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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

such an amazing update Griffy. loved it


aww thanks sooo much😃
love u soo much jerry
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Apologies for the late update. I was busy with my sisters wedding.. came back a few days bk and struggling with assignments since then. Thanks soo much for the lovely comments and asking me to continue! sorry for the delay again..love u all

Part 18

What is love?

I had always wondered about the answer to my question. First I thought what I felt for Dhruv was love... but then he broke my heart and I hated the feeling I had for him... but how do u hate love? Is it even possible?

And then he came and now I knew... that I was going to get answer to my questions..

As he patiently sat holding my hand...without any questions...

Even without confession of love.. his grip on my hands showed that how I already belonged to him said or not

The way he looked at me ... The way he was showing how he trusted me and my past didn't bother me..

The way his eyes spoke..every time mine had tears...they spoke only of how to wash away my pain and how to comfort me..

He didn't complicate life .. he didn't make me question how little we knew about each other.. in fact he was unfolding the knots of my life one by one with his love..

Now I knew what was love.. or at least I was beginning to know

"and then you stopped believing in love"

I whispered yes.. I was utterly amazed at how he understood me..

What more could I ask for?

All my fear .. all my pain seemed to disappear away..

His faith in me...

His trust..

I didn't need anything more...

And I knew it was time

Time to express what I had been feeling all these weeks ...

It wasn't as if I wanted to label what we were experiencing but to express the most wonderful feeling in the world to the person who held so much faith in me.. I felt I had to now...

His words "our future" still echoing in my mind

I looked into his eyes...

I knew ... it was the right moment

"But now I do.. believe in love"

His face broke into a killer smile...

And even before that his eyes lightened up a thousand times...

Like this is what he was waiting for and his grip on my hand tightened a little and he drew a little closer

...

It didn't matter to me.. what she felt for Dhruv.. in the past..

It would not affect my feelings for her in any way..

She was extremely precious to me and even if I didn't know everything about her ..my heart knew she was the one.. and I knew she would never hurt me... and her eyes spoke how she loved me..

My heartbeats skipped only to her voice.. and her presence lifted away my pain and stress... what more could I ask for?

All my heart yearned now was that she expressed the same .. and so did I..

Did she still not realize that she was in love?

Has her faith still in love lost? Or has she found it?

I wondered...

And then she looked into me eyes... like never before..

They seemed determined and lit in a different way..

I could feel she was going to say something and she said it

"I do believe in love"

So she knew... even after being sure that she had fallen in love with me.. I was relieved somewhere to hear it from her...

"oh so you do?" I said and moved a little closer to her

I asked almost grinning

She giggled... the very first time

She was blushing almost going red...

The moon was shining upon us ...and man she looked beautiful...her smile made her even more beautiful

She whispered "yes" I again moved closer

There was not much space left between us..

Her face was very near.. and I was having thoughts I could not express in words

Holding her hands even more tightly.. I continued grinning...

I thought of something naughty

I came near to her ear and whispered...

"So why do u believe in love"

She gasped...so I had the right affect on her

My heart did a victory dance

And my brain hissed "not so soon idiot"

I moved back and continued looking at her..

She was almost shivering and looking down...

She was blusing more than ever and I was enjoying it thoroughly..

"Ummm..Kunj... I think"

...

Okay Kunj really shut me up..his whisper still giving me chills...I was blushing beyond control..

Butterflies in my stomach..

My heartbeats pacing at the fasted speed possible..

Should he not tell ?

Have I not said enough ?

I wondered looking down..

Ahh .. he was definitely having fun.. and here I was shivering almost..

I wanted to tell him... how his voice ..touch..presence were affecting me

But then I saw him grinning shamelessly...and I wanted to have some laugh too..

" I think Kunj.. its too late and we should go.. I have nothing more to say"

His expression changed to horror

Oh now Kunj Sarna you r shocked? Should you not be telling me that you love me?

Why should I say everything

I fought every muscle of my face to keep a straight face

......

" what?? Why?? I mean.. you don't have to say anything more ?"

"no not really"

I saw her face.. she was serious about it..

"But.."

"But what?"

She started getting up

Kunj.. fun time over... this is the moment to tell her..

I stopped her from getting up holding her hand more tightly

" wait"

"Ouch"

" Oh no I am sorry.. did I hold yr hand too tightly"

"yeah"

" I am sorry I am really sorry"

And then I saw her face break into a beautiful smile..

She was joking

" U Scared me Twinkle!!"

I made an annoyed face

" Aww sorry.. but we really should go"

She was smiling and I realized...she was waiting for me to say it...

"Ok let us go"

And her smile faultered...

I was allowed to have fun too

I started getting up

But she didn't..

And her grip on my hands.. stopped me..

She looked at me..her serious expression back...

"Kunj..."

And I saw her...

And lost my balance...

And fell on top of her ... "Twinkle..." .. I tried getting up.. but neither my heart allowed nor my mind..

How close I was to Twinkle.. all my emotions lightened up ..and I looked in her eyes...

And I knew she felt the same emotions and it was time to express what we were feeling

"Twinkle..."

"Hmm..."

"I love you..."

I said it finally... I said it...and I knew it was not just a feeling it was a promise...promise to be with her always..

...

Kunj fell on me and my heartbeats went mad... How his touch made me feel was amazing..

The butterflies were now doing disco in my stomach.. as his body was brushing against mine.. my heart was going crazy.. I knew only he could make me feel this way

And then he looked into my eyes.. making no attempts to get up and I knew...

The moment was here and how perfect was it...

"I love you..."

And like this suddenly my mind fell silent.. the butterflies stopped dancing... and my heartbeats...

Well they whispered just one thing and fell silent... and that was ... say back..

And as my soul fell at peace ...I whispered...

" I love you too ..."

And a smile broke on his face... a smile I had never seen before.. and now I knew what was love.

...


Hope u all like this part

next one will also be romantic 😳😳😃


love u all


do like, comment .. means a lot!


Griffy

Edited by griffy.fz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Griffz this is just awesome
God! How did I not read this before
I loved it each n every part of it this is just so beautiful.
Can u believe it I just read all d 18 parts just now I just couldn't stop reading.
I think I just fell in love with this FF
Now I hate that I have to wait for d next part.
Edited by harshi2000 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh my god
such an awesome update 🤗
i was eagerly waiting for ur update
continue soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
God griffy thanku so much fr the light hearted post i was waiting fr this.. from so.many days.. well done..
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow nice update dear
so at last they confessed their feelings
loved it
eagerly waiting for next update

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshi2000

Griffz this is just awesome
God! How did I not read this before
I loved it each n every part of it this is just so beautiful.
Can u believe it I just read all d 18 parts just now I just couldn't stop reading.
I think I just fell in love with this FF
Now I hate that I have to wait for d next part.

Omg. Harshi i love u sooo much
U read all the parts abhi
That is sooo awesome of u

I am soo soo glad u liked it yaar
Means a lot to me
Thanks sooo much lil sis
Love u
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Diy0

oh my god
such an awesome update 🤗
i was eagerly waiting for ur update
continue soon dear


Awww thanks soo much
I know yaar bahut wait kara dia
I am glad u liked it
Continuing very soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Komal1298

God griffy thanku so much fr the light hearted post i was waiting fr this.. from so.many days.. well done..

Aww i am so happy to see u all were wauting for my updat
That means a lot
Extremely sorry for the delay

Thanks a lot dear

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