Tu Mera Humsafar SwaSan FF [ PART 40 ] Updated On [ PAGE 159 ] - Page 75

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was busy so could not read daily update just now finished last 6 part one in go ,beautiful written dear 👏
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Sorry 4 not commenting 4 last prt dear..
Was Hell busy vid wrk..
Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...
After d jealousy plan, Swasan driftd into their own romance wrld..
Awesum update dear...Really funny n nice...
Iss update mein uttara was d star...
Har baar Uttara swasan ke romance mein haddi bn gyi..😆😆
hahaha😆😆😆So fabulous..
Bechari swara hi embarass ho rhi he sanskaar ke naughtiness ki vajase...
Poor swara..😳😉😉😉
Romance filled update dear..Lvd it...
Do continue dear...Waitin 4 nxt prt...
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Hello Guyz...Thnks for All Ur Suggestions n I Srsly Liked All ur Ideas n Suggestions...After Reading all the Ideas n Suggestions I Have Decided to Combine Two Ideas n Write Todyz FF Part.Since All r Reqsting fr Laksh's Entry as a +Ve Guy n a Girl fr Him i.e Ragini's Entry n their Love Trck.So this Idea m going to Add n Another Idea is Given By #Sanchi_Modi.Thnks Sanchi fr Ur Wonderful Idea.I Reaply Liked Ur Idea.Sanchi's Idea will be Revealed in da Part Further.Hope U will Like this Part.Do Leave Ur Valuable Comments in da Comments Box Below :).

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Recap : SwaSan Romance n Uttara Teasingness.

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Tu Mera Humsafar

Part 32


1 Month Later

1 Month Passed fr SwaSan n MF Post Laksh's Return frm Jail.Laksh was a Chngd Person Nw.He was Completely Chngd into a Pure n Positive Soul Nw He Accepted n Apologised to Each n Everyone Including Swara n Sanskaar for His Mistakes He Committed to Harm Swara n Sanskaar n Degrading Family n His Parent's Name n Parvarrish.He was nw Happily Living a New n A Fresh Life Filled wid Love n New Hopes.

**********Flash Back**********

1 Month Before

Farm House

After SwaSan Left fr their Room in Embarrassment Post Brk Fast Teasing Swara Saw Annapurna going to Room wid Teary Eyes.Swara Followe Her n Heard Her Conversation Done wid Laksh's Photo as If Telling Her Heart Out to the Photo..

AP : ( Crying n Talking to the Photo ) Laksh Wat Have U Done ?? Coz of U M Suffering Beta..M Missing U Beta..Shayad Iss Ghar main kisiko Yaad nhi hai..Sab Bhulgaye aur Swara aur Sanskaar k Khushi main Sab Khush Hai..Main bhi Hu undono k Khushi main kyounki main Undono ki bhi Maa hu lekin Undono k saath saath Tumhri bhi Maa hu.aur Har Maa chahti hai ki uske Har Bacche Khush ho.Ek Taraf Mere Teeno Bacche mera matlab Uttara Sanskaar aur Swara Khush hai aur Dusri Tu Hain Jo uss Kale Andere Jagah main Band hai.Bhale iss Ghar main Sab Bhulgaye Ki Aaj Kya Hai..Lekin mujhe Yaad hai Laksh ki aaj Tumhara Janam Din hai..Tum Har Saal.apna Janam Din Humare saath apne Ghar main Shaandaar Tareeke se Manate the.Mujhe Yaad hai ki Tumne apne Iss Saal ki Birthday Party ke Liye kabse Planning kar rakhi thi..tumne pata nhi kya kya soccha tha iss Saal k Birthday k liye aur Kabse Wait karrahe the..bt aaj Dekho Aaj woh Din aaya bhi toh kaise aaya..Tum waha Jail main aur Main aur Tere Papa yahan..Tere uss Ek Ghalat Harkat ke Wajeh se Hum yahan Swara aur Sanskaar ke Saamne Chote hogaye..Hum chahke bhi Tumhe Wapas nhi laasakte..Aur Pooche bhi toh Kis Muh se Pooche..Tumne hume kahi ka nhi chodha Laksh..Lekin tumhari uss Ghalti k baad bhi I M Missing U Beta..aur karu kyoun na.U R My Son Laksh..Bacche chahe kitne bade bade Ghaltiyaan kyoun na kare Maa Baap unhe Maaf kardete hai lekin yahan humare Maaf karne se kuch nhi hone wala kyounki Tum Humse Zaada Swara aur Sanskaar ka Guneghaar ( Culprit ) Hoo.I Miss U Beta..kash tum wapas aasakte aaj..Kash Hum tumhara Janam Din mana sakte.. ( Hugs the Photo n Cries ) sacch kahu jab humne Suna ki Swara was Trying to Convince Sanskaar abt ur Returning i was Happy per jab Sanskaar ne mana kardiya main kuch nhi karpayi kyounki jis tarah tum Mere Bete ho ussi Tarrah Sanskaar is also My Son woh bhi Mera Bada Beta.jab tak woh Khud tumhe Wapas nhi laata main bhi Chup rahugi ( Cries Miserably )

