AaShlok FF : I AM WITH YOU *Updated* Chapter 25 Pg 78 (June 28) - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..optimist..


Ok 😆
Will update the next part in a few minutes 😊

waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988


hey dont do that...
u update next part..
wil comment this one in res post.. & for next after that..
surely..
dont make others wait for me..

tooo spicy oof u diidiii
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey all 🤗 This is AaShlok special chapter...😳 Hope you enjoy it 😉




I Am With You...


Chapter 17



Niranjan felt uneasy seeing Shlok wiping Aastha's tears. Shlok cupped Aastha's face and both got lost into each other's eyes. Niranjan was breathing heavily seeing the sight in front of him. He clinched the phone he was holding feeling guilty that everything was going against his promise. He was about to enter Shlok's room when Anjali called him telling that someone had come to meet him. But he couldn't just leave letting Aastha and Shlok the way they were. He purposely dropped his phone to the floor to make noise. Shlok immediately withdrew his hands from Aasth'a face as Aastha and he became aware of Niranjan's presence. Niranjan cleared his throat, forced a smile at Aastha and Shlok, and walked away saying, "I will be back in a while..." Aastha and Shlok were embarrassed. Both looked away silently, thinking what next.

Niranjan met the nurse on his way and told her to be in Shlok's room. "Shlok and Aastha will not come closer when the nurse will be around..." he thought as he went to meet his guest. Little did he know that even the nurse was on Aastha and Shlok's side. She came to the room, and seeing Aastha and Shlok there, she went away letting the both spend some more moments together.


Shlok's constant gaze on Aastha was making her nervous.

"Don't look at me like that..." she said looking away from Shlok.

"Why?" asked Shlok coming closer to her.

Aastha was surprised. Aastha's heart was throbbing seeing Shlok so close. But she didn't move away from him. Shlok held her hand again and Aastha gasped feeling his touch. She was looking into those eyes of his that were waiting to tell stories of his heart. Shlok was lost into Aastha's eyes. Without shifting his gaze, Shlok brought Aastha's hands close to his lips and gently kissed them sending a wave of shiver across Aastha's body. Aastha could feel goosebumps all over as she closed her eyes partly biting her lower lip. Shlok kept looking at that innocent face in front of him, simple yet elegant. He looked at that lip caught between her teeth and couldn't hold back his desire any more.

"I want to kiss you..." he wispered.

"Aan?" Aastha opened her eyes in shock after hearing Shlok's words.

She tried to pull back her hands from Shlok's but he tightened the grip pulling her more towards him. He could see Aastha's eyes wide in scare, her eyeballs moving rapidly as she stared back at Shlok in nervousness.

Shlok caressed Aastha's hands with his thumbs saying, "I need to tell you something, Aastha..."

Aastha's heartbeat was racing with every passing moment. "What?" she whispered with shivering lips.

Shlok entangled his fingers into hers and held her hands tightly. Aastha didn't hold his hands in return, she kept her fingers away as she stared at their hands knowing not what to do.

Shlok noticed that. He looked into her eyes again and said, "Aastha... I can't explain what goes on within me when I am with you..."

Aastha listened to Shlok anxiously. She wanted to listen to more from Shlok.

Shlok continued, "Whenever I see you, I can't get my eyes off you... My heart beats faster when you are around..."

Aastha was listening curiously. This was what she too felt. She was excited that Shlok too felt the same way as she did. "And?" she asked waiting for Shlok to speak more.

"When I see you, I feel like holding you and pulling you closer..." he said as he pulled Aastha closer, "And then..."

"And then when you hold me, you feel like never letting me go..." Aastha completed his sentence.

Shlok felt Aastha's fingers gripping his hand tightly. He could see her eyes glow and a faint smile spread across her lips. Shlok couldn't believe all this was actually happening. "How do you know?" he asked in excitement, "How do you know that I feel like never letting you go?"

Aastha's smile brightened as she said, "Because that's exactly what I go through whenever I am with you..."

