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MG OS: I'll Make Her Girl

Geet Singh Rathore a tomboy and no one saw her in girls attire except one time in some fashion house. She is only child of Rano and Madan Singh Rathore who is a well known businessman and they loves her daughter so much but worried about her as she hate to call herself girl and kicked any boy he chooses for her... Poor guys said one thing, "They will marry to her daughter if she is a girl".
Geet is by profession is orthopaedics non-surgeon... She treats her patients by excercise or medium of medicine.

Maan Singh Khurana is well known name in fashion industry. His design always blast in any fashion week. He loves his family but other saw him arrogant and egoist like he cares. His family revolves around him and he too surrounded by them.
His brother Dev, Sister Anwesha, Savitri Singh Khurana his sweet Daadi Ma, Mother Prema and Dad Amar Singh Khurana.

Dev is coming back to India after 3 years with his girlfriend Meera and her sister Sameera and His best friend Geet who is orthopaedics... Geet and Meera is same totally crazy, fun-loving and daring the only difference is between them is Meera is girly type but our Geet is tomboy type. On the other hand Sameera is classy, sophisticated, modern and a girl which a man dream to be his wife. She is looking beautiful.
Geet is agreed to come with him coz of Dev asked her to treat his Daadi Ma who is feeling pain in joints and He knows Geet is best in her job.

"Geet come"

"Hotty Please go inside, first I inform to Mom and Dad, I am here"

"Okay"

Dev went inside and introduce Meera with his family.

"Mom, Dad, Daadi, Bhai, Annie... Thank God Geet is not here...Please don't treat Geet as a girl..."

"But"

"Please don't ask any questions will elaborate later... She is best orthopaedics so I asked her for treating Daadi Ma"

Her mother like Sameera instantly for Maan, who could ignore her and who won't fall for Maan... He is honey and girls acts like bees revolves around him which he hate the most.

Geet enter in home and she likes it, "Hotty your home is beautiful"

"Glad to know that Sweetheart" Dev replied.
"Geet she is my stupid irritating sister Annie"

"Hello Sexy" Geet offer her hand.

Annie is girly girl but she like this messy girl, who is wearing a track pant and lose T and roughly brait.

"Hello Geet" She said shyly

"Awww she is sweet"

"My Mother Prema"

"Hello beautiful" Geet said makes her blush. The way she said it like a boy calls her

"Geet he is my Dad"

"Hello Handsome, Now I get to know Why Dev is so hot...I am sure your elder brother also so hot and handsome." Geet offers her hand

"Yes he is and Great to hear that, its pleasure meeting with you" Amar said

"Your family is so cool Dev, Meer you are very lucky." Geet comment and hit playfully Meera

"Thanks" Meer said shyly

"You should be lucky too" Geet heard a magnificent voice and she remembers her voice.

Geet turn towards the voice and Get shocked of her life to see two unwanted people whom she never want to encounter in her life time.

"Krishna Ji...Why" Geet mummers

Geet is shocked to saw them, Dev knows everything and he played... Her mind said No...its not possible.

Savitri Singh Khurana standing with beautiful smile and Maan is shocked too but now he is smirking to saw her pale face.

"Daadi Ma" Dev exclaim and hugs her

"Meera she is my Daadi Ma and Daadi she is Meera...My girlfriend..." Dev said

"You are beautiful" Daadi Ma said but her eyes are on Geet.

"Thank You"

"So meet my elder son whom you already declare Hot and Handsome" Amar said

"Nope I never said about him" Geet said to herself

"Hello" Geet candidly

"Hello Sweetheart" Maan said with his killer smirk

Geet heart skip a beat so that Dev, as he is scared and Geet is angry.

Geet control her nerves and throw dragger to him.

"Hello Maan" Sameera said

"Hello Miss Singhal and For you I am Mr Khurana" Maan introduce formally

"We are going to family" Sameera

"Your sister is member of our family but"

Sameera is tongue right.

Prema heart break in million piece with Maan behaviour towards Sameera, now she knows Maan doesn't like her.
But her mind focussed on his words "Hello Sweetheart" he never calls a girl Sweetheart but he said to Geet, that's mean... But Geet is not even a girly girly type.

But Maan likes her or wants her than what she will do.
Nothing.

Prema imagine them together, Maan is looking dashing in his simple Jeans and T-shirt and Geet is in Pant and loose shirt and thier two cutie pies Maahi and Geyansh, one's like his and second like her mother.

Maahi speak like Geet, "Hello Sexy Granny" and Geyansh speak sophisticated like his Dad, "Good Morning Grandma".

"No" Prema scream

"What happen Prema" Amar said

"Nothing Amar", "Something good or bad click in my mind" she said

"Geet you are going to treat my Daadi Ma" Dev said

"I don't know you are a doctor Geet, you didn't tell me before"

"You already know her Ma" Amar asked before confused Dev

"Yes, Dad we know... She is Madan's Uncle only crazy tomboy daughter Geet Madan Singh Rathore" Maan said

"OMG you are Madan's daughter, you are so small when we all met each other" Amar declares in happiness and engulfed her in a hugs

Geet nodded her head and smiled fakely, "Yes Uncle"

"You also know her Maan"

Geet heart is pounding so fast in her chest and face got pale. His family doesn't know about their previous hilarious...if they come to know then...?????
"Why You are scared Geet?" Geet thought

2 Years Ago

His Daadi Ma pester him for marriage but he didn't gives her damn in this matter only. He wants to be a successful businessman which he achieved but still he didn't want to marry so His Sweet but Stubborn Daadi Ma fixed an alliance without his knowledge. She told him to meet her once and reject her but at least meets her.

Savitri Singh Khurana and Madan's Dad was classmates so she treats them like their kids but they lived very far and other only known them by their names only.

Madan told her about his problem so Savitri comes to a this conclusions.

She thought if they face rejection maybe their attitude change.
She only can hope.

MaanEet Scene

"I don't want to marry you, So, Its Big No" Geet immediately said to him when she finds him in her room but then she knows she owns an explanation to him.

"Look don't waste your time on me, its my Mom who makes me wear all this... I am not a girl" Geet said

Maan saw her top to bottom and her statement shunned him literally.

As expected Geet throw him out telling him the same which is shocked for Maan. First he saw her before in Fashion Week... She is indeed a girl maybe lesbo...Its popular now a days... She is most beautiful girl till the date he encounter with. She is wearing a light pink color Saree, not wearing any make up or anything but still she captured his mind.
He definitely feels bad to say No to her but before he said anything Geet frustrating voice said No to him. This girl dare to say No to him.

Maan for the first time feeling rejection which hurt him and he nodded his head and moved from there.

Madan knows this will comes that why he is hesitant for this proposal.

Daadi Ma assures him, this rejection meant nothing for them and their relationship won't affected.

Present Time

"Oh Krishna Ji I wish I am not in love with my profession else I run from here" Geet start her favourite job of complaining to her Krishna Ji

"Yes" Maan said with his famous smirk which special for her.

Geet heartbeat is raising fast, "It's mistake" Geet immediate said and regret later

Maan hide his smile and thought to wait for sometime and enjoyed her condition as she has to pay for rejecting him.

