Ratri fs: Khamosh sa afsaana final part updtd - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

awesome update dear .Really loved it a lot .so finally trisha has realized her love for Raghav. hope she tells abhi soon that she likes Raghav. loved to see Raghavs condition when trisha wasn't picking up her call .he was feeling sorry for what he did with trisha. what will happen now really curious to know that will trisha agree for the engagement what will Raghav do then thanks a lot for this wonderful update



Thanks for the review. In my last part of this update Trisha has already told abhi about her love for raghav and he has now decided to help her. Thanks for liking the story till now. Raghav's reaction is yet to be seen in the next and final part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Loved your story!
Raghav taking her to be for granted and her trying to figure out her own feelings.
Its a lovely concept!
Abhi is a great guy who respects her decision. Such a great character.
She in her inner conflict about what to with this situation was written very nicely.
Raghav,having feelings for her but not reciprocating but later regretting shows how much he cares for her.
Liked the part where her mother respects her decision.
A new plan in process..
Please do update soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: nymphadora12

Loved your story!

Raghav taking her to be for granted and her trying to figure out her own feelings.
Its a lovely concept!
Abhi is a great guy who respects her decision. Such a great character.
She in her inner conflict about what to with this situation was written very nicely.
Raghav,having feelings for her but not reciprocating but later regretting shows how much he cares for her.
Liked the part where her mother respects her decision.
A new plan in process..
Please do update soon!!



Thanks for liking the story. Trisha got into an inner conflict this time because abhi is a loveable character. This is how I planned it. Otherwise she always gave excuses to escape such situations. Loves for all the lovely comments
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
LAST PART
Abhi and Trisha into a plan...

Next day, cbi office

Raghav saw Trisha in her cabin and came up to her immediately. He was very angry today. He held her arm tightly and shouted.

Raghav: " Trisha whats wrong with you? Where were you? Tumhe pata hai main kitna pareshan tha. Meri kya haalat hui in do dino me? Tum us din aise gusse me chali gayi aur uske baad na office aayi, na tumhara phone mil raha tha. Tumhare ghar bhi gaya tha par tum wahan thi hi nahi. Tumhari fikr mein meri jaan ja rahi thi. I know ki mujhse galti hui, I'm sorry for that but aise koi karta hai kya? What was all this tell me."

Trisha did not answer anything and took off her arm from his hands and continued with her work.

Raghav:" I'm asking you something. Jawaab do mujhe." By that time Rajbir and Bikram entered her cabin as she had called them also to her cabin and Raghav haid to contain his anger and dismay.

Bikram:" what happened boss? You called all of us."

Trisha: "I wanted to inform all of you that I'm getting married to Abhigyan very soon."

Everyone looked shocked for a minute but then Bikram and Rajbir congratulated her while Raghav stood still. She offered sweets to all of them but Raghav did not even look at them. He looked so broken with this news.

Rajbir: "engagement kab hai?"

Trisha:" date is still not finalised. But Abhi wants to meet all of you and give a small party tonight. So are you all in?"

Both of them agreed in a yes but Raghav didn't speak.

Trisha:" Raghav what about you? Tum aaoge na?"

Raghav: "obviously boss. Aap itni khush ho to aapki khushi me zaroor shaamil honga". He left the cabin after this.

Trisha realised that Raghav was upset with this news. She wished Abhi's plan worked for both of them. Raghav did not talk much to anyone throughout the day. He was very disturbed. He had become very insecure after this news. His fear of losing his Trisha, his life was making him very restless. His thoughts of losing someone close to him were all over him again today. He didn't know what to do at this time.

8:00 pm party venue.

Trisha was looking gorgeous in a short red dress and her usual light makeup. Raghav was sipping a glass of wine and continuously looking at Trisha and Abhi who were sitting close to each other hand in hand. Abhi invited Trisha to come for a dance and she reluctantly agreed. They both started dancing together but Trisha's mind was with Raghav and she was constantly looking at Raghav's expressions who was full of rage and anger. How could anyone else touch his beloved Trisha in front of him. He felt like thrashing up Abhi for doing this but could not. After all he was Trisha's would be fiance. He was strangulating the glass of wine with his hand and after some time the glass crashed in his hand. His hand started to bleed. Trisha came running to him after seeing his hand bleed.

Trisha: "Raghav yeh kya kiya tumne? Show me your hand. It's bleeding".

