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Posted: 9 years ago


thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: peg_pionne

Great update i love the father son duo 👏



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Part 1

Awesome update
Nicely written



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10

nice update Sriya

anshu's antics r cute...
loved raman-anshu bonding...
plz reveal raman's past in short...
nd write ishra-anshu scenes more...
update soon...



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: detha

excellent update dear

anshu is really cute
raman is really dutiful father

thanks for pm
please update soon




thanks dear
will update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
as suggested by you all i am going to write past in short but in bits hope you like this idea
iam here with another update,please do comment which will encourage me to write more
thanks friends for your continuous support

part-2B:



in the car:
raman:why are you so silent speak something acha first tell me your name
anjali:is this a way to ask my name
raman:oh my god you are seriously iam being friendly with you
anjali:but we dont know each other then how we can be friends
raman:ok then let introduce each other,'iam raman'
anjali:iam anjali
raman:so sweet
anjali:what
raman:you and your name
anjali:you are really a flirt she said chuckling at his antics
raman:yeah i know iam
anjali:will you stop the car we reached my company
raman:looks on at her while she getting down from the car
'anjali when we are going to meet again'
anjali:again when the rickshaw gets repaired
raman:comes out from the shock after anjali left the place,this girl see at any cost i will make you fall in love with me
listening to the ring of his mobile he attends the call 'ha papa boliye'
mr.bhalla:where are you?
raman:i just dropped a girl at her office
mr.bhalla:you stupid then when you will go to ofc
raman hitting his forehead speaks to his father 'sorry papa could you please again tell the company name,i just forgot'
mr.bhalla:he gets shocked understanding raman's careless nature,'raman how can you be this careless,how could someone can forget the name of the company
they will be going to work'
raman:sorry papa,first tell me the company name
mr.bhalla:ARR company you got that go and meet my friend raghu ram he is the MD of the company
raman:ARR? he thinks for a while listening to the familiar name,raising his head he looks at the name of the company nicely carved as ARR
jumping out from the car he speaks to his father 'papa you are so sweet thank you so much,i really love you papa,without waiting for his father response he cuts the call
...
raman chuckles remembering his meeting with anjali while anshu looks at his papa smiling face
anshu:papa he sulks seeing his father not caring about him
raman:kissing his son he gets back to his car to drove to his office
...
in the office
all the employees waves their hand to anshu happily
while anshu claps seeing their attention as usual
in raman's cabin:
mihir walks into raman's cabin to see asusual raman playing with anshu in the big couch
'raman we have a meeting in 30mins'
raman:ok did nanny came to office
mihir:she is on the way raman
raman:ok let me go through the project file for once
mihir:raman why wont you listen to anyone 'anshu needs a mother and you need a wife raman'
raman:please mihir not now,i listened much from my maa in the morning again you dont repeat it
mihir:come in the time iam going to conference room
raman:ok
asking the nanny who was 40years old to take care of anshu raman walks into conference room for the meeting
...
in the evening:
he was infront of famous child specialist hospital with anshu
he enters into the doctor cum friend mihika's cabin
mihika:hoo raman atlast you came just now iam thinking to call again
raman:sorry meeting had been prolonged
mihika:taking anshu into her arms 'hey hello my boyfriend how are you'
anshu:mika he exclaims seeing her
mihika gets miffed listening the pronounciation of her name,'anshu its mihika not mika'
anshu:haa mika
mihika:OMG you wont change
anshu:kisses her cheek to make her cool
mihika:you are like your papa,flirt
both raman and anshu smiles at her puppy face
mihika takes anshu along with her for tests
...
raman was sitting infront of mihika with anshu in his lap
'now what is anshu's condition?'
mihika:raman anshu is fine but not completely,you have to be very careful
he is very sensitive,he is still unable to cop up the thing that he was not living with his mother
fits in such a little age is not good,be always with anshu and make sure he is happy
raman eyes are filled with tears listening to mihika's words
while all mihika could do his walking to them she cries along with raman hugging the both
parting away from them mihika composes herself
raman:i cant do this no more mihika it is taking toll on me seeing anshu in this situation
mihika:raman,dont take me wrong bring a mother for anshu,how much you try but still anshu will feel the absence of his mother
raman:i ...i caaant forget anjali mihika he speaks controlling his tears
mihika:i dont know what to say more to you,i too dont like to see some other in the place of my friend,but think about anshu
raman:dont worry i will with anshu all the time
and one more thing mihika i have to go chennai as a new project is going to be started there
mihika:for how many days?
raman:may be a week
mihika:then take anshu with you,he cant stay without you even for an hour
raman:ok,but still anshu is unable to speak properly
mihika:raman it takes time,after anjali's absence in his life he didnt spoken at all but now he is speaking almost like the children
of his age,he is just 3,dont worry so much
raman:ok then iam getting late,tomorrow early morning i will be leaving to chennai
mihika:she kisses anshu's cheek and bids a bye to both
...
in chennai:
appa:vandu how the all arrangements are going it was only 2days left for ishu's marriage
vandu:appa dont worry everything was going well
...
in ishu's room:
amma was patting ishu who was sleeping in her amma's lap,'amma what is this,i dont want to marry now,but why appa forcing me into this marriage'
'ishu subbu is good person,he likes you very much,because of him his mother accepting less amount of dowry'
ishu:but why we should give dowry amma,it is not legal you know we can file a case on them
amma sternly speaks to ishitha listening to her words,'ishu after 2days its your marriage and here you are talking about arresting
your fiance'
ishu:i dont like him amma,i want to complete my studies first,i dont know how appa arranged money for my marriage
amma:some friend his helping him
ishu:will subbu help me to complete my dentistry
amma:ishu you know about his mother right,she wont allow you to complete your studies further,with your love subbu might help you to continue your studies
ishu:i dont know amma why appa all of sudden fixed this marriage
amma:i dont know ishu,everything happened in just 2days now after 2days your marriage will be done
ishu:amma i dont want to go leaving you
amma:ishu aisa math bolo,she wipes her daughter tears


