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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: shinyshajil

A very cute and adorable update !! Loved it !! Rajeev and Kritika !! Uff a dream come true !!
Thankyou for the PM!!

Thankyou so much 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: vssdp


Thankyou so much
My Name Is vaishnavi but all calls me Shruti


Wow you have a pretty name.Can i call you vaish if you don't mind?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ksgrkfan


Wow you have a pretty name.Can i call you vaish if you don't mind?

Ofcourse my friends also call me that
And I will really be happy if you will call me by this name
By the way what's your name?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Sorry guys
I cannot update the next part untill 1st February beacause my unit tests are going on. So sorry for that. I will try to update soon but I think it will not be possible untill 1st February.
Again so sorry

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good luck for ur tests,
Will wait.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Chapter 4

Rajeev and Kritika went toward cafe and occupied their seat

R-so kya logi

K-uhmm cappuccino

R-ok umm (to waitress)excuseme

Witress could not believe that Rajeev Khandelwal the prince of every girl's heart was in front of her that too calling her
W-yyes ssir

R-one cappuccino and one amaricano please

W-sure sir anything else

R😊-no thankyou

W-sir you are Rajeev Khandelwal right?

R-yes😊

W-oh my god! sir I am a dying heart fan of yours , can I get your autograph?

R-sure

Rajeev gives her his autograph and then the waitress saw Kritika

W-mam you are Kritika Kamra right Dr.Nidhi of kuch to log kahenge

K-ya😊

W-mam I had just loved the chemistry between you and Dr. Ashutosh in that serial

K-thankyou

W-mam can I also get your autograph please

K-sure

Kritika gives her autograph
And suddenly waitress ask them

W-Are you guys dating each other

Both got shocked by this question (actually the girl does not know that they are working together in reporters because promos are yet to begin)

The girl saw their shocked expression and said

W-I ask this question because you two had never worked together and you two have come to enjoy coffee that too here I mean its a romantic place for lovers.

Kritika was very shy to give answer of her question because she know that the girl was right . She knows Rajeev from less than 15 days and here she had came with him to enjoy coffee . Rajeev saw that Kritika was uncomfortable to give answer of her question so he said

R(gently)- no we are not dating each other . Actually hum dono ek show mein ek saath kaam kar rahe hai and we just became freinds so to celebrate our freindship we are here . Aur jaha tak dating ki baat hai to hum filhaal to aisa kuch nahi kar rahe(then turning toward Kritika with naughty smile)aage ka pata nahi.

Both the ladies stare him shockingly . Kritika got really shocked when Rajeev said this . When Rajeev saw both the girls starin at him he says

R-what girls ! main to bas mazaak kar raha tha

Kritika blushed and the waitress smiled at him and went to get their orders.
Rajeev was staring at Kritika . He was not habitual to see actress feeling shy and blushing in front of him and he don't know why but he was really feeling very happy when he see Kritika blushing in front of him and because of him.

Kritika was really shocked when Rajeev said those line . She thought that Does Rajeev really mean what he said but when he saw him looking at her with teasing smile she couldn't help but feel shy

R- so lets talk about our lives . So what are your hobbies?

K(with over excited expression)-oh I jus love to listen music and dance on them.I also love reading books . I just enjoy watching movies and especially of SRK , I just love him , I have a crush on him since childhood . He was just so handsome and good looking.And I also love shopping . I am a shopholic...
Rajeev was staring at her and thinking that she is really a child with a golden heart. When she tells him about her crush on SRK he could not help but chuckle at her innocence. She is really an innocent beauty. Rajeev was lost in his own world untill the waitress came placed the order on table

R-thankyou😊

K- so aapki hobbies kya kya hai

R-well mujhe horse riding ka and travelling ka bahut shauk hai . I love to go on outings.isliye jab bhi mauka milta hai Shriya ko Gaurav ke paas chodke main ghumne nikal jaata hu

K-akele😕!

R-ha , aisa kyu puch rahi ho?

K- nahi matlab aapko akele travel karne mein bore nahi hota

R-nahi Kritika mujhe akele travel karne mein bore nahi hota kyuki jo mazaa apne se baat karne mein hai aur apne ki baat sunne mein hai vo mazaa dusro ki baat sunne aur dusre se baat karne mein kaha aur vaise bhi mujhe abhi tak koi aisa mila nahi hai ki jiski baatein sunkar mere dil ko thandak mile aur jiski baaton ko sunne ki aadat mere dil ko pad jaaye.

