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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR



And if it's only the parents, toh mujhe kya milega? 😊 šŸ˜› Do tellz my pyaari Charu...



I second that option only Arnav and Khuhsi with beeghe honth playing in the background :-) please -

Edited by LadyR - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: namita18

When will you update


Will do my best to post the update by Sunday morning my time...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for the delay, but I've finally unres'd here
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Edited by Chokri_ASR - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
What has my darling Aneri got for Christmas?
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow šŸ˜›
awesome update di...
the beautiful couple finally got time to be
wid each other and share some lovee...
a lot steamy one at that...!!
that was quite sexy šŸ˜‰ ...!!!!!

i really loved the festival atmosphere u described...
right from the delicacies...to dress...shopping...dinner
and the best... whole family together...!!!!

Aneri indeed is like a blessing to them...
she bought the long lost warmth to their home...
the hapiness and togetherness...!!!
another beautiful part of revealed...!!!!
loved it sooo much...
plz continue soon dear...
Edited by sweety421 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jigs

Please accept my sincere apologies for not getting to this sooner. You and your story have been in my thoughts, I needed to pen my thoughts.

How is it possible to translate the taste of something without losing so much in the effort? How is possible to capture the scent of a rose between pages?

This update, for me was all about the small joys that made big difference for our little daughter. She is not just Raizada's but ours too, you have allowed us to share in her joys and her tears... now she is ours.

This update was also about healing, healing that was necessary for all the people - three families, six adults and their babies to heal their wounds of the previous years had wrought upon them. It was particularly gratifying to see the mom and dad Raizada spoil themselves and their baby during the brightest of the seasons in the year.

One of your gifts as a writer is to find these quiet moments, small moments, full of joy that we get to share and heal alongside with your Raizadas.

It was a beautiful update Jigs. ā¤ļø

Edited by Mirabell - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi

"Arnav, what the fu..."

"Is that anyway to greet your husband? That too, a naked one..." Unquote

Oh, may I say that, that is the ONLY way to greet your husband... Laughing.. Pardon the lame pun. Just perfect Jigs. I had so much fun in this chapter. I was just collecting my favorite moments and loving how you incorporated them in my favorite story

'he shook off the excess water from his hair, splashing it directly across her face.' Ahhh... what do I say...




I laughed so hard at his creative solution of getting everyone out of the house to get some alone time with K. Do you know why? Because he could not say 'Aane Do' to this audience.

Anjali's interruption... sigh... I guess we have to forgive her for that but Khushi's response..."Baccha, no need to kiss up for ruining yet another romantic moment between us." Priceless! Laughing.

I loved the beauty of their love. Sometimes (ok most times) when kids come along, the relationship between the parents is forced to take the back seat. The magic is when you can find a balance between being parents and being spouses... that's where the best of both worlds lies. And you have given your A&K that magic. Thank you.

The christmas eve... The camaraderie not just between adults, not just between kids, but between adults and kids. One of my most favorite parts of this chapter was where Aman blocks Ari's way to demand his due. Sometimes a secondary character can almost take the most favorite spot. Aman did that here... Love his loyalty where he point blankly reveals Arnav's dad's whereabouts to him... no 'I am hiding it from you for your own benefit... coz I know what is best for you'. That excuse/mindset drives me crazy, therefore I appreciate all the more how your story is captivating without resorting to artificial props.

And "If I gave my daughter coal as a gift, she would not only love it, but also claim it was the best present... so you see there's no match." Papa ki chamchi... and isn't that the loveliest feeling for a father to experience.

And then the piece de resistance... that scene between the kids that I had been so looking forward to... Loved how the grown ups got into the spirit of that, with Arnav delivering the punchline. I had seen all possible ends to this scene but not this one.

I told you na... that this chapter is full of favorite moments for me. I could pretty much recount the whole chapter...

Yep they have paid their dues to life and it is time now to reap the rewards. What a beautiful present... what a beautiful family. Thank you Jigs for sharing this.


Edited by scrapbooker - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


How apt is that quote for this family? Not all of them are related by blood, but the bond between them runs much much deeper than that.

It was so so so heartwarming to see the family together like this, Jigs. It truly highlights the growth these characters have gone through throughout this revealed journey. Until this moment, until Arnav and Khushi's marriage has been mended and healed, we have not seen them all together. Really shows how the cracks in our beloved couples relationship has not only affected them, but also all of their friends and family. And now, to see the result of what A & K's fight to stay together has led to...it's all worth it, isn't it?

And Ari, being the little kid that she couldn't before...being comfortable enough with all of them to trust herself to be a kid again, it really does warm my heart. What else can I ask for from the Christmas update, other than this?

<3

Edited by BlueMystique - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Brick by brick Arnav built many buildings - he even built a house for Khushi and him ...but to build a home you need hearts full of love and contentment ... A family - this is the Raizadas today.. Aneri is their anchor ..keeping them grounded ..keeping them on their toes too !!

This is what life is about families... traditions ...some old some new such as a box of aloo will be gifted every year by Aman Chachu ...!!
Edited by LadyR - 9 years ago

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