Swara who Heard all these was Crying too Seeing Her Badi Maa's Pain n Tears.She Immediately Went to Sanskaar n Tried to Convince Him.

Swara : ( Crying ) Ohh Shit
.Yes its Laksh's Birthday n No One Remembers n Badi Maa Still Misses Laksh n wants Him in Home Bak bt Shayad Sanskaar ke Ghusse ke wajeh se She is Quite n Suffering frm Inside..i need to Talk to Sanskaar abt this n Convince.Him at Any Cost.bt kaise..woh mana hi karega.. ( Nervous )

Swara Immediately Rushed to Sanskaar n To Tell wat all She Saw n Heard wid Fear in Her Heart while Sanskaar was Bzy in His Office Wrk on Laptop.

Swara : ( Breathing Heavily ) Sanskaar Suno..Its really Important...

Sanskaar : Haa Bolo...( Bzy in Wrk )

Swara : ( Nervous ) Plzz Suno na..Do ur Office Wrk Later..First Listen to Me..

Sanskaar : ( Still Bzy on Laptop ) Jaa Bolo Jaan ...m Listening..

Swara : ( Fumbles n Holds Her Anarkali Tightly ) Mujhe tumse LLAKSH k baare main Baath karni hai..

Sanskaar who was Doing His Wrk Stopped b/w n Stared Swara n Stood Up Angrily after Listening Laksh's Name frm Her Mouth.

Sanskaar : ( Angry n Jerks Her Hand n Stands Up in Anger ) WTH Swara..I told U b4 Only dat I dnt wanna Talk abt Laksh anymore..i have Clearly told u dat m nt gonna Give Laksh another Chance n dats Final..

Swara : ( Tries to Convince ) Bt Listen na Sanskaar..First U Calm Down n Sit Down n Lo
Listen to Me Wid a Normal Mood..Plzzz ( Pout Face ) For Me Plzzz

Sanskaar : ( Calms Down ) Okk..Tell wat u wanna say ?? ( Determined Look ) bt haa if I Find ur Reason Invalid m telling U B4 Only dat m nt gonna Listen to ur Demand..Ok ?

Swara : Ohhkk..Baba..Sure..If u find m Wrong den dnt Listen to me..bt m Sure u will Agree wid me.. (Winks at Sanskaar Naughty )

Sanskaar : Accha Lets See..U tell First..

Swara : ( Takes a Long Breath ) hmm..Listen..i jst saw Badi Maa going to Her.Room..

Sanskaar : ( Confused ) Haa toh..if She went to Her Room den wats Wrong in it ?? N Hw is it Related to Laksh ??

Swara : ( Frustrated ) Offooo..Pehle Puri baath toh sunlo.. baad main puchlena jitna puchna hai..

Sanskaar : Ohhkk Baba..Continue..

Swara : Haa Toh Where was i ?? Haa..I saw Badi Maa going to HER ROOM wid TEARY EYES...wen I followed Her to Chk whether everything is Ryt or Nt..i saw Badi Maa Crying n Talking to Laksh's Photo...n was Remembering Laksh alot..n Do U Remember wate Toda

Sanskaar : ( Confused ) No..u tell wats Spcl ??

Swara : Laksh's Birthday. .

Sanskaar : ( Remembers ) Ohh Yes. ..u r Ryt...I Forgot..Ohh God..Hw cn i ??

Swara : Haa Sanskaar..nt only U ..We all Forgot abt it..we really Forgot to see Badi Maa's n Bade Papa's Pain.( Keeps Her Hands on Sanskaar's Shoulder ) Sanskaar we heed to do Something fr dem plzzz..