Shlok couldn't believe she just said that. Shlok freed one of his hands from Aastha's and gently moved his fingers across her cheek. Aastha's heart was thudding loudly, but there was no sign of nervousness now. Shlok looked at the strand of hair kissing her cheek and tucked it behind her ear. He leaned forward towards Aastha. Aastha's grip on Shlok's hand tightened as she felt Shlok's breath over her face. Shlok freed his other hand too and held Aastha's face. He caressed her cheeks with his thumbs as Aastha looked at him with twinkling eyes. Slowly he moved his thumb towards her lips and caressed them with a gentle pressure. "And when I see those lips of yours..." he said in a husky voice, "I feel like kissing you..."

Aastha was silent. Shlok gave a quick peck on her lips and waited for her reaction. Aastha was totally surprised. But she didn't try to move away. She neither pushed Shlok away nor did she tell him to stop. That was enough indication for Shlok that he could go ahead. Shlok tilted his head to reach Aastha's lips. Aastha closed her eyes as Shlok took her lower lip into his mouth. She gasped as Shlok bit her lip gently. They kissed each other passionately. Shlok had his hands over Aastha's back and waist tracing her curves. Aastha's hands were busy pulling Shlok's hair as she kissed Shlok intently. They were lost into their dream world.

"Which game are you playing? I want to play too!!" said a sweet voice from the door.

Aastha opened her eyes suddenly to see Kavya standing at the door looking innocently at them. Aastha pushed Shlok away at once and ran out blushing. Shlok was confused at her sudden reaction. He wanted to kiss her more. Sojal saw Aastha pass by as she reached Shlok's room.

"Tell me chachu, which game was it? I want to play too..." said Kavya getting on Shlok's bed.

Sojal quickly lifted her and kept her down. "Game? What game?" she asked Kavya.

Kavya began explaining "Chachu and Aastha did were playing a..."

Shlok placed his hand on Kavya's mouth before she said anything more. Sojal was confused but ignored. She asked Shlok how he was feeling and they talked general things. Kavya told Shlok, with action, how Aastha and she made the "huge" tower of cards. Shlok kept nodding but his mind was lost in Aastha's thoughts.


*****


Aastha rushed into her room and bolted the door. She was out of this world at the moment. She stood pressing her back against the door. Her breath not yet normal. "Oh my God!! Did he really kiss me?" Aastha was finding it difficult to believe. She pinched herself. "Ouch!" she gave out a cry. And then she realised it was all real.

Aastha was in heaven as she thought about what happened just a few minutes back. She ran to the window feeling the cool breeze. The reflection of the moon in the pool water caught her attention. She looked at the moon and the numerous stars surrounding it. The moon seemed larger to her today. And the stars, they shone brighter. "He kissed me!!" she said in excitement as she danced circling around herself. Standing in front of the mirror, Aastha spoke to herself. "Yes!! It's true! He kissed you, stupid!" she said. Her excitement and happiness knew no bounds. "He feels the same as you feel about him!" she told herself. Looking at her reflection, she touched her lips remembering the kiss. She leaped onto the bed and stuck her face into the pillow, blushing endlessly.


*****


Shlok had somehow managed to keep Kavya quiet. He laid down on the bed after Sojal and Kavya left. He was lying on his back with a hand under his head and the other over his chest, one leg folded. The nurse returned and saw Shlok staring at the ceiling and smiling. "The next time I hold you, I will not leave you... Mark my words!" said Shlok and smiled mischieviously.

The nurse smiled to herself hearing this. "Something seems to have happened between Shlok and Aastha..." she said excited for the couple.


*****


Kavya kept telling about some game to Sojal and Varad. "I want to play that game!" she told her parents.

"What game Kavya?" asked Sojal irritated by Kavya's constant chatter.

"The one which Chachu and Aastha didi were playing.." she replied.

"And how was that?" asked Varad.

"They were sitting very close to each other... Their heads were like this..." she said tilting her head, "And they were eating something together! I wanted to see who ate first... I also want to play!"

