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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute_Inaya


Wow... Awesome... Fantastic ... update dear...
Full of manan...love it alot...
My naughty manik... too cute...😳
Manan cute and sweet moments... was fabulous...
Aww... thay hickey wala part... was dam amazing... superb...
Saas and bahu convo's was superb...
there bond is so adorable...
Manan kitchen romance...😳
Love it...
Manik 's talks...
Kiss bhi mil gyi...😉

Very amazingly describe... well written...
Too good...
Continue soonish...
Keep smiling...
Stay bless.
Lots of love...


thank you so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Manik is such a drama king
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update MaNan as usual cute... I liked how Nyo and Nandini were sharing a good daughter mother relation...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update..manik is such a dramebaaz..loved MaNan's romance!! nyonika and nandini's bond was so cute...continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
hello People...
Here Is Your Part 16B...
Its Not MaNan Update...
But hope You guys Like It...
Go Go Go... Read...😊😊😊

Part 16B

Manik came out of kitchen and saw everybody were at dining table sitting and chatting, he saw Nandini, who was looking at him only. Suddenly she winked at him. Manik's eye got widened and Nandini chuckled a bit. Amms noticed Manik still standing.

Amms: are Manik beta khade kyun ho betho na.

Manik came out of trance: ji.. Amms.

All started their breakfast chatting with each other.

Nyonika: waise Manik, what's the plan for today?

Manik was buttering his bread: nothing Mom, soch raha hu Nandini ko ye pura place dikhau. Kal hum nahi gaye the so.

Nandini looked at him, he too looked at her and smiled, she too smiled back.

Nyonika: ha ye thik he. Aur phir kal Maaji hum sab Mandir challenge. Bachho ko bhi leke jayenge.

Rishabh: jiju me bhi aaunga aaj. Mujhe ye place bahot pasand aayi is liye.

Manik smiled: of course champ.

Nandini smiled seeing them.

Navya: to Cabir, hum bhi chalte he na. waise bhi ye jagah bahot achhi he.

Nandini: ha sab sath me chalte he, zyada maza aayega. Haina Manik?

Manik looked at her: ofcourse.

She passed a smiled, he too smiled.

Everyone agrees on outing plan.

Manik: to phir after lunch.

Everyone nodded in yes.

Nyonika: Nandini, Mukti zara breakfast ke baad room me aana, mujhe kaam he.

Mukti and Nandini looked at each other and nodded in yes to Nyonika.

Around 10 am, Ladies Room

Mukti and Nyonika entered in the room, Nyonika was sitting and reading newspaper. She saw both of them and put the newspaper down and passed a smile.

Mukti and Nandini also smiled and sat near her.

Nyonika: pata he tum dono ko, I always wanted a girl, (she looked upwards) but God ne mujhe two stubborn boys diye.

Three of them chuckled.

Nyonika continued: but dekho jaha mujhe ek ladki ki Maa banana tha waha Bhagwaan ne mujhe Do ladkiyo ki Maa bana diya.

Nandini and Mukti held her hand.

Mukti: Mom, hum lucky he ke hume aap jaisi Saas mili he.

Nandini too agreed: yes Mom.

Nyonika smiled and placed her hands on Nandini and Mukti's cheek.

Nyonika: meri dono betiya, kisi ki nazar na lage tum dono ko.

Mukti and Nandini smiled and looked down.

Nyonika: pata he bachho, meri kabhi meri devrani se nahi bani, wo hamesha mujhe galat samjati thi. Use lagta tha ke me aur Anant sab galat karte he.

Nandini and Mukti looked at her.

Nyonika continued: me ye nahi keh rahi ke har jethani devrani ka rishta bura hota he, but tum dono ko bhi aapas me mil jhul ke rehna hoga. Nandini Mukti tum se badi he, agar wo kuch kehti he to tumahre bhale ke liye hi kahegi. Never ever take her wrong okay?

Nandini bobbed her head instantly.

Nyonika looked at Mukti: aur Mukti, tumhe me kya kahu. Tum badi ho, aur bade hone ka matlab he chhoto ko maaf karna. Agar kabhi bhi Nandini se bhul se bhi bhul ho jaye, to naraz mat hona. Samj na naadan he. And never ever underestimate her okay?

Mukti took her hand in her hand: ji Mom, mujhe pata he. Sikha he aapse in do saal me. Aur Nandini ko me apni behen manti hu. Kabhi bhi kuch bhi galat nahi karungi uske sath.

Nanadini too held her hand: Ji Mom, aur me hamesha Mukti Bhabhi ki baat manungi. Kabhi bhi aisa kuch nahi karungi jo unke liye disrespectful ho.

Nyonika smiled and a lone tear came from her eye. She leaned and pecked both girl's forehead.

Nyonika: are ha tum dono ke liye kuch layi thi. Ruko abhi lati hu.

Mukti and Nandini got puzzled, but they sat there silently exchanging looks. Nyonika stood up and went to cupboard. She took out two boxes from cupboard. She came and sat in front of them.