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Posted: 9 years ago
part-3

iam not prolonging marraige rituals

after 2days:
continuation with prologue:(read prologue if needed😛)
all the guests left the mandap
appa:walks into the room provided in the mandap after raman leaving with anshu
while the family members are worried about appa and ishu
ishu runs to her room with tears rushing out of her eyes
amma knocks the door of the room in which appa was present 'vishwa what are you doing inside please open the door,iam getting worried seeing you like this'
vishwa:madhu please leave me alone for sometime go and check on ishitha iam fine
amma vandu and bala walks towards ishitha's room
...
in the car raman was settled in the back seat with anshu in his arms,'ishitha's face was flashing infront of his eyes while anshu was crying continuously'
his attention turned towards anshu who was not at all stopping his tears ,'anshu beta why are you crying'
anshu:papa mujje mamma chahiye,please mujje mumma ke paas lejavo he speaks in stammered words
'anshu she is not ur mamma beta,please dont cry,if you cry papa will also cry'
none of raman's words didnt worked with anshu,soon his breathing became heavy,next moment anshu was collapsed in raman arms with fits
making raman to burst out with tears seeing his sons state within minutes anshu was rushed to hospital he dialed to mihika to inform about anshu as she was the one who knows well about anshu case
mihika:raman dont get tensed why sudden fits iam calling you daily in these 2days after you left to chennai
raman:mihika i cant explain to you now,just talk to the doctor and help her to treat anshu without waiting a sec he thrashes his mobile into the doctor's hand
after speaking to mihika doctor assures raman that anshu will be okay
after 30mins:
raman walks into anshu's ward to see him sleeping
while doctor comes to check on anshu
raman:doctor is anshu ok?
DR:mr.bhalla,i spoken to Dr.mihika who clearly knows anshu condition and according to info i got from Dr.mihika,anshu was suffered with fits when he was 2years old and mihika said that the little kid who was unable to cop up with his mother's absence became very sensitive
raman:yes
Dr.after that your presence with him for 24hrs made him normal
raman:yes
Dr.then why all of sudden anshu was attacked with fits again
raman:he saw a woman today who was looking similar to his mother
Dr:what ?she aks shockingly
raman:yes she looks similar to my wife
Dr.mr.bhalla now anshu's life was complicated i dont know the woman was your wife or not,but the life of anshu was with her
raman:doctor what you are saying,just now you said he is ok
mr.bhalla:but you are unable to understand the point the kid saw his mother whom he didnt seen in an year,so he will sure crave for his mother
do something to save your kid from this trauma
she leaves the ward while raman falls apart dejectedly
...
amma and vandu was trying to console ishu who was crying vigorously
ishu(st):why appa took such a drastic step of to sale his land for my marriage when the person whom i was about to get marry was not at all worthy
because of me appa got humiliated infront of everyone
and that little kid who is he,why his tears bothered me when i myself was in pool of sorrow,why my pain didnt mattered to me infront of that little kid
her chain of thoughts and tears are halted wiht her mothers sobbing
'amma please dont worry about me iam fine,indeed iam very happy that i didnt got married to such a person who was materialistic
all my worry was for appa,he was humiliated because of me' ishitha cries in her amma's embrace
...
in appa's room:
he looks at anjali passport photo which he kept in his wallet,i love you my dear,forgive me i really did very wrong with you
i can see how your absence created havoc in raman and anshu's life,what can i do so that i can overcome with the guilt for you and help your raman and anshu
