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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Shamoo--

awesome story

i love it !!!
cant wait for next part

Heyo shamoo..thanku soo much🤗Do stay tuned for more twists😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988


i know.. but badi comment kaise deti...
pehle half pe comment karna galat hota na..
to baki half pe itna hi comment banta h...😉😆

haha..true that...ok ok but next tym mennu wadda wala comment chahiye😆i love reading yours😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .anjali.

haha..true that...ok ok but next tym mennu wadda wala comment chahiye😆i love reading yours😳


next time pakka wada wala dungi...😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
ok forgot to comment here
read ur full story
its awesome i loved it
n in the recent part
well said megha
waiting for next part
ps: sorry if i already commented
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 10 - Truth is out

Recap: Megha gets angry at colony people and lashes out at them. Manav is angry at Anna and they get into a fight.

After lashing out at Anna, a super duper angry Manav moves out of the colony. He is walking on the road when he sees Sharad. He hurriedly crosses the road to catch up at him but something catches his eye..He moves forward and in a split second catches hold of a shadow who was apparently following Sharad..he cannot see the face as that person is wearing a black shawl..

Manav:Ae you..kon ho tum..aur aise Sharad ka peecha kyun kar rahe the..bolo..muh se ye kapda hatao..hatao..*snatches the shawl*..tum*shocked *

The person behind the shawl is none other than Megha..who was following Sharad to patch upto him who is still not talking to him...

Megha:Manav Bhaiya wo mai wo..

Manav:mai wo kya..bolo Sharad ka peecha kyu kar rahi thi tum..chahti kya ho?

Megha:Bhaiya..Sharad mujse baat nahi kar raha hai..mai roz use akele mein baat karne ki koshish krti hu..koshish krti hu ke wo sune mai kya kehna chahti hu..ek baar sirf ek baar mai use puri baat btana chahti hu..phir wo jo saza dega muje manzur hai..

Manav:saza to use already mil chuki hai Megha..tum jaisi ladki se pyar karke...Sharad ne btaya muje..tumne kya kia uske sath..Vasant bhaiya Varsha bhabhi ne kya bigada tumhara..kyu aise behave kar rahi thi tum..tumhe pata hai Sharad kitna hurt hua tha tumhari batein sunn ke..ye sunn ke k tum Vasant bhaiya Varsha bhabhi ke sath rehna nahi chahti..tumhe wo pasand nahi hain..

Megha:aisi baat nahi hai

Manav:aisi baat nahi hai?to phir kaisi baat hai..tumhi ne Sharad se kaha ke tum shadi ke baad alag ghar mein rehna chahti ho..jaha tumhe disturb na kre koi..iska to yhi matlb hua na ke tumhe Sharad ke parivar se problem hai..tumhe pata hai Sharad apne Bhaiya Bhabhi ko apne Ma Baap ki tarah manta hai..koi bhi unhe respect na kre to use kitna bura lagta hai...tumhe andaza bhi hai ke tumne ye batein bol ke Sharad ka dill dukhaya hai..itna bada kaam kia phir bhi tumhe explanation deni hai...kya explanation dogi? Apne se bado ki respect na krne me koi explanation nahi hoti Megha..tumne jo kia galat kia..jao Vasant Bhaiya Varsha Bhabhi se maafi mango..wo to tumhe maaf kar hi denge..boht bada dil hai unka..par Sharad..wo kabi nhi kar payega..uske dil pe jo ghav laga hai wo shayad hi kabi bhar paye..Aur ek baat suno..agar mai Sharad ki jagah hota to mai tumhare sath ek kamre me bhi khada hona tolerate nahi krta...

Megha(sobbing):Manav Bhaiya..aapne Sharad ke POV se to puri baat sunn li..meri baat b to suniye..mai kya kehna chahti hu..meri majboori...

Manav:majboori(scoffing)Megha I repeat..bado ko disrespect karne mein koi bhi reason acceptable nahi hota.. Vasant Bhaiya Varsha Bhabhi ke sath jo tumne kia ya krne wali thi wo galat tha..socho agar unhe Sharad se alag hona padta to unke dil pe kya bit ti...socha hai kbi tumne..socha hai ke Sharad unke bina reh pata..pyar karti ho Sharad se..phir b ek baar b uske bare mein nahi socha..bss bol dia jo dill me aya.. bolo megha tumne aisa kyu kiya sharad ke saath..bolo..

Megha- Manav bhaiya mein sab sach batati hu... kya hua tha..jis ke kaaran mein Sharad se alag hogayi..




