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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: Sanjana_IshRa
Nice one di 😊

Thanks sanju

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: Prayosha.DivAn
Hey Di...Awesome Part...

With amazing start with the Unimaginable love of IshRa...

Raman was driving the car in night.he was all alone and go home.he turned his car and a truck banged to his car .Raman got injured and got unconscious. Some goons come to him and shoot him right on his forehead.

My God...I was so scared...I thought ab kya hoga...Ishita bhi nahi hai Raman ke sath use kuch ho gaya to...

But that was dream...not a dream but nightmare...

shita- goli maar di ,goli maar di.unn logon ne mere Raman ko goli maar di.ab main kya karun.kaise bachaun unhe.unn logon ne goli maar di.she was muttering and crying bitterly.

Mihika- kisne maar di.jeeju would be safe.who told u this.

Ishita- Maine dekha.they shoot him in front of my eyes.mujhe Raman ke paas jaana hai,please mujhe le chalo.take me to him.he is in danger.I have to be with him.please mujhe le chalo.

Aww she was so scared that she was ready to go back to him...

Raman- yes I am alright just going home. I was driving the car,He was talking when he saw a car turn to the road where he was about to turn and a truck come and banged in it.

Wow...their love is beyond imagination...she sensed that he was in trouble...from so far...too good...& what if she had not called Raman...Raman would have died...Ishita- no u r not going to cut the call.I will listen to ur heartbeat.

Raman smiled at her and said- OK baba u listen my heartbeat till then I am reaching home.then u can see me also.saying so he kept his phone in his pocket and start driving.

Aww they are so cute & adorable...I can just drool over them...if it is possible in my life...

Raman- don't say like this bachcha.see twenty days r over,only ten days r left .after that u will be in my arms forever.

Ohh...so 20 days passed...I thought It was juat day after they reached Dehradoon...

Raman thought,how can I call her.in last twenty days he got attacked thrice.her love is saving him every time.he can't risk her life until the culprits r caught

OMG!!!!! Thrice! !!!!

Thanks for adding song...I thought You would not add it...

Ishita- yes,I know u guys have done a lot for me and I wanna thank u for that.but I can't do this anymore.I cant betray my Raman. I just wanna go back to him.unhe meri zarurat hai.main nahi dhokha de sakti unhe.I know I am backing out but nahi hai mujhme himmat ,Raman se aur sachchai chupane ki.what if he comes to know everything that what I am doing.I divorced Raman and roaming with that moron .Raman mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karenge. For playing this dirty game. Aur phir jab se Maine apna mangalsutra nikala hai.I am getting negative vibes.please send me back to him.she said crying

Inn 20 Days me kitna kuch ho gaya...but in logo ne sirf planning hi kiya ki Exam bhi di sath me...

The fleets of car reached a big mansion in dehradun.everyone was shocked to see the mansion.

Ishita- where u have brought us.we have to go to rahul's house.

Man- Ronnie sir gave us this address only.he purchased this house for ur stay ma'am.

Wow!!! New Mansion...only for 30 days...

Raman is so caring...& tight security...but Ishita went leaving his mansion & all security...but I don't think Raman can let her roam in India all alone...I think...use kuch bodyguards to Ishita ka pichha karte hi honge...

I hope they would be helpful when time comes...I hope You are getting what I am saying...

Raman threatened Rahul...that I very well knew that would do that only...

But Di...Why Divorce Papers...sirf drama bhi to kar sakte the...

See Di...I told you before onmy that...I don't wat that Raman would doubt on Ishita...even for a bit...Ishita always trusted Raman blindly...but Raman had doubt before for 2-3 times...& I don't want that now...now It's Raman's turn to show his unconditional love...& true and blind trust over Ishita...

Update this As soon as possible Di...

I never told you to Updaethis or Update that...But I want this Update very Soon...

You know why...Because I am also mad like Ishita...He He He...Jokes apart...Please Update Soon...