please show me a way to fulfill my responsibility towards you
...
at night 7:00
anshu wakes up from his sleep
raman:rushed towards anshu seeing him awake,he hugs his son close to his heart with the fear that he may he loss him too
anshu:remembering his mothers starts again crying making raman to get tensed reminding doctor words he cups anshu face with so much love
'papa mujje mumma chahiye please'
raman:anshu first you should not cry,you are a good boy right?
anshu:papa mamma he speaks controlling his sobs
raman:hugs his son unable to see how fragile his son was became again
'i will take to mumma only if you dont cry'
anshu:coming out of his embrace nods his head agreeing to his father,while raman wipes his son's tears and showers numerous kisses on his face
'pappa chelo mamma ke paas'
raman:carries anshu in his arms worrying how to reach a woman to help him
dialing to subbu's father raman gets the address of ishitha
...
at ishitha home
appa was in his room dejectedly while ishu was trying to console herself in her room
amma vandu,bala and shravan are in the guest room sitting sadly thinking about the both and the happenings of the day
hearing the ringing of the bell amma walks to open the door
she looks blankly at the unknown guests infront of her house whom she saw at the mandap in an unclear view
'aap koun hi'
raman:namasthe mera naam raman hi aur yeh mera beta anshu
anshu smiles looking at amma
while amma smiles unknowing to herself at the little kid
amma:aap pehle andar aajavo she invites raman humbly,'you came to attend my marriage daughter in the morning right?'
raman:haa jee
anshu:papa bulavo naa mamma ko
meantime vandu bala comes to the guest room along with shravan
amma looks confusing at raman listening to anshu's words
raman:if you dont mind can you call your second daughter ishitha out for once
amma and vandu looks at each other
raman:trust me iam not harmful
amma:vandu go and call ishu
listening to her akka asking her to come out once ishu walks with tear striken face still in the marriage saree she walks out
amma:ishu come here she asks ishitha who was standing outside her room
ishitha walks out to see the little kid smiling widely seeing her and the man whom she doesnt know staring at her
anshu seeing ishitha immediately jumps out of raman's arms and rushes to ishitha
he pulls her pallu to get her attention 'mamma'
listening to the unknown voices appa walks out to see raman and anshu in his home
he gets tensed seeing raman,thinking raman might have know the secret of his life which may destroy his happy family
everyone looks at anshu while ishu looks at anshu
she immediately lifts anshu into his arms while anshu kisses her cheek happily and rests his chin on her shoulder wrapping his little hands around her neck
she gets overwhelmed with the love showered by the little kid
vandu:turning to raman "excuse me what is this,is he ur son,he even came to ishu in the mandap what is the problem with you both
before raman could angrily react to her words appa shouts at vandu "vandu could you please just shut up your mouth is this the way to talk to someone"
vandu:remains silent seeing her appa's anger for the first time while ramna looks surprisingly at appa
raman:he turns towards ishu 'could you please take anshu along with you into your room for sometime'
ishu:agrees to raman unknowingly and walks into her room surprising everyone


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Posted: 9 years ago
nice story. ishita is also attached to anshu. thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Both Parts Are Amazing
Update Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it ..
Poor anshu...
Anjali will be appa daughter...
Raman will ask ishu hand??
Update asap dear

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