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Ki haal chal hai yaro.. Changey ho na sub. 1st of all HAPPY CHOCOLATE DAY. and now thank you very much for your response.Manan k bina days kaise guzar rahe hain.😊 I tou missing their cuteness very badly. tum logon ka kya haal hai.

Ok chalo bolo update chayeye kisi ko.

Awaz nahi ayi... jaldi jaldi batao😆

Ok to update pe hi chalte haan. waise guys yeh story kuch zyda lambi nahi ho gayi😊

Sorry in advance for mistakes.


Part 3 a

Convocation Day.

Nandini was getting ready and when she came outside in her uniform.She was looking like a cute doll.



Manik love filled eyes stopped on her and his hands automatically moved towards his pocket. He pulled his phone out of his pocket and then clicked a pic of his Princess.


Nandini went to Chacha and Chachi and took their blessings .In mean time Manik again took the report of his all preparation for Today.


Before leaving Manik Told Chacha about his plan and took his Blessings.


Convocation Venue.


Manik and his all friends except Abhi were there for security purpose.Manik's eyes were following Nandini like a shadow.


Function started and ended peacefully. After the function Manik got a call from Dhruv who told him that Saxena's want to meet the CEO of Malhotra Industries.


Manik: Ok I'll tell you later what to do in this matter.


After ending the call when Manik turned himself and saw in that direction in which Nandini was standing some mints before. He didn't found her there. He immediately dialed his friends' numbers and asked about Nandini. But they also Didn't saw her.


Manik in his panic state shout on them and then started searching for Nandini and this time his eyes stopped on some faces. He saw that those boys were also there.


He called his IT department and asked them the exact location of Nandini .But when he listened from them that Some goons were trying to drag her outside then Manik's blood started boiling.

He immediately ran in that direction which IT department told him.He saw 3 boys were dragging her outside. He ran in that direction and grabbed the collar of that person who was holding her by her arm. Manik with his collar pulled him back and after turning him gave a tight puch on his stomach.


Other 2 was now holding Nandini but when they saw Manik was very furiously beating the 1st person then 2nd person came towards Manik to rescue his friend but he kicked the 2nd person with same intensity. 3rd person was still holding Nandini by her waist,,, who was loosing her conscious level.


Manik when saw that Nandini was fainting he pulled Nandini to himself in a quick jerk and punched the 3rd person on his face then very slowly placed her on nearby chair . Manik turned to them in extreme anger he came towards them and beating them with kicks and punches. While punching he says: Teri himmat kaisey hoe meri Nandu ko aisey hath lagane ki haan?Meri Nandu ka peecha kare ga (punch)... Meri Nandu ko darane ki koshish kare ga haan( he kicked on 2nd person's leg)


Manik again gave a hard punch on 3rd one's stomach and said: Meri Nandini ko hath lagae ga... Meri Nandini ko.


He folded is arms backside and said : Terey inhi hatho ne meri Nandini ko chua na . ab dekh mein in hathon k sath kya karta hoon.


Manik in his anger broke his arm bone and then said: Ja aur ja k bata de apney os Boss ko k os ne bohat bari ghalti kar li Meri Nandini ka itney din peecha kar k. Ab Bach sakta hai to Bach k dikhae mujh se.



At this time Cabir, Aliya , Mukti, Navya all came there and saw Manik was threatening 1 person and 2 were lying on floor badly injured then their eyes shifted towards unconscious Nandini.


Cabir came towards Manik and hold him by his shoulder and said: Manik chal chal yahan se.


Manik turned towards Nandini and started moving towards her.He called her name in loud voice to bring her back in conscious but no progress.


Manik immediately picked her in his arms and said to Cabir: Main Nandini ko le k abhi apney Mansion ja raha hoon. Tum log wahan a jana and Mukti Abhi ko kaho k Un Bast*** ko sabaq sikhane ka time a gya hai.


Cabir: Ok bro tu ja Main Doc ko Call kar k wahan pohanchne ka kahta hoon.


Manik nodded his head and left with Nandini.


