kaha reh gaya...


Jacky messages Manav that he has reached orphanage...


Sharad- Manav yaha toh koi charity ka programme nahi hai..


Manav- haan Sharad...par koi baat nahi humne waise b donation karna hain..hum yeh chize donate kar dete hain..hooon


Sharad- hooon


Manav and Sharad donates things .


Manav- chalo na Sharad yeh baccho ke saath kehlte hain .


Sharad- haan..chalo..


Jacky messages to Manav that he has donated some things in orphanage and asks him further next move


Manav calls Jacky...and asks him to come at orphanage playground ...with Megha


Manav - areee sharad,yeh dekho Jacky aur Megha aa rahe hain yaha.


Sharad- kya...chalo Manav mujhe yaha nahi rukna hum chalte hain...


Manav- Sharad..ruko..dekho woh log aa rahe hain aur hum yaha thodi der rukte hain phir hum dono chale jaate hain ...


Jacky too convinces Megha that they will leave after sometime..


Sharad and Megha have brought sweets for the kids..As soon as kids see this they come rushing towards them..n make a circle around Sharad and Megha..Seeing Sharad and Megha busy with kids, Manav and Jacky see their chance and leave from there ...


Manav and Jacky were going towards main gate


Manav- jaldi karo Jacky agar unhe patah chal gaya ki hamne undono ko akele choda hai ...toh aur bhi gussa honge dono hum par..


Jacky- haan haan Manav jaldi chalo kahi woh log hame dhoondh na le..


Manav was every now and then looking backwards to see if Sharad and Megha were following them or not. And because of this Manav didn't know he was left behind..


Manav- bas indono ke bich jhagda na ho...chalo Jacky ..jaldi chalo..


Manav didn't see someone coming in front of him..


Here, Shruti was with some kids ..


Shruti- chalo jaldi karo sab cake khana hain na jaao sab ke bulaao..


She didn't see someone coming in front of her and...

BANG...!!!!!


Both fell down ...along with the cake..


Shruti- aaah ..


Manav and Shruti stands up


Shruti was angry on the person with whom she collided..


Shruti - oh hello Sir.. Dekh ke nahi chal sakte haan... Pura cake gira diya ..itni mehnat se banaya tha mein ne...


Manav - kya mein dekh ke nahi chal raha tha..oh madam mein nahi aap dekh ke nahi chal rahi thi..aap jhuta ilzaam mat lagaiye...


Shruti- kya..kitna jhut bolte ho aap ..ek toh dekh ke aap nahi chal rahe the aapke wajah se itna saara nuksaan hua hain..aur upar se mujhe hi bol rahe hai ki mein ne dekha nahi...


Manav- kya?? Jhut mein nahi aap bol rahi hain...ek toh aap ne dekha nahi aur mujhe dosh de rahi hain... Aap apni galti maan lijiye...


Shruti- areee mein kyu Manu apni galti..jab galti tumhari hain toh tum accept karo apni galti...tumhe dekh ke chalna nahi aata ..dekh kar tum nahi chal rahe the ...


Manav anger was also rising as Shruti was not accepting her mistake and accusing him for being careless..


Manav- hellooo madam...ek toh tum dekh kar nahi chal rahi thi aur mujhe par dosh mujhe de rahi ho.tum apni galti accept karo...


Here,with Sharad and Megha..they finally realize that they are alone


Megha- Pluto...mera matalb hain Sharad tum apne powers se contact karo na Jacky ko ya Manav bhaiya ko..


Sharad- mera superpowers thik se kaam nahi kar rahe hain... ..


Megha- toh phir hum kais baatayenge unhe moblie bhi nahi laaye hum toh..


Sharad -baat yoh sahi hai Minto..mera matalb hai Megha.. chalo hum yaha se dhoondhna start karte hain...


Here,Jacky realized Manav was not following him and came to check on him..When he sees Manav was arguing with a girl ...


Shruti- tum bahut batameez ho..ek toh galti accept nahi kar rahe aur attitude dikha rahe ho..


Manav - batameez mein nahi hoon tum attitude dikha rahi ho..galti karti ho accept nahi karti ho aur dosh muje par daal rahi ho...


Shruti gets a call...