Sanskaar was Quite n did not Uttering a Word n Lost in a Deep Thots.Swara Notices It n Takes a Long n Deep Breath n Drags Him to AP's Room.

Swara : Theek hai..u dnt Believe Me na..den Come wid Me..I will Show U Something.

Sanskaar : ( Shocked ) Swara..per Kaha..

Swara : Jst Come wid me..dnt Utter a Word nw...

Swara Dragged Sanskaar towards AP's Room n Made Him Stand in Front of the Door son that He Cud Listen n See AP's Pain..

Inside AP Room

AP : ( Crying Miserably ) M Sorry Beta..Plzz Maaf karde..I cnt do anything fr u..kyounki jo kaam tune kiya hai na usse mere Pehle Bete ko Takleef pahuchi hai..aur main tere liye apne pehle bacche ka Dil nhi todsakti..after all usne hi mujhe pehle Maa banke ka Ehsaas diwaya tha..haa i knw ki He is nt My Own Son bt still usne kbhi mujhe koi aur Rishte ke Ehsaas hone hi nhi diya hamesha Maa ka hi Ehsaas dilwaya hai usne..usne Hamesha meri baath maani bina Mana kiye aur abb jab meri baari aayi uski Ek baath sunne ki toh jab woh Puri Tareeke se Sahi hai apni Jagah.He is Protecting His Wife phir main kaise mana karu usse..Plzz Maaf kardena Laksh..Teri Maa Majboor hai.. ( Hugs the Photo n Cries Miserably )

Sanskaar who saw da Scenario was Shocked n Tears were Rolling frm His Eyes Continously n Stared Swara wid a Determined Look..

Sanskaar : ( Determined n Wipes His Rears ) Swara mujhe Ek Imp Kaam yaad aagaya..i will b bak..u take care..

Saying this Sanskaar Rushed Outside Somewhere Living a Smile on Swara's Face wid Tears of Happiness Falling frm Her Eyes.

Swara : ( Smiles ) Mujhe pata hai tumhe kaha jaana hai aur Woh Imp Kam kya hai ..i knw it..M Proud of U My Hubby. .Love U.Muuwwaahh...

Swara Wipes Her Tears n Looks at AP wid a Happy Smile n Whispers Slowly wich was Unnoticed by AP.

Swara : Badi Maa bas thodi daer Aur uske baad apke yeh Dukh ke Aasu Khushi k aasu main badal jayege..aapka Bada Beta will b Bak ur Younger Son Soon..

**********Flash Back Ends*********

Maheshwari Mansion

In Car

Laksh : Bhai..yeh Ladkiyaan itna tym kyoun lagati hai ?? We r Waiting fr dem since Past 30 Mins n still they r getting Ready ?? I dnt understand ki r we going fr a Shopping or a Party ?? Jo yeh dono itna Tym lerahe hai Ready hone..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles ) Haa u ryt Lucky...these Girls r alwyz Late in getting Ready...imagine ki agr Shopping k liye yeh haal den Party k liye toh we cnt even think.. ( Laughs )

Laksh : ( Laughs too ) Haa Bhai ryt..

As SanLak were Talking eachother n were Having a Fun Tym as Maheshwari Brothers after Really a Long Tym they saw 2 Girls Coming Out of Maheshwari Mansion . Sanskaar was Mesmerized Seeing One Girl n was Lost in Her Beauty n Goes Near Swara n Stares Her Romantically wid a Naughty Smile.

Swara : ( Blushes ) Ssanskaar. .Kya hua ?? Wat r u Staring at ??

Sanskaar : ( Smiles Naughtily ) Looking at My Wife's Beauty..Any Problem ?? ( Leans Towards Her Lips Slowly )

Swara : ( Blushes n Stops Him as He was Near ) Haa ..Prblm Hai..Mr Maheshwari we r infront of Our House n ryt Nw Laksh n Uttara r Watching Us wid a Teasing Look..Plzz Control urself..abb is Ghar main Sirf Uttara nhi hai hume Tease karne..Uska Partner yaani tumhara Bhai bhi aagaya hai hume Tease karne..Soo Plzz Control Ur self Mr Maheshwari. ..


Sanskaar : Hmm Yes..waise u r ryt..we shud be more Careful haa..bt haa nw m Leaving U ...bt inside Our Room I wont Leave U fr w Second also haa.. ( Naughtily Smiles )

Laksh n Uttara Who Heard the Last Part strtd Teasing The 2 Love Birds.

