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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello friends,
i am back with the first update
this is dedicated to raksha di aka cutieruhi,because she is the one who has given me suggestion to update this story when i was in a dilemma

so,here goes the updaate
PART 1

firstly,introduction of our hero,RAMAN
raman is playing golf early morning in a green garden,after some time,he came out of the garden where two persons are waiting for him
his PA gave him hand kerchief and water with which he washed his face,which was sweaty and the other person gave him a glass filled with juice,raman smiled at him but soon his smile changed to anger as soon as he drank that juice

R {angrily} WHAT THE HELL?????what day is it today???????
ATTENDAR (A) sir,its monday
R then,what juice would i drink today?
A mango juice sir
R then what did you give me?
A pine apple juice,sir.i am sorry sir,i didn't go to market today as suddenly some emergency came in my home,so i thought to give you the other juice
R will you decide yourself??then,why do work under me?and moreover,you could have sent someone else for market if you can't
A i am really sorry sir,i forgot about it totally
R you forgot about your job,its okay,i am going to forgive you
then,he called his PA and told to give amount to the attendar
R take this money and go away from the job,go and take care of the family,i don't like the people who are not responsible in their job
saying so,he walked away ignoring the pleads of that man

while going towards the car,a girl came running to him and game him a sweet box and raman looked at her questioningly
R what is this??????
GIRL(G) sweets sir,today is my birthday and i want to celebrate it,that's why i came here to give you the sweet
raman took a sweet from the box and wished her birthday wishes
G okay,bye sir,i am going early to the office to give sweets to all office member
as the girl was about to go,raman stopped her
R hey what is your name??????
the girl opened her mouth to say something but is cut off by raman
R whatever,i don't want to know,but you want to know one thing that from today you are dismissed from the job
G but why sir???????what did i do?????
R do you know how much loss occurs to me due to your this celebration,you waste really 2 hours for distributing sweets over all the members of office,like this if every member of every branch of my company keep celebrating like this,then i have to shut down my company
G but sir,birthday comes only once in an year !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
R yes,that's true,that's why you must celebrate it after going from office,BTW,i don't want to argue more,you can go now
and he said to his PA to send her away giving some extra amount as bonus and also her birthday gift

i really apologise if anyone didn't like raman's character,but i assure you,you will surely like him as the story progresses

in a house like a big mansion which is decorated beautifully,a tensed mother is sitting for the person to be bride,just then,her husband came to the hall from upstairs
VISHWA(V) what happened madhu??why are you so tensed????see,in tension you are not able to do anything,there are a lot of works to look after
MADHU(M) what can i do vishwa?????suddenly,they called yesterday and told us to arrange a meeting today itself,i am so worried,all is happening in a hurry
V what are you worried for madhu?????i checked everything about the boy,he is a man of perfection,he is way too perfect for our ishu
M i really hope nothing goes wrong in this marriage proposal
V arey,its the first proposal we got,why are fearing as if its some 100th or more than that,okay now leave all those and be relaxed,everything will be fine
M but,i am very tensed viswa,he will like our ishu naa
V oh madhu,i have a medicine for your tension,you remember our first meet when i came for the first time to your home,you will automatically feel relaxed
madhu smiled and blushed a little hearing this and went to continue with the works in kitchen while vishwa went to continue with his works
in one of the bedrooms of that house,a girl is standing in front of the mirror admiring her beauty as she wore half saree for the first time,
i don't know how many thought her as ishita.but sorry to disappoint you,its mihika
M(ST) whah mihika,what a beauty you are!!!!if i were a boy,i would have married you instantly,you can easily become miss universe,oh these many days all are blind that they didn't notice you,now no problem,i know you are so pretty,so,i have to wear this half saree more often
hearing her mother's call,she ran downstairs

now lets come to introduction of heroine,ISHITA
a beautiful girl is driving an old model car which stopped suddenly in the middle of road,she came out of the car and tried to repair it using her little knowledge

I(ST) hayyo,ishu!!!!!!where are you struck???/i already told amma that i don't want to go to parlour to get ready,but she literally thrown me out of the house to send me to get ready in parlour,now i have to reach home before they reach home and my saree is also in my cupboard,i need to change,that's the only work,but,this car is not helping me either

suddenly,she heard a familiar voice from behind,okay that's subbu,ishita's best friend
S hey ishu,how much ever you try,that car won't start,so you better give up
ishita is startled with the sudden voice and turned around
I what is this subbu,you have really startled me,does anyone talks all of a sudden like this
S ishu,how many times i told you to buy a new car,and anyways you are so rich,then why this misery
I enough subbu,come and help me to repair this car
S don't trap me into this,i can't repair that antique piece
I don't you dare to insult this car,you know naa its my father's first car and i love it so much,anyways drop me home in your bike,i have to reach soon
S okay,come
ishita went to her car and wore scarf around her face,when subbu questioned about the same,she said that make up would spoil
then,ishu sat beside subbu and both drove away

on the other hand,raman is going towards his office,but stopped in his track listening his phone ringing,he immediately took the call as its from his mother
T raman,where are you,now don't tell me that you are going to office
R of course maa,where should i go,then???????
T don't make me angry raman,and don't you dare to say that you have forgotten that we have to go for seeing a girl for your marriage
R actually,i have forgotten it maa,BTW,why do you need me???i will marry whomever you choose
T raman,actually no one is with me naa,so you have to accompany me
R why??????/didn't shagun come with you???????
T now leave all those and come to the address which i have messaged you and i am also on my way
saying so,she hung knowing very well that she will surely come and raman too turned his car toward his new destination

so,literally both ishra are going towards the same direction and both are sppeding up to reach their destination

that's all i could manage to write friends
i know many of you must be angry
but,i am in sickbed right now,i am having cold and fever and i have that habbit of keeping up mu promises
i can't update till wednesday maybe as my aunt fought with my mom and taking me with her to take care of me

i apologise in advance
and i promise that i will give back to back update from wednesday

there is no much story in this part and its just introduction of characters,from next update pucca story would be nice

please read and comment
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Edited by srujanaroy - 9 years ago
ishra_JD_club thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Congrats 4 new story dear
Good start
Pls continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
First of all
Congratulations srujana for ur new story
Sorry pic load nhi hori
Net probs...
Awesome prologue
Update soon
PS.. Update ur previous story too plzzxx
Thnx for pm
akriti154 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Nycc prologue
continue soon
n do pm me
divyaruhi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
updated part 1
please have a look
divyaruhi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sweet.Aman

Congrats 4 new story dear
Good start
Pls continue



thanks dear
updated 1st part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
It's okk dii
Plz take care of ur health
Hope u r heart nd healthy soon
Great start dii
Raman's character is a bit different
divyaruhi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: ..Armor_ishra..

First of all
Congratulations srujana for ur new story
Sorry pic load nhi hori
Net probs...
Awesome prologue
Update soon
PS.. Update ur previous story too plzzxx
Thnx for pm



thanks tanu
why do you always say sorry

updated 1st part

will update the other one on wednesday
you are welcome
divyaruhi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: akriti154

Nycc prologue
continue soon
n do pm me



thanks akriti

added to buddy list😊
divyaruhi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: agm1998

It's okk dii

Plz take care of ur health
Hope u r heart nd healthy soon
Great start dii
Raman's character is a bit different



thanks for your wishes akanksha
i am too hating this phase of being in bed

raman is man of perfection,
soon you will understand

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