Here,Jacky comes their and ask Manav what happened to his clothes...further he informs him that Sharad and Megha are waiting for them near main gate


Shruti ends her call


Shruti-meri galti nahi hai toh mein kyu accept karu..galti meri nahi hain. Jab tak tum nahi apni galti accept nahi karte mein tumhe yahaa se jaane nahi doongi..


Manav- haan toh meri bhi galti nahi Hai...apni galti accept karlo...


Jacky- dekhiye aap dono jhagda karna bandh kijiye...hame bahut urgent kaam hain ..hume jaane dijiye..


Shruti- toh app isse kaho ki yeh maafi maange


Manav- meri koi galti nahi hain..


Manav and Jacky were about to leave..when Shruti holds Manav hand..


Manav look towards Shruti..


Shruti- thik hain...(looking towards Jacky) tumhare pass pen hain..


Jacky gives a pen to Shruti..


Shruti writes something on Manav hands


Manav- yeh kya kar rahi ho tum...haath chodo mera


Shruti- tumhe dekhai nahi deta na issliye ache chasme wale ka number..de rahi hoon jaa ke aankhe check karva Lena ..galti tumhari hai. ..


Shruti was about to leave ..when Manav holds shruti hands..


Shruti- haath chodo mera..


Manav- tumhe bhi dekhai nahi deta ..issliye ache chasme wale ka number ..de raha hoon tum apni aankhe check karva lena.. galti tumhari hain..


As Manav Turns to go another person passes by him but Manav doesn't see him..


Manav,Jacky,Sharad and Megha leave for the colony..


That Person sees Shruti and goes upto her...


P- areee Shruti yeh kya hua ..Tere kapde kaise kharab hogaye..aur itni gusse mein kyu hai tu...


Shruti- Samar,bhaiya ..yeh sab uss ladke ki wajah se hua hain. Bada batmiz ladka tha apni galti maan hi nahi raha ..Aaj toh Bach gaya ..dusri baar mil gaya na ..uski khair nahi..


Samar- acha meri pyari behen ..shaant hojaao pehle aur chalo tum ander... Aur shaanti se batao ki kya hua...hoon


They both go in a room and sit to talk..


Samar-Acha ab btao kya hua..


Shruti-Bhaiya..abhi abhi muje ek bada hi batameez..khadus ladka mila...mera to dil kia use khinch ke punch marun..but ruk gai..warna aj to mere hath se ek khoon to pakka ho jata..


Samar-Shant..shant meri lady bheem shant..maaf kr de...insan hain..galtiyan ho jati hain..wo kya kehte hain"galti insan se hi hoti hai aur "no ones perfect..tu b to takra skti hai na..tu b galti kr skti hai..to aise hi use b bhola bhala manushya samaj ke maaf kr de..aur apni bheem wali gadha neeche rakh boht sare kaam hain..


Shruti-wow..kaise..matlb kaise kr lete ho aap..hmesha aise hi muje shant kr lete ho..warden bhi kehti hain tere bhai kaise mere gusse ko shaant kar deta hain ..apka charm hmesha kaise chal jata hai mujpe..


Samar-bss kr warna mai blush krne lgunga...


Shruti(laughing)-bhaiya..aapse zyada cute ladka maine apni life mein nahi dekha..aap itne seedhe sadhe hain..itte well mannered..aur ek woh.akdu sadu..huh tamiz nahi hain usme ..ladki se kaise baat karte hain.


Samar-waoh woah...hello madam..abhi abhi meri tareef kr rhi thi ye konsi gali pakad li tumne..comeback baby .jane do usse..


Shruti(breathes deeply)-ok bhaiya as you say..mai use baksh deti hu..aap nhi hote to kya hota mera..aap hi to meri family hain..aapka aur mera rishta na ho ke b kitna gehra rishta hai..aapki wajah se hi aj mai zinda hu..


Samar-Kuch rishte khoon se nahi bnte Shruti..unke liye dil milna kafi hota hai...tumhari aur meri tuning hi aisi baithi hai..n waise b..girls pe mera charm jaldi chlta hai(winks)


Shruti-Haan haan..mera bhaiya iss duniya ka sbse charming and handsome man hai..


Samar-.acha suno ek choti si problem hai


Shruti-Kya hua..Kitchen ki gas khatam ho gai.!? Bacho ki chocolates? yaa phir baccho ne phir se warden ke saath koi shaitaani ki? haan yhi hoga(Gets up to leave)


Samar-Oh hello shatabdi express..sunn to lo meri puri baat...baitho(makes Shruti sit) wo jo volunteer work ke liye log ane wale the na..unhone ane se mana kr dia hai..