Laksh : Bhai...Bhabhi ko Chodna Pakadna sab baadmain haa..pehle Chalo We r gettting Late fr Shopping...

Uttara : Haa Bhai.Laksh Bhai is ryt..aap Bhabhi ko jab pakde na jab aap Ghar jaldi aayege.. ( Giggles )

SwaSan were Embarrassed Yet Agn in Front of their Family Members coz they were all Going Out n Heard Uttara's n Laksh's Teasing..

Sujata : ( Laughs ) Sanskaar aur Swara lagta hai u Guyz r Made fr Teasing Only.. ( Goes Near to Sanskaar ) Sanskaar Romance zara Tym aur jagah dekhge ki jaati hai..kab samjhega yeh tu..( Holds Sanskaar's Ears n Loks at Swara Lovingly ) coz of U My Poor Bahu gets Embarrassed every tym..

All the Members of Maheshwari Family had a Lovely n a Fun Tym wid Eachother after Really a Long Tym.Everyone in da Family Seemed Very Happy n Joyful seeing themselves Happy after a Long Tym.Soon Everyone Went to their Destinations to Proceed wid their Weekend Plans i.e SwaSan,Uttara n Laksh to the Shopping Mall and RP DP AP n Sujata to Meet Thier Relatives.

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Kolkata Royal Mall

SwaSan Uttara n Laksh Reaced da Mall n were Excited to Spend da Entire Day Out in Enjoying n Having Fun.Sanskaar After reaching Mall Immediately took Swara to a Dress Shop n Told Swara to Wear a Dress.

Sanskaar : Swara Plzz Come wid Me..i need to Show u Something..

Swara: ( Confused ) bt Where ??

Sanskaar : Jst come na..u will come to knw..

Swara : ( Smiles ) Ok Baba..Come lets go..

SwaSan Went to a Dress Shop n Sanskaar Selected a Dress n Told.Swara to Wear it.Swara seeing da Dress was Surprised n Shocked.

Swara : ( Shocked ) Sanskaar..fr whom r u Selecting this Dress ??

Sanskaar : Fe U Jaan..u r going to Wear this Today till we r Out n Chng to yr Original Dress b4 going to Home..

Swara : ( Shocked ) Wat ?? Fr Me ?? U knw na i dnt like such Dresses...den hw cn i wear it ?? Dat Day i Wore coz No One was der in Home n Only U were there bt Here look all r there..hw cn i Wear ??

Sanskaar : haa i knw u dnt Like such Dresses..bt fr a Chng u cn try na.. ( Bzy in Selecting Dress )

Swara : Bt..wat if Bade Papa or anyone else comes to knw abt it ??

Sanskaar : ( Smiles n Holds Her Shoulder Gently ) dnt worrt dey wont come to knw..they dnt come to this Mall coz its Youngsters Mall na..n if they come to knw also its ok..i will tell I told U to Wear it..soo Plzz Jst Wear this Dress fr Me..i wanna Enjoy My Weekend it My Wife like a Younster .

Swara : ( Blushes ) Ok..fr U Only..bt Promise ki U will b there wid Me all the Tym..m Scared if anyone Teases Me..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles ) Haa Sure Jaan..Dnt Worry i will b wid u Only..

Swara : ( Smiles n Hugs ) Thnk U..

Sanskaar : Ur Welcome ( Smiles n Kisses Her Forhead Lovingly ) Accha Go n Wear this Dress n Come...till den i will Pay fr this n Come..

Swara : Haa Ok...

Saying this Sanskaar went to Counter to Pay the Bill n Swara Went inside the Trial Room to Chnge Her Dress into da Dress Selected by Sanskaar..She Smiled n Blushed Looking at the Dress n Soon Wore It n Came Out..Sanskaar who was Waiting fr Swara Outside the Trial Room was Awstruck n Mesmerized Seeing Swara in da Dress n was Lost in Her Modern Modern Avatar Yet Agn.Swara Wore a Off Shoulder White Dress Lil Above Her Knees.Swara Blushes da Way Sanskaar Stares at Her n Goes Near Him While Blushing.

Swara : i thot to ask u hw m i looking in this Dress ? Bt Ur Eyes told Me everything.i got My Answer.Thnk U fr Such a Wonderful Dress..

