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Heya anji part padh ke post karde

yess m making some changes..will post soon😊
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Part8- Welcoming The New Guest

And after a few seconds all lights start to flicker and with a big sound a spaceship enters ghotala house from window...

@bhatt house..

Bhavna:chakudi.. Areee o chakudi ye kya hai..beta jaldi aa..

bhairavi:aayi baa ..

Bhawna- beta yeh saari light aise kyu bandh ho rahi hai

Bhairavi: baa light kharab ho gai hai shayad

Bhawna: arre chakudi kharab hui hoti toh ek light hoti yahaa toh saari light ek sath band ho gai..Haal haal chakudi...chal bahar ja ke dekhte hain

Bharavi:to barobar😛


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@dsouza house

Liza:ronnie ronnie..ye kya ho rha hai man..tumne phir kuch kia kya?

Ana:i dont believe this..aap roz roz kya krte rehte ho Ronnie bhaiya

Ronnie:arre wo ba wo ba..

Liza:BOLO aise waqt pe tum kaise atak sakta hai man..

Ronnie: wo konsa rakshas tha jise bheem ne mara tha

Liza:bakasur

Ronnie:haan...are maine kuch nahi kia mai bakasur hu

Liza:offo man..bekasur..bekasur..mai bheem ban ke tum bakasur ka vadh kar deynga

Ronnie:Tum samjha na
Liza:ab chalo man bahar ja ke dekhte hain


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@ghotala house


Spaceship door opens...

A girl wearing a blue kurti dress .. Comes out of spaceship...

Vasant & Varsha get excited when they see her they take balaaye in their alien style...

Varsha (excitedly):78sq meri behna..tum aa gai ...

Vasant:arrree 78sq nahi megha bolo..hemant ne kya kaha..iska insani naam megha hai..to ab se hum ise megha bulaynge..

Varsha:haan haan sorry mai excitement mein bhul gai..Megha..aao *hugs Megha* are kitti sundar lag rhi ho insani roop me..bilkul pari jaise..ek dum Mmm

Megha(in tears hearing that Varsha is soo fond of her):bhabhi..i missed u all a lot..jab se aap log gaye ho tab se sab kuch suna suna lgta hai..

*turns to Vasant bhaiya*bhaiya kaise hain aap*about to touch his feet*

Vasant:arre arre ye kya kr rhi ho

Megha:bhaiya Hemant ne btaya ke yaha sab apne se bado ke pair choote hain to mai bass

Vasant:nahi nahi Megha..tum to meri choti behen jaisi ho..aur behne paer nahi chooti..plzz aise na kro..

Megha was touched by Vasants answer..she was in tears as something pinches her..she decides to clear everything there and then..but b4 she can speak

Vasant:Megha yeh Manav hai.(pointing towards manav).aur sirf ise hi colonywalo mein se pata hai ki hum aliens hai.. Aur yeh hamari help kar raha hai...

Manav(with a smile) - hello..

Megha- hi...

Manav- Vasant bhaiya mein ab jaa raha hoon kyuki kissi bhi waqt colonywale bahaar aa sakte hai... Aur Sharad tum aur Jacky thodi der baad bahar ana aur colony ke fuse box ke pass khade rehna aur mujeh contact karna ok...?

Sharad and jacky- hooon

Manav leaves..

Again as Megha is about to speak..

Jacky,Hemant and Shishir:chachi..kaisi hain aap..

Sharad listens to the word chachi & is angry

Sharad:kya chachi chachi laga rakha hai haan uska naam hai..naam se bulao..nahi to kuch bhi bolo..chachi nahi lagti woh kisi ki.

Megha is hurt by sharad's words:Parr..

Sharad walks away angrily

Vasant:Megha hum nahi jante tum dono ke beech kya hua hai par plzz jo bhi hai suljha lo..hume abhi colony walo se bhi deal karna hai..1000 sawal aynge kon ho kya ho kaha se ayi ho..inn insano ke shaq ki koi seema nahi hai..aur agar inhone tum dono ko ladte dekh lia aur musibat..plz tum abhi jao aur Sharad se baat karo..hoon?

Megha:hooon...

@Sharads room
Sharad is in tears..hes fighting those memories that are flashing in front of his eyes on seeing Megha..all the wounds have reopened and he did not want to fall weak..

Megha enters Sharad's room

Megha:pluto(Megha pyar se Sharad ko pluto bulati hai & Sharad Megha ko minto😳)


Sharad(with tears) (angrily)-mera naam mat lo apni zuban se..muje nahi baat karni tumse chali jao yaha se..