Raghav:" thanks for your sympathy boss. I'm fine. You please go and enjoy the dance with your fiance. I'll manage."

Trisha: "shut up Raghav. Show me your hand. Rajbir get the first aid box from your car."

Raghav started to move out. Trisha stopped him but he shrugged off her hands and continued to walk out.

Trisha: "Raghav please stop. Tumhe meri kasam. Yahan aakar baitho."

Raghav had to stop and come back. Trisha did the dressing of his hand and gave him glass of water.

Raghav: "boss, I just want to go home."

Trisha: "ok Raghav. I'll drop you home your hand is injured."

Raghav: "no I'll go alone. No one would come with me."

Trisha: "no I won't allow you to go alone, you understand. Abhi I need to go with him. He's not ok and he won't allow anyone to go with him. Only I'm the one jo ise order de sakta hai."

Abhi: "ok Trisha. Go along. Take care. I'll see you later"

Raghav agreed to take her along with him only if he drives. Trisha agreed thinking atleast he won't go alone and she would be able to help him in case of any problem.

Raghav was driving at a very fast pace. Just not listening to Trisha who was constantly urging him to slow down. Trisha saw a truck coming at a very high speed and Raghav could not control the car. Immediately Trisha rotated the steering and applied hand brakes. The car hit nearby tree but fortunately none of them got hurt. After taking few deep breaths, Trisha took Raghav out from the car and shouted at him.

Trisha: "what was this? Whats your problem with you? Aise koi drive karta hai kya? Abhi tumhe kuch ho jata to?"

Raghav:" kya hota? Mar jata? So what... tumhe kya... tum to bahut khush ho na Abhi se shaadi karne se. Tumhe kya farak padta hai ki koi tumhari fikr karta hai, koi tumhari bala se jiye ya mare, ya tum kisi ke liye kya mayne rakhti ho? Tumhe kya farak padta hai agar tumhare bina kisi ki duniya ujad jaye to, hai na?".

Trisha:" what?? Kya kaha.. main bahut khush hu...main... really... tumhe aisa lagta hai? Kya tumhe nahi pata maine Abhi se shaadi karne ke liye haan kyun ki?"

Raghav: "nahi main nahi janta. Bataao mujhe main sunna chahta hu." He shouted.

Trisha:" kya karti main? Kabse apne parents se bahane banati ja rahi hu. Kya kahu unse ki main ek aise insaan ko chahti hu jiske baare me mujhe ye nahi pata wo mujhse pyar karta bhi hai ki nahi."

Raghav:" kya kaha tumne? Tum mujhse ...pyaar?"

Trisha suddenly realised what she had said. She blushed after saying this but she decided to confess everything this time and said "tum to deductions me expert the. Tum to meri body language pad sakte the. Tumhe nahi samajh me aaya ki main tumse aur sirf tumse pyar karti hu stupid ."

Raghav :" nahi samajh paya. Kya karu pyar ke mamle me thoda buddhu hu. Darta tha ki kahin tumne na kar diya to tumhari dosti bhi chin jayegi. Main tumhe khona nahi chahta tha. Aakhir mere paas dad ke jaane ke baad tumhari dosti ke alaava aur kuch bhi nahi bacha hai. Mere Jeevan ka maksad tumse apna pyar confess karne se rokta tha. Main tumhe use door rakhna chahta tha. Kahin tumhe kuch ho jata to? But now I want to confess to you that I'm madly in love with you and only you. Tumhare sivaay mujhe koi dikhai nahi deta. Tumhare sivaay aur kisi ke baare me main soch nahi paata. Tum mujhe nahi mili to main sach me mar jaaunga."

Trisha placed her fingers on his lips and embraced him in a hug and said " I really love you too Raghav. Please don't leave me alone ever in my life." Both of them enjoyed their embrace and poured all their love in their hearts for each other. Raghav kissed Trisha and again took her in his embrace. After that they spent some time together, then he dropped her home and went back home happily as if he got everything in his life.

Next morning cbi office

Trisha and Raghav sitting together in her cabin and happily chatting together. Abhi entered her cabin.

Trisha: "Abhi tum yahan?"

Abhi: "haan main. Main aap sabko apni hone wali wife se milwane aaya hu."

