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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4 - Our King...Manik
Same day, back in India, the most hottest hunk of India, was sleeping on his king - sized bed.

He was standing in the little circular balcony of a huge building with intricate designs carved on it giving a perfect Royal feel. His and only his name could be heard all around. "Perfect King Ki Jai! Perfect King Ki Jai!" These were the only words heard on this planet. After all he was the ruler of the whole world. He was a 'Perfect King'. That's what he was referred as by the people of his Kingdom. And why not after all he was the most dashing, handsome, hot, sexy and at same time humble, caring, responsible king ever born on this earth. He was so overwhelmed to receive so much love and respect from his people. Even after being loved by so many people, he did not have love in his life. He was still searching for his perfect lady love. He had roamed around the whole world but still could not find the one who could perfectly dominate his Kingdom as well as his heart too. Today he was in Paris, and still could not find his Queen. He then ordered his minister.

King: mantri ji, main chahta hoon ki Kingdom mein saare logon ko presents batein jaaye!!!
Aur ab main jaa rha hoon, apni haseena ki talash mein!!!

Mantri: ji zaroor maharaj...abhi ho jayega..!''
Saying this the minister came in front of the king n started shaking him by his shoulders.

King: yeh aap kya kar rhe hai mantri ji..! Chodiye mujhe! Mujhe der ho rhi hai...!! Jaana h! Chodiye!

Mantri: are present de rha hoon, maharaj! Agar achha nhi laga toh ek aur bhi hai..!
Saying this the mantri swiftly tuned the king, and...

And the next moment, he was lying on the ground. He let out a groan as soon as his butt touched the ground.
He opened his eyes and found himself in a familiar surrounding, His room.
But a few moments ago he was in Pari...REALITY DAWNED UPON!! JUST A DREAM!
But he exactly knows whose the culprit behind landing him on the ground...Cccaaabbbiiirrr!!!!!

While, Cabir was rolling on the ground uncontrollably seeing his friend on the ground once again with shattered dreams.
Recovering from the laughing session
He spoke...

Cabir: kya hua maharaj?? Aap sapna dekh rhe the?! Kya maine aapko jaga diya..??!!
Saying this he again broke into fits of laughter.
Cabir: kya yaar Manik..! Oops maharaj! ( yeah guys! So our hot hunk King is none other than Manik)
Aaj bhi queen nhi mili.?? Hahha...iss baar konsi jagah gya tha dhoondhne..??!! Let me guess... Russia, New York, Las Vegas, Berli...

Manik's POV
Ohh shit!!! Phirse dream. Kya yaar meri kismat hi phooti hai aur yeh gadha Cabir, harroz meri story mein villian ban ke aa jata h...!!!!aarghhh!!
Aur isse kaise pata ki main apne sapne mein kya kar rha tha..??? Was I actually speaking that loud..? Arrgh!!Meri dream mein bhi mujhe akela nhi chodta...like seriously I was calling him 'mantri ji'?!! 'JI'!!! Eewww!

Cabir: kya yaar Manik..! Oops maharaj!...
(And there the donkey sings again...!!)
... Aaj bhi queen nhi mili.?? Hahha...iss baar konsi jagah gya tha dhoondhne..??!! Let me guess... Russia, New York, Las Vegas, Berli...

Ohh god his talks are so irritating.
Me: bas kar yaar Cabir! Irritate karna band kar! Har roz subah muh utha ke aa jata hai mujhe meri queen se door krne!! Huh!! Pehla dost dekha hai jo apne dost ki khushi nhi chahta...

Cabir: haan haan beta. Main hi toh aata hun tujhe tere sapnon se uthane. 3 - 3 baby girlfriends ke baad bhi tera pet nhi bhara...! Waah beta, achhe track pe h tu! Hamara sab kuchh toh chheen liya aur phir yahan bhet kar King aur Queen ke sapne dekh rha hai.!! Huh!!

He made a baby face, and I jst couldn't hold back my giggle.
Me: hmmm!! Tum teeno mere hi friends hokar mujhe itna pareshaan krte ho, tease karte ho toh thodi punishment toh jhelni padegi na..!!

And to this, he lifted his eyebrows to me giving me an amused look!! And then began..
Cabir:!! Punishment!! Arre punishment bhi puri hone ke baad khatam ho jati hai but yeh toh khatam hi nhi hoti.
Yeh punishment nhi, torture hai. Pehle toh humari hi girlfriends humare saath kam time spend krti hai teri vajah se, aur phir jab humein thoda quality time milta bhi hai toh usme hum teri hi baatein sun rahe hote h...yeh toh ghor anyay hai...
He said all this in total Bollywood style. NAVYA NAVELI jaisi black n white Madhubala type gf ho toh thoda asar toh padega hi.

Voice: tum dono ka niche aane ka
plan hain...yah hum upar aaye..???
'talk of the devil and the devil arrives'
...correction 'shouts'.
This was Navya's shout from the hall.
My first baby gf.

Cabir: le teri pehli baby gf ne toh awaaz de di aur isse pehle ki baaki 2 bhi de, taiyaar ho aur niche aa KYUNKI UNSE WAIT NHI HO RHA.

Arrghhh!! Another taunt!! Why me? But before I could catch hold of Cabir's neck n beat him black n blue, he jst ran away.
He'll definitely die by my hands one day.
Then cutting the topic, I went to get ready to welcome a new day for new surprises...!
POV ends

Pecap: New Deals!!!

So here you guys with the next update. I hope am able to clear out some of the confusions. That Nandini and Manik are not together... And wahat is Manik doing with Nandini's gang.??? Do share you views plzzz. There are imp for me.
Thankyou lovelies.
Enjoy, stay blessed, happy reading!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
nice update
uff manik and cabir
3 baby girlfriends 😆
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Curiosity is increasing,
continue soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Only 1 confusion cleared n waise bhi it wasn't a confusion coz if Manan would b together thn of course nandu would b more romantic. Anyways more confusion increased
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Posted: 10 years ago
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okay now a deep breath and a sigh Manan aren't together 😭 but what had happened that day but 😕 now the confusion are getting cleared yepie m happy n that one gf awww 😳 n the dream wala scene was hilarious do update soon will be eagerly awaiting for your next update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ragini_nirva

nice update

uff manik and cabir
3 baby girlfriends 😆
thanks for the pm
update soon

Thanxxx!! I'm glad you liked the idea!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jesse93

Curiosity is increasing,
continue soon dear.


I'm glad that's happening!! I hope not to disappoint you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Istandformyself

Only 1 confusion cleared n waise bhi it wasn't a confusion coz if Manan would b together thn of course nandu would b more romantic. Anyways more confusion increased


Yeah!! I totally agree! I'm sorry if that's disturbing you but pkzz hold on and it won't dissapoint you!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: aishapl013

okay now a deep breath and a sigh Manan aren't together 😭 but what had happened that day but 😕 now the confusion are getting cleared yepie m happy n that one gf awww 😳 n the dream wala scene was hilarious do update soon will be eagerly awaiting for your next update 😊


Thankyou for that support!! Anyway, you'll get all the flashbacks and everything soon. Don'worry!! 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update
I am really curious to know what happened that day
And manikin with nandini's gang how
The dream was too funny
And 3 baby girlfriends ...haha
Update soon
Edited by ky2manan - 10 years ago

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