But Daadi Ma don't want her to feel humiliate. Although she is going to our Daughter In Law so it's won't look good.

"We went for important work but it not go well" Daadi said

"Important work or fixing a proposal" Geet mummers

"Exactly Sweetheart" Maan said

"What" Geet asked in shocked tone

"What you said is right" Maan

"Can anyone tell what you all are talking" Amar said

"Geet is saying, she wished that work went well" Maan said with smirk

"Right Geet"

He is taking advantage of her situation,"Right my foot" Geet this time said to herself

She glaring to him and nodded her head in looking at him.

Maan smirk more at her condition.

"First of all everyone sit and then talk" Prema said


Geet start doing her job, she check Daadi Ma legs and said, "We will start you session from evening" Geet said in perfect professional

"Okay Bete" Geet wants her to act professional but seems like she has to bear unprofessionalism.

"Geet come I'll show you your room" Dev said

"Meet you in evening Sweetheart" Maan again tease her

"Don't you love your sexy face" Geet said in warning tone

"Of-Course I love my sexy face Sweetheart" Maan said while coming near to her

"Then don't call that" Geet said and create distance between them with her finger.

"Bhai is joking Geet, he is very funny" Dev scared for his lovely brother. He never expect his Bhai ever playing prank on girl...Okay Geet is tomboy but still.

"Bhai don't mess with her, she is black belt" Dev said audible and walk upto Geet.

Few Day passed like that Geet usually ignore Maan but case is different with Maan, he won't leave any chance to tease her.

Sameera also didn't let any chance to impress Daadi, Amar, Prema or Maan. They are showing so much attention to Geet which is unbearable for her, she usually get jealous with her coz Meera gives her more attention than her but now She wants to become daughter in law of this family and she will do anything to do it.

Scene Shift

"Maan you like her" Prema asked

"Who Mom"

"You know About Whom I am talking...Geet."

Maan rolled his eyes, "She is different from other...that it"

"Thank To Krishna Ji, Maan I like Sameera but I was scared to tell you coz I feel you like Geet"

"Mom if you select Geet, I'll happily accept her but Sameera than my life will ruined...She wants to rule only, Do you want I'll be rulled by someone...When she asked me to go shopping, I've go... When she asked me to go with her...I've to go with her." Maan said

"What about Geet?"

"My life will be more exciting Me"

"That's mean you like Geet"

"Prema don't ask him, its clearly shown on his face and if he won't like then We have to send Geet as one more proposal is waiting for her and this time his father make another plan for her" Daadi Ma spoke

"Proposal... Another plan" Maan asked in shocked tone. He only heard these words

"Yes, her mother going to blackmail her in cost of her life" Daadi Ma

"No in any ways she is going anywhere from here" Maan said

"Maan you don't even like her and still stopping her to go"

"Daadi Ma please, why you don't asked them to stop"

"Coz I am not sure about you"

"First of all I'll makes her a girl" Maan said

"First accept to yourself Maan"

"Fine Daadi Ma and Mom, she is only girl who I want to spend my life" Maan said

"Nope"

"What do you want"

"Accpet in a right way"

Maan glare angry, "Its doesn't matter"

"It's matter" Prema said

"Great Mom and Grand Mom, I love her and wants her in my life"

"Now you have convinced her" Daadi Ma said

"No, first makes her a girly girly type... I don't want my grandchild wished me hello sexy Granny" Prema crib

Maan laughs, "Okay Mom...But don't you enjoy to be called Sexy Granny"

"Maan" all the three of them laughs a loud.

Next Day

Geet is in Shower and loudly singing song, "Chandigarh Kar Aashiqui, Kuch Kar na jaye kuch kha ke...kha ke...Kha ke..."
She came out from shower wearing shower cap on head and a cute bath robe.

"I never knew you have a great voice, you are good singer" Maan said while crossing his leg sitting on sofa.

Her breathe get hitched when she saw an unwanted guess in her room. She never ever get scared with anyone but this person makes her nervous.

"Don't You have any manner"

"Maan"

"What" Geet saod shockingly

"My Name.. Say it na...I dying to hear my name from your sweet or cute mouth" Maan said lovingly

Geet throw a vase on him which he dogde perfectly like as he knows this will come.

"If you want to throw something...throw yourself... I at least want to catch and it will be romantic, you see but not this vase"

"Get lost from here"

"Nope"

"What do you want"

"You"

She gives him look like, "If you don't tell me, what do you want right now then I'll kill you with me bare hand"

"I want you wear this beautiful lehenga for Dev and Meera engagement party"

Geet start laughing at him, "Me...Lehenga...It will be eight wonder... Geet Singh Rathore wearing Lehenge...never ever"

"This is not first time you will wear Lehenga" Maan said shocked her to the core.

Her face turning pale as he is not wrong but that for her friend help and that too for one time basis.
She remembered her Past.

"I am going to die" Rishi said

"What happen Rishi" Geet spoke in frustrating voice

"If my show will flop then I'll definitely commit suicide"

"Rishi why it will flop"

"Coz my main lead ditched me, I sweat Geet...I'll ruin her"

"Rishi don't stop so low, you can get any other lead"

"Geet how can I get any other lead on next 3 hours"

"Rishi you chance position"

"Its not easy Geet"

"Then ask any your known model"

"I called so many model but no one is Available"

"Hmmm...so asked any girl, she defo said yes to you"

"Geet I can't trsut anyone as my lead"

"Hmmm...that will be the problem so what you will do"

"Geet you wear my dress"

"Are you out of your mind" Geet scream

"Nope Geet"

"I am not going to help you in this matter"

Rishi finally convinced her, saying he will broke their friendship, he will die etc... He mainly blackmailing her emotionally.

Poor Geet say yes to him and wear His designer latest Lehenga long kurti style. That was the day Rishi saw a beautiful girl Geet, he is totally flat on her that day.
They were unaware Rishi was not only one but one more person bow down in front of her beauty. She is beautiful Rishi knows that, that's way he take a big risk but he never imagined Geet inner beauty reflect in such a manner which makes his design dull. It seems like any dress will fail in front of her.
Rishi propose her so many time after that day but Geet is Geet...On the top, Geet maintain distance between them.

Present

Geet comes out from shock and said, "I don't get you?"

Maan smirk turn more sexy as noticing her Readable face, "Really Geet, I thought you've brain but you disappoint me" Maan said fakely

"Don't irritate me or I'll leave from here. Just get out" Geet said
She doesn't said coz of Maan questions but his staring making her nervous, she never feel this type of this man makes her feel...so different.
She is feeling ticklish in her stomach or behaving girl. She hates him for sure.

"I know you won't leave coz Dev is going to engage today so you can leave tomorrow but not today...not now"

Geet inhale breathe and said, "GET OUT"

"Geet I thought your communication skill is good but you know two words... Be versatile"

"Esci" Geet said

"Mai Cara" Makes her shunned

This Man is not only sexy but perfect in every thing. Cara word spread pink hues on her beautiful cheeks.
Maan notice everything, its a patience test for him, she is standing in front of him in a bathrobe and droplet of water and her enticing fragnance begs him to get at least closed to him.

