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Originally posted by: gudda_k

amazing & different concept...

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KHUSHBU

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Episode 4

NOW

nandini: what?

abhimanyu: arre bus k upper nhi chalna hai kya?

nandini: ohh, okay chalo abhi and both went outside the bus leaving two angry persons inside the bus...

These two persons none other than manik malhotra and mukti ,

Manik is because nandini is ignore him because till now no single girl ignore his charm and here nandini didn't even care look one time to him, and this increases his anger but he can't do anything.

The second person is mukti because ist she invite abhi to sit with her and abhi ignore her invite and chose nandini, mukti feel humiliated when abhi chose a simple girl over a hot chick,

And when duo abhi nandini went outside to sit on the bus all the other participate start laughing on mukti manik and this increases their anger to a new level and they thought to teach a lesion to both abhi nandini in game because right now they have not other option other than sit without saying any thing

On the other side abhi and nandini come and sit on the bus in middle where a small box of pipes is made to put luggage and prevent them to fall, both abhi and nandini adjust themselves between luggage and hold the pipe railing and case of falling,

A cold wind is flowing due to rainy cold season and sun is hide clouds and a very pleasant weather made, both nandini abhi enjoying their precious and wonderful time with the environment

Birds are flying in sky and they are flying in groups and making different different shape in the sky

Nandini is feeling very happy watching all this, because today 1^st time she is feeling like a free bird who is ready to fly in the sky.

Abhi also enjoying the company of nandini and thinking that hw stupid those people who judge a person by his outer outfits and they is most stupid person who can't see the inner beauty of a person,

Due to wind nandinis hair flying in the air

Both shouting on the bus

Yooo

Yeee

Nandini: you know what this dream of my sitting on top of bus from child hood and I can't believe that it is happening, I am very happy, you are very good human being, a very big thank you for this.

Abhi: don't say thank you baby doll, I do this because to watch your smile because your smile is very precious never lose it, you know this smile is best weapon thing to fight with anyone and I said if you will smiling like this then I promise you will get everything which u want very easily, so never lose this okay

Nandini: thank you abhi, you are such a sweetheart, you know what you are my 1^st male friend, ohh sorry we didn't friend till na, how stupid of me

Nandini: so friends and take her hand for hand shack

Abhimanyu: arre doll we are already friend and if want to start officially so lets friend and he do hand shack with nandini

Nandini: you know what abhi, I always afraid in friendship with boys but after meeting you my opinion change , all boys are not same, you are different and you care other person you didn't judge people by their outfits, you are not like that MONSTER who always show off his attitude and money , I hate him,

Abhi: MONSTER?? Who?

Nandini: arri wahi monster manik malhotra, you know he is so irritating I don't know y girls attrack towards him, he is so bad

Abhi: don't take him serious all people are not same, there is some exceptional so we have to accept them like this, don't worry, he will not do anything , I am na there to protect you, if u ever feel sacred in villa come and tell me, I will always saw your back up so don't worry and now give me a big smile

And after hearing him she passes him a big smile.

And both start laughing

Suddenly nandini remembers something and said

Nandini: abhi y didn't u sit with mukti? Wo kitne ache se behave kr rahi thi tumhare sath, tumhe usse mana nhi krna chahiye tha, at least you talk for some time with her and then we came later, I am feeling sad because of me she is feeling hurt and sad

Abhi: you are so nave nandini, she insult u and phir be u r taking her side, I hope mukti saw your this side,

You know what when she ask me to sit with her then I feel happy but her next thing made me stop when she insult you because she is herself a girl and I want her to feel that how it feel when you hurt someone's feeling ., and this is very much required for her so that from next time she don't speak shit about any girl without understanding her

Nandini: I agree with you, but promise me, you will say sorry once we reach villa I don't wanna create enemy on the first day itself

Abhi: I will not say sorry because if I will say sorry then she will again hurt you

Nandini: abhi she will hurt me but you can friend with her and you can change her thinking by talking rather then hurting

Abhi: what is this I don't understand what r u talking about

Nandini: I am saying pl apology one time for me, for our friendship with a cute face,

Abhi: okay I will say sorry but if next time she will try to hurt you then I will not leave her, and you also don't say then to say sorry and all. okay

Nandini: okay, I will not nandini promise

Abhi: okay I will reach villa and say sorry now smile

It just that both nandini and abhi sitting just above manik and nandini so they clearly hear what they talking

Manik got angry when nandiini said him a MONSTER and all, he is planning to take revenge from her, he is making plans

On the other side mukti after hear abhi and nandini she got some brains and thought to say sorry for her behavior with nandini because she never thought that a person whom she say bad thing will care so much about feeling.

