Hi friends thanks for your good response,iam adding a prologue now which will more than 50% reveals the story,this concept i took from my old story 'my life starting with an unknown person'
so my old readers will easily get the story line which is bit different
please let me know if you feel the story line or the story is not good or offending,so that i can stop this story here itself😊
ignore typing mistakes😛
prologue:
in chennai:
"ishitha weds subramanyam"
everyone in the mandap running here and there to make sure everything was going well
bridegroom was sitting waiting for the bride to come out from the dressing room
everyone in the mandap were happy and chatting with eachother
the only person in the mandap who was very much tensed was vishwanath iyer
bala:was standing at the entrance welcoming the guests and greeting them while vandu and her amma helping ishitha to get ready
shravan was giving a nice company to his chitti who was getting ready to get married with in an hour
seeing his brother's boss 'Raman kumar bhalla' who is head of one of the branch of his companies he greats him pleasantly
'Nice to see you sir,when my brother said you will be coming to attend the funtion definitely i didnt believe him as you will be very busy with all your business,but still you made time to attend my brothers
raman:giving his million dollar smile he patted bala's shoulder,'to be say frankly i wouldnt had come to attend the marriage if i was not in chennai
but being in chennai it is my minimum gratitude to attend the marriage as my employees are the building blocks of our companies
its not a big thing
bala:its your simplicity sir,please take a seat he welcomed inside the mandap and stood there until raman took a seat
appa in the call at the corner of a mandap:hello murthy did you arranged the money
murthy:vishwa the land dealer is a frod he ran away with your land documents
vishwa:his feet stumbled listening to his friend words,he was sweating profusely while his heart beating rate increased rapidly with tension
sensing something is wrong with vishwa vandu who came in search of her father to call him as rituals are about to start
rushed to her father,'appa what happened'
appa:vandu that man to whom i sold the land he ran away without giving money now your mother in law wont allow subbu to marry
ishitha
vandu:was shocked to listen the shocking news,'ayyo appa now what we will do'
appa:i...iam i dont know vandu he stuttered
vandu:ok appa dont get panic subbu likes ishitha,he will convince his mother in law you first come to mandap
both walked towards mandap
raman:he was attending his business calls at the same time observing the tamil brahmin's marriage rituals
just then his son's nanny walked into the mandap as anshu was hell bent to go to his father,finding raman sitting in the front row
nanny reached to him
anshu:papa...papa he speaks sobbing in a low voice
while raman immediately turned his gaze towards his son listening to his voice
glaring at the nanny who was unable to handle anshu he takes his son into his arms,'haa anshu my baby why are you crying'
anshu who had just learned speaking eventhough his words were unclear raman being a father understands what his son trying to say
anshu:neendh papa,neendh
raman:pulling anshu from his lap he helps anshu to place his head on his shoulder,along patting his back trying to make his son to make asleep again
raman was very busy that he didnt noticed ishitha who came into the hall wearing yellow kanchivaram saree combinated with marron border matching with simple jewellery
she took her seat beside subbu while appa was very tensed about vandu's mother in law
when appa was seated with amma to wash subbu's legs which is one of their custom
subbu's mother who was waiting for money stopped appa as she lost her patience in waiting
while ishu and everyone looks at her shockingly
subbu's mom: iyer please give 5lakhs which you agreed to give before marriage and then continue the rituals
appa and amma gets up from there places while bala and his father tried to sush his mother which went in vain
appa:please let us talk after the marriage i will surely give you the money which i agreed
subbu's mom:shouts loudly making everyone's attention towards the mandap
ishu:gets up from her place with tearful eyes,as she was unable to understand what is going on
raman:who was busy in making his son to sleep shifted his gaze listening to the commotion
the only person he looked when he shifted his gaze was ishitha,his hand which he is using to pat his son was stopped with shock
the only word that left from his mouth was anjali
he went to flashback where his anjali died in a road accident in his arms
he was the one who did her death cermony,he was sure that anjali was died one year ago,but he was unable to believe that the person who was standing before is not anjali and some other person
...
appa:please listen to me,the person who has to give money to me,he ran away i will arrange the money in one month
subbu's mom:do you think iam a fool to believe in you,i know your status still i allowed my bala to marry your elder daughter because of his happiness
but i cant do the same with my second son,iam not a fool to see my second son to struggle for more earning to help you like my elder son
subbu's mom pulls subbu's hand to get up while he stands up unable to digest the thing that his marriage was about to call off
'amma please appa is saying naa he will arrange '
subbu's mom:subbu i know you were enchanted with this girl beauty i promise you i will bring more beautiful woman who has lots of money and status,if you marry her you should struggle life long to fulfill her needs
she even didnt completed a degree to earn sufficient money
subbu who allowed his mother's words to sink into his brain changed his mind and decided to call of
appa or amma beggings didnt changed the mother and son mindset
ishitha was a mere spectator all this time
anshu who was sleeping got disturbed by the screams,sensing no touch from his father he turned his face towards the mandap where his father was staring
he looked at ishitha who was in tears and identified his mother features in her,thinking that she is his mother,he escaped his father arms who still didnt came out
of the shock and rushed to ishitha which made raman to come out of the shock
anshu:hugged ishitha's legs tightly crying aloud calling her 'mamma mamma mammma...'
ishitha came out of her trance sensing a tight grip on her pleats and around her legs looked down to see a 3year old anshu crying calling her out as mamma
amma appa and all looked at ishitha and the 3years child in shock
raman:after finally realising she is not his anjali got up from his seat and walked out calling his son's name
'anshu anshu'
appa and other turned his gaze towards raman while ishitha picked up the three year little kid into her arms unable to see him crying vigorously
anshu immediately wrapped his little arms around her neck helding her very tightly
ishitha never felt this love from anyone other than her parents and sister
appa:was stumbled seeing raman there he met with another shock he wiped his sweat hurriedly
raman:reached ishitha and pulled out anshu from her embrace making anshu to cry more
muttering a sorry to ishitha he got down from the mandap to go back to his mansion
while appa cried inside seeing both his grandson crying for a mother and ishitha's broken marriage
please let me know your opinion about the story,its a humble request😊
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