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priya_pmlist

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Posted: 9 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: saiza
Its really nice ff.
But aap ek aur ff waqt badalte rishton ki dastan jaisa banao.

Matlab ek real life jaisi typical story.
Jis me geet ke 3 bachche real life me hone wale incident Jo har kisi ke saath hote hai.
But unko separate mat karna.
Aur appki baaki ff bhi bahut heart touching hai. Aur unke dialogue bhi dill par lagte hai.

I want to say you are a great writer.
Plz meri baat answer do ha.
Wahi ff ke baare me.

Continue soon.
Aur waqt ka bhi update jaldi dena.

is time kuch nhi kh sakti

waqt jaisa kuch aur ho paayenga ya nhi

ydi future meinkoi idea click hota hai

i try my best

thanks

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priya_pmlist

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Posted: 9 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: tanuoberai
Geet sing song maan feel guilty and geet see maan with another woman feeling sad for maaneet waiting for next

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Priya21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: Naboni

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Priya21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#584

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Priya21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#585

ZARA HATKE IMAGE 11

uff ho babaji maine inse kaha tha

ye bs meri aankho mein dekhke kuch kahe

aur ye hai ki

khud mein hi kho gye hai

Geet : maan

What you trying to find in my eyes

Maan : dust

Geet : what

Here am saying

Maan says omething romantic

And u idiot

Maan : geet

Tum yha kaam krne aati ho

Ya apne boss ke sath romance krne

Geet : kya karu sir

Mere pati ko toh ABC tk nhi aati romance mein

Toh socha

Boss ke sath hi shi

Maan : tumhe file lane ko bola tha

Tum ussi pe dhyan do

Geet : aap kahe toh

Mein aap pe bhi dhyan de sakti ho

Maan : geet

Tum kaam kro bs

Yhi kaafi hai

Geet : aur what about romance sir

Maan : ye kaam ka waqt hai

Geet : aur pyaar ka waqt kb hota hai

Ye bhi bta dijiye

Office mein kaam

Ghar pe kaam

She encircled her hand around his neck, pull him closer...

continue...

zara hatke image 11 on page 111

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Priya21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#586

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ZARA HATKE Image 9 on page 71

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Zara Hatke Image 10 on page 92

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nishamna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#587

After reading this part, I am very angry on maan. He has broken her badly. She wants to show her gathered but still there is her pain and love which is torturing her more. Karan proposed geet . maan saw this and punched karan so hard. Finally geet told maan what he did to her.she left with karan leaving maan in remorse.waiting for next dear

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tamannA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#588

awsemm karan confess maan anger geet outburst

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#589

Maan wants a chance now that he realizes Geet's worth
now he claims to love her , now he wants to be possessive about her
and he also tells Karan to stay away from his wife
but Geet tells Maan if he wants a chance she is ready to give him a chance only after she spends a night with Karan and automatically he slaps her because he cannot even think of her been with some else but Geet tells him that is exactly what he was doing so if he wants a chance to get back with her than he has to accept her conditions and like this I'm thinking that Maan is realizing every mistake every sin he did towards his wife and marriage