Sanskaar : Thnks n U ? Infact i shud tell u Thnks fr Wearing this Dress wich is Out of ur Comfort Level..Thnks fr Wearing it fr Me..n Yes U r Really Looking ( Whispers in Ears Slowly ) HOT n Sexy ( n Moved Bak wid a Naughty Smile ) n off course Beautiful in this Dress...

Swara : ( Blushes ) Thnks...n nw Lets Go..Uttara n Laksh myt b Waiting fr Us..

Sanskaar : Haa Chalo..

Both Swara n Sanskaar Left frm da Dress Shop n Sets Towards Uttara n Laksh in another Shop.Swara was Near Sanskaar n Holded His Hands Tightly as She was Scared of Eve Teasing.

Swara : Sanskaar Plzz Stay wid Me Only haa..m feeling Scared...( Tightens Her Grip on Sanskaar's Habds )

Sanskaar : ( Consoles Her by Keeping His Hands on Hers ) Haa Jaan..m here dnt worry..ne come on plzz Enjoy Freely na..if u keep Fearing Loke this den hew will u enjoy..accha ok if u r really Uncomfortable dem Come we will Chnge ur Dress..Go n Wear ur Dress n come ( Feels Sad n Holds Her Hands n Proceeds towards Old Dress Shop )

Swara : Guilty n Stops Him ) Accha Ok Sorry...I will Behave Normal..i knw u r wid Me..so i will Behave Normal nw..

Sanskaar : ( Happy ) Pakka na..Sure ??

Swara : ( Blushes ) Haa Pakka..

Sanskaar was Happy n they both Headed towards Uttara n Lucky in another Shop..As they were Walking Hand in hand SwaSan saw a Cute Lil Baby Gal n a Baby Boy of 5 Yrs Old Fyting fr a Small Chocolates n this Made a Smile on their Face n were Lost in their Own Thots.

***********Dream**********

Sanskriti : Mumma..Look Rohan is nt Allowing me to Eat My Chocolates. .He is Snatching it frm me.. ( Crying )

Rohan : Crying too ) No Mumma ..Sanskriti is telling Lies..these r My Chocolates..She Snatched it frm Me..

Sanskriti : No Mumma..Rohan is telling Lies..

Swara who was Bzy in Kitchen came to Them in Smiling Mood n Tried to Explain them to Share n Eat.

Swara : ( Smiling ) Aww..MybBabies..come here..wat Mumma told u Yesterday..do u remember? ?

Sanskriti n Rohan : ( Sniles ) Haa Mumma..we do Remember..

Swara : Den..y r u Fyting..Come on be a Good Mumma's Kids n Share the Chocolates n Eat..n always Remember Sharing is Caring Beta..

Jst then a 2 Strong Hands of a Man Comes frm Bak n Hugs Swara Lovingly n Kids seeing da Man Jumped in Excitement n Ran towards da Man n Hugged Him wich Made the Man to Leave the Back Hug of Swara.

Sanskriti n Rohan : Paaappaaa..Yaayy Papa Came...

Rohan : Papa Papa did u Bring da Items i told U..

Sanskriti : n Papa did u bring my Itrms too ??

Man : ( Smiles n Hugs the Kids ) Haa Baccho..aisa hua kya jab mere bacche rqstd Me Things n I denied or Forget them..Never..Yes I Brought it n its in Car..I will Bring it inside Later..Ok ...

Sanskriti : ( Excited ) Wowowow..Thnk U Papa..u r da Best...Love U ( Kisses His Cheeks )

Rohan : ( Excited too ) Love U too Papa (Kisses His Cheeks too )

Man : ( Smiles n Kisses Their Forhead n Hugs ) Love U too Baccho..

Swara who Watched the Beautiful Scene had Tears in Her Eyes wich was Noticed by the Man.He Left the Kids n told dem to go n Play n went Near Swara n Hugged Her Lovingly.

Man : Baccho..do one thing..go n Play outside..will join u Guyz Soon..

Kids : Ok Papa...

Soon Kids Left n da Man aheaded towards Swara wid a Smile n Higged Her Tightly n Lovingly.

Swara : ( Hugs Bak ) Thnk U SANSKAAR ( Yes the Man is None Other dan Our Sanskaar ) fr 2 Such Wonderful Gifts u gave Me..agr tum nhi hote toh yeh dono nhi aate mere Life main..maine toh Hopes chod di thi lekin U had Hopes Still n Kept Me Encouraging..Thnks alot ( Tears of Happiness )

Sanskaar : ( Smiles n Kissed Her Forhead Lovingly ) Jaan ... i had Hopes coz i knew it will Happen One Day..i had full Faith on U..i knew u wud One Day Surely give Me this Happiness..