Thanks piyu

Glad u like it

Yes ishita can sense danger on him

Yes her friends make a huge plan

Let's see what happens

See I am updating soon for u

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
y i think this plan is going to backfire
wht if subbu used this n create any mu between ishra????
nice update

Thanks prachi

Let's see what happens

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: mayraa
Superb update Di
Loved it

Ishu had nightmares that Raman's life is in danger
And it came true if she didn't call him that truck would hit his car
Her phone call saved him
He was attacked 3times in past 20 days

And what is that divorce drama Di
Flashback was shocking for me
Rahul made her sign the divorce paper just for the precaution for their plan if subbu will do background check on them they don't caught

But this separation is too much for ishita
She can't live without Raman
She is missing him Like hell
Raman's conditions was no better
He was also missing her but he can't risk her life when he is facing life threatening threat

Plz Di end this separation track soon
I can't see them separate
Continue soon

Thanks dolly

Yes this drama is going out of control

Let's see what happens next

Will continue soon

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#435

Author's note- before updating this part I wanna say something. That I am very much disappointed by the responses I got in last update.after sending 199 pms I hardly get 100 likes and 50 comments. So what the use of writing so many stories and getting headache in return.many sent me pm that they r busy in their exams and roaming and commenting in others story.if anyone don't wanna read at least inform.I will not send any pm coz I write with much dedication and after that sent pm too.if I will get such bad response then I will end this story in next update and will not update any of my story and this time I am very serious coz I am very hurt.I can see people commenting on other's work (no offend to the writers) but not on mine.then I am also not free to write any story.I will close every story but firstly this one coz I can't see anyone insulting my hard work.I am updating this one so soon coz everyone wanted.

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Rahul- OK then let's go.ishita its ur test.u have to qualify it.

Ishita- I will surely qualify it.let's go.now this subbu will know with whom he messed with.

All four hugged each other and went to accomplish their mission.

PART 47

Ishita was sitting at the bar counter of the night club waiting for subbu.she was looking carefree but deep inside she was very scared as she was doing something like that for the first time.anyone can guess that she is heavily drunk but in real.she wasn't drunk a bit.

It was getting darker but he wasn't anywhere ,so she thought he will not come back .she was about go when rahul messaged her that subbu is coming.

Ishita look at the entrance and saw him entering with two mans.her blood boil in anger seeing him laughing but she compose herself. Have a mouthful of wine and went to him with trembling steps.she went near him and vomit the wine on his suit.

Subbu- what the hell.can't u see u stupid girl.

Ishita said with trembling voice- I aamm soorrryyy.I am reaaalllyyy soorrryyy.

Subbu look at her and said in shock- Ishita. U r Ishita naa.

Ishita- Ishira,who isshhhiiireaaa.

Subbu- ishira nahi Ishita. Tum Ishita ho naa.

Ishita- no I am nooottt.I am sharmistha.just go away and let me drink.and sorry for ruining ur suiittt.saying so she went back to the bar counter while subbu's eyes were constantly on her.

Subbu- (st)no I can't mistake in recognising her.she is Ishita only.but what she is doing here.he was lost in his thoughts when he saw her going out of the club.

He went behind her .she sat in a cab and went to a lone street cautious that he is following her.her friends were also following her secretly.

She stop at a small house and was opening the lock and murmering and crying- I hate u Raman,u cheated me.I hate u to betray me.I will kill u for killing the ishita in me.she was acting knowing that subbu is watching her.

He start approaching her ,so she open the lock and went inside before subbu can come to her.she locked the door ,subbu rang the door bell but she didn't open it.subbu went home thinking to come tomorrow.

After he went,her friends come to her place from.back door.

Rahul- u did a fab job.now he will surely come.

Ishita- give me my phone.did Raman called.

Mihika- yes jeeju called.I told him that u r sleeping.call him.he was worried for u.

Ishita- OK but before that I want to be his ishita,saying so she went to the washroom and come after bathing,changing into a saree wearing her mangalsutra and sindoor.perfect like his wife.then she called him.he picked the call in a jiffy.

Raman- where were u jaan.I was worried for u.why u were sleeping in odd hours.u will fall sick.

Ishita- I love you Raman.I love u ,I love u a lot.

Raman smiled hearing her open declaration.

Raman- I know u love me.why all of a sudden.

She remember how she said I hate u Raman.she was feeling guilty for uttering those words ,even for showing someone.

Ishita- bas aise hi.I just wanna tell that I love u alot Raman.anything in this world can't change my love for u.please always trust ur ishita.