With this the both stare in each other eyes and share a beautiful eyelock .
Kritika came first in reality and lower her gaze and then clearing her throat said

K-to aap Gaurav aur Shriya ko kyu nahi le jaate apne saath?

R-Shriya ka school rehta hai aur Gaurav ko travelling ka itna shauk nahi hai isliye main Shriya ko Gaurav ke paas chodke jaata hu taaki mujhe tension na rahe. Par jab Shriya ke vacations hote hai to hum teeno saath mein outing ke liye jaate hai.

K-oh ok.

R-umm Kritika mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha bura to nahi maanogi , I am just asking it out of curiosity.

K-are ismein bura manne waali kya baat hai puchiye na

R-umm tumhara koi boy freind hai?

K-nahi mujhe abhi tak koi special nahi mila , but I am sure aapki koi na koi girlfreind zaroor hogi.

R-and you are so sure because?

K-because Rajeev Khandelwal par marne ke liye to laakho ladkiyaa tayyar hai(with a teasing smile)

R(laughed and then said)-are humpe marne ke liye to laakho ladkiyan tayyar hongi hi but humare dil ko bhi to koi aisa chahiye jispe vo mar sake

K-kya matlab, aapko abhi tak apne liye koi special nahi mili , but you had worked with many ladies and they were very beautiful

R-Kritika ladki beautiful hai iska matlab ye nahi ki uska dil bhi utna hi sundar ho aur mujhe ek aisi ladki ki talaash hai jo dil se bahut sundar ho aur abhi tak mujhe aisi ladki nahi mili thi

K-mili "thi" matlab?

R-matlab ki ab shayad mujhe vo ladki mil chuki hai jiske paas golden heart hai

K-kaun?

R(smiles and sighs)-koi nahi wakt aane pe bataaunga

Kritika smiles and started sipping her coffee . She really wanted to know about that girl who had won Rajeev's heart . She don't know why but she was feeling littile uncomfortable after listening about the girl who has a soft corner for her in Rajeev's heart. This uncomfortable mood of Kritika doesn't got unnoticed by Rajeev and he smiles seeing her . She is really a beautiful and cute lady with innocent and pure heart. Rajeev Doesn't know that he loves her or not but he was sure that he is attracted towards her and started liking her.

They both finish their coffee with little talks and then after paying off started to walk towads exit of the park . Kritika was lost in her own thought that she does not notice a stone lying on her path . She got disbalance as she stepped on stone and was ready to fall when Rajeev held her by her waist(😆 I know bahut common thing hai but mujhe aur kuch sujha nahi)

They both got lost in each other eyes and in daze Rajeev pulled Kritika closer to him and Kritika also not objected as she was also lost in him . Kritika felt herself against his chest and they are very close . Slowly Rajeev leans towards her and Kritika closed her eyes .

She hears a voice of Rajeev very close to her ear and heard him saying her name . She shiveres when she felt his hot breathe on her ear and then again heard him saying "are you ok"

She just couldn't say anything so nodded . Rajeev gently pulled him away from her and looks at her intently . Her eyes are still closed . Kritika was not undestanding that what is happening to her . She has got close to many males like this but this feeling was very different . When she started to breathe normal she opened her eyes and saw that Rajeev was staring at her intently . She lower her eyes and a shy feeling takes place in her heart.

R-umm chalein Gaurav aur Disha humara bahaar wait kar rahe hai unka message aaya tha .

K-ya ok
END

I am sorry for updating late
I hope the chapter was ok
Edited by vssdp - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
hey dear...!! very nice update...
It was soft & sweet...!!!!
loved it continue soon & thanQ for the PM...

PS: hope your tests went good..!!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awww such a sweet and lovely update!!!!!Loved it very much!!Looks like Kritika has slowly started to capture Rajeev's heart😉Cant wait to read further!! I just love this FF sooo much!!!I really missed ur updates last week!Continue sooonest my dear and thanku soo much for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: manaalkhan

hey dear...!! very nice update...
It was soft & sweet...!!!!
loved it continue soon & thanQ for the PM...

PS: hope your tests went good..!!!😃

Thankyou so much
I will update soon
And my tests go well thankyou

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