Malhotra Mansion

Doc checked Nandini and said: Don't worry Mr Malhotra Don't worry I think inn ko unconscious karne k liye koi med use ki hai. Main ne os ka asar khatam karne k liye anti dose de di hai kuch time main inhe hosh a jae ga. Baqi main ne check kar liya hai . koi problem nahi hai.


Manik with gratitude: Thank you Doc thank you very much.


After this Manik sat near Nandini and while holding her hand said in emotional voice: I am sorry ...I am sorry Nandu main fail ho gya. Main ne kaha tha k main tumhara khyal rakhon ga. But nahi rakh paya . Bachpan mein Dad ne hamein dor kar diya aur ajj ... Ajj agar main thora sa bhi late ho jata to... I am sorry... sorry Nandu... really very sorry.


Nandini who was coming back to her sense heard this line: Bachpan mein Dad ne hamein dor kar diya.


She very slowly opened her eyes and looked at Manik's face. Then she looked at her surroundings and very slowly called Manik to ask where she is?


Nandini: Ma...nu


Manik at once looked up and saw Nandini's opened eyes.


Manik in his emotional state moved towards her and takes her in his arms and started apologizing.



Nandini shushed him and said: Main thek hoon .


Then she asked: Manu hum kahan haan abhi.aur wo wo larke...


Manik in his emotional state looked in her eyes and then after giving a sweet peck on her forehead he said: Ghar pe haan hum . abhi tum aur kuch nahi socho aur rest karo hum baad main baat Karen gey. (and closed Nandini's eyes with his hand)


Nandini again drifted to sleep.Manik came outside and he received call from Abhi who told him KAM ho gya .


Manik then called Mukti and said to her : Mukti Breaking news for your channel " In a police Raid at Saxena Industries Police seized 20 kg Drugs and the owner of Saxena Industries is in police custody"


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Part 3 B


After this call he again dialed Dhruv Number and told him : Dhruv jaise hi saxena's ki news on air ati hai. Very next day tum lawyer k sath contact karo aur wahan ki court mein case file karo.


Dhruv : ok boss.

At this time Manik saw his remaining friends entering in his House.

All with worried faces came towards him and asked: Manik ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Nandini ... kya kaha doc ne.

On the way Cabir told Navya the whole story of Manan.

She came forward and asked worriedly: Manik Nandini thek hai na?

Manik looked towards Cabir and on same moment Navya told him: Cabir ne mujhe sub kuch bata diya hai.

Manik: Navya Nandini thek hai bus rest kar rahe hai.

Others: Thank God wo thek hai.

Cabir: Guys osey rest karne dete haan . abhi hum chaltey haan.

Others: Hmmm thek hai. And they said bye to Manik

Inside the room Nandini wokeup again with heavy head.She looked here and there while holding her head and then her eyes stopped on 1 pic in that room which was placed on sidetable.

Malhotra's Family pic.

Nandini with shocked eyes while holding her head moved at that side and then picked that pic.She saw Manik's Father and Mother's picture with young Manik.

Nandini's POV

Yeh... Yeh to Manik k... Mery Manu k parents haan . Yash uncle and aunty yeh yahan... aur yeh larka... Yeh pic yahan ... Kahen yeh...

She with shocked mind placed that pic back on that table and started opening drawers of that table to confirm her doubt.


She found nothing then she moved to other side table to search for any other evidence. In 1st drawer she found their childhood pic which was placed under a file.

Nandini's POV

Yeh pic yahan... yeh to Manik k pass thi na... kitni fight ki thi hum dono ne is pic ko apne pass rakhne k liye.aur yeh yahan... uncle aunty ki pic bhi aur ab yeh bhi ... Means kahen yeh mera... Mera Manik... Mera Manu to nahi... mera wo cute sa bodyguard.But agar yeh mera Manu hai to ... Mujhe is ne kyo nahi bataya ... Lykin agar yeh mera Manu mera bodyguard na hoa to...(her head started spinning ) ahhh aik to mujhe itney chakar a rahe haan aur oper se yeh puzzle ...ayiappa kuch help karo na.