Jab 2015 ,1947 hamare grah se bhaag gaye the toh sab dukhi the...Hum sab unhe dhoondh rahe the..aur Vasant bhaiya aur Varsha bhabhi toh toot chuke the... Vasant bhaiya har roz apne aap Ko Kos the ki unki wajah se 2015 ghar chodke chala gaya

Aur 555 nani toh sabko yehi kehti thi ke Vasant bhaiya ki vajah se aaj unka bada naati ghar chod kar chala gaya aur unki wajah se aaj unki beti ki zindagi barbaad hogayi hai ..Aur yeh Sharad ko bilkul bhi pasand nahi tha ki koi uske bhaiya ya bhabhi ke khilaf kuch bole ..aur Sharad ko bahut gussa aaya tha 555 nani par woh varsha bhabhi ki maa thi issliye woh kuch bola nahi.

Uske baad ek din 555 nani aayi mere ghar aur mujh se humdardi jataane lagi, kehne lagi ki Aaj Jo halat Varsha ki hui hai ,Jo zindagi bigdi hai Varsha ki woh mere saath bhi honewale hai...

Manav- mein kuch samjha nahi Megha, 555 nani ne aise kyu kaha tumse...aur iska kya matalb hua ki aaj Jo Varsha bhabhi ke saath hua hai woh tumhare saath hoga..




Megha- Unka kehne ka matalb tha ki Aaj 2015 ne ghar choda kal Sharad ghar chodke chala jaayega..mujhe chodke chala jaayega..phir mera kya hoga..


Bahut chota tha Sharad jab Vasant bhaiya aur Sharad ke Ma Papa died.. Vasant bhaiya ne zimedaari sambhali thi Sharad ki aur phir jab Varsha bhabhi aayi toh unhone Sharad ki parvarish apne bete ki tarah ki hai..

Bhaiya ,bhabhi ne kabhi bhi 2015 aur Sharad ko alag nahi samjha..Sharad ko bhi apne bade bete ki tarah pyar kiya hai..

555 Nani,yehi kehna chahiti thi ki Vasant bhaiya ki wajah se Sharad bhi ghar chodke chala jaayega..

Pehle toh mein ne 555 nani ki baato pe itna dhyan nahi diya.. Lekin uske baad woh har rooz mere ghar aati aur kehne lagti ke Sharad mujhe chodke chala jaayega aur meri zindagi barbaad ho jaayegi ..aur kehne lagti ki mein Sharad ko alag rehne ke liye kahun..

Dhire dhire mein unki baton mein aagayi.mujhe yeh dar satane laga ki kahin Sharad sach much mujhe chodke chala gaya toh.. Agar woh bhi 2015 ki tarah grah se bhag gaya toh ..agar usne kuch kar liya toh..

Isliye mein ne Sharad se kaha ki hum log alag rehte ..kyuki mein Sharad ko khona nahi chahati thi lekin Sharad ne kaha ki woh alag nahi reh sakte...aur hamare bich bahut jhagda hua..mein ne usse gusse mein aake kaha ki woh mujhse pyar nahi karta , woh meri care nahi karta ..aur mein ne sirf usse hi nahi Vasant bhaiya aur Varsha bhabhi ke liye bura kaha ..aur gusse mein aakar mein hamara rishta tod diya...aur waha se chali gayi..ek baar bhi mein nahi socha bhaiya ki Sharad kya feel kar raha hai ..

Gusse mein mujhe patah hi nahi chala ki mein kya bol gayi..Jo mujhe bolna nahi chahiye .tha

Phir thode din baad -210 Hemant ki frnd mere ghar pe aayi aur usne mujhe bataya ki 2015 Vasant bhaiya ki wajah se nahi par 555 nani ke kehne mein aa gaya tha aur issi wajah se 2015 ghar chodke chala gaya.kyuki 555 nani ne vasant bhaiya ki khilaaf use bhadkaya tha.

Aur tab mujhe samjh aaya ki mein bhi 555 nani ke kehne mein aagayi aur mein ne kitna hurt kiya Sharad ko aur baki sab ko...

Phir mein ussi waqt Sharad se Milne chali gayi ... Lekin mein pohnchu usse pehle hi bahut der ho chuki Vasant bhaiya aur baki sab yaha aane ke liye nikal chuke the...

