Rishabala FS : Intruder in Love (Part 4,5 - Page 22) FINISHED 3/5/16

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meenji22

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Posted: 10 years ago

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WOW WHAT AN UPDATE

BUT I THINK SURU IS NOT MADHU DAUGHTER

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Lovely TS and amazing update...RK is tooo fast...😉...bechari Madhu...phaans gaayi...loved Sikky role tooo...👏

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Awesome parts 1 and 2...nice story...

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nice update...

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GOODLUCKANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome.👏

loved it to bits!

Last line was 😲 kiss on cheek n beautiful wow!☺️ so RK ish 😎

so u made RK kiss suru . Good.❤️ But when RK wud marry madhu then wont he bcm suru's daddy 😛. omg suru ! RK Daddy 😆

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Ahmadalli

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Please finish the story dont leave it in midway

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merliah johanna

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hey truly awesome story . do pm me when u update. pleasee.

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merliah johanna

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Posted: 9 years ago

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awesome story. wish if that is her adopted daughter and not own. i dnt want madhu to be already married pls do add me in ur pm list.

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Azra Zaidi

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Hi everyone 😃

Hope you all are doing well and I know its been months to be precise 9 months but I am doing B.Arch now and its a very busy course and I dont have to read or write also but as my 1st semester ended I had a week holidays so i tried writing Do let me know if I should continue. and here is brief about the first 2 parts as I am sure you all must have forgotten it 😭 And I miss you all... I miss reading your comments 😉

RECAP

Madhu lives with her little daughter Suru and works in a news company. Her Boss has given a one week chance to get some breaking news about Superstar Rk or she will lose the job. Sikky is madhus good friend and the son of the boss, he suggests madhu to keep a eye on Rk and his soon to be fiance Dipali. Madhu sees rk going into Dipali's house and she jumps the wall and follows him becoming a intruder. But to her bad luck Rk sees her and to save herself madhu says she is diplis cousin and later while madhu was going back to her house, Rk sees her offers to drop her home which she eventually agrees. Next day madhu comes to her office where she comes to know that her boss has asked her to go to inauguration at the mall which Rk is going attend. She asks Sikky to help her as Rk has seen her and suru is also with her. Sikky agrees on a condition that madhu goes with him to a frieds birthday party. In a series of event at the mall suru meets Rk and both become friends very fast and then Suru introduces Madhu to Rk saying her mom which comes as a shock to Rk. Rk and Suru meet a plan to meet next day at Sitara studio and have a picnic to which Madhu agrees.

Edited by AzraZaidi - 9 years ago

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Azra Zaidi

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PART 3

Next day madhu was getting her stuff ready to go to office when Sikky came to her house "Hi Madhu" "Hi Sikky" "Is Suru ready ??" "That devil dint let me sleep whole night" "Why" "Because she is going to have a picnic with her hero today" "Oh yes, Rk turned your princess into a devil" sikky said with a chuckle. Madhu shot a angry glare at him "Sikky this Rk is turning my life into mess in just two days. First day I lied to him and second day he made my daughter go crazy over him and now its the third day and I am worried what what is going to happen today" "Madhu you are doing this for your job, to giving you and suru a happy living. On the seventh day if you dint give dad a breaking news you will lose your job" "I know sikky but this unwanted friendship with Rk is troubling me" "Have fun and get you news madhu, he is your favorite actor and you always wanted to meet him" "Not like this sikky I am lying to him and I am not what he thinks, I am not the cousin of his girlfriend" "What difference does it make?" "But still" "Call suru we have to leave" "That devil is re-watching Rk's movies and memorizing his dialogues" "Looks like the princess really wants to impress someone" sikky said and the three left for office.

It was 1:30 when Sikky went to madhu and reminded her that she had to meet Rk "Madhu you need to leave now" "Sikky, I want to skip this" "Madhu why do I have to keep you reminding always" " I know" "Madhu take my car and go" "No Sikky" "Madhu he thinks you are rich" "but sikky" "Just take and go by the way I informed dad I mean the boss that you are going for news" "You are the best Sikky" "but my dad isnt" "Dont say like that he is doing what any normal boss would do, you dont need to feel guilty and anyhow you are helping me so much already" "I know. Bye have fun" "Bye" madhu replied and left.

"Mamma when will we reach" "5 mins more princess" "Mamma yesterday also I wore a pink frock and today again a pink one so will hero think I am a baby and I only wear pink?" "No princess" " When will we reach?" "Suru I just said 5 more minutes" "Mamma you are looking very pretty" "Thank you princess" "Mamma when will reach?" "Suru stop. Have patience" "Mamma but ..." "Stop, I will tell you when we reach" madhu said.