Swara : Thnks alot...n I LOVE U

Sanskaar : Ur Welcome n I LOVE U TOO..

Both Hugged Eachother Lovingly n Passionately n More Tightly as Tym Passed n their Love on Eachother Increased Day by Day.

**********Dream End **********

Swara n Sanskaar who were Dreaming abt the Scene had Tears in their Eyes n As They were Weeping they saw a Middle Aged Couple who were too Watching the Kids Were Happy wid eachother n Enjyoing the Present Moment Watching da Kids Fyting fr Chocolates.

Man : I Love U Jaan..thnk u fr Giving me these Two Memorable Gifts Ever..Thnk u Alot..

Lady : Thnk U Jaan..fr having Faith in Me dat i will Give u this Happiness..maine toh Umees chod di thi..bt u were da only One who Supported Me alot n had Faith in Me..thnks alot..aaj jo ( looks at the Kids wid Teary Eyes ) yeh Bacche mere Life main aaye hai na is all Coz of U..thnks alot..Bhagwaan ne hume itne saalo baad hume Twins ke saath Bless Kiya all coz of u coz u had Faith in Me..thnks alot..

Man : Ur Welcome :). ..m alwyz wid U Dear..

Swara n Sanskaar who da Conversation were Shocked n Speechless Hearing the Conversation n were Happy n a New Hopes Took Place in their Hearts wid a New Determination too..Both Stared eachother Lovingly n Talked n Conveyed their Msgs to Eachother through their Hearts n Eyes.

Swara : ( Monologue ) Thnk U Sanskaar fr Everything..after seeing da Scene wich we saw jst nw i understood Hw Lucky I m to Have U..I Promise U No Matter agr hume Bacche ho ya no ho..i m alwyz urs..n Will Never Leave U..Its My Promise to U Sanskaar...Agr Humara Pyaar Saccha hai toh we will Surely be Blessed wid this Happiness ( Looks at Kids ) One Day..I LOVE U ..Thnks Alot fr Coming in My Life..

Sanskaar : ( Monogue ) I too Promise U Swara ki Kids r nt Imp fr Me..Wat Matters is U Swara fr Me..Kids r My Second Priority My First Priority is U..I Promise agr Hume Bacche bhi hue toh its fyn wid Me Swara..Jab tak u r there wid Me I dnt need anything..Thnk U fr Coming in My Lifem.I will Alwyz b wid U ..n dats My Promise. .

SwaSan : Ur Welcome :)..I LOVE U...

Soon Both Hugged Eachother wid Teary Eyes Filled wid Love n Only Love fr Eachother.

Gaye Bhool Jo Lamhe, Woh Dard Ke Pal The
Behtar Ab Din Ho Kal Ke Kal Ke
Kis Tarah Se Tera Ab Shukr Adaa Ho
Teri Nazar Karam Ke Sad Ke Sad Ke

Gaye Bhool Jo Lamhe, Woh Dard Ke Pal The
Behtar Ab Din Ho Kal Ke Kal Ke
Aarzooyen Sang Lekar
Khwab Phir Jo Ude
Thaame Tera Yaar Daaman
Tere Mere Mere Tere
Raston Pe Rehna Yuhin...

( This Entire Emotional Scene n SwaSan Dream was Suggested by #Sanchi_Modi.Thnks fr the Wonderful Idea #Sanchi_Modi :) )

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Soon After their Emotional Scene SwaSan were in a Indian Dress Shop where Swara n Uttara n were Selecting Some Indian Wears fr Daily Wear . Where as Sanskaar was Lil Far frm Ladies Section was Helping Swara to Select Dresses through Mirror Indirectly.

Swara : Bhaisab..show me dat Dress na...
SalesMan : Ok Maam Sure..

Sales Man Showed the Red Anarkali n Swara Tried da Dress On Her through Mirror n Asked Sanskaar Indirectly . Sanskaar Smiled n Examined da Dress on Swara n Gestured a No Signal..Swara den Took another Blue Color Anarkali n Did da Same thing n Showed Sanskaar bt Sanskaar this Tym tok Denied n Swara Finally Showed a Pink n White Combination Color Anarkali wid Embroidery Wrk n Sanksaar Immediately after Seeing da Dress on Swara Signalled Yes wid a Big Smile on His Face.Swara Blushed n Instructed Sales Man to Pack da Dress..