Raman- I do trust my jaan.I will never mistrust u bachcha. Now tell me what u did all day.

Ishita- sirf aapko miss kiya.I love u Raman.

Raman- I love u too bachcha.

Ishita- I love u Raman.she was saying this again and again as if compensating for saying I hate u Raman.

Raman- kya hua jaan.

Ishita- I am missing u alot.

Raman- why u r missing me.I am near u only.actually I am inside u.just close ur eyes and feel ur Raman wrapping his arms around u.just try it once jaan.

Ishita close her eyes and hug herself to her when she feel him hugging her from behind.she smiled while he kissed her back of the neck.he nuzzle his nose into her feeling her aroma while she was just loving his touches.

Itni mohabbat karo na
Main doob na jaaun kahin
Waapas kinaare pe aana
Main bhool na jaaun kahin
Dekha jabse chehra tera
Main toh hafton se soya nahin

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Mujhe neend aati nahi hai akele
Khawabon mein aaya karo
Nahi chal sakunga tumhare bina main
Mera tum sahara bano
Ik tumhe chahne ke alaawa
Aur kuch humse hoga nahi

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Hamari kami tumko mehsoos hogi
Bhiga dengi jab baarishein
Main bhar kar ke laaya hoon
Aankhon mein apni
Adhuri si kuch khwahishein
Rooh se chahne wale aashiq
Baatein jismon ki karte nahin

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi

She open her eyes when Raman said- so jao jaan.its too late.love u.

Ishita close her eyes saying- good night Raman.I love u too.saying so she slept hugging his pic to her heart.

Next morning ishita was sleeping when her door bell rang.she wake up and about to open the door when she realise her clothes.she went inside in a jiffy and changed her clothes ,remove her mangalsutra, tied it in on her wrist and then open the door with droopy eyes.

Ishita- ek packet bread de do bhaiya aur ek dozen anda.

Subbu- ishita u start eating eggs with that Raman.

Ishita look at him pretending to be surprised and said- I am not ishita.just go away ,saying so she was closing her door but subbu come inside.

Subbu- I know u r Ishita.I can't mistake in recognising u.what happened to u.Raman ne kya kiya tumhare saath.

Ishita look at him with immense hatred.she was hit him hard for badmouthing her Raman.but she composed herself and said- I don't wanna talk about him.just go away.

Subbu- no I will not.tell me what that moron did to u.

Ishita couldn't take it and slapped him hard .subbu was stunned to see that she slapped him for badmouthing Raman.ishita realised what she did.

Ishita- I am sorry subbu.but please don't take his name. I can't stand his name.

Subbu- ohh,I am sorry but tell me what he did.

Ishita started crying and said-he betrayed me subbu,I loved him beyond limits. I trusted him beyond words but he cheated me.he has many affairs. He was roaming all over the city with girls and was fooling me .but one day I caught him. So I come here leaving him .

Subbu- did u go to ur parents.

Ishita- kis muh se jaun.I chosed him over them.I was a fool to trust him but not on ur pure love.I wish I could turn the time when we were going to engage.but now I am all alone.noone is here with me.can u please help me.can u search a job for me so that I can live independently.

Subbu- why u r searching for job.divorce him and ask for alimony. That's ur right.

Ishita- I know but I don't want any money from him.i filed a divorce case but dont want any alimony.jab pyaar hi nahi raha toh what's the need of anything.

Subbu- yes that's true.u can come to my place ishita.I still love u a lot.woh tumhare layak hi nahi tha.

Ishita- thanks for being with me subbu but I need some lone time alone. Hope u understand.

Subbu- yes I do understand. OK then can we have dinner together tonight .

Ishita- I am not sure.please don't force me into anything.I need immense time to overcome this heart break.

Subbu- OK then I will wait.saying so he went.ishita closed the door and sighed in relief.she called her friends and told them everything.

Mihir-why u didn't go with him.we could have get the evidence.

Mihika- r u mad,aisa hota toh he will understand that she is just looking for an opportunity to go into his house.good u denied.

Rahul- my man is behind him.he is going to court.may be to check ur case.

Ishita- OK look after him.and tell me what he did.saying so she hung the call.

After an hour rahul called ishita.

Ishita- haan what he did.