Raghav and Trisha looked stumped at each other. Trisha knew that her marriage acceptance was a part of their plan and that had worked. Now what more? She didn't know what was Abhi going to say now. She kept on looking at Abhi surprised.

Abhi: "Neha..." he called.

A girl entered the office with Trisha's younger sister and Trisha looked at them suspiciously..

Trisha:" Abhi ye sab kya hai?"

Abhi: "meet Neha my fiance."

Raghav: "fiance?"

Abhi: "yes raghav my fiance. Surprised?? I'll tell you. I came to India so that I can make my parents meet Neha, my girlfriend in Australia since last 4 years. Trisha when I came to your home with my mom, I came to know about the repeated rejections of marriage proposals from your side. Being a psychologist I realised that there is definitely someone who you love but still you have not been able confess it. This is where your sister stepped in."

Trisha's sister:" di ek din aapki books search karte hue mujhe aapki ek book me red rose mila. Tab se I was trying to find out ki wo kon hai jisne meri di ka dil chura liya hai. Aapko to hum jaante hi hai. Aap apni feelings aasani se kabhi express nahi karti. Tabhi hum sab ne milkar ye plan banaya."

Abhi: "aur us din jab maine tumse caf me tumhare colleagues ke baare me poocha aur tumne Raghav par granth khol kar rakh diya tha, I was sure that person had to be none other than Raghav only. Jab resort me tumne mujhe Raghav ke baare me bataya, tab I thought ki chalo atleast tumne to accept kiya apna pyar. Ab sirf Raghav se confess karana baaki tha. Isliye maine tumhare saath wo plan kiya."

Trisha: "to ye sab plan tha. Abhi how could you do this? Meri kya haalat hui main hi jaanti hu." Trisha sounded surprised and embarrassed at the same time. All of them had made a fool out of her and she was made to face the most stressful days of her life. But at the same time she was happy also. After all because of this plan only she and Raghav could confess their love for each other.

All of them started smiling at these two lovebirds.

Abhi: " I'm sorry but I must say that you both look very cute together. All the best to both of you. Me and Neha are getting married after 2 weeks. All of you have to come. Ok..."

Raghav: "sure we will. Thanks Abhi and I'm really sorry. In do dino me maine tumhe bahut hate kiya hai aur bahut gaaliyan bhi di hai."

Abhi: "that's ok. All is well that ends well. Ab mujhe lagta hai hume in dono ko akela chhod dena chahiye. What say guys."

Everyone laughed and congratulated Raghav and Trisha and moved out of the room. Raghav and Trisha smiled and embraced each other and got into a beautiful relationship for lifetime.


So finally I could complete the story. Hope you all liked it. I'll be happy to read your reviews on how was my first attempt at writing which I posted.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Loved the update. Raghav jealous Avatar and Trisha's concern for Raghav was wonderful. Raghav and Trisha confession was so romantic. 😳Story got a twist which we are thinking is a plan of Trisha and Abhigyan but it was plan of the whole family.Great love that twist😉. Finally the story ends with happy ending.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Loved the update. Raghav jealous Avatar and Trisha's concern for Raghav was wonderful. Raghav and Trisha confession was so romantic. 😳Story got a twist which we are thinking is a plan of Trisha and Abhigyan but it was plan of the whole family.Great love that twist😉. Finally the story ends with happy ending.


Thanks for liking the story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
such a lovely update
it was a treat to see a jealous raghav
and his anger due to the concern for trisha was just mind-blowing. I wish we could get that in show too
then he gets shock of his life. trisha's engagement with abhi. his anger frustration jealousy was bang on
then the drive and confession so cute. trisha's concern for raghav when he got injured and accident scene was really emotional.
then comes the twist it was all a plan by trisha's sister abhi poor trisha she don't know whether to get angry or to be happy finally because of them she got her love
and yes ratri are so cute together.
lovely story
now please update ek duje ke liye fast I am eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
such a awesome update loved to see a jealous raghav .the confession scene was super cure Raghav telling trisha that he is a buddhu when love comes was soo awesome. loved the way trisha was scolding Raghav when we was driving fast it showed how much she cared for him .sooo all this was a plan a hi did this to make them confess their love.thanks a lot for this wonderful story loved it a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awesome story. Loved it a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Loved the update! The twist in the end was mindblowing, since even abhi deserved happiness.
Raghav's outburst on trisha and she confessing him was written really nicely.
Really liked the flow of emotions!

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