Manan Lovestories ...Fs Sanam Ray.. Note on pg 143 - Page 47

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey
Beautifully written...
Awsmstic chapter...
Is this os or ts or something like that...
And naughty nandu is a treat to read...
Her masti made her more adorable...

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww...again an awesome OS...
i mean TS 😳
aage to continue hoga na toh TS
nandini is so bubbly and full of life😊
aww..manik kissed her twice☺️
nandini's blushed face was worth watching for manik
and nandini's ideas was hilarious 😆
putting ice cubes in boys shirt
and her logic about widwa🤣
manik is too fast
love at first sight ko marriage me convert karna chahta hai😉
and he took marriage proposal for her😲
waiting to know how he will propose her in manik's style

thanks for pm dear
continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome OS...
pls continue soon...
cant wait to read the next..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice os...
thanks for pm...
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story
Lovedd nandu's liveliness
Hehehe blind fold game and kiss
Wohhh manik kissed nandu
Nandu's prank lolzzz
Woww manik went to meet her parents and he is gonna propose her wohhh
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago




Hi There In Green Smiley Face, Emoticon

Kaisey ho app sub...waiting for update ? lagta to nahi...ok

Hugs And Kisses Smiley Face, Emoticonfor all the readers... plz plz plz aisey hi mera sath dete rahna.

Sorry in advance for mistakes

Part 1(b)


Malhotra Mansion


Manik was on his bed while holding Nandini's pic in his hand which he brought from her house.


He started talking with that pic: Hmmm to Madam kaisa proposal like Karen gi app haan? Romantic or ... Ahaaannn I know for you some special special wala na... Ok ...


Manik: Hmmm to Mr Manik Malhotra Bohat mehnat karni pare gi ...so kahan se start karun ...kahan se... hmmm Ok.


He picked his car keys and moved towards Nandini's Flat... He parked his car nearby and then came outside and hide himself coz he saw Nandini was standing near Window.


Manik while hiding himself saw her beautiful face in moonlight and the glow on her face was incredible. Her Beauty in that Moonlight mesmerized him. He stood where he was for some moment When a heart touching smile came on her face. Manik captured this beautiful smile in his phone and then kissed that pic.



After sometime he noticed that she closed her eyes and folded her hands for prayers and then before leaving towards her bed she threw a flying kiss towards Sky .

Her action brought a wide smile on Manik's face... After spending some more time there he came back in his Mansion.


In his Room after Changing for bed, he laid down on bed while holding his phone and he again started talking with Nandini's pic.

How cute... Abhi bhi raat ko soney se pahle God se pray karti ho... Shooo sweet ... and he with his hands tried to pinched her cheeks in that pic.


Acha ok ... Ok Gusa kyo karti ho ... Ok kal milte haan na.


In morning


Manik came to Nandini's flat and saw her on the road in search of auto... Manik on next moments stopped his car infront of her and then showed like he was passing from there and saw her on the road... so he offered her lift.

Manik: Hi


Nandini looked at him and then recognized him : Manik... Right? ...(Manik nodded).. Hi


Manik with smile: Can I drop u somewhere?


Nandini : No thanks wo bus mall tak hi jana hai so abhi auto ati hi ho gi.main auto se chali jaon gi.


Manik: O come on Nandini main hoon na... Plzzz come na I will drop u.

Nandini thought for a while and then: Ohkkk.


And then she sits in his car. During whole Ride Manik was only admiring her cuteness and Nandini ... she was looking outside .

They came in Mall where Nandini wants to go.


Manik: Oh yahan... Tum yahan se shopping karti ho.

Nandini: Hmmm


Manik : Main bhi... Chalo acha hai. Ab yahan a hi gya hoon to main bhi apni cheezein le leta hoon. Waise would u mind if I give company to u.


Nandini: No its ok.


Manik with a smile: To chalein.


Then Nandini was started buying her required things and Manik was only acting to be busy in shopping. He was only niharofying her .Her cute pouts when she get confuse on selecting 2 different items...The shine in her eyes when she saw her fav chocolate. She looks so cute with her biggg eyes in excitement.