Rahul- he got a duplicate copy of ur divorce paper and sent it to NASA office on Raman Kumar bhalla name.

Ishita- what.ab kya hoga.raman will get to know everything.

Rahul- nahi hoga.I took that envelope giving bribe.now it is with me.

Ishita- please keep an eye on him.I don't want anything to reach Raman.he is already sad without me and this divorce news will shatter him.

Rahul- nothing like that will happen. Trust me.

Ishita hung the call assured by his talk.two days passed but ishita didn't approach subbu.she was waiting for him to approach her.finally he come to her place .

Ishita- subbu,why u come here.I don't want anyone near me ,just go.

Subbu- kab tak uss aadmi ke liye khud ko takleef deti rahogi ishita.he is a closed chapter.I love u ishita.marry me and move ahead with me.

Ishita was stunned to hear his words.he was proposing her for marriage.

Ishita- I can't.I know he betrayed me but I loved him.I can't marry anyone.just go away.

Subbu- at least give me a chance to prove my love.who knows u may fall in love with me.

Ishita- OK,I will give u a fair chance.

After that subbu started meeting ishita daily.ishita meet him in the afternoon and her nights spent in talking with Raman.the guilt that she is betraying her love was killing her from inside.she start getting nightmares that Raman is drifting away from her due to her lies.she start getting restless day night.

One day she decided to end all this but that day subbu said- its been more then fifteen days since we met.u r pretty comfortable with me.r u ready to marry me.

Ishita- not yet subbu,actually I wanna,

Subbu- OK never mind.take ur time.can u please come to my place.I wanna show u how u gonna live after u marry me.

Ishita- today??

Subbu- no tomorrow. I have to make arrangements to welcome u.can to my place tomorrow. My driver will pick u.

Ishita- OK.I will be waiting.

After that subbu went to his house while ishita went to rahul's house and told them everything.

Rahul- this is the time,we have been waiting for.just u have to enter his bedroom and get that video.

Mihika- but its too risky.

Ishita- but I will do it for my Raman.she said determined.

Flashback end

Ishita- they r right.its a do or die opportunity. I have to do it for my Raman.she goes to her friends that she will do it.

In the evening, they left her at the place subbu told her.she was wearing a black gown.her hair were open.soon she saw a black merc.

She settle in the car and praying her murugan to make everything alright.soon she reaches his big mansion.she crossed all the security and reached the hall.subbu come wearing black tux.

Ishita- I must say,I am impressed.ur house is beautiful.

Subbu- soon it will be ours.have some drink.

Ishita smiled and took another glass leaving the one he offered.she said- u too have.

Subbu - wait I am bringing mine.saying so he went to the bar in his house and brought wine for him.till then ishita was done with her drink.she said- its yum.and smiled.

Soon her head was spinning and she fell in his arms.

Subbu smirked and said- I don't know u r genuine or not .but today I will make u mine.

On the other hand,Raman received an envelope which was hand delivered to him.he open it excitedly thinking ishita sent it and was shocked to see its content,divorce papers.

Raman crushed on the couch seeing the papers while on the other hand subbu picked ishita in his arms and took her to his bedroom.

That's all for now. I know its a shocking but I can't help it.give me good number of comments and like ,and I will update next part soon.or else,I won't update it any time soon.wicked me.will wait for ur shocking responses.

Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago

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MEHRIN SHANAVAS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#436

waiting is rahul.is the main villan in the story

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rufana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

U didn't unres

unres

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very sorry for late di

it was a fabulous update

raman was being attacked thrice in last 20 days!!

every time ishita's love was saving him...

it was surprising dat ishita's nightmare was partially true!!

raman knows dat ishita will come back to him if she comes to know dat his life is in

danger so he is lying to her to keep her safe nd another side ishita also hasn't told

him about her revenge from subbu as she knows raman will never allow her for this...

their love is so pure nd eternal...

ishita nd her friends have done huge planning for trapping subbu...

she told raman to remove securities nd is living in rahul's house leaving d mansion

which raman bought for her...

divorce papers!! though its a drama nd ishita didn't sign those but hope dat it won't

create any mu between ishra...

mihika's idea of hiding ishita's mangalsutra was good...

hoping dat they will successfully accomplish their mission of trapping subbu...

but who is behind raman's life!?

waiting for d next update...