Finally they reached the studio and Rk was waiting for them. Sitara studio was one of the best and oldest studio, it was very beautiful also. Rk welcomed them inside and Suru started running everywhere in excitement and Rk was back of her answering her queries. Madhu stood in the corner looking at them, suru looked very happy with him. Rk and suru came to madhu and suru said "Mamma, Hero is telling that he will give us the tour of studio" "Okay lets go" madhu replied with a smile even she was excited to be with Rk at the studio. Rk kept on speaking but suru got bored and decide to take the tour herself leaving Rk and Madhu alone " I am glad you came Madhu" "Thanks for inviting Rk" "Anything for a beautiful lady like you" rk replied making madhu blush, "You know Rk, suru was so excited to come here. You are her Hero" "She is a very sweet girl after all she is your daughter, Isn't she?" "She is" "What about her father" "I...that..." before madhu could complete her sentence Suru came "Mamma, Hero you both are so slow. I saw everything" "My baby is super fast" "Yes I am but now lets play, hero you said this a picnic" suru said to rk "Yes princess this a picnic. I have some snacks and games for you" "Lets play what do you have" " I have snake and ladder, monopoly, ludo, checkers and we can even play badminton" "I dont know how to play badminton" "I will teach you" "Yes, my hero knows everything" "Come lets go then" rk replied. Rk started teaching Suru how to play and Madhu kept cheering suru. "Mamma you also come Rk will teach you also" "I know how to play baby" "Good then we will have match. Hero Vs Mamma" "No baby let it be" madhu said to which Rk replied "Are you scared that you will lose madhu ?" "No" "Then?" rk asked before madhu could reply suru said "Mamma come on , show hero that you are scared of no one. Please." "Okay" madhu replied. The game started both of them were playing nicely and little suru was confused about whose side to take. The game was going good but then Rk scored 2 more points than madhu and suru shouted "Hero is the best" but later the game changed and madhu won. Later they had lunch and chatted about various random things.

It was time for madhu and suru to leave, Rk came with them till the car and said "It was lovely spending time with you and princess" "Feelings are mutual but Rk why did you let me win today?" "Because I couldn't let you loose in front of Suru. You are and always will be the real hero of her life" rk replied and gave a quick peck on the forehead which made madhu's heart skip a beat. She liked Rk and with few of his actions he earned a lot of respect in her eyes.

That night Sikky came to madhus house to take her as his date to his friends birthday in which madhu promised to accompany him. Madhu was dressed in a black long gown with her hair open, she rarely went to parties because she dint want to leave suru and go anywhere. Sikky introduced madhu to all his friends in which few of them madhu already new but madhu slowly slipped away and sat at the corner of the bar. Everyone there was dancing and enjoying the party but madhu was least interested there were many more things important in her life. Madhu was losing hope to get any news from Rk but the real thing was she dint try to get any thing from his life, whenever they met suru was with them and madhu dint want to ask and spoil the moment they were having. She loved seeing Rk play with suru, being such a big celebrity he was very humble and down to earth.

Madhu was in her thoughts when someone tapped on her shoulder. She turned to see who it was but couldn't recognize because of the dim light and the man was wearing cap "Hi, do I know you?" madhu asked "Madhu its me Rk" he replied removing his cap. Madhu was shocked to see Rk there, the more she wanted to go far the more her fate was bring her nearer to him. "Hi Rk, I dint recognize you" "Thats good because I wanted none to recognize me" "Ohh... I get it. Stars want people to know after that they want to hide from them" "You wont understand madhu but what are you doing here?" "I came here with Sikky" "So where is he?" "He is enjoying with his friends" madhu replied and then the DJ changed the song. Rk looked in Madhus eyes and suddenly got down on his knees before her stretching his hand forward he said "Dance with me" blinking at him a couple of times madhu slowly placed her hand on his which he held quickly not giving her a chance to have second thought. He slowly stood and swirled her in rounds which he ended up getting her very close. Their breaths mingled, madhus eyes twinkled in the dim light reflecting Rk's passion. Rk's hand traveled on her slim waist holding on with possession in a captivating moment both start to sway on the rhythm their eyes enchanting each other. Their body glued to each other and hearts beating so loud that the feel made madhu go weak on her knees. Rk kept admiring her, his desires so intense to madhu his for forever but he knew it would take time and eventually they will be together. He swirled her and pulled her back into as their lips touch for a mere second, chills went down madhus spine. Rk dint bother about anything that moment, he just wanted the moment to freeze forever. Rk stepped more closer and hugged madhu tightly and possessively and in the flow of the moment madhu felt dizzy with the ongoing events, she had never so mucg emotional and loved from the past few years. These feeling dint allow her consciousness to win she let herself lose in his strong hold forgetting everything. Rk moved his face closer to hers, madhu intertwined her fingers in his hairs and pulled him more closer, his lips again brushed her lips softly but this time everything stopped, only their ch.ests moved in the perfect sync completely ignorant of the outside world finally theirs lips met and sparks flew like never before. As the song stopped everyone clapped, madhu realized what just happened and she slightly pushed Rk and ran outside, away from Rk but she couldn't run away from the feelings that Rk has evoked.

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I hope you all like the update *Fingers Crossed*😊. I know its crazy but I cant help as usual and I hope to update the next part soon.

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Edited by AzraZaidi - 9 years ago