On seeing this Manik thought an idea and he asked : Nandini can u help me to select a dress for my GF. You know na Valentine a raha hai so I wanted to gift her some dress. So plzz help me.


Nandini with surprise asked: Tumhari GF hai?


Manik: Haan hai na... bohat cute si hai...


Nandini with her big eyes : Reallyyy .Wow... but os din tum osey sath le k kyo nahi aye.


Manik blabbers in panic in very low voice: Os time GF hoti to lata na...


Nandini: What?... Kuch kaha tum ne.


Manik with most innocent face: Nahi...


Nandini: to batao na os din tum apni GF ko kyo nahi laye...


Manik with averted gaze: wo ...wo... Os din... Haan wo yahan thi nahi na is liye.


Nandini: Ok...Waise main tumhari help kar doon gi but in return mujhe kya mile ga?


Manik with his famous smirk moved his face a lil closer to her and said: kya chaheye Tumhe? Bolo?


This closeness started affecting Nandini's senses... She got lost in that moment. Manik when observed this a naughty smile came on his face and he snapped his fingers near her face and said: Kya hoa kahan kho gayi... tell me na ... Kya chaheye tumhe?


Nandini shifted her gaze on other side and with her shy face said: Kuc...kuch nahi...Tum bolo kaisa dress chaheye.


Manik: Aisa dress jis mein wo bilkul princess jaisi lage.


Nandini with naughtyness: How romantic princess and all haan... Acha Valentine k liye lena hai to red hi color chale ga na.


Manik : Hmmm.


Nandini showed her 2,3 dresses and Manik rejected them while making bad faces. Then his eyes stopped on an offshoulder red dress.


Manik: Hmmm Nandu.


Nandini gave a surprised look to him when he called her Nandu.

Manik: How about that one.(he pointed towards that red dress).


Nandini: Wow sooo cool Manik ... Bohat acha dress hai.


Manik with a lopsided smile said in very low voice: But tum se zyada acha nahi hai.


Nandini: What? Kuch kaha tum ne?


Manik innocently shook in No.


Nandini Ok to chalein.


Manik: Ya... Oh 1 mint tum bags mujhe do aur wahan se plz jewelry me se ache se matching earing select kar do plzzz ..


Nandini Ok.


She went there and Manik moved towards Counter to pay the bill.


After paying he again came back and asked : kuch pasand aya.



Nandini: Manik yeh dekho.


Manik: Naaa yeh os pe suit nahi kare ga.Leave it main baad main dekh loon ga abhi chalein.


Nandini came towards Counter when manik holds her hand and started dragging her with him.


Nandini: Manik bill to pay...


Manik: Shhh Ho gya hai sub tum chalo.


Nandini got angry on this and said with her phoola hoa face: This is not fair mujhe nahi jana tumhare sath.


Manik: Arey yaar aisey nahi karo meri icecream party kharab ho jae gi.


Nandini: Ice cream party?


Manik : haan na hamari friendship ki khushi mein tum party nahi de rahe kya?


Nandini : Par Manik bill...


Manik: Haan haan os ka bill tum hi de lena. Akhir treat bhi to tum de rahe ho...


Nandini with a cute pout: Not fair.


Manik again said in very slow voice: All is fair in love and war my sweety.


Nandini: What?


Manik very innocently asked : What ... What?


Nandini while biting her pink lips turned her face towards window: Kuch nahi.


Manik when saw this he controlled his emotions very hardly which were instigating him to leave all things and hold her in his arms and then with a kiss tell her how much he loves her.


In such cute ankh mataka they enjoy their ice-cream party and then Manik dropped her at her flat.


After that day Manik daily tried to meet her with one or other excuse . Nandini was also started liking his company.


Days were passing like this and on 6th feb Manik thought to celebrate Valentine week with Nandini and make it memorable for her.


As Nandini didn't think on these lines so when Manik asked her to spend her week with him at his farm house then she accepted his request.


They both came at Manik's Farm house at 6th feb.


At night After dinner Manik showed her a room to take rest and said bye to her.


On 7th feb


Nandini's sleep broke with a very sweet fragrance and when she opened her eyes she saw her room was full of red roses and bouquets.


