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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 16, awesome update. Karan has a fear that Geet may go in the darkness from where she came back after great efforts. He promised himself that he won't let it happen. Maan came to office and went to Geet's cabin but she is not there. Instead of Geet there is a cute girl sitting on chair.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: piya27

Karan is a true and valuable friend

Whom helped geet in coming out of depression and in raising jannat also

Maan going to meet his own daughter

Waiting eagerly to know how he reacts


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

Maan is realizing his mistake but he is unknown from the pain from which geet went. She was terribly hurt and when she lost her mother , she was numb. It was kaarn who helped her n took her to doctors. They told him that geet is in depression and he has to look after her properly. Waiting for jannat's entry.


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Part 18

Geet restlessly waiting when karan come... Why karan..Why

You love me so much

Mein tumhare pyaar ke kabil nhi hu

.

Another side , maan just want to know about jannat at any cost, he left geet office in morning but he come back again in afternoon , but he get to knew geet and karan already left then he ask about jannat...

He goes near play area... inside office building one floor is totally making for small children... He so happy to see geet thinking...

In group of child he sees smiling face of jannat... he come near her and bends on his knee...

Jannat : uncle aap

Maan : hmm

He thinks about after so much thinking he reaches to solution DNA

That best option knowing about jannat parents

For that he come again here

And that's good opportunity too

Geet and karan is not here

Geet mujhe kbhi sch nhi batayengi

Aur mujhe geet ko ye sabit krna hi honga

Wo karan ke itne karib jaa hi nhi skati hai

I know her

As per doctor instruction while hugging jannat maan pluck her hair, jannat little cry, he kissed her and give chocolate to her then left...

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Geet : karan kaha rh gye the tum

Am waiting

Karan : kya huya geet

Tum thik toh ho na

Geet : karan why you love me so much

.

Karan : geet tum

.

Maan step freeze when he heard geet asking from karan why he loves her so much... But karan & geet both not notice this... Maan standing near entrance of hall..

Geet : I know everything karan

Gupta ji waha kyun the

Wo session

.

.

Tumhari chat unse

I heard

.

Tumhe sch me lagta hai

Mein firse

Karan : you are fine geet

Geet : I know am not fine

Tumhe aur doctor ko yhi lagta hai

Am not fine

Isliye ye sb krti firti hu

Par mein kya karu is dard ka karan

Bardaast nhi hota mujhse

Karan : geet

Please relax

Geet : don't love me karan

Mein tumhare kabil nhi hu

.

Tum toh jaante hi ho mera relation us insaan ke sath

.

Aur fir maine dobara

He placed finger on her lips, deny her please stop here...

Karan : geet

I can't stop myself loving you

Then he

She clutched his shirt tightly and said if you don't want I tell him whole truth, make him suffer like me..toh mein kuch asa nhi karungi

hum chale jaayenge yaha se

I just want your happiness karan

Karan : and my happiness lays on your happiness

.

No tears please

He cupped her face wipes her tears, bend little want to kiss her, but know he have no right to touch her, but she encircled her hand around his neck... take step ahead... Her lips touch his...

Precap : nhi dungi

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Maan ke reaction ke liye I want long comment

can i extend the version of Dastaan - E - Mohabbat - OS

in extend version of this OS am not going change in story only Maaneet scenes going to add or some other scenes ...and yes i try to add some parts more after Maaneet marriage too... but New version am going to start from first point ... not from end point
if you ready to read again same story with more scenes then vote for YES nhi toh NO pe click kre

Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

21 april & 22 April


is pyaar ko kya naam du - PART 34 ON PAGE 119 & part 35 on blog

& part 36 on blog & PART 35&36 ON PAGE 124


26 april

Dastaan - E - Mohabbat - OS

27 april

WO lamhe - part 7 on page 71


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Posted: 9 years ago
🥳🥳meee first ... First time ... On your story ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Going to read now
Uff so much pain in maaneets life

Plz no geet karan ...

Maan ko jannat ka sach pata chaltey hi vo geet ka kya haal jarega ...

Uff so much tension ...

Plz jaldi aana yaha wapis
Edited by maansee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
maan comes to meet geet but he saw jannat there
he felt connected with her
he is shocked when jannat calls her mom
he que her
he thinks she said its his child
n now she told its karans
he couldnt stand it n slapped her
she is happy seeing him in pain
karan takes her to dr
n geet listens the dr's words
nice part

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