Sojal's jaw dropped as she listened to Kavya. She looked at Varad and both burst out laughing.

Kavya was upset seeing her parents laughing at her. "I don't want to talk to you!!" she said in anger and went away.

Varad and Sojal couldn't stop laughing.


*****


Aastha sat by the window looking at the beautiful reflection of the night sky in the pool. She was still drooling over the memory of her first ever kiss. Just then strong wind blew over the water. Aastha's smile faded away looking at the distorted reflection of the moon. A strange fear crept over her. "Why am I feeling that something bad is going to happen?" she wondered.


*****






Edited by ..optimist.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yay!!!...
me first to res...
wow...
but last to unres...
huh...

fabulous update Neha!!!
loved it to core...
hatts of to u...👏👏
well done...

niru baba... not liking what he was seeing..
but wat did he see?
shlok wiping astha's tears with love & care..
though ashlok r unaware of their real feelings..
but nirru baba caught it correctly...
he wanted to stop them..
he wanted to go in..
but anjali called him as sum one came to meet him..
now who came??
hope its not sum1 who would lead ajinkya to them
but still before gng he made noise to break ashlok trance...
& ashlok became aware of surroundings cuming out of trance on hearing the noise...
niru baba tells he wil b back soon..
but sti;; he wont stop..
he asked nurse to b with shlok...
he thinks ashlok wil not be close with nurse around...
but poor niru baba plan fail... 😆😆
as nurse herself left them alone before & now also for them to come close...😆😆

astha nervous...
shlok wants to kiss astha..
astha shocked...
shlok reveals his feelings to her...
astha understands & tells she feels same...
wow.. so cute was it,...
loved this cute sa confession...😳😳
hope both realise soon that it is love ...😳😳
& then... they kiss... 😳😳😳😳
so beautifully written...

kavya baby.. so cute..
kitne mast time pe entry mara..
ashlok embarrassed & stop...
gud kavya came.. otherwise dont know wat they would hv done with doors open...😆😆
kavya baby thinks it was game...
sojal comes in..
kavya abt to reveal.. but shlok stops her on time...

astha rushes to her room.. being happy & embarrassed..
she couldnt believe that kiss happened...
she is out of d world..
haye najar na lage iski khushi ko...😳😳

kavya reveals to sojal & varad that wat game ashlok wer playing...
they both understand & laugh..
kavya upset as she dint get to play d game & on top of it her parents wer laughing...😆😆
hope she doesnt reveal this to anyone else...😆😆😆

continue soon..
already waiting for next part..
wat happened with aditi-karan?
who came to meet niru baba?
wat is our darling ajinkya kaka doing??
reveal soon...
thnks 4 d pm...



Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please don't do anything to suffer them
Waiting for another romantic update
Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
wowww wat an update
gayle blasted boundary again oh my god itni beautiful hain ye
as Sojal me too dropped my jaw

Kavya!!!! 😡 😡 this time i m really angry at her
Today in my update too there is Ashlok romance same pinch
another superb update sissy
i jus love to read ur updates
thanks a lot for this wonderful gift
this ff is really very very vvv special to me
He jus kissed her omg but watever be the problem hope both Ashlok be together and face it
this is indeed a beautiful update

Now it is out of Niranjans hand he should have done something by now
now how can she face him Shlok bohut romantic ho raha hain superbly written
i dont know wat to write
asli romance aapne abi mujhe sikhaya thanks a lot i m learning every possible bit from ur writing keep rocking waiting for another wonderful update
now tell me wen r u going to update it

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...such a beautiful romantic update
Ashlok part was so nice and Kavya is too cute and innocent😳
Hope nothing bad happen...
Thank you👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was such a romantic update. Ashlok feeling the same way for each other. Yes something bad is going to happen, I hope things get sorted out quickly between them. And Shlok be always beside Aastha in upcoming tough times.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww it was really sweet n romantic updates but now I m worried as something bad is going to happen but whatever happens plz don't make them suffer...now waiting for another romantic update...hope u update soon...

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