Bhaiya, mein ne apne hi rishte ko todke kitni badi galti ki tab mujhe ehsaas hua... Tab mujhe hosh aaya ki kya bewakoofi ki hai mein ne ..ehsaas hua ki .mein ne apne best friend ka dil toda hai..usse dard diya hai ..ehsaas hua ki sirf mein ne apne dost ko nahi apni Puri family ko mein ne kho diya hai..

By now Manav and Megha were in tears ..

Manav- 555 nani ne aisa kyu kiya unhone apni hi beti ke saath..aisi kya dushmani hai unki ?

Megha- bhaiya unki dushmani Vasant bhaiya se hai ..unko Vasant bhaiya pasand nahi hai aur issliye unhe Sharad bhi pasand nahi kyuki woh unka chotta bhai Hai.. .woh Vasant bhaiya ko pasand nahi karti issliye woh kissi tarah se bhi Varsha bhabhi ko Vasant bhaiya se alag karna chahti hai ..aur issliye unhone 2015 ko bhadkaya .. Taki sab dosh Vasant bhaiya ko de...

Unhone mere saath aisa issliye kiya kyuki woh nahi chahti ki Varsha bhabhi pe saari responsibilities aaye ...kyuki unhe lagta hai ki Vasant bhaiya aur Sharad dono incapable hai..

Uske baad mujhe patah chala ki 333,Vasant bhaiya ki beti, yaha akeli hai aur abhi prithvi par gayi akeli Varsha bhabhi aur sabse Milne Aur Vasant bhaiya ne usse wapas hamare grah bhej diya kyuki woh bahut hi chotti hai.. Ussne mujhe bataya ki yaha colonywale kaise treat karte hai bhaiya bhabhi ke..saath..usne mujhe Sharad aur Anna ke baare mein kaha..

Mein khush hoon ki Sharad apni zindgi mein aage baad gaya hai ...aur Sharad ke iss faisle mein uske saath hoon.. Kyuki mein ne usse bahut dukh diya hai aur yeh mein apni sazaa ke roop accept kar liya tha

In sab ke baad mein 333 ke saath rehne lagi uski dekh bhaal karti hoon..bich mein 333 ka accident hua tha ..aur Vasant bhaiya yaha aaye the tab mein ne unse kaha tha ki yeh baat woh kisiko na bataaye ki mein 333 ki dekh bhaal kar rahi hoon aur unse yeh bhi kaha ki jab woh log 2015 ko lekar wapas aayenge tab mein chali jaaungi wapas apne ghar ..

Aur abhi Hemant ne thode din pehle mujhe kaha ki kaise sab ne Vasant bhaiya aur baki sab par chori ka ilzaam lagaya aur Anna ne kaise behave kiya Sharad ke saath...

Aur tab mein ne faisla kiya ki mein dharti par aaungi for my family and for Sharad kyuki hum jivan saathi se bhi pehle dost thi.. Aur mein yaha chali aayi... mein Sharad aur baaki sab se maafi maangna chahti hoon..




Manav knew megha was speaking truth he can clearly see the guilt in Megha's eyes and the regret ... he decides to help her..But before he can speak another word..they both hear a clapping sound..

Sharad,who has overheard Meghas story,is clapping and coming their direction..he has tears in his eyes..

Manav:Sharad..tum..tum to age nikal gaye the na..aur ye tumhari ankh mein ansun

Sharad:Haan Manav..mai age nikal gaya tha..rah mein bhi aur zindagi mein bhi..par kuch cheezein hain jo baar baar peeche khinch lati hain...iss rah mein tumne awaz lagai to mai peeche aa gya..aur zindagi mein Megha se age badha tha..usne wapis aa ke mere sare zakhm khol diye..

*turns to Megha* seriously like seriously nani ki baton mein aa ke tumne ye sab kia? Ek baar bhi mere bare mein nahi socha..ke tum jo kuch bhi keh rahi ho uska mujpe kya asar hoga..mai kya feel karunga..

Ek baar muje batana zaruri nahi samjha ke Sharad..muje nani uksa rahi hai..batein bol rahi hai..wo tumse milne ati thi muje nahi pata tha..tumne muje kyu nahi bataya? Kya mai itna paraya tha ke itni badi baat tum muje nahi btaogi..ke nani,meri Varsha bhabhi ki maa..tumse pehle meri relative..wo tumse milne aa rhi hai..meri family ke bare mein bol rahi hai..aur muje pata nahi..wah*scoffs*

Megha:Pluto..i know..i know maine galti ki..tumse baatein chupa ke..par who nani..woh itna pressure dalti thi mujpe

Sharad:First of all stop calling me by that name..secondly..pressure dalti thi to kya tum apne best friend cum life partner se share nahi krogi..tum stress mein thi aur muje pta nahi tha..iska to yhi matlb hua na ke nani ki tarah tum bhi muje capable nahi samajhti thi..mai iss layak bhi nahi hu ke mai apni best friend ko ek cheez me support kr sakun..uska stress kam krwa sakun..wow...muje kitna acha lg rha hai Minto..thanx..thanx muje meri kamzori meri nakamyabi ka ehsas dilane ka..thank you soo much..

