Shanav-COLLAB SS YEH DOSTI HUM NAHI TODENGE (PART17 pg72) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

aww meri MTA ko anju & krishu bhul gaye...
me nai bhuli tujhe MTA...

aaja..🤗

ye le MTA

*hanky*...

Hiyu meri bhairu gale lag ja behen🤗
Mai emotional ho gayi la hanky.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Hiyu meri bhairu gale lag ja behen🤗
Mai emotional ho gayi la hanky.

🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Part 2 Surprise


Manav is sitting by the poolside sad n dejected..he decides k wo apna karm karta rahega as his mom has always told him that god is watching and we should be nice to everyone..

He wipes that lone tear in his eye.😭

.Peeche se hemant ata hai n "eee😃"(lyk in yesterday's epi he did to sharad)...manav nahi darta..

Hemant says manav bhaiya aap nhi dare..manav(with a fake smile on his face) says nahi mai fauji hu in choti cheezon se ni darta..😊

Hemant says manav bhaiya mere paas aapke liye surprise hai aap chaliye mere sath..manav protests but Hemant use le jata h..😉


Hemant lejata hai manav ko ..hemant ko raaste mein sharad contact karke kehta hai ki manav ko uske ghar matalb sharad ke ghar le aa jaldi..😛


Sharad to vasant - bhaiya meri help kijye mein ne manav ko bahut hurt kiya.. Hai..

Logically mujeh Anna ko manane chahiye par woh mein nai karunga bhaiya kyuki ek toh hum aliens hai issliye mein mai Anna se shaadi nahi kar sakta , issliye yehi accha hai ki Ab mein uski zindgi se dhire dhire nikal jaaun aur dusra issliye kykuki usne bina kuch soche samajhe aap par aur bhabhi par shaq kiya aur chori ka inzaam lagaya..

Aur bhaiya sacha dost toh woh bina koi shaq kiye hum par vishwas kare 👏
aur manav chahe Jo kuch bhi ho woh hamare saath diya hai aur woh mera sabse acha dost hai Anna se bhi badhkar hai.. Aur logically socha jaay toh bhaiya manav and Anna ke bich mein aaya hoon.. 😊⭐️⭐️



Vasant- sharad , I m with you..


Sharad - bhaiya aap woh saaman le aaye Jo kaha tha aur bhabhi se kaha hai ki manav ki saari fav. Dish Khaane mein banaye..
Shishir chal jab tak hemant manav ko saath lata hai meri help kar..sharad contacts hemant and says thoda manav ko ghuma phira ghar la thik hai..



Manav is with hemant.."kya surprise hai hemant btao to sahi"

H:"Manav bhaiya..wait kijiye...intezar ka fal gulab jamun hota hai"😆

M:"intezar ka fal meetha hota hai hemant"😳

H:"Haan to gulab jamun meetha hi to hota hai😆

M(frustrated):"Hemant muje kuch kaam hai..plzz mai chalta hun"

H:Manav bhaiya bee-patieeent(Mausi style)chaliye mere sath


Hemant takes manav to a garden(ok assume there is a garden or a park nearby)

M:"hemant yaha kaha laya hai muje"

H:"Manav bhaiya muje budhhi ke baal khane the..to maine kaha aap muje le doge..dilwaoge na"😃

M:"Of course hemant chal"😳


Manav is moving forward...but hemant spots an old aunty.

H:"ye dekhiye Manav bhaiya..budhi..bt hum iske baal kaise khaye"

Hes about to snatch auntys hair but manav takes him away from there😆

M:"ye kya kar raha tha hemant."

H:" budhhi ke baal kha raha tha"(innocent face)

M(starts laughing at his antic):"Tu bhi na"😆


Here sharad contacts hemant via mind talks and asks him to bring manav

H:"Chaliye Manav bhaiya.."

M:"Kaha"

H:"Chaliyeee naa"and drags and takes him from there



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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg hemant ko buddhi ke baal khane h...😆😆😆😆

sharad now thinks logically.. & wants frnd in his life first...
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

I loved it. Bohot achhi hai.

Par anju darling aur krishu mujhe bhul gayi. Na pm na koi information.
Mujhe paraya kar diya😭
Koi hanky lao.


aithe aa mta *hugss*
hum tuje bhule ni the..surprise dene wale the..u were the first person hum padhane wale the SS..koi ni ab surprise khul gaya to..u have to give a wadda dhamakedar reply ;-) :-P
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Aww bohot achha hai second part. I love it😳
Mere Shanav ki story without aunty Ana 😡
Next part update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey anju krishu tum dono apne buddies ko pm kar ke iss story ki link bhejo.. see if they cum & read ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow 👏
Well written girls ⭐️⭐️
I am liking this more than the current track 😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice story . It's even better than current track . 👍🏼 Update next part soon. 😊
Par yar mujhe pahle pm karte to acha hota. Mai bhi kuch contribute kar sakta tha . Chalo koi nahi . 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Aww bohot achha hai second part. I love it😳

Mere Shanav ki story without aunty Ana 😡
Next part update soon

Oyehoye mta ko ana ki yaad ayi😲
koi ni..ittu sa wait..we are writing that part😉

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