Song OS thon #2/2 Epilogues by Divanru on pg 144 on 19/5 - Page 42

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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a beautiful OS pooja.
Loved it. I really enjoyed each n every OS in this osthon.
I M sad that it ended.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful story devyani di👏
Loved it loads😃
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
So sorry Pooja dear late commenting

Boond Boond OS was fabulous..
I have no words..
very different and beautiful Ishra love story..
loved it loads..and loads...
keep rocking..

Plz continue this thread..pretty plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
@divanru
good os once again dr
luved how they share their every thimg
cute ishu ask him to mever her
luved rain scene
now finally they wil share their life
plz update its epilpgu soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome os Pooja di😃
Loved it loads😃
Ishra working in same office😃
They share everything😃
Loved their bond😃
Raman went to buy a car😃
Their first car😳
Raman didn't like her traveling in bus or auto😃
Loved his care and concern for her😃
Ishu waited for him for long and finally he came😃
Loved how he twirled her around😃
They went for a long drive 😃
It started raining and ishu started dancing😆
She bought a butta and they shared it😳
Finally Raman proposed her😃
It was awesome di😳
Superb👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
I know I have to write second part of Milne hai mujhse aayi,but before that,I present this os.the song is suggested by roohachu aka achu.hope u like it achu,its for u.

TERI JHUKI NAZAR


Raman entered his office at usual time only to be welcomed by her smiling face.

Ishita- good morning sir,she said smiling sweetly.

A smile crept on his face too seeing her smiling face and sweet voice.a voice which cheer him up to stay happy and calm whole day.

He smiled back at her and said- good morning ishita.how r u.


Ishita- I am fine sir,thank you.how r u.

Raman-good as always.saying so he started walking towards his cabin as he don't have anything else to talk.and she never initiate any talk.she just smile and say good morning to everyone. Its a part of her job,coz she is receptionist of his office.and he being the MD,she always welcome him cheerfully.

Raman turn back to her many times and found she was looking at him only.she smiled at him every time he turn and look at her.he went inside his cabin and she again sat down to her place,to welcome everyone.

Raman was sitting in his cabin and watching her beautiful face through CCTV like he do everyday.he loves her down casted eyes.the way she look down make her look so pure and innocent.

Being the receptionist, ishita smile and say good morning to everyone.but Raman always find her facial expression little different when she say him good morning, like she is blushing under his gaze.the way she down cast her eyes ,make him believe firmly that he affect her the way she affect him.but none of them never mouth their feelings.their talk was always limited to random talks.she never say anything more then required and he never talk anything beyond the required. But an unknown bond was between them.their days were incomplete without seeing each other faces and saying good mornings.all they do was just exchange smiles whenever they cross their paths.

Raman likes her from the first day she joined his office.ishita iyer ,a simple tamilian brahmin,who always wear simple chiffon sarees,tie her half hair in clutch.wear simple accessories but the thing which can win anyone's heart is her smile.yes her pretty smile which make Raman crazy about her.

Raman always search chance to talk to her but she never talk anything more then required.

One day Raman was sitting in his cabin ,doing his work and seeing her sitting silently through the CCTV camera.her eyes were down casted and a single strand of hair was adorning her face.

Raman close his file and said looking at her-i so want to tuck ur hair behind ur ears ishita.u know u look beautiful when ur eyes r down casted,like u r blushing making my heart skip a beat.u know I believe that u love me the way I love u.but tum kuch kehti hi nahi.hamesha chup chup.par main janta hoon,u love me like I do.tum chahe khamosh raho par tumhari jhuki hui nazare ,tumhare dil ka haal bayaan kar deti hai.

Chaahe kuch na kehna
Bhale chup tu rehna
Mujhe hai pata, tere pyar ka
Khamosh chehra, ankhon pe pehra
Khud hai gawaah, tere pyar ka

Teri jhuki nazar, teri har ada
Mujhe keh rahi hai ye dastaan
Koi shaqs hai jo ki in dinon
Tere zehan-o-dil pe hai chha gaya
Teri jhuki nazar, teri har ada
Mujhe keh rahi hai ye dastaan


It was 8 in night.everyone was gone home but Raman was still working.at last his work was over and his closed his laptop. He check to the watchman and went towards his merc.he took it out and drove towards his home. That's when he saw ishita standing at the bus stand.she was the only girl there among eight men.she was looking scared and horrified.wind was blowing making her saree stick to her,making her every curve look visible.everyone was lusting over her.