Both manik and mukti lost in their thoughts that didn't notice that RAHUL come inside the bus and take his sit just behind the driver, and driver also come start the bus to go for next journey

Rahul: hello everyone

All: hello/hi Rahul

Rahul: so all u ready for next destination where the real game starts,

All: very much

Suddenly bus start and all shouts

Yooo,

Rahul notice that abhi and nandini is not inside the bus so he ask

Rahul: Are driver stop the bus 2 person left , but mukti interrupt between

Mukti: no rahul they didn't left, are with us only

Rahul: but mukti I can't see them inside the bus

Mukti: because they are not inside the bus

Rahul: means

Mukti: I means they are not inside the bus because they are on top roof the bus,

Rahul: ohh so these two knows how to enjoy their journey, very smart, I think it is very good idea, infect we can also go and sit upon the bus and it will very much fun, we can enjoy the weather.

Alya: nooo Rahul, my skin will burn due to sun rays, I can't

All the bus start laughing and cabir said

Cabir: I think alya is blind that by she can't see that it's cloudy weather and sun is not present there.

Harshad hear this and got angry.

Harshad: watch your words cabir, she is my sister

Cabir: but what is said is true, see is talking nonsense

Harshad: cabirrr in angry tone

But alya interrupt in middle because his brother is very much possessive about his sister so she said

Alya: its okay bhai, he is right

And harshad after giving last angry glare t cabir sit again

Rahul: so r u coming with me on top of the bus or sitting inside, because I am to going

All the girls at once said yesss because they don't want to lose this precious time with rahul a hot hunky on top of bus,

All boys feel jealous

Nyonika also said yes but she is sitting with harshad and something harshad said in her ear and she refuse to go upwards

And rahul also said Thank god which is hear by manik clearly and he laugh, rahul found this weird that how can a son laugh on his own mother and said lets go girls

And all the girls at once stand up and climb down the bus and then climb up on roof of bus,

Abhi and nandini notice that bus stopped and suddenly saw that rahul is climbing on bus. And come near them

Rahul: hello abhi hello nanadini

Both hey hello and pass a smile

Rahul: so enjoying, sorry if I disturb your privacy but can't wait to lose this precious time and pleasant weather on top of bus

Both: its okay , we are just friends and u r welcome

Suddenly they saw all the girls come and sit on the top of bus

And again bus start and all enjoying in and on the bus

Suddenly girls and abhii and rahul on top of the bus hear that inside the bus someone start playing guitar and he is playing so good that he is looks like cherry on cake in ear of each person

The person who is playing the guitar is trying to play different different tunes from guitar and nobody is talking and silently hearing this song and enjoying the moment

Suddenly the hears a tune and nandini is already in the emotion of song ar can say she already impressed by this tune that unknowingly start singing song

Nandini sing with this new tune

Kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai
Jaage jaage koi sota hai
Bin chaahe kahin khota hai
Kahin aisa na ho jaye

Manik hear that someone is singing a song in a very sweet voice from above the voice he wanted to saw who is singing so good but he is inside the bus so can't , yes manik is playing guitar and girls don't know who is playing

He stopped the playing guitar and notice that the person is still singing the song

Nandini continue her song and manik he hearing the voice and get lost in it,

Kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai
Jaage jaage koi sota hai
Bin chaahe kahin khota hai
Kahin aisa na ho jaye

Suddenly nandini notice that the guitar stop playing and when she looks towards other girls and rahul and abhi she saw that they looks her like that she is an alien, they all are shocked to hear this nandini so good

Nandini got afraid that he disturb the person who is playing the guitar

Suddenly rahul come out shock and said

Rahul: woow, that was so good, I don't know you can sing so well

Other also come out from shock and praise her

But she is afraid and looks downwards nobody understand her reason y she is behaving like this

Manik notice that the person who is singing stopped singing he want to hear more and he clearly hear that all are praising but he can't hear the name