Maan heard his desiring heart and get close to her but Geet took back steps to saw him walking forward.

"Hey stay away from me"

"Mai Cara"

She is about to scream but Maan guessed her move and tries to close her mouth, Geet tries to take back step and in this mess, they fell on Geet's bed... Maan on the top of her.

"Ouch" Geet said

His taunt body comes in contact of her soft-soft body which gives a kind of sensation to both which is forbidden for them.

"Oyee Motu hatt" Geet said

"I like your versatility but I want to see in your dress up too" Maan said

"Look I complain to Dev"

"What I know about you is, you are a blackbelt"

Geet tries to push him but he didn't move a inch, "Maan get off"

"Nope, actually like this position and Geet I saw a girl in RK fashion show who wear this lehenga which I want you wear" Maan said

"I don't know" Geet stammer. She is about to scold him but his last sentence makes her shunned.

"Ohhh Krishna Ji Geet, I don't say you're that girl" he smirk but Geet glares him

"I won't" Geet said

"Great decision Geet" Maan said
Geet pushed him so that she can use her blackbelt in Karate but Maan use his move after guessing it her, he tangle his finger with her which is unexpect to her.

"What the hell is this" Geet said, their heart accelerate in fast pace.

Her legs is also strangled with him.

"Get off and leave it"

"Try Cara"

"Maan don't check my patience" Geet said in angry voice

"Do I"

"DE... " Maan uses the only thing he has left and which is unexpected for both. He thought he only shut her mouth but after coming in contact with her, he loses control over her.
If This is new for Geet then case is same with Maan too.

Geet is shocked on him and start wrinkling in his arms but Maan is in other words, when he enter in her mouth Geet also lost control and reciprocate to his kiss.

Maan touch her soft skin after exploring her mouth for few minutes turns them exhaust without air.

"Maan" Geet said but it is so audible which hears like moan

"You are making me crazy Geet" Maan said on her skin

Geet pushed him after finding him vulnerable. Maan is on floor with thud.

"Wear this or I'll make you wear and I'll enjoying it Geet" Maan said after controlling his erected heartbeat.

Geet turn her face.

"Does she takes him seriously Krishna Ji" Geet talk to herself

"This man is quite dangerous for her, he makes her nervous, feels her ticklish like a girl and kissed her too on the top she kissed him bcak...Oh Krishna Ji"

Later in the evening

Geet decended from stare and all turns towards her to look at her. Her parents are also shocked to saw her in Lehenga. Everyone in hall fixed their gaze on her which irritate her so much and she curses him so much.

Prema is approximately fainted saw her in that dress and finding that she is most beautiful girl she ever seen.

Dev and Meera are shocked to saw her and comes out from shocked when priest announced to exchange ring.
They exchange ring with each other.

Priest later announce Maan and Geet engagement which is shocked for her so much.

"I don't" Geet is about to decline but stop by Maan

"Don't reject me again Geet Or I don't know what I'll do now" Maan said

Finally they are fianc which is shocked for Geet and so many are jealous with this.

She is cursing him so much to let her go through in that way and she couldn't even complaint coz whatever she do it affects their families reputation and she never want this but she promise to herself, "She'll makes his life hell" Geet said to him too

Maan heard her cursing and smile too, "I am excited to know that"

"Finally I makes you a girl at least"

"Don't raise your hope" Geet said

"I can't help in that" Maan laughs


The End

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Not Made For Each Other????

Geet is in her room...lying in her cot trying to get some sleep...

But how can she sleep, after all that happened she has lost everything in her life including sleep...

She thinks about the past how happy he was living her life like a princess dreaming about her prince charming to come and take her on his white horse...

Geet's family is very big, her darji, dadi, her uncle, aunty, big brother Brij, his sister Rajji, her mother, father, Geet and her little brother...

Geet is everyone's ladli, and she is her brother's favorite...he loves her more than his own sister Rajji...Rajji always complains to her mother that her she must have born as Teeto's sister as only Teeto loves her...

Brij takes care of all her needs even after she became old enough to take care of herself, his day begins and ends with Geet...

And when Geet joined college Brij became her chaufer droping and picking her from college...

All the girls envy Geet as she got all her wishes fulfilled even before demanding, her brother knew Geet so well that he got her wnatever she wishes for in her mind...

And as all girls had to get married at a certain age Brij also took the responsibility to find the best match for his beloved sister...

Having grown up together Brij knew about his sister and e wanted someone who will not take his sister away from them, a ghar jamaai...

But Darji doesn't like that idea and he fixed Geet's marriage with some businessman from Delhi...

Brij opposed as he didnlt want his sister to go to some faraway land...

It's was non other than MSK, the owner of KC, and he lived with his Dadi...

MSK came to see Geet at Hoshiarpur and he liked her at first sight...

Maan agreed for the marriage and dadi wanted the wedding to happen at the earliest Muhurat for the MSK who has been refusing to marry anyone and never wished to be a family man agreed seeing Geet...

Geet also liked Maan as the renouned business tycoon and the most sort after groom in Delhi...

She also liked his authority, style, elegance, attitude and handsome looks...he was just like her dream prince who came to take her in his black Audi instead of a white horse...

Brij was dead against the proposal as he felt that Maan is more a business man than a family man and he will not be the right choice for Geet...

But the elders decided the wedding and as Geet also liked the boy Brij agreed reluctantly...

That day Maan left in a hurry as he had some appointment...Geet didn't get a chance to talk with him properly...

The only words he uttered were, " I like you Geet, and also your family, do you like me?"

Geet nodded for that and Maan left saying that the elders will take care of the rest...

Maan being a single child and living with his Dadi alone managing their family business from a tender age of 17 doesn't have time or opurtunity for anything else except for his business...

That's why he kept postponing his marriage as he had no idea what the girl would expect from him as a husband...

But when dadi made this arrangement to see Geet wihtout his knowledge he was compelled to come and meet Geet for he didn't want to hurt anyone's feelings, be it the girl or her family...

Dadi was saying that Handa's are very family oriented and she wished Maan had the support of such a loving family...Dadi wanted Maan to marry this girl at any cost, she almost begged him to just see the girl once...

When Maan first saw Geet riding her scooty with Teeto he liked her even before he knew that she was the girl he had come to see...

He liked how she took care of her little brother and the way she stealthily brought him Kulfi in a hurry but made sure her brother enjoyed it to the fullest...

She waited in the hot Sun for her brother to finish his Kulfi before they get home...Geet too had one and she licked and savoured it like a kid...

Maan was just admiring her while dadi had gone to get some sweets...

Everyone was tensed at the Handa house as Geet went missing at the wrong time...

She came running and almost bumoed into Maan, Maan held her from falling and she was all sweaty and messy...

Ranno scolded her for being so irresponsible and took her in to get her ready...

But Maan had already fallen in love with this beauty...Brij was staring Maan when he kept admiring Geet and watched her rebel as Ranno took her with her forcefully...

Geet wanted to have a word with Maan and they were sent to the terrace...

