Shanav-COLLAB SS YEH DOSTI HUM NAHI TODENGE (PART17 pg72) - Page 7

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PART 5:THE PLAN

Manav is surprised seeing their superpowers
Vasant:manav hmare greh K log boht alag hn..ek dusre ki takleef ko apni takleef samajhte hn..unka sath dete hn..sukh ho dukh ho hamesha ek dusre ki dhal bn K rehte the..kisi pe bewajah ka shaq karna..ilzaam lgana aur phir nirdosh sabit hone par chupke se gayab ho jana..ye sab hmare greh par nahi hota

Manav is in tears as he is understanding what vasant wants to say..

Vasant continues: hm jab dharti pe aye to hme insano K taur tareeko ko dekh K baukhla gaye..koi musibat me h ye dekh K b muh pher lena..kisi ki bebasi ka fayda uthana..ye sb hm nhi dekh skte..iss dharti par insaniyat khatam ho gai h..insan insan ka dushman kb bn gya..kisi ko na pta chla..

(Moves forward n folds hands):tumhe humne apna sabse bada raaz btaya hai manav.. tum iska jo fayda uthana chahte ho utha lo..par ek vinti h ek akhri baar muje mere 2015 se milwa do..usk baad mai tumhara ghulam bnne K liye bhi taiyar hu..

Manav: vasant bhaiya aapko mere aage hath jodne ki zarurat nahi..2015 ne meri jaan bachai thi..uska udhar bhi chukana hai..mai aapke sath hu..

Vasant: manav ek aur baat...pritesh ko pata chal chuka hai hum aliens hain..wo meri aur hemant ki superpowers janta h aur wo baar baar koshish krta hai humara raaz bahar nikalne ka par kisi na kisi tarah hum bachte rage..par wo haar nahi manega..tum bhi dhyan rakhna uska..

Manav:aap chinta na krein vasant bhaiya..pritesh ko kaise handle krna hai wo hum aaram se sochnge..dont worry..

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Manav is sitting in the lawn alone thinking about all that happened in the past few days..

Sharad sees him sitting there all alone n decides to end the matter there and then..

Sharad:manav muje tumse baat karni h

Manav:haan bolo na sharad

sharad:manav plzz ye sab khatam krte hn..yaha tum dukhi ho waha ana pareshan hai..mai bhi tang aa gya hun..mai Abhi ana ke paas jata hun aur use saaf saaf sab bol deta hu..

Manav:sharad ruko ruko..plzz aisa kuch mat karo..

Sharad:par manav..ana K liye tumse better koi nahi hai..logically tum dono ek sath boht ache lagte ho..plzz muje usse baat krne do..

Manav: Sharad..ruko..ye baat hum dono decide na karein to better hoga...ana ki bhi to koi marzi hogi apne life partner ko le ke..kuch hoga uske dil mein..lets let her decide...after all ye uski puri zindagi ka sawal hai

Sharad :Tum kehna kya chahte ho manav muje samaj nahi aya..

Manav:Ek ladki ki umeedein hoti hain apne jeevan sathi se..wo umeedein wo pyar wo judav..sharad hum uske lie ye sab decide nahi kar sakte..ye faisla hum uspe chodte hain..

Sharad:Manav..tumne bilkul thik kaha..Par hum karenge kya

Manav:Ek idea hai mere paas

Manav tells sharad an idea...sharad says huun..

Manav n sharad both start preparing..

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Raat ko they invite ana over to ghotala house..
In a dark rum a projector and a screen is arranged and a chair is present..

Ana enters..a voice tells her to sit on the chair facing the screen..

As soon as she sits...the projector starts with ana sharads memories playing..