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#438

Updated next part,have a look.

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Prayosha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#439

I am cursing myself...Why I asked this update Soon...

Aisi Update Di...Really I was not expecting this...

But IshRa...Haaye...they are too much...I love them...please don't spoil their relation...(I know you won't)

Mihika- yes jeeju called.I told him that u r sleeping.call him.he was worried for u.

Ishita- OK but before that I want to be his ishita,saying so she went to the washroom and come after bathing,changing into a saree wearing her mangalsutra and sindoor.perfect like his wife.then she called him.he picked the call in a jiffy.

Haaye...see...How much she loves him...she is so loyal to him...Raman ko itne dur baithe kaise pata chalta ki yeh uski Ishita ke roop me nahi hai...phir bhi wo apne Raman ke liye unki Ishita ban hi gai...itne sachche pyar par ko galti se bhi shaq kaise kar sakta hai...

Raman smiled hearing her open declaration.

Raman- I know u love me.why all of a sudden.

She remember how she said I hate u Raman.she was feeling guilty for uttering those words ,even for showing someone.

See wo Raman ko I hate you kaha iss liye wo I love You bar bar keh rahi hai...ki purane sare shabad uski juban se dhul jaye...yaar koi kisiko itna pyar kaise kar sakta hai...& koi itna pyar karne wale par radi bhar bhi shaq kaise kar sakta hai...

Ishita- bas aise hi.I just wanna tell that I love u alot Raman.anything in this world can't change my love for u.please always trust ur ishita.

Raman- I do trust my jaan.I will never mistrust u bachcha. Now tell me what u did all day.

Ishita- sirf aapko miss kiya.I love u Raman.

Raman- I love u too bachcha.

See he told that he trusted her...& I want that only...he should trust her undoubtedly...blindly...Otherwise I am not going to read further...

Haaye...that dream moments...I so want to see them together forever...

Yeh sale Subbu ki to mai...agar Raman India aaya to use jinda nahi chhodega...yeh to marega...Usne khud apni maut ko nyota diya hai...

Par sab soch rahe hai...Rahul villain...I don't think so...wo aisa kyo karega...Rahul hi to tha jo Raman ko first time hospital le gaya tha...Jisne Raman ko jail se chhudwaya tha...jo Ishita ka sahara tha...muje to bilkul bhi nahi lagta ki wo Subbu ke sath hoga...Subbu ke sath hoga bhi kyo...

Paise chahiye to Subbu se laakh guna jyada Raman use de sakta hai...& Subbu ke sath hota bhi to bhi wo USA de wapas aa kar Raman ka power dekh kar bhi Raman se dushmani nahi leta...

Yeh Subbu kuch jyada hi clever nikla...

Raman ko Divorce papers mil gaye...he was broken...but Ishita ke bare me soch kar nahi...Ishita ke liye soch kar...jaise Ishita ne mehaus kiya ki Raman taklif me tha...wese Raman bhi to mehsoos kar sakta hoga...

I hope Raman ke guards Ishita ke sath hi ho...& usd kutte Subbu se use bachaye...kyunki Raman Ishita ko India me akela to chhodega hi nahi...uske guards hoge hi...

I am repeating myself Di...ab Raman ki bari hai trust karne ki...Ishita ne bahot bar kiya...Iss bar Raman karega...

Koi gadha hi Ishita ke pyar par shaq karega...& My Raman is not gadha...

I am again telling if Raman would doubt a bit...I am not going to read further...& it's final...aur kitni bar karega shaq Raman...Ishita ne kiya ek bhi bar...nahi na...to Raman bhi nahi karega...

Edited by Prayosha.DivAn - 9 years ago

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#440

omg... its really shocking...

is rahul villain...

how did divorce paper reaches raman...

subbu spiked ishu drink...

its shocking... omg.. how will ishu get saved... no mu please... i cant wait update asap...

ps: i know raksha,.. reading your note.. i can understand what a writer feel after writing and put lot of efforts and sending pms only get likes and comments of regular reader... i also use to send 200 pms and gets only 99 likes and 30 comments... therefore i have removed all silent readers... i hope this shocking update will get lots of like and comments... continue your fab writing...

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