Geet became nervous as Maan opened his heart staridht away and said that she is so beautiful and he liked her at the first sight itself...

Though Geet is not a shy person when Maan said that he liked her she blushed like any other girl and started dreaming about her life immediately...

All was not well in their marriage...

Maan had some important project to be completed and asked dadi to postpone the marriage for a few months...but Dadi didn't want to take any risk as Maan might change his mind inbetween...

The wedding was arranged immediately and Geet wanted to talk with Maan...

When she got his number from Brij and called him Maan was in some meeting and when Geet struggled to gather strength and introduce herself Maan scolded her for being a nuisance and disturbing him unnecessarily calling him and wasting him for no reason...

Maan didn't know it was Geet but Geet thought Maan knew it was her...Geet was very disappointed...she told it to Brij and Brij agreed that Maan is short tempered and he also knew that...

Brij conveyed this msg to Maan and gave him Geet's number...

Maan tried calling Geet while Geet was at the parlour and Rajji only took the call...Maan tried calling again and again and wanted to talk to Geet only...

Geet got annoyed and asked Rajji to block the number...Maan thought that Geet is doing that deliberately as she wanted revenge...

Thus they had no chance to converse till marriage and both kept silent until the wedding got over...

But Maan conquered Geet on their Suhaag Raat and Geet forgot about everything and fell in love with Maan again...

Maan took Geet to KC and introduced her as his MD...

The staff welcomed Geet with a small party and Geet was so happy and proud of MSK when she heard about him from the employees, they said he is a workaholic and never cared about women, that Geet liked very much...his man is all her's and he fell in love with her at the first sight itself...

Then Brij sponsored for their Honey moon but Maan had already planned a business trip, Geet got angry and went to Hoshiarpur then...

Maan didn't object as he felt that she might miss her home and family...

Geet didn't return when Maan came back and Maan went to take her as per Dadi's orders...

Geet's family were getting ready to go to a festival at Geet's Beeji's home at Amristar...

Geet goes there every year and has a lot of fun with her cousins,she doesn't want to miss it this time too...

Darji invites Maan to accompany them and Geet's dadi Gayathri ji asks Maan and Geet to come later while the others leave immediately...she wanted them to spend some time together as she knew about the trouble brewing between them...

They stayed back at Hoshiarpur that night and Geet took care of Maan well as she missed him...Maan too missed Geet and that Geet knew that night itself...

They patched up then and happily set off to Amristar...

Geet kept on talking about her family and her brother, how they grew up and how she has been pampered by everyone...

Maan gets bored and thinks that she was expecting too much from him...

Maan tried to pacify Geet and made sure she received the same royal treatment as she gets from her family...

But then Geet kept finding fault and complaining that Maan didn't even know how to take care of his wife properly...

He didn't know where they get the best chaat, and she told him about that...

Maan is new to this place and he really didn't know much about that area, had it beed Delhi Maan knew some what, but he is not used to street food...

Geet asks Maan to try some pani puri but Maan said that it's not hygienic and she can have if she wants and he won't stop her...

Geet gets angry that Maan didn't bother about her hygiene immediately...

Maan couldn't handle her tantrums and is irritated...

At the restaurant too when Geet asks what Maan would like to have Maan immediately sais that she can order whatever she wanted and need not worry about him for he will order for himself separately...

Geet is heart broken and she couldn't believe what's happened with her life and thought that all her dreams have shattered...

At Amristar Maan gets a royal welcome as he is Geet's husband...

Geet goes and settles with her cousins and Maan is left with Lucky and mamaji...

But later that night maneet have a wonderful time and Geet tries to forgive Maan as he proved once again how much he loves her and how much he missed her...no one can beat MSK in romance...haina?

Next day Maan wants Geet to come with him as he had planned a honey Moon in Simla but Geet tells that they can postpone it like they did last time as she doesn't want to miss the festivities that go on for a week...

Maan gets angry and argues with Geet that she is always trying to take revenge and not trying to understand Maan...

Geet also gets angry and says that Maan is only happy with her in bed and not otherwise...

Maan gets furious and leaves immediately...

Geet goes back to Hoshiarpur and says that she is not going to go back...

All the family memebers advice Geet but Brij supports her decision and says that Geet will go only when Maan comes and apologises for what he did and then he can take Geet with him...

But Maan is not ready to apologise for none of his mistake, Dadi plead sbut Maan is also stubborn...

Both of them were not ready to let go off their egos and give their life another chance...

It's decided that they get divorce and live happily...Brij already stated hunting for a groom...

It's almost a year and they can easily get their divorce in a couple of months...

Thinking of the past Geet falls asleep and dreams about her Rajkumar coming in horse back...

Rajji comes and wakes her up...Geet is annoyed...she can't even be happy in her dreams...

Geet is surprised to see the visitor...it's Maan...

Maan has come to take Geet to Vaishno Devi as Dadi has prayed for them, they have to fulfill her prayers...dadi ne mannat mangi hai ki Maan uske pathni ke saath Vaishno maan ka darshan karega...Dadi has done this to save their marriage while she blackmails Maan that it's for her good health and failing it would make her more sick...

Geet also didn't want to disappoint Dadi, she loves Dadi as much she loves her dadi...

This time Maan takes her to the famous chatwalas and is happy to fulfill Geet's small wishes, he keeps admiring her while she enjoys her Pani puri...

Maan even has one as Geet feeds him with her own hands...

Maan asks Geet to make a chaat specially for him and Geet makes one...Maan savours it with delight and he loves it...

At the restaurant too Maan orders Geet's favourite, Geet is surprised Maan remembers all that as they have been together only once...she has never spoken with him after that...

Geet is happy to see the changes in Maan and hopes he also wishes their marriage to survive...

After they offer their prayers Geet feels that maybe Vaishno maa too want them to stay together...

Maan asks Geet if she would like to stay with him for another couple of days for he wants to take her to a special place very close to his heart...

Geet is only happy to stay with Maan forever...

Geet agrees and Maan takes her to a secluded place inside some jungle and it's a very old guest house where Maan spents his lonely vacations...

This time Geet has accompanied him, Maan gets her food fresh from the forest and cooks it for her too...Geet is excited and she likes the wild life style...

For a week they stay there without any disturbance from the outside world...

It's like the first time that Adam and Eve spent together at the garden of eden...

They walk together, hunt together, cook together, eat together, bath together and sleep together...

Geet had never been so happy in her whole life, she didn't know that someone could take care of her and keep her happy more than her family...

Even when she was with her family she was only like a caged bird, locked up in a golden cage, she got everything she could wish for but then she had very limited freedom, but here she has got everything...she likes this life a lot...she likes Maan and his funda more...

But one morning she finds Maan missing and she is shocked and scared...

She then thinks of her family who had never left her alone even at home, here she is on her own in an unknown jungle...

She is scared and is very angry with Maan for desserting her like this...

Maan comes back to find Geet missing...he is scared and he searches for her in the entire jungle...

He calls Geet but she says that he need not worry about her for her brother is there to take care of her, she has called him and he is on his way...