Sharad walks away from their with tears in his eyes..

Megha breaks down in front of Manav..Manav helplessly watches her..but decides that he will help Megha win Sharad back..

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After few days... .

Manav had decided to clear all misunderstanding between Sharad and Megha...and bring them back together.. He also informed VV about nani what she had done with Sharad and Megha..

Manav decides to move on in his life ..He understood Anna was not his soulmate...

Manav - (in mind) shayad mere nasib mein sachha pyar likha hi nahi hai...mujhe Ab Sharad aur Megha ki bich ki misunderstanding mitaana hai aur unko wapas ek saath laana hai aur mujhe apne dost ko dhoondhna hai aur uske parivaar se milaana hai...

Somewhere ,in Mumbai...

A girl was running here and there in her house.. She stumbles upon table ...

Girl- Aaah..ek toh late ho rahi hoon mein aur abhi hi lagna tha pair pe...aaah

Mobile starts ringing..

Girl picks up the the phone...

Girl- haan ..haan bas mein aa rahi hoon..aur baccho ko sambhal Lena for few min...plz plz...aur haan ,bhaiya woh gift Lena mat bhulna..

Girl said locking the door..

Aur haan woh aap fruits aur chocolate le liya na ya baaki hai kharid na..

Aur ..haan bhaiya...

The girl was interrupted by a women voice...

The girl disconnect the call

Women- Aaj kal toh tu bahut busy rehti hamesha phone pe baat karti rehti hai.kabhi aaju baju walo se bhi baat kar liya kar...

Girl was irritated but she didn't show it on her face.

Girl - Shanti aunty, aapne sahi kaha aur ek baat kahu aunty mujeh na aapse time management sikhna hai kyuki kya hai na aap toh din bhar itna saaara kaam karti hai lekin aapko toh dusro ki chugli karna, dusro ke haal chaal puchna ne , ka time mil jaata hai...toh kaise manage karti hai aap yeh sab yeh mujhe jaana hai..par abhi mein jaa rahi hoon mujeh na bahut kaam hai

The girl leaves giving a fake smile

And Shanti aunty goes away making faces...

Precap: Sharad and Manav have made a promise to themselves to make each others life beautiful again..how will they do this? And who is this girl and what role will she play in their lives..Stay tuned to find out about it😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for late update everyone..Enjoy😃
So finally the truth is out..Why Megha used to feel guilty and why Sharad is not talking to her..wanna know what you all feel like about it...waiting for your lovely comments😳
Edited by .anjali. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Well written👏👏
Bechare Shanav... Both r upset ...
Megha Wants to talk with sharad...
Haha.. Sharad ki demand badh gai...
Do log uske pichhe...
Manav following d one who is following Sharad...
& it is megha...
Bechari megha no one listening to her...
Finally she reveals after listening a tons from Manav...
Sharad overhears & is more heartbroken that she doesn't trust him...
Manav feels bad for both...
Megha now realises.. & sharads hurt words r her punishment.
Mesha ka patch up karao.. Jaldi... I can't see them crying...
Manav deciding he is over with Anna.. Very gud Manav.. Well done... Don't worry u wil get a more gud girl then her...
Shanav decides to bring happiness in others life...
So cute they r...
Ek kaam karo... Ladkiyon ko rehne do.. Shanav ko hi couple bana do...😉

Ah Haan.. New entry..
Girl seems smart... Wil b nice match😉
Continue soon...
Thanks 4 d PM...
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally truth is out anji loved sharad megha and megha manv part. ...
So stay tuned guys to know what is the role of this new girl in the trio lives ..


Stay tuned in this roller collaster ride of shanav..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Krish58

Finally truth is out anji loved sharad megha and megha manv part. ...

So stay tuned guys to know what is the role of this new girl in the trio lives ..


Stay tuned in this roller collaster ride of shanav..

m loving this development...writing me maza aa rha hai..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mujeh bhi
Waiting for ur lovely comments

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