Nyonika placed a box in Mukti's hand: ye tumhare liye.

Mukti opened it and saw a gold Balgopal's Murty. She looked at her with confused expression.

(Imagine this Murty in Gold)

Nyonika: ye mujhe meri saas ne diya tha, jab me Abhimanyu ke time pregnant thi.

She then put another box and placed it in Nandini's hand. Nandini too opened it and there was a gold biscuit.

Nandini was about to speak, when Nyonika interrupted.

Nyonika: ye meri aur Anant ki taraf se ghar ki nayi bahu ke liye.

Nandini smiled faintly. Nyonika noticed it and asked worriedly.

Nyonika: kya hua beta? Pasand nahi aaya?

Nandini looked at her: no no Mom, bahot achha he par...

Nyonika: par..?

Nandini held her hand: Mom, aap bura na mane to ek baat kahu?

Nyonika: ha ha bolo beta.

Nandini: Mom, me abhi itni responsible nahi hu ke aap itni badhi zimmedari mujhe de rahe he. Aap ye abhi aapke pass hi rakhiye, jab bhi mujhe chahiye hoga. Me khud mang lungi pakka.

Nyonika was about to say, when Mukti spoke.

Mukti: ha Mom, ye Balgopal, mujhe bahot pasand he. Par Mom, abhi mera checkup bhi nahi hua. Pata nahi me actual me pregnant hu bhi ki nahi. Mumbai jakar test ho jane ke baad ye khud me aapse mang lungi. Par abhi ke liye ye aap apne pass rakhiye. Ye bahot khaas he aapke liye.

Nyonika looked at both of them with a lone tear in her eyes: pata nahi aisa kya kiya he mere dono bete ne, jo use tum dono jaisi Life Partner mili. God Bless You both.

Mukti to lighten the mood: waise Mom, ab bahar chale, warna lunch ka time ho jayega, aur aapke bete hame chhodenge nahi.

All three of them chuckled and went in kitchen.

Three of them entered in kitchen, Navya and Chachi were there only. Nyonika looked at them and smiled.

Nyonika: are aap dono yaha?

Chachi: wo Bhabhiji, hamne socha ke aap shayad busy he to hum khana bana dete he.

Nyonika: are nahi Shannoji. (She looked at Nandini and then Mukti) aaj to me aur meri dono bahue khana banayenge. Aap aaram kijiye.

Nandini blushed and looked down. Chachi had a tear in her eye. She was looking at Nandini, Navya came and side hugged her. They both went to Nyonika.

Chachi: Bhabhiji, me janti hu aap dil ki bahot achhi he, par kabhi bhi bhul se bhi meri beti se bhul ho jaye to please use maaf kar dijiyega.

With this she folded her hands, Nandini too had tears in her eyes, Mukti went to her and side hugged her.

Nyonika instantly held her hands: are Shannoji aap aise kyun keh rahi he, Nandini ab meri beti he. Aur bhala koi apni beti se naraz ho sakta he kya? Haina Navya?

Navya smiled: ji aunty.

Nyonika: chaliye chaliye aap jaiye, aur mujhe aur meri dono betiyo ko akela chhod dijiye.

Chachi smiled and Navya and she left the kitchen.

Nyonika, Mukti and Nandini started making food.

Nandini: Mom, ek baat puchu?

Nyonika flaming the gas: Ha pucho.

Nandini cutting some vegetable: Apki aur Dad ki arrange Marriage thi?

Nyonika smiled: ha. Meri aur Anant ki arrange marriage thi. Pata he, hum dono ko to time hi nahi diya gaya tha, wkdusre se milne ka ekdusre ko samjne ka. Maine to Anant ko pehli bar shadi ke mandap me dekha tha.

Mukti and Nandini with shocked expression: what?

Nyonika laughed: ha..

Mukti: strange.

Nyonika: hmm... Strange to he, par phir bhi, hum haina aaj bhi sath. Hasi khushi puri family.

Nandini and Mukti smiled.

Nyonika: pata he, Manik ko jab hamne tumhare Rishte ke bare me bataya tha, to usne kaise behave kiya tha.

Mukti laughed: I still remember Mom.

Nandini asked: kaise Mom?

Nyonika: are usne to tumhari tasweer bhi dekhne se inkar kar diya tha. Kehta tha, jab shadi hi nahi karni to photo dekhke kya karu?

Nandini asked impatiently: phir? Wo kaise mane?

Nyonika looked at her: phir, phir kuch nahi. Maine aur Anant ne milkar use samjaya. Ke what is arrange marriage. Use bhi yahi lagta tha kaise wo kisi ko apna bana le jisse wo janta nahi pehchanta nahi.

Nandini looked down.

Nyonika: but phir use samjane ke baad, he said yes. And at night we gave him the photo of yours.

Mukti: aur uske agle hi din janab itne sudhar gaye, jo 8 9 baje tak uthte nahi the, wo subah 7 baje uthke 8 baje ready hog aye. Jaadu chala diya tumne to Manik par.

Nandini blushed: aisa kuch nahi he Bhabhi.