They are saying they are busy in some political party work..waha paise milenge unhe to wo yaha muft mein kaam nhi karna chahte..aaj kal yeh insano ko pta nhi kya ho gya hai..jaha paisa dikhta hai wahi khinche chale jate hn..ek baar bhi bacho ke baare mein nhi sochte ke unke kuch waqt inn bachon ke chehre pe khushi ayegi jo ke hazaron lakhon rupee se bhi badhkar hai...khair..


Shruti hame naye volunteers ki zarurat hai. tumhari dhyan mein koi volunteers hain?


Shruti-Oh my god..ye to galat hua..Ab kya kare hum ...(thinks something)wait bhaiya..mai janti hun kuch logo ko..aj aye the bachon se milne..bahut dedicatedly kaam kr rhe the.. Baccho ko bhi woh log pasand aaye ...woh hamari help kar sakte hain..mein kal hi unse milke aaungi.


Samar-Great..kon the wo log..kya naam tha..kaha se aye the..


Shruti-Naam nhi pta..par unn logo ke records hmare gate pe jo visitors ka register hai usme honge..mai waha se copy krti hu phir hum dono milke chalnge kal..


Samar-Nahi Shruti..muje zaruri kaam hai..Gafur bhai se milna hai..unke paas kuch khabar hai mere parivar ke bare me.. Kal jaa raha hoon Milne gaffur bhai se...


Shruti-Wow..sachiii..mai bappa se pray krungi ke Gafur bhai aapko good news dein..all the best..


Samar-thanx shruti..mai bhi insaano ke ishwaar se yehi prathna karta hoon Ki woh log mil jaaye..

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At colony


Manav(pacing up and down his room)-samajhti kya hai wo ladki haan ek toh galti uski galti thi aur dosh mujh par daal rahi thi..aur kitne attitude se baat kar rahi thi mujse ...next time milne do muje..aisa sabak sikhaunga ke zindagi bhar yaad rakhegi..


Ojha-Ke ke ke ke ke hua Manav..mhare jaise veer pratibhashali..mashur model ka beta..aise tension me..ke hua bol mhare ko..mai sab thik kr dunga..


Manav-Papa..plz muje akela chod dijiye..aj ka mera din hi bekar hai..


Ojha-Par hua ke beta bol toh sahi..


Manav-Rehne dijiye papa..mujeh nahi baat karni uske baare mein...(leaves the room and goes outside..)


Ohja- areee kiske baare mein manav bata toh de..manav...


Ohja uncle goes after manav...


Next day...


Manav was still thinking on how to bring back mesha together


Here at the gate..Shruti enters


Shruti(reading the board)-Sunshine Colony toh aagayi par konsa ghar..ye toh likha hi nhi register pe..ab kisse puchu.. Hey bappa help kardo..Koi toh mile jisse puchu mein.


She's walking ahead..not knowing where to go...she saw someone doing was exercise in the garden..she decides to talk to him


Shruti-Suniye..excuse me

Man turns around and ofcourse its our handsome hunk Manav


Manav & Shruti (Together)-Tumm..!!


Manav- Ohh god..tum to terrorist nikli..mera peecha karte karte yaha tak paunch gayi


Shruti- oh hello mister..mujeh koi shauk nahi hai tum jaise ladke ka peecha krne ka..shakal dekhi hai apni ?


Manav-Excuse me..mujh jaise matlb..n hello shakal dekhi hai maine..n mai bahut hi handsome hu muje patah hai..


Shruti(Faking laugh)-Like really...tumhe itni badi galat fehmi kaise hui hai ke tum handsome ho..kisi ne tumhe bataya nhi ke tumhari shakal gadhe se milti hai?! Mele me bichade hue bhai ho dono!!


Manav(temper rising)-tum tum..apni had me raho warna..


Shruti-Warna kya..kya kar loge..haan


Manav-Tum ek ladki ho islye mai kuch nahi keh rha ..warna ab tak jo haal mai kr chukka hota tum zindagi bhar yaad rakhti ke Manav Ojha se pala Pada tha


Shruti-Ohh to tum ho Manav Ojha..tumhara naam likha tha orphanage ke register pe..muje lga wo cute boy hoga jo bacho ke sath khel rha tha..muje pehle patah hota ke tum ho to mai kbhi bhi yaha nhi ati..