Maan gets wild and goes and finds her waiting at the main road...she had walked to the road all on her own...Maan couldn't believe she is so stubborn and full of attitude...

He waits there till Brij comes and Geet doesn't even turn his way...

Brij scolds Maan for spoiling his sister's life and she can only be happy if Maan goes away form her life...

Geet keeps mum hearing that and Maan is heart broken...

While returning Brij syas that Maan is acting to be nice for he doesn't want to leave Geet, they have been fooled and they got Geet married to Maan else Maan would have never got a girl, even if Geet leaves it's only his loss as he would have to remain single for the rest of his life...

But Geet need not worry for her brother would find the right man for her...he has already zeroed in on a couple of guys and it's just a matter of time till she gets her divorce, he asks Geet to forget the past and start thinking of her future which would be brighter and happier...

But how ever Geet tries to forget Maan she couldn't for the few days she spent with him were the only thoughts that occupy her mind these days...

She has been spending her day and night thinking of the time she was with Maan...then too she is not ready to see her mistakes only wished Maan had been more lovng and caring than like a robot...

Yes, he is more like a machine for his life has been spent in business and he doesn't know how to express his feelings...the only thing that he expresses is his uncontrollable anger which is in his blood and he can't do anything about it...

No one dared to question his anger for it has been for the right reasons and they all know that Maan would eventually be right, he is always...

But with Geet he has made a few mistakes unknowingly and that coupled with his struggle to accept new relstionships into his mostly private life made him a villain...

As for Geet her family has been her strength and also her weakness, she is used to their pampering and while she missed it from Maan she started demanding it...

But Maan didn't know that love is to be expressed in a lot of different ways than being a romantic like himself...he only knew that Geet is his love and she has to be with him no matter what...

He wanted her beside always...he is not someone who yearns for love and care, but the love and affection that he got from Geet and all her attention focused on him and him only made him addicted to that love...

Though Geet has only stayed with him for a few days he has got used to her and he needs her for the rest of his life...haan Geet Maan ki zindagi ki aadat ban gayi hai...

Maan was happy living on his own and had no expectations what so ever, he never complained about his loneliness and infact he made it a habit and liked it, he was skeptical about sharing his life with someone else but after seeing Geet he decided to make room for her in his life...

Geet easily made her place in his life and also his heart and that happens to be a permanent residence, Maan is not ready to let go off Geet for he is now afraid of emptiness in his life without Geet...

It was all ok till he lived alone but after being used to the luxury of Geet's company and also her constant rants Maan feels like missing something in his life without her bak baks...

He wanted to go and bring his love back like a knight many a time but his stupid ego didn't let him go...

He tried to call Geet in those long nights that were so miserable without Geet but has always been stopped by the thought that what if Geet didn't love him like he did and she wished to be left alone...

He respected her decision and waited for her to change her mind and call him instead...

He was always ready to fly to Hoshiarpur if only his Geet called him and said that she missed him too...

But that never happened for Geet thought that Maan loved only his work and his life is his KC, he only thinks of her when there is no work and she is never his priority...

Geet can't deny the fact that no one can love her like MSK when he is in a good mood, which is very rare...the way he made her feel like a free bird flyng high with no boundaries, the way he made her feel like an independent soul that she is, the way he made her realize that there is more to her life as Geet, the individual, the days she spent careless in the jungle with no fear or worry, it's strange that Geet never realized all this when Maan was with her, it's only when the doors are almost shut and there is no hope of seeing Maan again that she realizes what she had missed to see in her blind madness with all her over expectations...

After all Maan was only trying his best to keep her happy, he can't change over night, he too needs time to accept someone as a part of his life and also learn to show his feelings which he only expressed thru his actions,how can Geet forget the MSK,whatever hedid he did it with perfection,but he is a man of few words...

Geet is thinking of her life with Maan and is numb as all her feelings have died off when she left Maan...on the other hand Maan's feelings have emerged strong and have kept growing more and more as he missed his Geet...

Brij brings a few photos of some boys which he had selected for Geet and is happy discussing about Geet's freedom from Maan as they are getting divorced next week...

Brij goes on talking about the grooms while Geet jas become deaf with her grief, she knows that there is no life for her without MSK...she is only angry with him for not eve thinking of her once after she left...how could one be emotionless, but MSK is a unique species, haina?

She is frustrated when she thinks how she has made her life miserable not able to forget Maan while Maan has not even tried to call her, has he forgttten her totally...

How could he? How could Maan forget Geet so easily while it seems impossible for her to even hate him after all these days...

Gayathri ji comes and asks Geet to remain silent and observe maun viradh for the whole day as she believes that would help Geet get rid of her troubles...

Geet doesn't believe in such things but she agrees hoping for some miracle to save her life...

She goes back to her room and there is someone already in...

Geet's eyes are covered and she is kidnapped...

She tries to fight back but couldn't for she knew the kidnapper already...

She couldn't shout as she is observing maun viradh, she didn't want to shout too...

It's a long journey and Geet feels light without any worries, she knows she is in her place...

Geet keeps thinking of the days she spent with her Maan, she knows he loves her too...

Yes, else why would he kidnap her...she prays to God it's not just a dream...she is hopeful that her dreams will come true soon...here's her Rajkumar abducting her and taking her to his kingdom...

The jeep halts after a while and Geet becomes nostalgic with the scent of the woods...yes, it's Maan's heavenly abode and Geet remembers the time she spent here...it's truly a heaven on earth for Geet...

Some one comes and picks her up and carries her in...Geet is not scared but she loves the warmth and comfort of his strong arms...

Geet is dropped and her eyes are opened...she is not surprised to see MSK standing in front of her...

Maan starts to speak, yes, it's now his turn, he has always been a listener and Gayathri ji wants Geet to be the listener for a change...

Geet keeps staring Maan...

Maan: tum chahthi kya ho Geet? what do you want?

Geet remains silent for if she opens her mouth then they will only end up arguing, it's nice to hear his heart out...that's what Geet has been waiting for...

Maan waits for her reply but how can Geet reply?

Maan: open your mouth and speak Geet, what happened to your non stop questions, I'm ready to answer them, come on, shoot them'

But Geet still can't speak...dadimaaa...

Maan: ohhh now you don't even want to speak with me? Am I that bad? Kyun Geet? mein tummare sapnon ka Rajkumar nahi hoon? Geet, I'm fed uo with your silence, come on Geet, speak out, tumme jitna gussa hai sab nikhaal lo aaj hi, abhi, come on Geet, mujhe galiyan dena toh tummari shok haina?

Geet keeps staring him...

Maan: Geet, pehle toh batein se mujhe pareshaan karthi thi, ab tummari shanthi mujhse bardhaast nahi hothi, kya tum sach mein nahi mujhe nahi chahthi? Kya tumme nahi lagtha ki mein tummare layak hoon?

Geet is hurt now...she feels bad hearing that...

Maan: tummare bhai kya samjtha? Can he find someone like me? MSK jaisa na koi paitha hua hai na hi koi paitha hoga

Geet shakes her head...

Maan: kya?

Geet thinks , don't say that, if I wish I can give birth to another MSK...

Geet signals him to continue...let us see what's in his mind...

