Rewriting Yhm: Living for each other:pt-14;pg-129;15/11/16 - Page 53

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

omg what an romantic update dear

so hot dear

feel love in every touch of ishra dear

fabulous elegant splendid update dear

dear it really your first ss dear

please don't make me joker dear

i mesmerized by your writing dear

while reading itself i feel you are awesome writer in showing every emotion deeply dear

everybody can write but only some of them talent that make reader to live on that scenes dear you have that talent dear

i am proud of you dear

moreover i bow down of your writing dear 👏

you are the best

fantastic dear

continue soon dear

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

That was sensuous 😳
You write so well...!
This is not the end nah

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Wow Shreya...

It was hot & sensual...😳

I m shocked that this is the first time u r writing like this...😲

Nicely written..

Originally posted by: lalibhaskar

Both the parts were amazing dear

Part 6a

Beautiful one

Liked the attitude raman showed to shagun

Like how raman was trying to explain ishita's love to adi by comparing with ruhi's love

The couple move to their destination

The way raman initiate the confession

It was simple and perfect.

Raman bringing food made by her was a sweet gestute

Finally the kiss was awesome

Part 6 b

WAT should I say. It was hot, romantic update

It doesn't seem that u r writing it for first time

It's definitely a good job

U have fulfilled the wishes of many ishra fans by writing on this track

This is what most of us expected from this track

Pls do not end this here

Pls continue

Waiting for next part eagerly

Originally posted by: akriti154

Superb update dear
beautifully written
eager 4 d nxt update
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm

Originally posted by: Roohachu

Nice update
Beautifully written
Update soon

Originally posted by: 9900

Part 6A

Awesome update yaar 😃

Shagun is annoying as always😡

Loved how raman answered her back😆

Adi was uncomfortable with shagun's blabbering 😃

Loved how raman made adi understood about ishu😃

Ishra off alone😳

Loved the teasing😆

Awww the confession was awesome yaar👏

Loved it👏

Superb👏