HUM HAIN DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE RM FF updated 12/05 COMPLETED page-89 - Page 35

Created

Last reply

Replies

642

Views

92.4k

Users

51

Likes

1.6k

Frequent Posters

srksimran thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zelja89

Awesome update, loved it 😊


Thank you😊
srksimran thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: parimaniya

Awesome update, loved it


Thanks friend😊
srksimran thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

lovely updt..!! Madhu asked rk & he answered her querries... Hehe.. Rk got the truth out of dips & was ready to throw her out too but madhu... I hv a feeling that this dipali would try sumthng nasty... Tnxxx fr pm... :)


wlcm buddy thanks for liking😊
ananya2010 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update, loved it.
Continue soon, shall be waiting for the next update.
Simran thanks for the PM dear.
RISHBALASS thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update.
Eagerly Waiting for more romantic scenes between rishbala.
Continue soon.
srksimran thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks a lot for your lovely comments...pls keep commenting as it encourages me 😊...and I wanted to clear out one thing about my RM SS HOLD MY HAND that Abhay and RK are look alike so I hope everybody's doubt is cleared now.😊


Part 25

But then RK's phone again beeped and they both opened their eyes and realised what they were upto and RK to avoid more embarrassment quickly snatched his phone from Madhu and said in nervousness

RK: I have to get up early or else I will get late for the shoot...Good night

And he tapped the lamp and lights were off...no one till now had made RK so nervous. It's not that he had encountered this situation with Madhu for the first time...but this time it was different...the feelings were mixed with guilt despair because he had broken the trust of Madhu but at the same time he wanted to be close to her he wanted to kiss those trembling pink lips...but he just couldn't as his guilt didn't allow him...On the other hand Madhu was lying there like a statue not even blinking her eyes and then she gulped in while realising what they were up to. RK rolled on the other side facing his back towards Madhu...and then he said in his mind

RK: What's wrong with you man...have you gone nuts...(but then he again remembered her juicy lips and then he shook his head trying to divert himself and he said) No RK don't...plus what if Madhu gets angry...everything is setting up in it's right place please don't ruin it with all this (but then he again started remembering her lips which were calling him for a kiss and this time he couldn't control and he said) f**k to what she thinks man

And he got up and in no time his lips were on hers at first she tried to push him away but the way he was kissing her with so much of passion she could have only melted in his arms and she did and soon she started responding to his kiss with equal passion...her hands slowly went up and caressed his face but he wanted to be more wild and took her hands and griped her fingers with his and pushed them against the pillow...he then kissed her red cheeks and he could feel how hot they were becoming because of blushing...and then he moved further to the jawline and her neck and then the neck line and then went more down but then suddenly Madhu said "RK" but he didn't listen and she again called out his name "RK" and he then realised that some one is shaking him and he came out of his trance and saw Madhu next to him

RK: Madhu?

Madhu: RK I called out your name 2 3 time and you didn't answer what were you thinking?

And he realised that it was all just a dream...yes a dream.

RK: N...nothing Madhu...forget it...why were you calling me?

Madhu: I can't sleep with lights off please switch on one light na.

And he took a brief sigh of sadness thinking that it was all a dream and not a reality...Madhu noticed this and asked him

Madhu: What happened RK?

RK: Nothing

Madhu: I know what are you thinking

RK looked at her in shock...as how come she came to know that what's running in his mind and he asked

RK: You know?

Madhu: Yes...you are thinking about Deepali right...I mean about what she did?

RK rolled up his eyes as he was least interested in this topic.

Madhu: RK I could have never thought that someone whom I have nothing to do with was planning to ruin my life.

RK was getting more and more irritated and finally he said.

RK: Madhu other than Deepali there are more important people in your life...why don't you concentrate on them.

Madhu: Oh yes you are right..I completely forget about Ma and Malik...actually so much has happened in these days that i couldn't even spent time with them properly...I think I should go and meet them tomorrow.

RK in his mind "Ahh great Ma and Malik...and what about me...am I still a devil to you...Arrrgghhh"

RK: Madhu I think we should sleep now it's quite late

He switched on the side lamp for Madhu and went to sleep...but she noticed his strange behaviour and got a little bit confused...but then getting least bothered she shrugged her shoulder and went to sleep.

********************************


Next morning


Bittuji came to the Mansion and Radhaji asked him to join for the breakfast. Both of them were sitting on the Dining table when Sikky joined them and after few minutes Madhu RK came downstairs. By not seeing Deepali with Sikky Radhaji asked him.

Radhaji: Sikky...where is Deepali...why she didn't come for the breakfast?

Sikky: Mummyji she is saying that she will eat afterwards.

By hearing this Madhu and RK looked at each other. They knew that why she didn't come for the breakfast. They joined them and soon finished their breakfast when Patil came with RK's lunch.

Patil: Ma'am Chief's lunch.(He said to Radhaji)

RK: No just take it back I won't be having lunch today.

And Patil did as he said and Madhu got confused and asked him

Madhu: but why RK?

RK: Actually Biwi Malvika is coming so we both will have lunch somewhere out.