Maan gets angry...: have you lost your throat? Come on say something Geet, don't torture me like this, I can't take it anymore, ab mein tummare bina nahi jee saktha, meri zindagi ko aadat ho gayi hai tummari Geet(remember this dialogue!)

Maan: ab tum meri zindagi ki zaroorat ban gayi ho Geet, ab tum meri zindagi ban gayi ho Geet, tummari bina meri zindagi adhuri hai Geet, nahi tummare bina mujhe koi zindagi hi nahi hai Geet

Geet is still silent...thanks to dadi...

Maan is frustrated...he doesn't like this Geet...

Maan: what happened Geet? Am I not worth talking to? Do you think I'm wasting your time? I know you Geet, I know you too love me like I do, I know you can't live without you, tell me Geet, tell me you won't leave me, tell me you will be with me for ever

Geet is not ready to break her silence , she believes it's working and she doesn't want to spoil it...

Maan: what do you want from me Geet? you want me to chant "I love you" leaving my job, you want me to gift you costly presents like your brother, you want me to take you to the best eateries daily like your brother, you want me to pamper you lke your brother, no I can't, becoz I'm MSK, samjhe tum?

Maan holds her tight and warns her not to think of leaving him even in her dreams...

Geet feels the pain as Maan vents his anger by holding her tight...

Geet can't hear him compare himself to her brother and insult him, yes, he loves her like crazy, but that doesn't mean Maan can say this, this is not what Geet expected from MSK...maybe it's his frustaions, Geet has to stop him some how

Geet grabs the mug and splashes water over Maan to bring him back to his senses...

Maan realizes his mistake...

Maan is wet and he removes his wet shirt...

Suddenly Geet is captivated by his bare torso and starts drooling...

When Maan tursn to her Geet shifts her gaze outside...

Maan: Geet, mujhse nazar kyun charathi ho? don't do it Geet, it's only your eyes that often keep telling me that you love MSK, don't you dare stop them, look into my eyes Geet

Geet looks into his eyes...Maneet eyelock...

Maan: Geet, don't you see the love in my eyes, do you need more proof? I know I'm poor in expressing myself, but Geet, haven't you seen the love in these eyes? Geet there is no time that you left these eyes, there is no time that you left my thoughts, there is no time that you left my life, I have been thinking of you all these days Geet, I miss you Geet, I can't live without you, I love you Geet, I love you

Geet runs and hugs him tight...

She expresses her love in her action like MSK for a change...

She begins kissing him endlessly...

Maan too reciprocates...

Maan: Geet, ab toh kuch kaho

Maan expects " I love you" from Geet...

But Geet doesn't say that...but she has to break her viradh to say something else that she has been waiting to tell Maan...she was yearning to meet him just to say this...

She knew this was her last chance to save her love but thanks to babaji she got her love back...

Maan: Geet, just say it Geet, I can't wait to hear it from you

Geet: I'm pregnant

Maan: what?

Geet: aap galat ho Mr.MSK, abhi dusra MSK paitha hone wala hai, aane do usse. Phir dekthi hoon ki aap mujhe chodke kaise jaathe?

Maan: mein tumme chodke gaya tha?

Geet: haan, koi kissi se itna pyaar karthe hue bhi kaise itna dhoor reh saktha?

Maan: jaise koi itna pyaar karthe hue bhi itna dhoor jaa saktha

Geet: ab mein dekhthi hoon ki kaun kisse dhoor jaatha

Geet locks him in his arms and Maan doesn't want to release from that lock, he wants to be locked within his Geet's arms for a lifetime...

Maan lifts Geet and takes her out for a long walk...

They don't want to go out of this place forever...Maneet are made for each other...haina?

Happy GHSP anniversary..



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Unchuhi parinita (A untouched Married women )


Savitri devi lost in thought ,maan dev and geet so much friendship from childhood ,dev to thoda selfish tha hi pehale se ,pata nahi geet ko kiase acha laga ,muje to laga tha geet mere maan se pyyar karegi ...uff ye zindgi bhi pata nahi kya dikha de ...but I angry on dev bhala shadi ke next day koi apni wife ko chod jata hai kya n from last six month bas excuse deta hai bolta rahata hai next month next month , geet ko lake jane ka ... no I am now fed up maan ko bol deti hu three ticket book karne ke liye ...hum aur maan chod aa jayenge geet ko ..hu that's good yahi thik hoga.

Other room a girl hazel eyes very beautiful age 22 so much beautiful ,feel like a god take more time to make her... But a pain in her eyes that's make sad anyone ...waise bhi pain to dikhega hi na , jab uska apna hi apna raha nahi ,ya fhir wo kabhi uska apna tha hi nahi ... Wo to ek bhoolava tha illustration usne apni bachapn ki attraction ko pyyar ka naam de diya ... par wo to pyyar to kisi aur se karata hai ,tabhi SR ke din hi usne muje bol diya ,He married to me because of dadi ma else Dev ko mere se shadi hi nahi karni thi ...a tear escape from her eye...she so much want to rewind time ,and take good decision for her life attraction and pyyar main farak kar pati ...abhi wo without soul mate ,partner ,married life ji rahi thi with hiding truth of her married like a kawari married women ...jiske spane ,desire ,love sab kuch wiasa hi reha gaya unchuva sa ...untouchable ...

A man good looking , age 26 walking froth n back with so much thoughts ...anger frustration ,helpless looking on his face ...he look that soul in cage from last 6 month ...wo yaha aane se pehale hi shadi taye ho gai thi and jab wo dev se pyyar karati boli to uski duniya hi jais thamb (froze )gai ku ki uski to zindgi thi geet ,jo ab uske hi bhai dev ki wife hai ... wife he smile sadly with word wife ,ek din ki dulhan ...usko ye sab pata hi nahi chalata agar usdin wo galati se geet n pinky ki argument nahi sunta ,uska so called bhai apni wife ko kisi aur ke liye shadi ke dusare din hi chod ke chala gaya ...n she here for dadi happiness because she don't want to hurt dadi ma ,dev apna khoon hoke bhi never once thought about dadi ma and other side ye GEET.

Yes that girl is Geet dev singh khurana and that man is MAAN singh khurana ...

Maan and geet have their room side by side ,just a wall in between their room ...every night he heard a shower voice around 12..its now daily routing he daily heard sound of shower daily now .in city like Shimla...shower at 12...he very well know why geet need this late night shower ...because she fighting with body desire ...a 22 age girl have her own desire, need ..but she sacrificed all her need ,desire ,life for dadi ...but body to uski mind ki nahi sun rahi hai so she choose this way ... thodi der ke liye hi sahi apni desire ko shant karne ka mind ko distract karne ka aasan rasta ,he very well know she never thought for move on this marriage tag always cage her.

Ku wo aisi hai ku cahli gai nahi ,why she facing so much aloneness and all this from last 6 month ...why she always pretend that all is well in her life why ...why she is not move on with other one why ...

Its more than half hour shower running in her room ...at last maan lost his patience's ...and he went to her room ,he knock on door slowly he don't want to disturbed dadi this late night ...he knock three four time than ,her voice come, wait I am coming ...maan took long breath to control his all anger ...frustration ect.

