Ashlok ff: Journey of Ashlok's love (Season 2) updated Last Part 60 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for late reply.Nice update.Can't wait shlok marry to aastha.Waiting for next.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

I feel little bit relax now

Thank you , nice update waiting for next


u will be relaxed totally by this update
thanks for ur reply

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Catherine06

Nice update, interesting but again ended in a suspense and we have to wait for a day to know it,very much sad for that.but nice going,keep it like this


dont feel here is ur next update
thanks for commenting keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashimamm91

OMG Sai, total confusion again. yeh kya chal raha hai? astha was going to marry rishi? avdhoot n kalindi r happy with it? bt they wantd ashlok together, right? nw what is al dis? n what is niranjan's role in al dis? is it al a drama? bt it dsnt seems like one. and dis shlok is too much. evry tym dis dumbo need 2 b pushed. so dsnt he care 4 hr at al? what if gouri wudnt hv cum? n what dis varad is doing? whom he is planning as shlok's bride? sai update soon. waiting...


tere saare sawalo ki jawab aaj ki part me milenge do comment to that
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 22


Shlok "Sir ye Rishi was druggist and rapist he was my classmate believe me." Avdoot was shocked not only he Aastha, Kalindi and Gauri were shocked. Rishi "Shlok bas no one here believes u just get out from this marriage its my marriage wat is problem with u OO she was ur PA right I think is there any external affire with her..." He didn't completed his sentence Shlok gave a huge blow. Avdoot asked Shyam being Rishi's father "Shyam ji ye kya ho raha hain wat the hell is this u didn't say anything about this at all and u Aastha wat the hell is he talking about."

Gauri "I will tell everything uncle this Rishi saw her wen she went to his home to talk about the loan Being Shyam a bank manager he said her to come to home once there Rishi saw her then Rishi kept an eye on her he is a bloody lustrous person he want Aastha so he said his father to marry him with her. His father took advantage of it he never said ok to any marriage once he saw Aastha he said that he will marry Aastha and Shyam Sir didn't know his intentions he again called Aastha and said beti if u marry our son then he said he also offers job to Avdoot uncle and also he said he not only sanction loan but also wont take a single paise as dowry. So Aastha thought that u will be happy with her marriage and also u will be happy with a new job so she said ok to him with heavy heart actually she doesn't want this marriage at all she just said ok for u uncle and then Shyam Sir made a plan he said that he will come to ur house for a marriage proposal he also said to Aastha and Rishi to behave as lovers b4 u people so Aastha blindly said that she loves Rishi but really she doesn't even know his name nor his face she just said yes to overcome ur difficulties and u thought Aastha is going to marry with the one she loved so u felt happy but I didn't expect that Rishi would turn out to be such a man until Shlok Sir saw him."

Avdoot and kalindi listened everything in tears. Kalindi went to her daughter and hugged and cried harder. Aastha too cried. Avdoot cried and said "Wat type of parents we r we didn't know she would go to such extent for this I m sorry Aastha mujhe maaf karde I m really sorry I didn't know wat kind of person he is I thought u loved him so he might be a good person I m sorry." Aastha "nahi Baba aap aisa kaise kah sakte even I didn't know Rishi would be like this stop crying Baba." Kalindi "nahi Aastha hamari galti hain u shouldn't have born to us u tried to make ur life miserable just to save us from loan im sorry Aastha we failed as parents I m sorry." Aastha cried out loudly "Aai aisa mat royiye please." Shlok cant see them like that. Avdoot stood and went to Rishi and slapped him hard. Shyam "Mr Avdoot how dare u to slap him he is my son I will see where will u get loan." Shlok "O hello Shlok Agnihotri hoon main wen I m with them they no need to take loan at all." And he gave a blank check to Avdoot." Shlok "Ab teek hain ab jao yaha se." Rishi "I will see u Shlok Agnihotri mark my words it will be hell for u from now." Shlok went to him and caught his collar and said "tum mujhe darate ho just imagine wat I made to u u cant even stand 10min b4 me if I concentrate on u u and ur father wont be in city at all and don't even try to think about Aastha I will make ur life hell understand." Rishi "We will see." And he took his hands and away from him. They left them there. Kalindi still crying holding her daughter. One of the relative came and said "Kalindi don't cry jo kuch hua hamari bhalai keliye hua see wat if that bloody Rishi married her don't cry u should feel happy." Avdoot went to Shlok and joined his hands b4 him and cried out loudly "Thank u beta thank u so much." Kalindi "aap theek hi kah rahe hain lekin ye sab hone ke baad who will come to marry Aastha." And she cried out still hugging Aastha. Shlok saw them. Aastha "Aai aai don't cry I didn't know he was that type that's y I thought to marry him don't cry aai." Avdoot "I m sorry Aastha I m the fool to not see the truth."