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After the Indian Dress Shop SwaSan Uttara n Laksh were Walking towards another Shop wen Laksh Dashed a Young Beautiful Girl Who was Wearing a Beautiful Indian Attire wid a Open Hair n wid a Smile on Her Face.

Girl : Ohh M Really Sorry..Sorry Once Agn..was in a Lil Hurry..M Really Sorry..Plzx Maaf kardijye..

Laksh who was Totally Lost in Her Beauty at the First Sight was Staring Her Romantically wid a Blank Face.

Girl : Hello..Mr...m talking to Um.r u Listening...Hello ( Shakes Laksh )

Laksh : ( Comes in His Senses ) Haa Haa..M Sorry..kya kaha aapne..

Girl : Woh maine kaha M Sorry..Main Zara Jaldi main thi toh isiliye dekha nhi n Dashed U..M really Sorry..

Laksh : ( Fully Flat ) Its Ok..Np..it was Actually My Mistake.i was Walking Carelessly..M Sorry..

Girl : ( Smiles ) Its Ok ( Stares Laksh too )

SwaSan n Uttara who were Watching n Listening all these were Shocked n Their Mouth were Wide Open in a Shock coz According to them Laksh Never Apologised to Anyone Espclly to a Girl n dat too to a Unknown Girl Never..They Were Shocked n Stared Laksh n da Girl Surprisingly.

Uttara : ( Shocked ) Bhai..did u see ?

Sanskaar : ( Shocked too ) Haa Uttara. .i saw..Swara..did u see da Same thing wich Me n Uttara saw jst nw ??

Swara : ( Shocked ) Haa Sanskaar..i too Saw da Same thing only..Laksh Maheshwari Apologizing a Gal..Wooow..Dats Gr8.iska Matlab mamajhe ho Sanskaar Maheshwari. .

Uttara : Bhai ko toh pata nhi bt I Understood da Meaning...( Still Shocked )

Swara : Kya ??

SwaSan n Uttara : ( Excited n Stated Eachother n Screamed Loudly ) Pyaar Hus Iqraar hua Pyaar Se Phir Kyoun Darts hai Dil. .. ( Laughed Loudly )

Listening to the Scream Laksh n da Girl Came in their Senses n were Blushing Red n Avoided Eachother's Eye Contact. Both were Completely Unaware abt the New Feelings n Y were they Staring Eachother on their First Meet itself.

Gal : Sorry..once agn..

Laksh : No its ok..M sorry...

Jst den Swara n da Girl Noticed Eachother Carefully n were Remembering Something n were Heading towards Eachother n a Small n Slight Smile were Appearing on thir Faces n Were Singing a Song While Looking Eachother.

Swara : Jeevan Yeh Suro Se Sajati
Rishtey Yeh Suro Se Banati

Girl : Bajti Hai Toh Pyar Ki Dhun
Ek Dhup Chanchal Hai Ek Chandani

Swara : Phir Bhi Hai Ek Duje Ke Liye Bani
Dilo Mein Hai Pyar Bhara

Girl : Suro Se Saji Hai SWARA

Swara : Rago Se Rachi Hai RAGINI


Swara n Girl : ( Excited ) Swaragini Swaragini Swaragini Swaragini
Swaragini Swaragini...

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Precap : SwaRagini Meeting n SwaSan Moments.

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Guyz Included the Ideas n Suggestions wich u Told Me..Hope U Will Like the Way i Presnted ..Thn U All of U fr Ur Valuable Suggestions n Ideas n Support..It Means alot..Hope u will Like It. Do Leave ur Comments in the Comment Box Below :)


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Posted: 9 years ago
Aw beautiful update
Loved it
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
woww..
finally every1 happy..
raglak falling for each other and swasan lovely moments..

great..
continue soon..
thank for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

woww..

finally every1 happy..
raglak falling for each other and swasan lovely moments..

great..
continue soon..
thank for the pm..


Thnks alot 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetaddict

awesome update👏

i just loved it
cant wait for ur next update
thanks for pm


Thnks alot 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: alisha17

Aw beautiful update

Loved it
Can't wait for next part


Thnks alot 😊

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