She again started searching in that room and atlast after sometime she found a business file signed by Manik Malhotra and a copy of his Passport with his pic which confirmed all her doubts.

Nandini was very very very much happy after knowing that She found her Manik ...The bodyguard ... her own ... her personal bodyguard for whom she was waiting.

She in excitement ran towards door coz she wants to hug him , kiss him like their childhood. She wants to tell him that how much she misses him but then her thoughts stopped her: Manik ne mujhe nahi bataya k wo mera Manu hai ( with cute pouty face). I don't like it... Mujhe bhi... mujhe bhi os se baat nahi karni... nahi batana osey k main oski Nandu hoon.Nahi batana k main ne osey kitna miss kiya...nahi batana mujhe osey kuch bhi ... Jab tak wo khud kuch nahi bole ga.


She with puppy face blabbers : So Mr Bodyguard tum ne mujhe nahi bataya na ab main bhi Tumhe kuch nahi batane wali.



She again laid down on that bed with satisfactory smile.After some time Manik came with a bowl of soup for her and made her drink that soup.


Nandini was contiuously gazing at him while taking that soup and cribbing from inside. Manik was noticing this change he thought: isey kya hogya... Yeh aisey kyo behave kar rahi hai.


After drinking that soup Nandini also left her bed and came outside. She came near the glass door and saw that it was raining outside and as rainy time was her weakness so she thought to enjoy this rain.

Nandini saw that Manik was busy in talking with his friends on phone so she escapes from there and came outside to enjoy this rain.


She extended her arms to welcome this rain and with closed eyes started spinning .


Manik after finishing that call saw that Nandini was not there so he ran towards that room in which she was resting but saw that she was not there.while searching when he came near the window of that room he saw her outside in the garden area .

He remembered that she loved rains .

Flashback.

Manik saw Nandini in garden. She was jumping in water and enjoying her time in rain.

Manik while holding umbrella called her: Nandu wapis ao .you will get sick.

Nandini while enjoying shouted in loud voice: Nooo Mujhe nahi ana. Mujhe yahan enjoy karna hai.Manik come na tum bhi yahan a jao... bht maza aye ga.

Manik came with umbrella near Nandini.

Nandini saw umbrella in Manik's hand so she in her naughtyness kissed him and throw that umbrella on other side.

Flashback end.

A smile came on Manik's face after remembering their childhood incident.Manik came with umbrella near Nandini and while holding her hand said: Nandini yaahan se chalo nahi to bemar ho jao gi.

Nandini like a kid shook in no.

Manik again said in threatening voice: Nandini chalo yahan se nahi to you know na main Tumhe utha k le jaon ga.


Nandini while smiling showed her tongue to him and said: O really Mr Bodyguard ... Tum mujhe uthao gey.


Manik with amased expression said: Yes miss Murty


Nandini pulled his collar and due to this sudden pull his face came very near to her. Manik with surprise looked in her eyes and Nandini also gazed deep in his eyes and then fussed her lips on his.

Pyaar ka Imtehan Thread 03


Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Manik was soo mesmerised to see nandu in school dress...
Manik was soo scared to loose her...
I soo luved "MERI NANDINI"...
Finally nandu came to know abt manik...
She was soo upset tht manik didnt told her...
Flashback was soo cute...
Nandu kissed him...
Cant wait for nxt update..
Luved it to the core...
Update soon..
Edited by Pari_mananholic - 9 years ago
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Wow.. Finally nandu ko pta chal gya ki manik hi mannu hai but use yeh nai pta ki manik sab janta hai and they are already married.
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nandu ko pata chal gaya k manik uska cute sa bodyguard hai wow
Awesome update dear
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
finally nandini came to know that he is her own manik
and they kissed☺️👍🏼
eagerly waiting for the next part
plz update soon.
Edited by nami169 - 9 years ago
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amazing chappy
manik toh beat shit out of the guys
harshad ur time over dude
so our nandu came to know who's her bodyguard is
omg they kissed
Plz update next part asap
plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome... Awesome...
finally nandu understood tat manik is her bodyguard...
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aweee awesome update. Loved it.
Continue soon.

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