Megha(in tears): meri baat to suno pluto..muje apni galti ka ehsas hua hai...muje sab samaj aa gya hai ..kya ho raha tha aur kya nahi..samaj aa gaya ke tum mujse kitna pyar krte the..

Sharad:samaj aa gya??wat do u mean by samaj aa gya..mai tumse pyar karta tha ye mai tumhe naap ke dun meter scale pe ke dekho Minto dekho..mai tumhe itne feet itne inches itne centimeters pyar krta hu..

Megha(happily) :u called me Minto..tumhe yaad hai...

Sharad:topic mat change kro..tum apne aap ko samajhti kya ho haan ..jab jee me ayega chali jaogi..jab jee mein ayega wapas chali aaogi..n mai khushi khushi tumhare sare decisions accept kar lunga..wat m i..m I a toy?? Sab tum decide karogi ki kya krna hai aur kaha rehna hai...kya...kya meri feelings mere thoughts ,meri preferences tumhe matter nahi karte hain? mai gudda hun..tumhare isharon par nachunga..

Tumne yeh kabhi nahi socha ki tum jo words bol rahi ho mujhe kitta hurt kar rahe hain..bss bolti chali gai bolti chali gai..ek baar bhi nahi dekha k mai kaise react kar raha hu..mere expressions nahi dekh pai..meri ankhon se ye nahi judge kar pai ke mai kitna hurt hun..to phir kaisa pyar haan?

Tab bhi bas muh utha ke chal di..aur ab aa gai ho..jaise ke mai tumhe happily accept kar lunga..no Megha no...m fed up..tumhare tantrums tum apne paas rakho..mai apni duniya mein khush hun.akela hi sahi lekin mein khush hoon...wapis chali jao tum tumhara yaha koi kaam nahi hai..

Megha:par pluto hum bhaiya bhabhi ko kya jawab denge

Sharad:STOP CALLING ME BY THAT NAME...n bhaiya bhabhi ki tension mat lo..mai unhe samjha dunga..now just plzz get lost..muje apni shakal dobara mat dikhana...

Sharad storms away

Megha is hurt by sharads words
She goes to guest room and breakdowns...
She was crying badly..

Megha( crying):ab realise hua muje..jab mai tumpe gussa ho rhi thi to tumhe kaisa feel hua hoga..aj mai bhi waisa hi feel kar rahi hu pluto... I m sorry Pluto ..mujhe pata hai mein tumhari maafi ke kaabil nahi hoon... bt don't wry..i will fix everything..i promise... .

Megha remembered the happy times she had spent with sharad...

Naina nu patah hai ...
Naina di khata hai ,
Saanu kis galti phir milti sazaa hai ...
Nind udd jaaye..chain chad jaave
Isqh di fakiri jab lagjaave(2)

Aee man kardaayein thagi thuria..
Aee man kardaayein sina zoriya...
n sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan main kamjoriyan

Here,Sharad returns to the hall to go out with Jacky..Vasant Varsha tries to talk to him but he ignores.He contacts Manav and asks him to come near the fuse box of colony..

He was hurt too.. He remembers the time he spent with Megha.

Aee man kardaayein thagi thuria..
Aee man kardaayein sina zoriya...
n sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan main kamjoriyan

Man ,man ki sunta jaaye
Sunta nahi manwalo ki..
Man hi man mein banaye duniye ek khayalo ki...
..paas koi aave ... Door koi jaave
Hota hai kyu ae koi.. samjhave


Megha was crying badly..suddenly she felt some one calling her...

Hemant and Shishir were there and both were crying...

Hemant- Megha chachi,... Aap chinta mat karo Sharad chacha aapse jaldi batti kardenge..

Shishir- haan , Megha chachi ..Sharad chacha ka gussa jaldi utar jayega..phir woh aapse baat karenge...

Hemant- hum aapki madad karenge batti karvane mein aur Manav bhaiya bhi help karenge ..woh sabki help karte hai..aapki bhi karenge..hoon

Megha - hooon.

Megha hugged her nephews..

@colony garden

Bhavna rushes out

Bhavna:chal chal chakudi jaldi kar..kuch bada hua hai lagta hai

Bhairavi:kaha chalna hai baa..

Bhavna:arre garden mein dafod kanta

Bhairavi:to baa saman pack karun

Bhawna:arre dobi..garden tak hi to jana hai

Bharavi:par baa konse garden jana hai ye to btaya nahi aapne

Bhawna:ae vandari..mai colony garden ki baat kar rahi hu

Bhairavi:to baa saaf saaf boliye na

Bhawna:aeee daakan chup bilkul chup..ab jaldi se to barobar bolde

Bhairavi:to barobar😛

Bhavna:Ae liza.ronnie..manav..jaldi aao sabke sab

Ronnie:aunty Bhawna kya hua

Bhawna:tumhare ghar mein bhi light gai?