Manav-To maine bola tha ane ko?! Tum jao yaha se ( manav holds shrutis hands)


Shruti-Hello..muje hath mat lgao..muje karate ata hai..hee haa(makes a karate move towards Manav)


Manav-Muje tumhe hath lagane ka koi shauk nahi hai..dafa ho jao yaha se..


Shruti-Mai nahi jaungi..kya kr loge Tum...


Manav-Mai(pissed..starts thinking and looking here and there)mai ye krunga..


Manav picks up a pipe lying nearby..opens a tap and water comes rushing out straight towards Shruti making her fully wet...


Shruti-(shouting at the top of her voice)Manavvv..


Both starts to fight like small kids playing in water..both are shouting and fighting and hurling abuses at each other..


Hearing the commotion outside,all the colony people come out of their houses..and all are shocked to see Manav fighting with a girl..the calm headed ,the always serious, the always mature behaving Manav playing like a 5year old in water..


The biggest shock came to dear Anna who hadn't experienced this side of Manav .. And Ojha & lajjo were shocked to see their son behaving this way


Megha(to Sharad and Jacky)- Sharad ..yeh wohi ladki hai jo kal hame orphanage me mili thi? Yaad hai issi ne help ki thi bahar ka rasta btane mein..


Sharad-haan yeh toh wohi hai..par yeh yaha kya kr rhi hai..


Jacky-aur issi ke saath kal orphanage mein Manav ki ladai bhi hui thi..aur yaha bhi dono ladd liye..roko indono ko


Here..Seeing Manav fighting with a girl, Lajjo gets embarrassed..


Lajjo(angrily)-Manav..!!!


Manav and Shruti stop fighting..Ronnie moves forward and closes the tap..


Lajjo-Ke kar rha hai tu..ye sanskar diye hain maine?! Colony ke bicho beech ek ladki se lad rha hai bacho ki tarah..ja andar..


Sharad(comes forward to Manav rescue)-Haan haan Manav chalo mai chlta hu tumhare sath muje tumse zaruri baat bhi krni hai(Pulls Manav and takes him inside )


Megha(seeing Shruti full wet)-Hiii i m megha...remember kal mile the.!? Wo sab baat chodo chalo mere sath mai tumhe change deti hoon tum puri bheeg gai ho..(takes her inside)...



Precap- will MeSha accept Shruti's offer? What will happen when MeSha meets Samar? Will Manav be able to tell Sharad about his estranged feelings for Anna..Will Sharad help Manav move on? What happens when Shruti and Manav meet each other again?

Stay tuned



Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago
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ek dam wahiyad update tha yeh..

aisa ki karta h kya?? 😡

me toh comment na karne ka soch rahi thi..

par krishu ne bola isliye comment kia...

sach me tum dono ko do thappad marne ka mann kar raha hai...

ab bus aur nai likha jayega mujhse...

itne me hi khush raho...

par itni jaldi kya h tumhe...

yeh toh adha hi commnt tha..

pura padho pata chalega...




aisa maine bola kya??



aisa toh me kabhi bhi is update ke baare me bol hi nai sakti...

itna wadiya update tha yeh..
manav over with anna...
he wants to patch up sharad & megha..
coz he feels megha deserves a chance...
sharad still upset..
abhi isko koi baraf ki ladi pe letao..
iska gussa khud hi thanda pad jaayega...
hemant ko bulao koi toh... 😆😆

manav plans to take mesha to orphanage...
bechare ko kya pata tha.. wahan mesha ka patch up toh pata nai.. par uska kisike saath break up ho jaayega...😆😆 woh bhi first meet me hi...😆😆

baap re..
tum dono ne toh manav ki kaya palat kar di..
manav fighting with shruti like a child...😆😆

this fight wasnt enough.. ek aur fight woh bhi colony me..
& wat??😲 manav ne shruti ko bheega diya.. so bad of him.. aisa koi ladki ke saath karta hai kya?

all shocked..
anna jealous
now...
megha taking shruti away..
& sharad taking manav away...

continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...



Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
BTW whats MeSha? Megha Sharad?

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