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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: priyasmiley
awesome concept
early waiting to read further
continue soon

Thank You 😃
i will update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: prathyushaeluri
Interesting
Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic
Interesting...
Update soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: assuuu
Totally different ...
Lv it...
Intresting. ..
CnCntinue ...

Thank You 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Princeraj1425
Hey Rahul,

Nice concept.
Do continue.

And ya plz update ur other stories too. It's been a very long time that u have updated them.

Continue soon.

Stay blessed.

Thank You 😃
i will update soon
yeah others also on the way don't worry😃😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: aarohi_angel98
Hey its an interesting concept...
Do continue...
But ssly nyonika this place is not for her man..
Plz pm me if u can...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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i will update soon
yeah i will pm u
nyonika k bina fun kaise?
she is required😆😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Thank you very much for your lovely comments and likes, i am happy that u guys like this concept
here is the next update
read it and tell me how is it

Episode 3

Hello everyone
I am Rahul Host of MANAN LOVE-VILLA which is a game of Heart-mind
Jaisa ki aap sab jante hai pichele episode me 11 rajkumar or 8 rajkumariya aayi hai es show me to find their true love, and they will fight for it,

so i will not take your time and lets see from where we end in last episode

Last Episode- In last episode we saw that this year different type of people come to participate because some are which who already have relation with other person like brother-sister, brother-brother and which is shocked me is mother-son, u know i can't believe till now that a mother who has a son of his age come to participate in this show, lets now chuck all that because we will she what will happen next

lets go and see what are doing our participants

NOW-Present

I rahul reached inside where the sitting arrangement and registration is conducting,
when i reached i saw that all the participate complete their registration and talking to each other and trying to make good bond so that they can win game, all seems happy except 2 people

yeah i can see by their faces that they are feeling ode oe out from out of all, yeah the reason pretty Obie us that they belong to small town and their dressing sense all so pretty simple, i to liked these two girls if i am on the place of these all the boys i will surely make my bond strong with these two girls rather that these hot chicks, but lets call it their bad luck that they can't differentiate what is real beauty.

I Reach near Bus and saw

all the participate is totally in meeting with each other except 2 person nandini and navya
manik is talking with alya and mukti because he found only those 2 girls beautiful there

harshad is talking with nyonika and rose, druv, aryamaan abhimanyu shahid are in one group talking and laughing,

ragahv varun cabir ranbir in a group talking. madhayam busy in talking with sanaya and doing flirting with her, but she is not comfortable with her,

only navay nandini is standing silently and seeing sad because of others because they are not talking with them and when they went talk with them , others made fun of them by saying these both are commoners and can't match there class,

rahul saw this and said

so all group made already

by hearing rahuls voice everyone come out from there talking session.

they saw that rahul is standing in front of them and smiling

rahul: i think u all are happy after coming here.

all: very much with laugh

rahul: so guys you all are welcome in the LOVE-VILLA which is a game of heart and mind, and i hope for what u come here.

everyone: thank you rahul

Manik: and we also know that we came here to will our true love and he wink towards mukti and alya.

rahul: manik i think you didn't understand it now but u will realize later that don't make your enemy without knowing them because u don't know when they will beat u and after saying this rahul pass small smile towards nandini and navya

till than nandini navya looking downwards when they hear rahul suddenly looks towards him and when they saw that rahul is looking towards them they understand that he is talking about them and when he pass a smile they also return him and by this their confidence incenses

all the other girls feel jealous to nandini navya because on the 1st day itself
rahul is taking the side of nandini navya,

manik got angry after heraing rahul but he composes him self and said

manik: i don't think so that i will afraid from anyone, after all i am manik malhotra, and i know i have a class with attitude

rahul: don't be angry rahul save it for task, u will need it later, so just relax and i m just giving u advice, if u want take it or leave it with a smile.

manik: whatever and turn his face.

alya: you don't worry rahul , i am pretty sure that these two commoners will be the 1st 2 girls leave love-villa because i don't think so any boy from here will wants to fall in love with these two behenjis, tell me guys you want these behenjis your love? she ask all the boys

manik, harshad, madhyam, cabir, said: never at first and rest didn't utter a word,

both nandini and navya feel humiliated in front of all and tears are trying to come out of there eyes but they are trying to being strong because its 1st day and they don't want to go home on 1st day itself

ranbir and abhimanyu saw navya and nandini and they will like talking them after seen this drama and and they went and stood besides nandini and navya. abhimanyu went near nandini and side hug her and said

abhimanyu: hey baby doll chill, its 1st day and you have a very long way to reach hights to will game so relax,

by hearing abhimanyu nandini 1st feel uncomfertable when he hugs her but when he said she feel happy and pass a smile and he wink towards her in return which shock her and she open her mouth in o shape.

rahul is watching this when alya said these ill words then he become very angry and if it is in his hands then he throw out alya from this game but its game rule because u can't force anyone to leave the game without there own choice or by dumping in game but when abhimanyu and ranbir approch nandini navya he feels goods.

ranvir also when towards navya and directly take navya in a friendly hug and said,

ranvir: don't take personally this is game and everyone wants to win that y they try other to leave game but if u want to win then u have fight so don't lose hope,

navya : feel happy after hear him and pass a smile because he give a good advice like a friend

navya: thankx

ranbir: sirf thankx and made sad face

navya: y u didn't want thankx, then see remember some thing and said " ohh so we r friends and in friendship no thanks no sorry" i understand chalo give me my thanks back.