Nyonika: aur phir wo tumse mila. Jab wo tumse milke aaya na to ek alag sa sukoon tha uske chehre pe, tab hi me samj gayi ke yahi wo ladki he jo mere bete ke liye bani he.

Mukti: sach me Nandini, maine kabhi bhi Manik ko kisi ladki ke liye aise nahi dekha. But he is different with you. And that is what all matters.

Nandini: ha Bhabhi. You know his little little things na, that affects me. Kabhi kuch naya pata chalta he unke bare me. Tab aisa lagta he ke sab jaan lu unke bare me.

Mukti smiled: jaan lo to phir. Manik ko Mom aur mere siva aur koi itna ache se nahi janta.

Nandini smiled: achha.

Mukti: hmm... chalo I'll start. Wo bahot bada foodie he. Bahot bahot bahot bada.

Nandini blushed: mujhe pata he. Bataya tha unhone.

Nyonika: are wah...

Mukti: Bhindi, sabzi me bhindi bahot pasand he use.

Nandini was listening to her keenly.

Nyonika: aur karela, he don't like Karela. Are jab karela ghar me banta he to ghar me khata hi nahi he wo.

Mukti: same as Abhi. Ditto copy.

All three of them chuckled.

Nandini: aur kya pasand he unhe?

Mukti rested her hands on kitchen slab and thought: aur to use... Italian.. ha Italian food use bahot pasand he. Pizza, Pasta, Bruschetta. He loves it.

Nandini got tensed. Nyonika noticed her.

Nyonika worriedly: kya hua Nandu?

Nandini looked down and said sadly: Mom, I can cook Chinese, but I don't know how to make Italian. Wo maine kabhi bhi try nahi kiya.

Mukti laughed: are to budhhu, Mom se sikh lena. Mom make amazing Italian food. Aur wo Manik ko pasand bhi he.

Nandini looked at Nyonika: Mom, aap please mujhe sikhayengi?

Nyonika smiled and caressed her cheek: of course beta. Kyun nahi. (She then naughtily) aur waise bhi ab Manik ki tension khatam hui. Uff...

Nandini and Mukti laughed.

Nyonika: achha beta, ye sab to thik he. Par tumhe kya pasand he khane me?

Nandini looked at her without blinking her eyes.

Nyonika saw her: what? Aise kya dekh rahi ho? Ab tum mere bete ka khyal rakhogi to tumhara khyal kon rakhega? Jaise Mnaik ki pasand napasand important he, waise tumhari bhi to hai na?

Nandini had tears in her eyes, she instantly hugged Nyonika. Nyonika firstly taken aback. But after sometime she too hugged her back.

Nyonika: Are Nandu beta? Kya hua? Maine kuch galat bol diya kya?

Nandini broke the hug and wiped her tears: woo.. wooo.. After so many time I felt Motherly Love so thoda emotional. You know Mom, After Mom, Chachi ne kabhi bhi mujhe Mom ki kami mehsoon hi nahi hone di, par phir bhi Mom to Mom hoti hai na?

She turned towards Nyonika: aur aapko mil kar aisa lagta he, shayad meri Mom hoti to wo bilkul aap jaisi hi hoti. I Love You Mom.

With this she again hugged her. This time Nyonika hugged her hard. Nyonika too had tears in her eyes. Mukti also had tears in her eyes.

Nyonika: I promise beta, me kabhi bhi tumhe tumhari Mom ki kami mehsoos nahi hone dungi.

Mukti too hugged them both: Mom, mujhe bhi...

Nyonika smiled: are aaja. Tujhe to me kaise bhul sakti hu.

All three of them were hugging each other. Amms was passing by kitchen and she saw the most beautiful moment. Nandini, Nyonika and Mukti hugging each other.

Amms (Self-talk)

Aiyappa... Meri beti ki jivan me khushiya aise hi banaye rakhna. Jaise log hum uske liye chahiye the, bilkul waise hi he. Ab me nishchint hu. Kyunki meri beti in logo ke ghar me bahot khush rahegi.

With this she left from there having a satisfactory tear in her eye.

Nyonika Mukti and Nandini broke the hug.

Mukti wiped her tears and then wiped Nandini's tear: are Nandu, tu to rula deti he. Chalo abhi khana banaye. Warna ye sab wapas hume rulayenge.

All three of them laughed and started preparing for Lunch.


Tried Something New...

Kaisa Laga???

I Know, few Of You Want MaNan...

But Guys For Me, I Think This Relationship Is Also Very Important...

So Please Do Tell Me.. Did You Like It Or Not...


Edited by anjali_dimples - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update
Very cute
Loved dramebaaz manik
Nyo n nandu's bond was amazing
Cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
I am exited for next update ...
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing...the trio convo was beautiful...
Amazing...
Loved it...
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb chappy dear...loved the increasing between the three of them...it was really thoughtful of u to give importance to this relationship also...as it really matters a lot in any marriage...
will be waiting fr next...
cont. soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update


Superb update


Fab update



Loved it




Loved the update


Waiting for the next part



Update the next part soon

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