Geet open door of her room and maan march inside ,she drying her hair with towel ..she is looking like fresh like flower but her eyes sadness ,aloneness ...that pain hurt maan ,because behind this sadness his so called brother ...is liable

Maan once look to her and say itni late shower ...

Geet give a smile which don't reach to her eyes ...she mummer softly bas aise hi ...

Maan - ha night main shower give refreshment to our body ,achi adat hai but this late night in Shimla ,bimar pad javogi na geet ...need nahi aati kya geet

Geet get surprises with maan qus ,last six month everything change in their life thou they r childhood friend but this marriage build a unseen wall between them . She took deep breath, and answer yes thodi der ho gayi ajj ..wo dev ka phone aaya tha na so pata nahi chala time ka ...bahot sari baate ki humne so ...its get late geet went to window ,side andturn her back to maan so he cannot see her face ,her emotions her pain she having fear may be he will read her emotions.

Maan turn his finger in tight punch ...but he control himself - and say wow oh that's good so ...when he is coming back to took u with him...pata nahi tumare bina wo kaise ji raha hai geet if I am on his place I never ...maan ask with cold voice ...

Geet fumble with maan direct question ,she try to give ans , but her confidence ,start to give up. she look here and there ...and start to play with her dupata in nervousness ,yes she have this habit from childhood itself.

Maan ask ...geet why u r so much nervous in this simple qus ...tale me when he coming back

Geet reply in mick voice wo wo he coming in next month ...

Maan not really get frustrated with geet continues lie he say , Wow geet ,he clap on her ans ,that make turn geet and look to him and her eyes met with two angry eyes ,which r all ready to drag a fire ...

Geet scare with maan hard face n she miss her heartbeat ...

Maan further say u have so much change ,so much changed jisko smiple zhoot bona nahi aata tha I have to say geet ,kitna acha zhoot bol lati ho tum ,wow muje bhi sikha do na aisa zhoot bolna

Geet - tore her gaze from maan eyes and look down and mummer ,I am saying true ,zhoot nahi bol rahi hu main ...

And that make lost maan self control ...he bearing all her fake ...zhoot from last 6 month ...in one hope that one day she share her pain with him ,as a friend but today he lost that hope ...he march to geet and push her on near by wall ...

He so much near to her ,his hot breath falling on her face ...she get so shocked with sudden reaction of maan ,He never act like this ...never ever he try to touch her physically than why today she mummer maan please ...she feel something odd with maan touch it's not her childhood friend touch ... in marriage day itself they both meet after 6 year , because maan went abroad for his study . She feel like her skin burning with his mainly touch ...she feel Goosebumps on her body ,she shake with body reaction .She get scare for while did her body need get so bold day by day ...her desire ,need ,loneliness ... that's why maan touch ...give so many reaction in her body.

Now she really get scare with body reaction and try to come out from maan grip ,but he almost cage her with help of his hands ...his one hand on wall and other hand holding her one hand ...a tear escape from her eyes ...which make more hurt to maan

He say in frustration stop it geet stop it to being A god as dil ...stop it ...,geet try to make escape and mummer ,what r u saying maan I don't get it.

He say in frustration u know very well geet what I am trying to say u ...Apni zhooti duniya se bhar niklo ...dadi ma ko main smabhal lunga geet she is strong women ,unko halat ko smabhalna ache se aata hai geet bus tum ek baar unse bol ke to dekho and please ,bas tum ye ghoot ghoot ke jina band karo ,move on geet wo wapas nahi ane wala hai ...he is goan

Geet look to maan with shock ...but her heart denies that ,he know about dev ...she again ask ,what r u saying maan ,muje sach main samje nahi aa raha ...

Maan get angry with her reply he loses his grip on her hand and punch hard on nearby wall ...geet closed her eyes in horror ,but next second ...a thought is he get hurt ? make open her eyes and she try to look to maan hand , she try to hold ...but maan is not ready to show her..

Geet - maan show me your hand ,what r u doing ,let me see ,khoon aa raha hoga ...let me see ,but maan is not ready to show her ...

Geet say with hard tone ,what r u doing maan ,please show me ...why u hiding your injury ,pain from me ...ye nashur ban jaayegi

Maan - meri injuri to fresh hai itni jaldi nashur nahi banegi ... tumari injury ,tumara pain ka kya jo tum pitchle 6 month se sabse chupati ghoom rahi ho maan ask her with hurt tone ...

A land escape from geet feet ...she don't want her injury get open like this in front of him ,she know pure world ke liye wo ruthless MSK hoga but her friend ,maan is so much sensitive and soft hearted ...tear gather in both soul ...both r fighting to each other's injury pain.

I am sorry maan ,a soft cry escape from geet mouth ,she closed her mouth to stop her cry ...a pain ,frustration sadness ,cry of last 6 month ,it's all gated open with maan word ...

Maan- kya ye marriage ne humari friendship bhi badal di kya ...geet . maan ask with hurt tone ,he really hurt with geet hiding truth from him...

Geet took deep breath and say I will give answer of every question bas ek baar muje tumara haat dekhne do please ..she make him sit on bed and took his hand ...its bleeding she run to take first aid and come near maan and clean his wound and put medicine on it .

Geet - kya karte ho anger main ...kitni chot lag gai ...

Maan - jo chot tume mere heart pe di hai uska kya geet

Geet - I m sorry maan ,main tum dono ko duhk nahi dena chaati thi ,ye mere galat faisala tha jo main friendship and love main difference nahi kar saki ...it's my bad decision and I don't want to u all suffer because of me specially dadima

Fhir meri family ,u know na how they think about marriage and daughter ,they will not accept this all maan ...few more tear fall from .geet eyes ...i try so many time to share with u but every time I fail maan I fail...

Maan - geet why u not once share with me ,last 6 month se apni life ko ku hell bana liya geet ku ...why maan hold her hand in his hands and say softly why u sacrificing your life like this ,why u r chose this pain geet .. Geet ek .humsafer jarrori hota hai life main jo humara sath de, jo humara pain ,sadness ,happiness har kuch share kare geet ...

Geet - nahi maan I can live like this ...i don't need anyone ,she say with bitterness.

Maan - maan make her look to his eyes and ask and what about your physical need geet ...

Geet eyes winded in shock ...she look to other side ...i can control that she say meekly

Maan - how geet how with late night shower ,shower of hour and hour ...geet

Geet clutch bedsit ...her every wound getting naked before maan ,which she don't want ...fresh tear fall from her eyes because of pain and agony ... she feel like run away from maan his every question making her so much frustrated and so weak she don't want to make weak in front of him she mummer u don't have right to ask this qus maan

A friend can ask any question ,friendship usko har ek right de deti hai geet ...maan say in hard tone.

Geet no maan ,no u don't have any rights maan please I am not only your friend but , I am your bhabhi also so ...n dever don't have this right she getting frustrated with maan talk now

Maan - konsi bhabhi ,kaisi bhabhi geet u r just geet for me ...jab dev se rishta hi zhoota hai to baki konse rishte sach ho sakte hai geet ...till today did I once call u Bhabhi geet ...theek se yaad karo ...