Manik suddenly start again playing guitar and continue this song from where nandini left

Kab armaan machlenge
Kisko hai yeh pata
Kab mausam badlenge
Kisko hai yeh pata
Pyaar ho jaata hai kaise
Jane na jane na jane na jane na dil tera

Ahha (all the other member in bus)

Nazar se nazar mile

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Nazar se nazar mile
Ho dekhengi aankhein sapna
Jo yun koi saath chale

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Jo yun koi saath chale
Woh lagne lagega apna
Nazar se nazar mile

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Nazar se nazar mile
Ho dekhengi aankhein sapna
Jo yun koi saath chale
Jo yun koi saath chale
Woh lagne lagega apna
Kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai
Jaage jaage koi sota hai
Bin chaahe kahin khota hai
Kahin aisa na ho jaye

Suddenly manik stop singing and waiting to person to continue from where he stop, the time he didn't stop playing guitar and waiting for other person to sing the song and start

Above the bus everyone is looking towards nandini in the hope that she start, but she is getting very nervous and afraid so she is looking everyone for not to force her

Rahul: please yar sing na, nothing happen

The other entire person also insisting her

Manik clearly listening their talking that they are saying someone to sing but that person not singing, he is eagerly waiting for the hear that melodious voice again

Suddenly he hear

Abhi: come yaar sing na we all with you don't afraid

Manik thought is it nandini but ignore by thinking that she is middle class commoner girl she can't sing so well

After listening request from all the people about the bus she again got some confidance and start singing

Nandini sing

Baatein jo karengi baat baat mein
Khawab hi khwab honge saari raat mein
Hoga jab pyaar tujhe hoga jab karaar mujhe
Toh yeh sochle

Manik start singing again in middle cutting nandini in mid and all the boys inside the bus start hooting

Kab armaan machlenge
Kisko hai yeh pata
Kab mausam badlenge
Kisko hai yeh pata
Pyaar ho jaata hai kaise
Jane na jane na jane na jane na dil tera

Now this time nandini cut the manik in middle and start singing because all the girls and abhi and rahul insisting to her to sing and cut the person, now all the girls hooting and shouting very much

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Nazar se nazar mile

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Nazar se nazar mile
Ho dekhengi aankhein sapna
Jo yun koi saath chale

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Jo yun koi saath chale
Woh lagne lagega apna

Now nandini stop and tune start playing because paragraph is complete

Then again manik start singing the song where nandini left

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Aayega woh pass ke jo door hai
Mann jaa ke hona yeh jarur hai
Woh dil toh deewana hai
Kab kahan maana hai
Tu yeh soch le
Kab armaan machlenge
Kisko hai yeh pata
Kab mausam badlenge
Kisko hai yeh pata
Pyaar ho jaata hai kaise
Jane na jane na jane na jane na dil tera

Now again nandini cut manik in middle and again girls shouting because now nandini also start enjoying sing this duo unaware of the face that who is playing and singing inside the bus

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Nazar se nazar mile

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Nazar se nazar mile
Ho dekhengi aankhein sapna
Jo yun koi saath chale

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Jo yun koi saath chale
Woh lagne lagega apna

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Now manik cut middle nandini and all boys again start and said

Ye hui na bat boss

And manik repeat the lines which nandini sing

And nadini smiles and all the girls also start teasing her , manik also hear their teasing and he also start smiling and all the boys also start teasing him, and these noise also hear by girls nandini become shy hide her face in her hands

Nazar se nazar mile

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Nazar se nazar mile
Ho dekhengi aankhein sapna
Jo yun koi saath chale

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

Jo yun koi saath chale
Woh lagne lagega apna

Ahha (all the boys together)

Ahha (all the girls together)

By singing all these song they all reach fun-villa

They all had a very good time in bus journey

They all come down the bus and feeling happy

They all standing at a gate where written

WELCOME TO LOVE VILLA

And they can easily watch inside the gate is there is no big building or hotel

They thought that they will stay somewhere and it is a place for task

Nyonika said

Nyonika: Rahul, y we came a task spot, we already very tired by journey , you don't thing we go in hotel where u arranged our staying arrangement

Rahul: Mrs. Malhotra I think you are hoping that you will stay in 7 start hotel and all but not , it is a surprise I will open to you all but first I wanna ask you all

All boys laugh when rahul mention her Mrs. Malhotra because they all thought she is also unmarried like all but no she is married

But nyonika cut him between

Nyonika: don't call me Mrs. Malhotra and call me nyonika like other

Rahul: But u r married na

Nyonika: I said call me nYonika and shouts very loudely

Who till now laughing suddenly stops seeing angry lady but manik start laughing loudly?