Everyone didn't bother much about this but Madhu don't know why was again getting jealous on hearing this.

RK: Biwi you were saying na that you want to go at your Malik's house...come I'll drop you and will pick you up in the evening.

Madhu faked a smile.

Radhaji and Bittuji were delighted on seeing them talking as husband and wife...both of them looked at each other and showed a thumbs up with a wink.

Sikky saw this and asked RK

Sikky: So RK everything is fine now between you and Bhabhiji?

RK: Yes Sikky...and it's all because of your lovely wife

Sikky made a confusing yet funny face on listening to this and asked

Sikky: Deepali?...how...what did she do?

RK: She had promised both of us that she will mind her own business...rather than interfering in other people's life she will do something productive.

Sikky: Oh wow good...now she will have time for me.

Everyone chuckled on listening to his dumb reply..and soon RK Madhu and Bittuji left.

Radhaji joined her hands and prayed to God in her mind "Thank you God finally everything is coming to it's right place...now I don't want anything to happen to Madhu's and RK's relationship"

**************************

Malvika was about to split her mock tail listening to RK's and Madhu's story as she was totally shocked.

Malvika: Holy Shit!!...how could you be so cruel RK...or should I say how could you be so dumb?

RK glared at her in a frowning way and Malvika noticed this and she said

Malvika: Ok I am sorry but poor thing yaar...she had suffered alot...and I can completely empathise with her because I know you...you redeem your enmity more well than your friendship or love...anyway...what now?

RK: What do you mean?

Malvika: I mean where do you want to take this relationship?

RK: I don't know (He said in a puzzled way)


******************************

At Maliks house

Madhu was sitting with Malik and Padmini

Malik: Madhu...are you happy now?

Madhu: Honestly Malik what all happened can't forget it so easily but I am trying...and more than me RK is trying to set everything right at place.

Malik: Oh yes I saw that news yesterday...Madhu anyone can insult a person in front of 200 people but It takes lot of guts to ask for forgiveness for the same in front of everyone...and RK did that Madhu.

Madhu: Yes Malik you are right. (She decided not to tell Malik about Deepali because she didn't wanted her family to get tensed..as they have suffered alot because of her already and she looked towards Padmini and asked her) Ma where is Didu and Roma

And before Padmini could answer her Trishna and Roma entered inside

Trishna: Just don't you ever talk to me Roma

Roma: Fine I won't

Madhu Malik and Padmini were perplexed on seeing them behaving badly with each other.

Padmini: What happened to both of you.?

Trishna looked at Padmini and then she saw Madhu sitting beside her and all her anger was gone

Trishna: Madhuuu (She came towards her and made her stand)...I am so happy you are here...finally there is someone to support me.

Roma looked at Trishna and said

Roma: Oh really it was me who made you see dream of entering the movies and now you forgot everything?

Trishna: How will I enter the movies if you will continue this kind of attitude of yours.

Madhu interrupted in between and asked both of them

Madhu: But will you guys tell what happened?

Trishna: I'll tell you...today Roma and I went for the auditions for Mr. Abhinav Kohli's upcoming movie...and Roma created a scene over there she shouted at the manager and we both were thrown out...and this is the 3rd time she had done this.

Padmini Malik and Madhu rolled up their eyes as this was no new to them

Roma: Oh really just tell her why did I do this...because that manager was looking at you and laughing

Trishna: So what...it's not easy to enter into the film industry Roma...you have to face lot of negativity.

Then Madhu remembered how RK insulted Trishna in front of everyone though Trishna never complained Madhu but she somewhere knew that she was hurt and then she saw Roma and Trishna still throwing their beautiful dialogues on each other and she tried to stop them

Madhu: Okay call it quits now.

Ans they finally ended up their stupid fight

******************************

Malvika was gazing at RK and after few seconds she asked him

Malvika: Do you love her?

RK: What? (He was surprised on hearing this)

Malvika: Do you love her RK?

RK was out of words He himself didn't know that what he felt for Madhu so how could he have answered Malvika's question.

RK: I don't know.

Malvika: And what about her?

RK: I don't know about her either

Malvika: Ahhh great...so what you guys are together for?

RK: Look Malvika our relationship is very complicated right now...we both have been through a lot...it's not easy to forget everything so quickly.

*****************

Trishna was standing outside here house looking at the hoarding of RK and remembering the day he insulted her when Madhu came and stood beside her

Madhu: I am sorry Didu

Trishna looked at her confusingly and asked her

Trishna: Madhu why are you saying sorry?

Madhu: Didu that day RK insulted you in front of everybody and I couldn't speak a word and I am sorry for that

Trishna: Just shut up Glycerine It wasn't your fault...and did you saw me that day I danced pathetically no one could have taken me in his item number so how could RK have played with his career.

Madhu: Yes Didu you are right that day you got nervous but I know that you dance well and now I am going to talk to RK about that.

Trishna: What no...you will not do anything.

Madhu: But Didu.

Trishna: Madhu no...I don't want to climb up with someone's help I'll do it by my self...It was my mistake that I came over there.