Raman's blood boil seeing the sight.he went to her and ask her to get in opening the door.she sighed in relief seeing him and sat inside the car immediately.


Ishita- thanks alot sir.actually I missed my bus and waiting for next but it was taking forever to come.she said in a go.


Raman- do u have a phone.


Ishita- ji.


Raman- answer me ,do u have a phone.


Ishita- yes.


Raman- do u know my number.


Ishita- ji.


Raman- can't u call me idiot.waiting for bus standing with those men who were lusting over u.he said in anger and then realised what he said.


She look away and start crying silently hearing his scolding.


Raman- listen I am sorry,I was angry with the way they were looking at u.please stop crying.


Ishita- meri bus choot gaayi thi.main kya karti.


Raman- u could have called me.


Ishita- aap kya karte,bus pakad ke laate.she asked innocently.


Raman smiled at her question and said- nahi buddhu .I could have drop u home.or tell my driver to drop u home.


Ishita- how can ask u sir.u r my sir.she said wiping her big tears.


Raman smiled at her innocence.he feel like taking her in a bear hug and keep her protected in his arms forever but madam was lost in her world of crying and filling buckets.


Raman- achcha baba stop crying.I am sorry.he said holding his ears.


Ishita- don't do this.u r my sir.


Raman- OK,then tell me ur address ,I will drop u.


Ishita- no sir,u drop me till next stop .I will manage then.


Raman- don't argue.I am ur sir naa.


Ishita nodded like an obedient kid and told him her address .he start the car and turned it in a jerk making her fell on him as she hasn't tied seat belt.her hair pin got opened in a jerk and her all hair scattered on his face while she landed on his chest.he hold her protectively in his arms.he remove her hair from his face and look at her.she was looking more angelic in her open hair,more like an angel.he was looking at her without blinking his eyes.while she was looking down blushing hard.

Teri zulf jab bhi bikhar jaati hai
Aye haseen tu haseen aur ho jaati hai
Jo kitaabo me padhte rahe aaj tak
Woh pari humko tujh mein nazar aati hai


Ishita was in his arms and was not even trying to break the hug ,like she was enjoying it.


Ishita- (st)its feeling so good I'm ur arms.I just wanna be here only.today and always. I love u Raman.she was thinking and looking at him.They were looking at each other feeling the moment.

Teri hi baahon mein, panaahon mein
Rehna mujhe hardum sada
Teri hi yaadon mein, nigaahon mein
Rehna mujhe har dum sada
Teri hi baahon me, panaahon me
Rehna mujhe hardum sada
Hardum sada

Their trance was broken by the horn of a car.they straighten themselves and sat comfortably. He drove silently while they were stealing glances .


Ishita- sir stop here only.my house is near only.I will go walking.


Raman- why ,I will drop u home.


Ishita- actually my appa don't like it.taking lift from anyone.


Raman- and what about waiting for a bus at eight with men.does ur appa like that.


Ishita- no sir,I never been so late.its just today.thanks for dropping me home.


Raman- can I ask something.


Ishita- sure sir.


Raman- did u wear blue by chance or u wear it coz its my favourite colour.


Ishita smiled and said- I think u r smart enough to guess it sir.saying so she was going when he held her and said- agar mere liye pehna hai toh yeh toh sunti ki kaisi lag rahi ho.


Ishita- hmm.how I am looking.she said looking down.


Raman- bahut hi khoobsurat. I can't describe it in words.saying so he planted a feathery kiss on her palm.


Ishita went from there blushing red.while Raman smiled like an idiot.


Next day she came out to go for work and saw him waiting at the place where he dropped her last night.


Ishita- sir aap yahan.


Raman- yes ,came here for some work.thought of taking u along.come let's go.


Ishita nodded and sat in his car.from that day he started picking and dropping her everyday.they were coming closer but noone was confessing their feeling.


One day Raman was waiting for Ishita.she came little late and her face was down,she was sad,her eyes were puffy like she has been crying.


Raman- what happened ishita.


Ishita nodded in no,mouthing nothing.but Raman can observe something is wrong. Ishita sat in car and he asked again.this time she couldn't control herself and cried hugging him.