But nobody knows the reason behind his laughing everyone is confused because nyonika looks towards manik with angry face he is not at all stopping his act

Nyonika: stop it manik, in a very loud voice

Manik: y should I, it's your fault to follow mesh my life now look everyone is laughing on her.

Nyonika insist rahul not disclose his identity that she is mother manik malhotra

Nyonika: whatever u wanna talk we will talk in alone , now just stop it

Manik: y r u afraid that all these people will know about your true face, I know you defiantly tries to hide your identity but how can u forgot that you have a son of your age and you came here to mesh with others life just for money

Nyonika: manik enough Is enough now not a word

Manik: relax Mrs. Malhotra or Nyonika or I can say MOMMM in a hatred voice,

Nyonika: Manikkk in a loud voice and goes towards manik and slap him hard on his face,

Manik: he got shock of his life, because today onwards no one will raise hands on him and today his own mother slapped him in front of so many people, he got hurt very much and angry also

Manik: I thought u can do anything for money but I can't expect from you this

You call yourself my mom na , let me introduce you with a honor to all this persons

Manik: hello guys, attention everyone, so you all thinking what is happing here so let me clear the surrounding

You all know I am MANIK MALHOTRA and meet my MOTHER MRS NYONIKA MALHOTRA with RESPEACTTT in such a hurt tone

Tears start coming out of his eyes but before they fall he leaves from there inside the villa

All the others persons are looking nyonika with a shock like how can someone fall so low on her place.

Nanidni notice manik tears and feel aid but can't do anything she can't believe her ears that what she hear is true or she is watching a nightmare by open eyes because we can't say this a dream, because dream are happy one.

And screen frize on all the person shocked faces and maniks tearful face

Rahul: this is todays episode, we will meet in next episode till bye and enjoy

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How is song selection i write one of fav i hope u all don't mind

there are many more come, you can suggest me if u want

NOTE read plz

thats it for today

i know u all thinking that 4 episode finish and they reach till villa when task start i will say have patience only or not then i will start like your wish pl z let me know

i know in tv all this journey finish in one day and from 2nd episode task start if u all want like that then tell me otherwise i will write like myself full in details i will making plot of story you can suggest me your ideas

can anybody will a cover pic or banner for my this story, it will be a great help

if anyone interested please send me aur contact me

Guy do comment and likes please it will encourage me writing me more and more

Originally posted by: Sjmanan

Yeeiii!! FIrst to comment...

Originally posted by: Mr_Rahul

thank you but u didn't mention how is the update😉😉
so u like it aur want something else?😃

Originally posted by: Sjmanan

Yeeiii!! First to comment...okay so coming to the update...its flawless, awesome, amazing...😃

Mukti and Manik jealous...so cute!!😊

Loved Abhi and Nandini's bond..they are awesome!👍🏼

Nandini is so good...even after mukti insulted her so much...she wanted abhi to say sorry to her...😃

Thank god...mukti realized her mistake...😊

Monster Manik..hehe...😆

Ye Nam to fix hai Manik ka...😆

Alya is so stupid...she said her skin will burn due to the sun rays...when there is no sun! 🤣

Hehe...possessive Harshad...bechare cabir ko alya ne bacha liya😊

All boys felt jealous because of Rahul...

Aisa kya bla harshad ne nyonika ke kan me...?😕

Aww...MaNan sang...and they both didn't know that who is singing...😃

Rahul called Nyonika Mrs.Malhotra...🤣

Bechari nyonika ki insult ho gayi! 😆

Aur gussa nikala Manik pe 😡

I just hate her...how dare she slap manik!😡

Nandini felt bad for him...good start!

Continue soon!😊

Originally posted by: Sjmanan

I wanted to be the first so first i posted...now i have edited it...do check! 😊

Originally posted by: Mr_Rahul

wow you u give your review also
its amazing feeling after reading so much praising myself writting
thank you very much miss
so u summarize complete story
i don't know your name so i hope miss is okay with u😃