FF || Mannmarziyan Season#2 || Shot-9 on Page-67 | #Mature | June/08 - Page 13

Originally posted by: --abha--

This means our fight didnt let u do anything...u still didnt think about updating 😭

Read my reply in IWYWMFL 😉

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

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okays 😆

Yuuppiieee! Another SS that too Mannmarziyan season #2 ... I already know I will love this 😆 ...



Editing post! ... 😆

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OMG!!!! Man...tum nahiii sudhar sakti yar...sachii msin...u turn whole thing...with his pov...i was like...he is so soft and childish... 😲

This is devil Raman 🤣 ...ohhh gosh u are an impossible girl and i really mean there is no i m possible in this... 😆 ...alll time i have just my mouth open over the fact how easily u changed our perception about him...he just a child who want his mother for himself...and so is sngry over a girl and trying to throw her out...

Well twist is he could not see her...now this will play out...how i dont know but i think u have thought something...

But u really surprised me...

Hell!!!! I could not digest such twist for few mins...

Now there closeness...let see aage kya hota h...

I sm excited no more than excited...

Update soon...

Back to back updates...

Yaayyy!!!!

Edited...

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Unres...

confusion yar...
Whether raman has any spilt personality...
& he just want his mother's love and care nothing else...

Sooo poor he z jelous of ishu as she z very close to his mom...

Originally posted by: RitaDivan

This was my review for the first part! I just wanted to say few words ... Below the previous review!

Hie Gayu😊

Yuuppiieee! Another SS that too Mannmarziyan season #2 ... I already know I will love this😆...

Special thanks to the birthday girl who made you give us more updades + new SS👏

Hahah lol🤣this Raman bi na ... I won't take him seriously because if I did I would start saying he is not respecting women, he is being jerk ... Blah blah blah ... But I'm just gonna be taking him cool & light... Sit back and just relax😆...

... Why is he searching for a stepmom now inspite of having already a biological one?! Little confused😕... I also Hope he will be able to control his overly energetic hormones! ... But how could he? Even for the flight journey he couldn't fight his hormones!!🤣Lol I'm enjoying this ...

So Ishu's mom is his step mom ... Interesting ... She will be his stepsister right? If I'm not wrong!? ... Wow this is getting complicated ... Well knowing him he won't mind ... (I'm sounding like a jerk now myself) ...

Ishu's intro and the thrilling he will see her or not ...👏... As usual your are best in this field of writting so please do amaze us !👍🏼

Thanks yaar😊

Amritha

Editing post! ...😆

I feel so stupid for misunderstanding ... I thought toshiji was Raman's mother and for some unknown reason he is searching for a stepmom & that was Madhavi ... I don't know where do I get my theories from ... But I was thinking Ishu would be his step sis LOL!

Now I undrstood as I reread the story! Again ... I'm bilkhul pagal heh! Prandh prandh! XD

The first time when I was reading I was so excited for a new story from you that I even couldn't understand what I was reading ...🤣& started blabbering in my review ...

Continue soon😊

Oh god girl... 😲
You and your theories 😲
Ishu and Raman's stepsister 😲
Raman coming for stepmother 😲
Oh my my my 😲
You've become crazy like me 😆
Anyways... Should I explain what I exactly meant 😉
I know you got it...else you wouldn't have edited your comment right 😈
I just loved this... 😳 You should often make such theories...
Really...I love you girl 🤗

Hmmm...

So raman is craving 4 his mother's love but pretending that he hates her n is soo possessive about his mother, interesting...