Madhu: Fine Didu I'll not...but have you forgiven me?

Trishna: I told you na that it was not your mistake...chill.

And both of them smiled at each other.

Trishna: Hey by the way where is our hero?

And then Madhu remembered that she must be with Malvika

Madhu: With Malvika Kapoor

Trishna: What...Malvika Kapoor OMG...Madhu she is your favourite actress right...did you meet her?

Madhu: Yes I did

Trishna: WOW...And did you take her autograph...Oops sorry...now what is the need for the autograph...you can meet her whenever you like.

Madhu: Hmmm (She replied as she was least interested)

Trishna: What happened (While noticing her strange behaviour)

Madhu: Ummm nothing Didu...just a minute let me call RK.

Trishna: Okay!!

Madhu tried calling RK several times but he didn't picked up her call...and Madhu was getting more and more furious.

*******************************

At restraunt

Malvika: I understand RK but both of you can't come out of your past unless you will not try.

RK: What do you want me to do?

Malvika: First of all just ask yourself do you love her...then I'll tell you what you should do (She replied him with a wink)

RK nodded his head and then checked his phone

RK: Oh no 7 missed calls

Malvika: What happened who is it?

RK: Madhu...Oh no I completely forgot that I had to pick her up ...she must be angry now.

Malvika: Call her back na

And RK called her...Madhu looked at her phone and Made an angry face but at last she picked up

Madhu: Hello

RK: I am sorry Madhu I am just coming I am on my way

Madhu: No need RK

His heart skipped a beat he thought that may be she has decided not to come back.

RK: No need...but why?

Madhu: I will stay here tonight and will come back tomorrow

RK took a sigh of relief and but the next second he realised that she isn't coming home tonight

RK: W..What...You aren't coming back?

Madhu: Ya I thought of staying here as I will get more time to spent with four of them

There was a big frown on RK's face which was completely coming in notice of Malvika...and she was giggling behind him.

RK: Fine you stay there...have fun.

Madhu: Thanks...bye

RK: Bye

Malvika: HAHAH Oh my God RK just look at your face

RK: What happened to my face?

Malvika: You are going to miss her right

RK: Just shut up Malvika...stop your nonsense...If she doesn't want to come home then why should I bother...anyway I'll take your leave now

Malvika: BYE

RK: BYE

***************

Madhu: He didn't even asked me to come back...any way...if he doesn't want me to come then why should I bother.


***************

At night

Madhu was changing her sides but sleep was nowhere near she woke up. Here RK came from the bathroom and lied on the bed and tapped the lamp to switch off the lights but then he quickly switched on the side lamp and said

RK: Oh sorry Biwi

And he looked at the other side of the bed where there was no one and then he realised that Madhu isn't there.

BG Music

Dur hokar bhi dur tum nahi ho...Dil yeh mera tumse kuch keh raha hai Suno na

Here Madhu stood up and walked towards Trishna's cupboard where Trish used to keep RK's pictures and Magazines and Madhu took out one Magazine and came back to her bed and started reading his interview...and there RK got out of the bed and opened his wardrobe where there were clothes of Madhu hanging...he took out a suit and placed it on Madhu's side and smiled looking at it. and came back to his side..both of them felt so comfortable now that they didn't even came to know when the sleep took over.

The end!!
Pani.Puri thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Yipeee FIRST... Ohhh damn the begining was so HOTTT ... But I hate you , hate you and hate you for turning it into a dream ... Can't you see them Happy ?? Stop behaving like Dips ... I was so happy that finally Rishbala are recognising their feelings for each other and that passionate kiss was also proving that Madz is also having some feelings for RK , but Youuu , ruined it all ... Awww my poor RK , that line "and what about me ... Am I still a devil for you" hehehe poor RK , such an ignorant wife he has got ... Listen girl ! You better make this Madz realise that RK loves her bcz I can't see my RK feeling so sad that his Biwi is not giving him any bhaav and neither she is seeing his Love ... Oh gosh EPIC... That phone convo b/w Rishbala was seriously EPIC and Malvika giggling in the background was so hilarious ... Awww that was so sweet of keeping Magazine and Clothes to feel each others presence ... The last scene made me nostaligic :(:( ... This story is going so beautifully ... Update the next part ASAP bcz I am a greedy lass for this story ... And yes one more thing - continue this story for another 30-35 chapters bcz I am never satisfied with this story hehehe ... Wonderful & Romantic writing ... Keep it up :):) Love you ...
Edited by RagingBlaze - 9 years ago
Tinku2015 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
👏 hi thanks for the pm n a v v lovely update...both have feelings n not aware r rather acknowledge the love looking how tgey will take a step towards eachother


harini06 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update,
loved it
bittuji & radhaji still unaware that it was deepali who is behind the news,
madhu is still feeling jealous,and rk is still confused about his feelings hope he realizes soon that he loves her,
loved the way how they were missing each other,
thanks for the pm
manna43 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome.Both r equally arrogant. Don't want to confess.haha!one need magazine n other her suit to sleep.Hope in next part they will take a step ahead n rk's dream come true.
Thanks for pm n continue soon.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".