Sharad : Maine jab tumhe pahli bar dekha to mujhe ye laga ki tumhare jaise sadharan ladki ko dekhke dil me dhakdhak kyu ho rahi hai..tumhari har ada har baat me mera dil yayayaya karta tha


then manav anas memories start playing
Manav : ana jab mein sarhad paar tha dushmano ke kabze mein tab mera ek ek pal mein yahi soch ke guzaarta tha ki nahi mein himmat nahi haar sakta ..kyuki sarhad paar koi hai jo mera intezaar kar rahi ... har waqt mere sath tum hi thi. Tumhare bina mera tab koi nahi tha. Aur koi bhi chij me mai tumhare bare me soche bina nahi kar sakta tha .patah hai . Jab maine wo pahla nasha song suna pahli bar tab mere samne tum hi aayi. Jab bhi soulmate ke bare me sochta hu tab tum samne aati ho. Jab bhi koi pari ki kahani sunta hu pari ki shakal lekar tum hi aati ho life me ..

Ana is in tears seeing all this..
Ana:tum dono ne ye mere liye kia..?

Sharad:Ana m hurt..jis tarah se tumne mere bhaiya bhabhi pe ilzam lagaya...m hurt

Ana:Mai sorry bol rahi hun sharad

Sharad:Tumhare sorry bolne se mere wounds band nahi ho jayenge..but phir bhi i"ll forgive u..kyunki mai koi b gila rakh ke age badhna nahi chahta..tum janna chahti ho ye sab yadien humn tumhe kyu dikhai..

Manav:Ana..Ab bas boht hua...its enough..hum thak chuke hain ye chuhe billi ka khel khel ke...ab khatam karo..we both want to end this...tum humme se ek choose karo..either me or Sharad..tum chinta mat karo..humme se koi bhi hurt nahi hoga..tum Sharad ko choose karogi To I'll happily move on..

Sharad:n agr tum Manav ko choose karogi to mai age badh jaunga..

Manav:U deserve all this world happiness ana..tum boht achi ho..plzz apne sath ye atyachar mat karo..plzz lets finish this..tumhe samay lena hai le lo..but decision 100%tumhara hoga..hum dono me se koi bhi interfere nahi karega


Ana is crying badly n runs away from there

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hope you all liked the chapter..will b waiting for your comments..
special thanks to kulasya😳 thanku for helping me and krishu :* :* :*
Edited by .anjali. - 9 years ago
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Superb Update Anjudarling...
tune rula diya...😭😭
Vasant greatful to Manav for his help... & tels him soon after 2015 wil meet them he wil b his servant for ever😭😭😭😭😭 itna roi me is dialogue pe anju...
Manav in turn being greatful to ghotalaz as for them he wil get to thnk 2015...
Shanav talk abt Anna... Sharad tells MAnav that he wil tel Anna that he no more loves her... & Manav loves her trully.. But Manav says let Anna decide as it is her life & v shudn't dictate it to her... & it shud b her own choice & wil...
true gentle men.. IF Anna would hv heard this sentence she would hv again fallen for Manav...
Shanav decide sumthing...
They invite Anna at ghotlaz house... & Sharad & Manav one by one confess their feelings for her... & hw they feel for her from d moment they saw her till date... yeh wala bhi emotional tha.. but me roi nai isme...

Abhi bus Anna Jaldi decide kare...

Btw nice dialogues written.. well done👏👏
m proud of u anju...
continue soon...
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was good anji especially manav ka dialogue for ana manav and vasant scene...

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Awesome guys!! I haven't read all parts, just started, but it's brilliant.. aisa kuch creatives dikhayen toh mazza aa jaye!! Great job!!
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Anjudarling ss update karo na...
Index update karo na...
20 k baad karogi???
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Anjudarling ss update karo na...

Index update karo na...
20 k baad karogi???

hiyuu kal btaya tha na kaam chalu hai..let krishu b a little free tab
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Originally posted by: .anjali.

hiyuu kal btaya tha na kaam chalu hai..let krishu b a little free tab

Tabhi to bola 20 k baad karogi..
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Tabhi to bola 20 k baad karogi..

yup krishu kregi post
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Originally posted by: .anjali.

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to barobar😛

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