ranbir: what?? in shocked

cabir: Madhuballa and everyone laugh on this but navya didn't understand anything

navya: haa, abhii tumne hi kaha na tumhe thanks nhi chahiye to wapis de do

rabir: he come out from his shocked state and without saying anything went near cabir said said

ranbir: bro she is very weird and mad girl stay away from her

cabir: chill bro this is your punsiment fo becoming over-friendly and take in a hug

navya made a sad face but nandini take her in side hug and said

nandini: don't be sad navya, i ma sure only u will win this game

navya: tum janti ho nandini tum hi humhari sachi dost ho and pass a smile

abhimanyu said from behind

abhimanyu: aur mai navya

navya: tumhara kya bahrosha abhi humse bat karke tum bhi bhag gaye to, with a sad face and looks towards ranbir and ranvir turns his face and cabir laugh on his brothers condition

abhimanyu: i will not run so friends and he forwarded his hands

navya happily take his hands and said: friends and said if u will run then i will kill u by my hands

cabir: madhubala banegi dayan
and again everyone laugh

and by this nandini got angry and said

nandini: u just shut up and lets she who will win and i am sure if we will stay in game and no cheating then one day u yourself will come towards navay for asking help , mark my words

cabir: kon ye madhubala, i prefer to leave game rather then performing with this madhubala

by now navya got much angry and said

navya: then i think you leave now itself because this game to only i will win and if u want to win then u have to ask for help me and that day we will talk to both carbon copy monkeys.

cabir: lets see who want whose help,

navya and nandini and abhimnayu hugs each other nad now feels happy that they have some good friends with them they can talk

rahul watched this full drama and feels happy

rahul: OMGGG i think this year there is much more to come, i think this is best season till now on 1st day itself

2 simple girls verses 17 stylish girls boys,

i think this game is very much interesting i can;t wait more

what u say guys

all: we also waiting for next

rahul: okay so lets proceed next pick your luggage and load in the bus we are leaving in 5 to our main spot. where you all stay and all the task and fights will happen, i will come after finish my pending work till time u all make yourself comfortable in bus

all: sure rahul

rahul pass a smile and leave from there,

all start running towards bus after taking there luggage and make themselves comfortable

only abhimnyu nandini navya left.

abhimanyu: chale dosto

nandini : yes

navya: neki or puch puch, hum to kb se ready hai ki kb chale but koi chalta hi nhi

abhimanyu: cabir ne sahi nam diya hai tumhara Madhubala kitna drama karti ho tum and nandini also laugh on this,

navya got angry and took his luggage and went inside the bus

only abhimanyu and nandini left

nandini: abhi tumne gussa kr diya na navya ko pahle hi wo bhot duskhi hai'

abhi: sorry baby doll but u don't worry i know how to manofy my friends to chale

nandini: ha chalo

nandini take her luggage and walk near the bus and abhi follow her

nandini is trying to pick her bag and climb the stairs but fails due to bag abhi come from behind and said

abhi: baby doll give me your bag u go and sit i will put it in proper place

nandini: its okay abhi i can manage

abhi: chill yar give it to me

nandini pass him

abhi take her bag and went inside the bus

abhi put her bag and saw that two seats are vacant one beside mukti and one beside manik because both wants to window seat to she the hill view and navya sitting at last in a corner seat with sanaya and madhyam on a triple seat

mukti said

mukti: hey abhimanyu come and sit here,

abhimanyu looks towards nandini after listening mukti and notice that she is said and become uncomfortable in seating with manik.

abhimanyu: hey mukti its an request can you shift with manik because nandini is not comfortable with him we can sit in this seat if u shift there

mukti: y will i will shift my seat because of this commoner, infect she will become thanking me so that i am giving opportunity her to sit with most hot handsome hunky in this bus,

abhimanyu he become angry after listening mukti and trying to reply her because he is stopping herself from a very long time. but nandini hold his hand and abhimanyu looks towards her and she said

nandini: lets sit above the bus i want a proper view of this hill area and u see weather also cloudy it will be fun and adventurer sitting on top of bus and smile

abhimanyu: sure babydoll this is very nice idea, u r very smart and pull her chick,

nandini: u know what abhi i am born to smart.

abhimanyu: hey navya r u coming on top of the bus it will be fun,

navya: she denied because she saw that sanaya is uncomfertable with madhaym and when navya sit hear she feels relax because madhaym not talking after navya coming inside and sitting beside sanaya

when navya denied and looks towards sanaya, she said thank you without a noise in a mimic by her lips and navya pass a smile in return

nandini: r u sure navya?

navya: very much nandu and pass a smile

abhimnayu: so u still angry with me he ask navya

navya: we will talk in villa about this now both you go and enjoy your moment.

abhimanyu feel sad after listen navya because she is still angry

nandini : don't be sad abhi, she is like this she will no longer become angry and i am sure she will herself come to and talk

abhimanyu: okay in that case, so shell we

nandini: what?

abhimanyu: arre bus k upper nhi chalna hai kya?

nandini: ohh, okay chalo abhi and both went outside the bus leaving two angry persons inside the bus...

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Next Episode : Manik Nandini Sing a Duet in Bus

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tell me guys how is todays episode

plz share your views by comments and likes

thank you

Edited by Mr_Rahul - 10 years ago