Liza:haan dekho na..muje to dar lag gya..pta ni kya hoynga man

Bhairavi:kuch nahi hoga liza bhabhi aap bekar mein fikar kr rhi hain..bhoot ayega bas

All shocked

Liza:ye kya bolta hai man

Bhawna:ae tu chup kar ne...

Bhairavi:to barobar😛

Manav sees from the window the perfect moment n messages ghotalas to come out n himself rushes out..

Manav:kya hua..kyu shor macha rhe ho

Bhawna:dekh na manav..kuch hua abhi..jaise ke kuch aya ho..light b chali gai..

Manav:Bhavna kaki..kuch peeche se fault hoga..kuch nahi hua hai ghabrane ki zarurat nahi hai ...aapki tasali ke liye mein dekh ke aata hoon..

According to the plan Manav rushes to the fuse box where Sharad & Jacky are waiting for him..

Ghotalas enters..

Liza:ae ghotalas tumhare ghar pe bhi light gya?

Vasant:haan dekhiye na liza bhabhi..abhi varsha seb( apple) ka aur pineapple ka mix soup bnane hi ja rhi thi ke light chali gai

Bhavna:tum log seb aur pineapple ka soup peete ho?

Vasant:haan kbi kbi..jab ghar mein chevda khatam ho jata hai to sochte hain chalo thoda different ho jaye islye thoda ..aise socha seb aur pineapple ka mix soup banaya jaaye..

Manav comes with Jacky and Sharad..

Manav - Bhawna kaki kuch nahi hua tha sirf fuse udd gaya tha..mein ne aur Sharad ne jaake thik kar diya..

Liza:Haash thank you Manav..ab chalo apne ghar..n ghotalas enjoy your "mix soup"haan ..with family

Hemant:haan..aaj to aur bhi maza ayega soup peene me..special mauka jo hai..humare ghar naya mehman aya hai na..heein😃

Ghotalas+manav shocked

Vasant:ae gende..chup kar

Bhawna:mehman..kon aya hai ghotala bhai?

Vasant:wo aise thoda..Varsha ki friend ki behen ki beti ayi hai..keh rhi thi thoda Mumbai ghum lun to humne kaha ghum lo

Liza:achaa..kya naam hai uska?

Hemant:Megha..maine rakha*proud wala gesture*

Vasant:chup chup chup

Hemant:hawwnnn😲

Ronnie:maine rakha..matlb..ghotala kya kehna chahta hai ye??

Vasant:wo aise thoda Mazak kar raha hai..Ojha uncle nahi hai na..to mahol mahol

Hemant:*imitating ojha uncle*hi hi..mahol mahol...

Ronnie:*showing his punch*mai mahol banynge ab😡

Manav:acha acha chaliye ab so jate hain

All leave...

After few days

Sharad was ignoring Megha ... He was not even talking to her. And Megha too didn't dare to come in front of him as she knew ..he is still angry on her ...
Vasant and Varsha were worried for Sharad and Megha..
Manav was worried for his buddy as he was sad..

Here, Pritesh was planning his next move as he wanted to bring out the reality of ghotalas...

Pritesh manipulated Bhadresh by saying what was Varsha ki friend ki behen ki beti doing at ghotala house.. What is her relation with ghotala family...

Bhadresh gets instigated and he tries to instigate Ronnie.. But Ronnie doesn't listen to him. As every time he gets scolded from liza... So..Bhadresh decide to instigate Bhawna aunty by adding more mirch masala to the story..Bhawna gets manipulated and Bhawna aunty instigates Ronnie,Anna and Liza..Also lately Megha and Manav had started to spend a lot of time together which used to irk Anna n she used to get jealous as neither Sharad Nor Manav used to talk properly to her...

At Bhatt house,

Bhawna- ae baba Ab puch ke hi aana hoga ki woh ladki kon hai... Aur kya kar rahi hai woh ghotala house mein..kyuki jab se woh aayi hai tabse bahut kam bahaar nikalti hai ghotala house se...

Liza- tum sahi keh raha hai aunty Bhawna agar woh Mumbai ghumne ko aaya hai toh phir ghotala family usse bahaar ghumane kyu nahi legaye...

Bhadresh- baa mujeh toh kuch aur hi gadbad lag rahi hai..bahut badi gadbad...Ab yeh gadbad toh tabhi solve hogi jab hum ghotala nagari jaa ke puchenge tab...

All leaves for ghotala house ...Manav sees them and he was sure that something was going to happen.. So..he contacts Vasant and informs him regarding it..