Geet lost in thought with maan talk yes he never called her bhabhi once how she not think about it ...she give him a qus look ...her heart start to run like marathon she try to search in maan eyes ,she is praying to babaji no ,aisa nahi hona chiye ...and she missed her heartbeat

She first time relished maan emotions for her ,his eyes full of ...she gulp hard and mummer nahi ,nahi ye paap hai ...main tumari babhi hu , maan she cried in helplessness ,hurt and pain.

..Maan harshly pull her to himself and say in hard tone ,zhoote rishte mat banvo geet ..and don't give name paap to my feeling ...ye feeling bachapan se mere sath hai ...tumare liye samji tum... maan say in hard tone a loud gasp come from her mouth ...she cover her mouth with her palm it's so much for her . Maan feel bad for her, he know its big shock for her .geet lost in thoughts how she miss his emotions uske best friend ki emotions. She so much in herself ,first her feeling for dev ,than marriage with dev and last dev bitterness ...in all she ignore her friend like this ...

Geet full body shaking with cry ,so much emotions running in her mind .How could she miss maan emotion's ,kya dev ke sath sach main love tha ya fhir just attraction ,why she don't feel with dev touch ,as today she feel with maan touch ...she so must lost in her cry and thought

Other side maan cannot see her cry like this he hold her palm and took that aside ...maan make move and kiss geet forehead ,when maan M shape touch geet forehead geet once look to maan ,again her mind and body respond to maan touch in same way ,she get confused with her own thoughts and reaction of her mind and body ...is she really love dev or not ,this question start to come in her mind again and again other side maan look to geet confused face ,he very well know now she is fighting with her own feeling .

She is traditional girl and a married tag stopping her to open herself ..today she feel like her all world turning upside downside , she never shake on that day also when dev leave her like that ...next day of her marriage

Next moment maan plant kiss on eyes and geet clutch her dupatta in nervousness ..her mind and heart still fighting with her ..

Maan took deep breath ,she still not accepting him ...he make some distance and say in hard tone

Geet ku smajh nahi rahi ho meri feeling ko ,khud ke feeling ek baar souch lo why u reacting like this on my small touch also ,ye kya hai geet ...ek baar apni ankhe band karke dekh lo geet shayad tumko jawab mil jaye ...thodi der ke liye ye marriage bhool javo geet ...

Geet

closed her eyes and she remind her marriage ,dev went away and two eyes full of love ,love for her ,unconditional love for her ,she want to look whose eyes this ,than she saw beautiful M shape lips ...she open her eyes with a loud gasp ...she once look to maan and went near window her heart running in fast speed ,her breath become heavy ...ye itni shant dikhne wali raat (night ) ne pata nahi kitna bada tuffan laya tha uske ...thmae hui life manin ruki hui zindgi main ... her mind and heart playing with her

She closed her eyes when she found maan so much near to her ..yet he take care not the touch their body ..but his breath falling on her neck and shoulder which r making her so weak ,this man making her so weak so helpless with his effect ...its like he doing some kind of jadu on her ...that her heart not heard her own mind thought

Maan put his palm on geet palm...geet bhene do muje bhi khud ko bhi ye pal ke sath ,trust me u r not going to regret it geet ,maan say huskily in geet ear

geet feel like so many butterfly playing in her tummy ...but her mind not ready to accept this ...for her mind its crime,her family come in mind and with fear she said out ,please maan ye sirf attraction hai aur kuch nahi ...

Now maan turn her to his side and say last 10 salo se mere feeling attraction hai GEET ...he ask with painful tone ,and his eyes reflecting that pain which geet words give to his heart . She get it that in frustration she hurt maan feelings. She mummer sorry ,I don't want to hurt u maan but this all so much for me to face it ,I am confused maan ...

Maan get that she is getting trouble with all event , yup he is loving her from last 10 year but,she is facing this from last 2 hour only last two hour so big tuffan come in her life ...but he know he don't get second chance ...for this .

Maan cup geet face and mummer dil ki suno geet mind ke nahi ...dil kabhi dhoka nahi dega geet ...abhi sirf humare dil ki khamoshiyo ko sunne ki koshish karo jo words se bhi jada kaam kar jaayegi jada bol jaayegi ...geet with that he place his lips to geet cheek ,he don't want to hurt her in any sense ...bas usko uske dil se milvana chahata tha so she relies who is her love ,soul mate .

Geet open her mouth to say smoothing but maan put finger on her lips ...and blow air on geet eyes ...her whole body shaken with maan act ...She clutches her own top in reaction.

chup tum raho chup ham rahen

khamoshi ko khamoshi se zindagi ko zindagi se baat karne do

chup tum raho ...

kuch mat bolo geet ajj soul ko soul se baat karne do ,maan mummer huskily in geet ear .

aankhon mein kho jaaye aankhen bole haathon se haath

baahon mein chupkar saanson se jaise dole raat

ungaliyo ko ungaliyo se mausamon ko shokhiyon se baat karne do

and with that geet look to maan ...both eyes meet with each other ,geet get that its not lust or anything its pure love for her ,how she miss this gold and run behind dev ...jo ye shadi rok sakata tha ,before marriage he can say all things but he act like cowered ...

other side maan who all know that today his approach make their life hell by society and all but he is all ready to face it ,he never hurt her ,for her he hide his love ,his feeling ...just than maan palm touch geet palm he took her one palm and put that on his heart and with other hand he hold her other hand ...that beats of his heartbeat ...Saying how much this man loves her ...

chup tum raho chup ham rahen

khamoshi ko khamoshi se zindagi ko zindagi se baat karne do

chup tum raho ...

geet she so much lost in maan heartbeats she don't get when her hand reach to maan cheek and her finger start to make out line on maan eyes ,nose ,cheek and finally on maan M shape lips ...geet soft touch make alive maan who is died with news of geet marriageand today with geet touch he feel like he get another chance to live a life ...

honthon par honthon se likhe bin shabdon ke geet

dharati se ambar tak guunje jismon kaa sangeet

bekhudi ko bekhudi se aashiqui ko aashiqui se baat karne do

chup tum raho ...

geet - in soft voice how much love u hide in yourself maan ,itni badi saza ku di apne app ko ,ku nahi pehale bola ye sab kuch maan ...shaayed main bhi apni zindgi ki itni badi galati nahi kar jati na maan few tears gather in both eyes ...

chup tum raho chup ham rahen

khamoshi ko khamoshi se zindagi ko zindagi se baat karne do

chup tum raho ...

.with geet word maan get happy that she start to think for their relation...

Maan say her with loveful voice abhi bhi der nahi hui hai geet ...apni dil ki awaz suno ajj geet ...

With maan word geet tiptop on her feet come to maan face level and place a small kiss near maan M shape lips...geet action come answer brought big smile on maan face same time morning suns first light place on maaneet who r in each other arm ...in a tight hug .

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seeing this note many get confused because celebration data is not completed to yet... ya i know about this

we post works after some thank you notes so just chill and see all posts please

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