A sweet smile spread on her face. She got up from bed and moved towards Bathroom to take shower .


When she entered there she saw bath tub was also filled with patels and on mirror it was written with red lipstick.


Happy Rose Day Nandu.

A reply came out from her heart unknowingly: Happy Rose Day to u too Manik.


She took shower and after changing her dress came out in search of Manik while holding a red flower for him.


She saw him busy with his mobile... She came near him and then present that flower to him while saying.


Happy rose Day Manik.


Manik when saw her face ... he said: Arey aise wish karo gi apney friend ko.


Nandini with a pout and raised eyebrows : To kaise wish karon?


Manik stands from his seat and quickly gave a peck on her cheek and said: Aisey.


Nandini's face color started changing from normal to red and Manik was enjoying her shy face so to tease her further he asked: Kya hoa ...Don't tell me k ... tum ne kabhi aisey kisi ko wish nahi kiya.


Nandini to hide her shy state lied to him: Kiya na ... Cabir aur abhi to kitni baar aise wish kiya... but wo kya hai na tum...


Manik while hiding his smile on her lie said: Yaaa I know hamara to 1st time hai na... koi nahi adat ho jae gi.


Nandini: what? Adat kyo ho jae gi...


Manik: Arey ab mian to hamari is friendship ko itni jaldi khatam hone nahi doon ga...tum chaho gi na tab bhi nahi.


Nandini only said Hmmm.


Then she remembered that Manik told her about his GF .so she asked: Manik! Wooo


Manik saw that she was hesitating while asking something so he in surprised asked: Kya hoa


Nandini: wo sorry main ne yahan ane se pahle to socha hi nahi k tumhari GF kya soche gi...Os ko acha nahi lage ga na.


Manik blabber: Thank God nahi socha ... socha hota to mera kya hota... now he said in loud voice: Wo actually osey koi problem nahi hoga .

Nandini: Matlab?


Manik: Matlab she is very cool types ...u know... Osey aisi cheezon se problem nahi hoti aur


Nandini: Really wo aisi hai...But jahan tak main ne observe kiya har larki yeh sub cheezein achi nahi lagti... Navya... Mukti and Aliya ko hi le lo... Tumhe yaad hai os din jab hum game khel rahe they... un k faces dekhne wale they...


Manik: Ya ... I remember... ( then he again blabber) face to tumhara bhi dekhne wala tha os din... (now in loud voice) : Ya I agree with u... sahi kah rahe ho tum... tum girls na ... aisi cheezein tum logon se bardast nahi hoti. But mujhe kya karna hai...waisey bhi I don't think k wo zyada dair ab meri Gf rahe gi...I think osey koi aur pasand a gya hai.

Nandini: what? Manik ya to tum confuse ho ya mujhe kar rahe ho.


Manik thought: Arey yehi to main chah raha hoon tum confuse ho gi to question nahi karo gi.


Manik in loud voice: Arey choro na yaar chalo pahle breakfast karte haan. tumhe bhook nahi lagi kya?


After breakfast Manik asked her for bike ride and Nandini accept his offer happily coz she loves such things.


Whole day they spent their time in surfing different places then Nandini wanted to learn how to ride a Bike and Manik very happily started teaching her Bike riding coz during this time he have a chance to touch her., to feel her milky body.


At night they came back to his Farm house. Nandini was feeling very tired after spending this wonderful day with manik.


She sits on the sofa and closed her eyes . Manik when came back in the hall after changing then he saw a sleeping beauty there.



He with a smiling face very slowly came there and removed the strands from her face without disturbing her sleep .


A small smile came on Nandini's face with the touch of Manik.


Manik moved his face nears her and gave a light peck on her forehead and then picked her in his arms and take her to her room.


He very gently placed her on bed and then covered her with sheet and left from there.



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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww how cute..
Manik jaisa boyfriend sabko mile
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow cute update...
Manan were soo adorable...
Manik is manik a special valentines week for Nandu...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Di dress so beautiful



Mind blowing




Nice





Excellent




Superb




Outstanding





Cute



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