Manav decide to go with colonywala so that no one would doubt him.. And he can help ghotala family...

At ghotala house,

Bhadresh- bolo shri shri ghotala aur sach sach bolna ki yeh ladki kon hai... Kya kar rahi hai aapke ghar... Kya rishta hai isska aap sab se...

Vasant- mein sach keh raha hoon yeh Varsha ki friend ki behen ki beti hai aur yaha sirf ghumne aayi hai Mumbai

Anna- acha toh phir aap log bahaar toh jaate nahi dikhe kahi bhi...

Vasant- Anna woh Megha ki tabiyat thodi kharab ho gayi thi toh issliye hum nahi gaye...bahaar..

Manav - aap log kyu piche pade hai inke..haan.. jab Vasant bhaiya ne kaha na ki megha ki tabiyat thik nahi thi issliye woh nahi gaye.. Toh phir kyu piche pade hai inke..

Bhadresh- lekin iss dekh ke toh nahi lagta ki yeh bimaar hai..baa.. Mujeh toh lagtaa hai baat kuch aur hi hai... mujhe toh lagta hai ki yeh choro ki toli hai Jo ache log banke dusro ke ghar chori karte hai ..ya phir yeh jaroor illegal kaam karte honge...Ya phir yeh ladki inn ke jaise hi choro ki toli ki team member hogi

Sharad- Bhadresh bhaiya aap yeh kya keh rahe ...jo bhaiya keh.rahe hai wohi sach hai...

Bhavna- haan ,toh thik hai ghar ki talashi lene do hame..

Manav - Bhawna kaki ...yeh aap jeh rahe hai..jab inho ne kuch kiya toh phir kyu aap baat ko khich rahe.. I know ghotala's ne kuch nai kiya..

Anna (angrily)- manav , tum kyu ghotala's ki side lete ho..haan...jab Bhawna aunty ke rahi hai toh ghar ki talashi lene ke liye toh lene Dona.faisla ho jaayga ki yeh log chor hai ya nahi hai... Tumhe problem kya hai... Agar inke ghar ki talashi lijaaye toh... Haan aakhir kya jadoo kiya hai ghotalas ne tum par..what they have ever done for you haan... ...

For the first time Manav was angry on Anna...and before he could say further...

Hemant - Anna didi, aap hum par aur hamari Megha chachi ko chor mat boliye.. Hamne kuch nahi kiya.. Hamne kuch nahi churaya..

Colonywala gets shocked when Hemant calls Megha as chachi

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Updated the chap..sorry if its too long...enjoy yourself..😃
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awesome update...

lovely part gals..

well done...

bhairu, hemant always rocks..
but is baar to sharad ne bazi maar li..
kya dialogues the uske..
megha hurt..
but realises wat she did in past is repeating wth her now..
megha too much overwhelmed with varsha & vasant's open hearted welcome..
& reminisces her deeds..
madam.. zara batane ka kashta karengi ki aisa bhi kya kar diya tha megha ne...
nice idea by manav abt asking sharad & jacky to b near electric board..
hemant telling he gave megha name...
all shocked & then vasant telling mahol mahol & hemant acting as uncle ojha.. hihin.. mahol mahol..😆😆 really rolfing...
seriously seb aur pineapple ka mix soup.. try karna padega..
btw maine sach me seb ka soup piya h bachpan me.. meri mom ne mujhe aur siblings ko pilaya tha...😆😆

sharad-megha calling each other minto-pluto..
matlab woh dono pehle se humans ban ghaye the🤪
manav-megha talking..
sharad ignoring anna & megha.. both hv hurt him so much...
anna upset & jealous of megha as shonav not talking with her properly..
pritesh back to his tricks..
bhadresh instigates bhavana aunty & she further instigates others...
all go to ghotalz...
manav trying to stop them...
anna starts questioning & blaming..
manav angry on anna's thinking...
hemant blurts out d truth abt megha being his chachi..
all shocked...

now wat.. all colonywale wil b behind thm for answers...

continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice... Nice development of the plot.. 😃
All characters are coming out live.⭐️
Really enjoyed it.👏👏
Hemant 's and bhairu's parts are superb as always 😆
Precap bhi likna chahiye anjali 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ice cold precape likhna will write it if possible next time
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Thanks ice cold..actually jab likh rahe the hum dono dialogue we even didn't revised what we have written.. And Anna wala part toh Jo dil mein aaya woh hi likh diya mein ne
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Oh God anju darling it is awesome. Lovely update❤️
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Woh bhi patah chal jaayga hiyu ki kya kiya hai megha ne
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ussi ka besabri se intezar kar rahi huu...😉😆

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