Originally posted by: ky2manan
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Mukti was talking about Nandini
Waiting for Manan meet
Update soon
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Originally posted by: ky2manan
Lovely update
Loved fab 5 navya bond
Mukti was talking about Nandini
Waiting for Manan meet
Update soon
Aise kaise path cross ni karenge?
They'll obviously do,
continue soon dear.
Originally posted by: Cooldude101
This story is pretty well written, the part which attracts me the most.
You see I'm a kind of Grammar Nazi. LOL
But your story is really amazing.
It was a new morning. A sunny Sunday morning!! Alot of equations were going to take a turn over, but the few people whose life was gonna change, were unaware about it and sleeping peacefully.
Nandini woke up early morning as her usual habit and went up to her balcony. As she opened the door, she was invited by the cool breeze which felt so serene, and also the shining sun rays which filled her heart with warmth. In a reflex, she closed her eyes to feel the ecstatic moment.
After enjoying the view from her balcony, and relishing a few memories of her friends, her family, and this house, the same house where she had spent most memorable 15 years of her life with her amma - appa and amms, she moved inside. She got ready and moved down to make the breakfast but before that she peeped into the Ryan's room and found him still sleeping. She sighed and then again got back to business of waking him up which was definitely not an easy one.
She was working in the kitchen and the cool breeze from the small window was tickling her on the face but she was enjoying it. Suddenly, she felt somebody's presence. She looked through the window and saw a guy standing beside a car outside her house and looking aimlessly at the building. He looked to be young almost of her age, with dark brown eyes, jet black hair and a perfectly maintained body. Seeing the car she could guess that he was a rich, wealthy man. She felt familiar with the face but was not able to guess who he actually was. Leaving her work, she moved towards the door.
As she opened it she saw the car zooming off. "Bad Luck!" She thought "But why was he here? In front of my house? What was he looking at? Did he get to know that I was coming to the door, so maybe he just ran away? I guess I know him. He felt so familiar. Aiyappa, so many questions and no clue at all. Uff!" and after cutting down her thinking session she again got back to her work.
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Manik: Morning guys!
Ab tum log bahar aa skte ho! Game over!
He said as soon as he got in his house.
Everyone came out of different corners of the lobby of Malhotra Mansion where they all were hiding and planning to wish Manik a pleasant, happy Morning!!
(isn't this what friends actually are for...to make your heart much lighter and fill your life with ecstacy)
Abhi: kya yaar humara har sunday - funday wala plan flop ho jata hai.
Cabir: yaar, kabhi jhuti tasalli ke liye hi sahi par thoda surprise ho jaya kar.
Manik: huh!! Really. Voh bhi tere liye. Never dude. Haan but agar meri GFs bole toh main soch sakta hoon.
Alya: really!!! Ok then we'll hide again and surprise you and you have to get surprised.
But she just received a slight slap on her forehead from Navya for her extra - intelligent ideas.
Manik: nah!! Aloo baby mood nhi hai.
But this time he received a slap from Navya.
Mukti: kya yaar Manu!! Tu bohot boring hai!
Manik: achha mujhe toh pata hi nhi tha, lady bheem!
Mukti: oye! Lady bheem kisko bola???
Full on angry mode was on.
Cabir: tujhe aur kisko...!!
He came forward and gave a high five to Manik.
While Navya and Alya both gave light slaps on Cabir's and Manik's arms and the other two boys just giggled.
Mukti: haawww sabne party badal li!!
Navya and Alya: nahi nahi!! Hum saath hai, jaan-e-mann!
Mukti: that's like mah girls!!
Navya: YO!!
She did her signature YO NAVYA!! gesture. Typical Madhubala!
Alya: these guys I tell you, useless! Completely useless!!
And all the other were gawking with a WTH is happening??!! look.
Cabir: yeh chal kya rha h??
Abhi: hum yahan kya krne aaye the aur kya ho rha h...
Dhruv: and why are you pushing me away baby?? Maine kya kiya? I never said a word.
Abhi: same here babydoll! ' tumhe lady bheem to yeh do gadhe bol rhe the, I swear not even for once did I call you lady bheem.!!
He said this with a 'oh! I am so innocent' look on his face while all others were watching him as if he's an alien! '
Just then Cabir stepped forward and examined his face carefully.
Cabir: Mukti, kya yeh tera hi boyfriend hai, who is too madly in love with you and he sweared he never said but he just did call you lady bheem!! Haawww! Tauba tauba. Main toh aisa kabhi bhi na karoon.
All this while, all others were rolling on the floor but except for 2. Mukti was just fuming in anger and Abhi made cute pouts and did sorry gestures to apologize to her and expected this could melt her heart but our lady bheem was in full mood now!
Mukti: tum charon (4) hi gadhe ho.!! Isliye...
She gestured something to Alya and Navya and..
Trio together: isliye...punishment time.!!!!!
All three just jumped with joy.
Other 4: ohh noo! Pllzz yaar! Nhi yaar! Noo don't do this baby plzz! Hum itna zulm handle nhi kar payenge plzz.
Their continuous rantinhs were just going on but this seemed to bring just no change in the girls' decision.
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And after few hours all seven of them were standing in front of the mall. THE MALL!
A holy, sacred place for the girls and not less than a nightmare for the boys.
Mukti: come on guys! What are you waiting for??
She spoke as she tuned back and saw all the 4 of them still rooted to their positions.
Alya: arre tum sab abhi bhi wahin khade ho arre come on.
Boys together: yes ma'am!
They gulped the lumps formed in their throats and moved forward for SHOPPING!
After few hours they all had shopped enough. Well to be precise, the girls had shopped enough and the boys had also done a good exercise of their muscles. '!!
They all were heading towards the food court when Manik's cell phone rang.
Mr. Mathews.
It showed. Due to the excessive noise in the food court, he excused himself and moved out while the others moved forward towards the food court.
They were chit chatting and walking when suddenly a girl while talking over the phone, collided with Mukti.
Both their bags fell down. Mukti bent down to pick her stuff while the girl too bent down to do the same all the while still over the phone. Once they had picked up their stuff, the girl turned towards Mukti to apologize but it felt as if her words got stuck in there.
Girl: M..Mu..Mukti!!
Listening to her name even Mukti looked towards the girl and...
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Lo ho gya khatam. I'm sorry to dissapoint all my lovely readers kyunki maine bola tha ki main face off jaldi doongi par abhi bhi picture baaki hai mere dost.!!! Waise..I know, you ppl are smart enough to guess who the girl is!!!😉😉
Seriously speaking toh mujhe manik n group wala peice likhne mein sabse zyada maza aata hai. Although I'm not much hilarious by nature, yeh sachi mera fav part hota hai bcoz this is the piece where I write utter shit. Aur main khud se hi impress ho jati hoon ki meri itni ajeeb thinking bhi ho sakti h. Par kya kare main aisi hi hoon. Total jhalli. And I love you guys because you chose this story as well as me in this avatar itself. Chalo bohot bol liya. But ab mujhe jaana hai. Agla update, jaldi doongi but plzz tab tak likes air comments dedo..!!!
Thankyou.
Love you.
Byeee.