Raman was startled by her sudden action.he asked again- what happened ishita.


Ishita- appa is fixing my marriage .she said crying.


Raman- what,how can he.u should have told him.


Ishita- kya,she asked looking at him.Raman was shocked at her question and realised he never told her his feelings.


Ishita- joh aap mujhse bhi nahi keh paaye woh main appa se kaise keh doon.


Raman kissed her forehead and said- I will come to meet ur appa in the evening.now stop crying.she close her eyes feeling his touch.


In the evening, Raman came to her house with his parents.her parent greeted them and make them sit comfortably.


Mr bhalla- see mr iyer.I don't believe in stretching the matter.my son Raman loves ur daughter.so we r here to ask her hand for Raman,if u don't mind.I know we r not tamilian but trust me we will keep ur daughter as our daughter.she will be very happy with my son.moreover she too like Raman.


Appa- Ishita, ishita.he called her.


Ishita came out of her room and stand near the door.


Appa- do u like Raman.


Ishita look at Raman.he encourage her to say it.


Ishita nodded in yes.


Appa- go inside.ishita nodded and went back.


Appa- but u r Punjabi ,u eat non veg.we r pure tamilian brahmin.


Raman- uncle I will quit eating non veg if u want.please uncle.


Appa look at Raman.he can see the sincerity with which Raman was promising him.


Appa- OK but marriage will be according to Tamil traditions and u don't have to quit non veg.just don't pressurize her to eat or touch.


Toshiji- never .


Appa- so I think we should fix a date calling pandit.


Mr bhalla- yes sure.


Raman- uncle,can I meet her.


Appa- only when u will call me appa.


Raman- appa can I meet her.


Appa- go.


Raman mouthed a thanks and went to her room.she was sitting on the bed worried.he goes to her and said-sorry ishita,I am not ur sir anymore.


Ishita- what,did appa told me to resign.u shouldn't have come here.now what I will do.how I will see u .


Raman- why u want to see me Ishita.he asked teasingly.


Ishita- because I love ,she stop in mid realising what she was about to say.


Raman- what u love. Tell me naa.he said pinning her to wall.


Ishita look down and said- I wanna say.


Raman- what ishita,I am waiting.


Ishita- I love u sir.


Raman- dhat Teri ki.yeh toh sahi baat hui,ek aadmi ne ek nurse se kaha,I love u sister. I have a nice name, Raman.say I love u Raman.then I will tell u a good news.


She look down and said shyly- I love u Raman.


Raman- can I hug u.


Ishita nodded in yes.


Raman hugged her and said- appa is ready for our marriage. Now I will be ur husband not sir.and at last I am saying,I love u ishita.


She look at him and look down.


Raman smiled and said- meri sharmili ishita.I love u alot.u took so long to say this but I knew it from the beginning that u love me.ur down casted eyes always tell it to me.saying so he kissed her forehead,she close her eyes feeling his touch.

Chaahe kuch naa kehna

Bhale chup tu rehna
Mujhe hai pata tere pyar ka
Khamosh chehra, aankhon pe pehra
Khud hai gawaah, tere pyar ka

Teri jhuki nazar, teri har ada
Mujhe keh rahi hai ye dastaan
Koi shaqs hai jo ki in dinon
Tere zehan-o-dil pe hai chha gaya
Teri jhuki nazar, teri har ada
Mujhe keh rahi hai ye dastaan


That's all .enjoy and don't forget to leave ur valuable comments and hit like .will wait for it.

Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Pooja Di
Nice update
It was a nice story
Finally Raman proposed her
His Madrasan is really crazy
Really loved the update

PS:I don't want u to discontinue this thread. Plsss

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Posted: 9 years ago
Updated an os,have a look.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow itz jst awesome silent love from both sides and dey became comfortable as he is giving her lft everyday both are aware of each other feelings but never ever voiced it out this also happened only because of appa looking for alliances thank god kuch toh aage banaya in logon ko and before even confession their marriage is fixed loved their encounter in ishita's room totally a short and sweet stry too good
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Posted: 9 years ago
@cutieruhi

Super cute OS di... I love the song you used..😳
I had a smile on my face all along the story..
Amazing..
Thank you for the PM
Nandini

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