Shlok felt this is the nice situation he also likes her he thought about babaji words, he suddenly blurted out "Dekhiye Avdoot uncle if u don't mind I will marry Aastha." Now this is another shock for them. Shlok "dekhiye u don't need to give a single paise for me I will marry her I m confident on wat I m doing." Aastha "Kya aap kya baat kar raha hain Shlok Sir." Shlok "Aastha tum chup raho u cant take decisions at all u already saw where it brought u wen u make decisions like this hastily. Aunti bharosa rakhiye mujh pe I already said I won't hurt her any more I will take care of her u know me." Avdoot and Kalindi saw each other and thought and said "ye kisi tarah hona hi hain ji Shlok beta hume manjoor hain lekin I want to know y u want to marry her." Shlok "Uncle without her knowledge Aastha helped me a lot and don't think just bcause of that I marry her it is just I like her think like this it is an arranged marriage I want to marry her trust me except Aastha I didn't even saw other woman like that." Avdoot and Kalindi saw each other and nodded yes. Shlok went near pandit ji and took mangalsutra and went to Aastha to tie. Aastha was still in shock. Aastha tried to refuse but Shlok said "chup raho Aastha I m the boss u should listen me." And he also put vermilion on her head and said out loudly "From now on Aastha is my wife she is legally wedded to me I will take care of her is there any problem to any one." Avdoot and Kalindi smiled in tears. Every one showered them with blessings. Everything got blurred infront of Aastha she is thinking she is Shlok's wife. Her knees were bcoming weak. She said "Shlok"and collapsed on the stage itself. Shlok shouted "Aastha." And every one went to her. Shlok carried her and took her to hospital.

Avdoot and Kalindi followed them. They kept on shouting "Aastha Aastha aankhe kholo.." but she didn't. They took her into hospital. Doctor checked her and said "I think she didn't eat anything since few days she fainted due to low sugar she is really weak make her eat properly no problem now she is fine but if it had been little late then condition would have been worse." Avdoot "Doctor can we see her." Doctor "Haan lekin disturb mat kar." They went to her and saw her. She looked pale and white. Shlok first time saw her like this even though he knows, she bcame lean but he didn't think she will careless her health." Shlok "Y didn't she eat properly wat happened." Kalindi "Aastha didn't say anything to anyone she herself felt grief inside she always stayed in her room she didn't talk with any one. We thought she wants to be in her room for the last time she might be missing all of us so we thought she is worrying of missing us but we never thought she does like this." Avdoot "Beta Shlok u have helped us so much thank u very much I owe u my entire life I cant say how happy I m she married to such a great man I really owe u so much Shlok just one request please don't hurt her she already gone through a lot please take care of her." Shlok "Uncle y r u thinking like that main hoo na I will take care of her."

After sometime she opened her eyes. She tilted her fingers and was saying something. Nurse saw her and called doctor. Doctor came and checked her. She is fine totally fine they gave glucose in right time. He allowed them to come in. Three of them rushed to her. Kalindi is the one took her into tight embrace and cried. Doctor "Oo madam u should not go to patient like that. Take it slow." Kalindi left her. Avdoot and Shlok asked at a time. "Aastha ab kaise hain." Aastha saw Shlok and nodded and said "Aai Baba I need to talk with Shlok." Kalindi "Lekin Aastha.." Aastha "Aai kuch nahi hua mujhe I will just talk to him." They both left. Aastha "Sir wat is this Sir this is not a game y did u marry me wat r u trying to prove." And she showered bullet like questions on him. He didn't say anything. He just came nearer to her and kissed on forehead and said "First take rest we will fight later and I m confident on wat I m doing u r coming with me to my home." And he left her. She didnt understand but smiled inwards. She slept without thinking anything. After sometime doctor checked and gave some medicines and discharged her. Shlok "Uncle, Aunti I m taking Aastha to my house believe me I wont let anything happen to her she will be happy there as she is in ur house." Aastha "lekin Aai I wont go with him." Shlok "Who asked ur permission tum meri biwi ho aur mere saath hi chelegi." Avdoot "Haan beta Shlok sahi kah rahe hain u should go with him he is ur husband from now no need to worry I m here na don't worry." Kalindi "Aastha from now u r Aastha Shlok Agnihotri u should not behave like child there now go he is waiting." Avdoot "Shlok beta if she does any mischief or mistake don't punish her please forgive her she still behaves like child so please don't punish her." Shlok "Uncle don't talk like that Aastha meri jimmedari hain she will be happy there I promise u no need to worry of her." Shlok took her with him.

Part 23
Edited by Saibhargav - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
loved it.. kya turn liya story ne...
shlok exposes rishi...
now he proposes marriage & doesnt let astha back off...
abhi niru baba ka kya reaction hoga...??
continue soon.,..
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally they got married
nice update , thank you
please comeback soon waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...really nice update waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update yaar. Shlok married astha can't believe. In next update I don't know what will be niranjali's reaction. Then you will update on Sunday please yaar we can't wait for Sunday. Please update soon. But it was amazing what a twist. Is Rishi and his father is the plan by niranjan and varad. Hey friend we can't for Sunday update plz update tomorrow pls pls pls pls pls pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
😃😃 Did a wonderful job that u updated for us, already ended in suspense and one day is a long time for us, till sunday means... we will become restless,OK nice update and happily ended. Waiting for the next update on Sunday

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