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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
nice...
bt m nt getting nything..
can u give me a synopsis..!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Sweet update dear but chotu
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
extremely sorry for very late reply dear

amazing wonderful update dear

slight ishra scene was nice dear

naina and ashok romantic scenes was too hot and lovely more cute also dear

naina love him madly once again she forget what she try to do dear

hope ashok also love her truly not for money or save him from raman dear

too small dear

please give long update next time dear

continue soon dear

thanks for pm me dear

cant wait more dear

eagerly waiting for another update dear

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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Chapter 10:
*Not Proofread*

Ashok gets up and says you know what looks better on you ? Naina says what ? Ashok smirks and says 'Me'. He gets closer and begins to strip Naina down. One by one each article of clothing came off. Naina hugs Ashok and says 'some people are like nicotine, you know they aren't good for you; but you want them anyway'. Ashok turns his head and whispers in her ear 'So ? I'm the bad guy ?'. Naina looks over and smirks she touches his lips 'I love a good bad guy' and kisses him. Ashok strokes her hair and says 'Then we are perfect together'.

On the other hand, Raman asked Ishita whether Naina answered her call? Ishita shakes her head and says Ashok has answered her phone. Raman looks towards Ishita and says 'I knew it ! He hasn't changed one bit'. Ishita says well they're alone together ? Maybe they are trying to get to know each other ? Raman shakes his head 'I know this guy, he is trouble' Raman storms out the house. Ishita asks 'where are you going ?' Raman responds 'to see what Ashok is up to, I don't trust him'

Meanwhile Naina says to Ashok 'How are we perfect together ? 'Our imperfections' Naina smiles. Suddenly they hear someone shouting. Who could it be says Naina ? They hear footsteps coming closer and closer toward their room, they could see a shadow behind the glass door. Naina grabs Ashok shirt and buttons up. The door slams open, Naina screams but is shocked to see Raman stand there. Ashok he calls out, what are you doing ? Actually i don't want to know. Naina is about to speak but Raman says 'I know what you two have done ! Get changed and come downstairs' he slams the door behind him. Ashok looks on and says 'maybe we should of locked the door ?'

Naina blushes 'how embarrassing ?! My own Bhai saw me in such state !' Come on Naina ? You look pretty sexy in my shirt winks Ashok. Maybe ? I should just make you wear that around the house ? Naina says quickly, get changed and go downstairs ! Bhai doesn't seem to be in a good mood 🤔 Ashok throw Naina clothes and her and she runs to the shower. What about my shirt says Ashok ? Well it has lipstick all over it ? Wear a new one. They scurried downstairs. Ashok and Naina now stood infront of Raman ... Raman looks at Ashok and then at Naina. Tonight is your sagee ? Instead of preparing for that you two are wrapped around each other ? Ashok don't touch my sister until you get married, understood. Ashok nods his head in agreement. Naina you will be staying with us i have got all your stuff moved from the hotel to our home. Raman takes Ashok to the side 'If you ever touch Naina again i will break those hands' Ashok looks down and says 'okay'.

*20:00pm*
It is time for the sagee says Ishita, Naina is ready Raman. Raman looks on and hugs Naina 'you look so grown up & beautiful' says Raman. 'Thank you bhai, bhabi helped me pick it out' Raman smiles and says lets go now we don't want to be late. They arrive at Ashok's house. Raman and Ishita walk infront of Naina 'let's see how your fianc reacts upon seeing you'. Ashok searches the room and see's Raman and Ishita approaching him, they split paths and Ashok see's Naina. He looks at her and thinks 'Wow she is so beautiful' Let the ceremony begin says Raman. Both Naina and Ashok exchange rings and smile. Ishita looks over at Raman and smiles. Raman think to himself 'there has to be a way to save Naina' Everyone cheers and congratulate the couple. One by one the guest leave as it becomes late into the evening.

All of a sudden Naina faints, call a doctor says Ashok. He carries her to her room. Raman brings the doctor to Naina. He checks her pulse and says 'All this work has just made her exhausted, nothing to worry about. She needs to rest, i'll come again in three days to see her progress' Raman takes the doctor downstairs and Ishita sits and talks to Naina. Ishita tells Ashok to go grab Naina a glass of water. Ishita says don't stress me and shagun will help you get out of this situation. Naina smiles and says 'I believe in you'.

Three days later, Naina goes back to the hotel to find something she left behind. She feels drowsy and sick. She runs over to the bathroom and vomits. What if im pregnant ? Says Naina. She takes the lift downstairs and drives over to the hospital she asks to meet with a female doctor at reception. Hey Naina how can i help ? I need you to check if im pregnant ! The doctor checks her and tells Naina she is positive. Naina calls Ashok ...

Naina's sagee outfit :-



Ashok's sagee outfit :-


Chapter 11

Edited by Tc_Tc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Wow! This twist is unexpected yaar..
Cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Omg she is pregnant? Shitt! Raman will kill her! But was Naina in a mission? Uff!
Bechari!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
What a twist
Nice update
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Nycc update
naina is pregnant omg!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 11:
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Hey Naina how can i help ? I need you to check if im pregnant ! The doctor checks her and tells Naina she is positive. Naina calls Ashok ... Ashok answers the phone 'Hey i'm busy right now i'll you back in five minutes' says Ashok. Naina panics and thinks what should i do ? Should i tell ishita and shagun ? She rings Ishita and then cancels the call. I'll wait and see what Ashok has to say thinks Naina. She leaves the hospital and sits in the car her phone begins to ring it was Ashok, 'Hey beautiful, sorry i had to ignore you' Naina says 'Im fine but can you come and get me from the hospital ?' Ashok says 'Hospital ? Is everything okay ?' Naina says 'I'll tell you when you get here' Ashok arrives and see's Naina waiting besides her car he walks towards her and kisses her forehead, Naina smiles and looks on. Ashok opens the car door and asks her to take a seat, she sits inside and close her eyes, Ashok gets in and asks Naina why she called him ? Naina says 'promise you won't get angry ?' Ashok laughs and says 'Why would i do that ?' Naina grabs Ashok hand and places it on her stomach, he looks at her confused. I'm pregnant says Naina. Ashok face drops and says 'Wow that is something ! but im glad i am have a child with you' he kisses Naina and says looks like we'll have to get married even quicker. Ashok asks Naina 'why would you think i'll get angry ?' Naina says 'Well we didn't plan this ?' Ashok says 'After this child we should a couple of more'
Naina kisses Ashok's cheek and says 'sure'.

Meanwhile Raman was hatching a plan to get Naina away from Ashok, 'only 2 days left till the wedding, i need to act fast' he texts Naina saying 'I will help you get out of this mess !' Naina looks down at her phone and Ashok asks her what's wrong ? She says nothing and thinks how will she tell bhai about this situation ? She can't leave now. Naina responds to the text 'what mess bhai ? Im happy with Ashok'. Raman eagerly waits besides his phone and he sees Naina name flashing on top of the screen. 'I'm happy with Ashok ?' He reads aloud something is wrong. Naina asks Ashok how will we tell everyone else ? Ashok says 'Well the wedding is in 2 days ? or we would call over Raman and Ishita to tell them'. They arrive at Ashok's house as they enter Raman and Ishita are waiting for them, Naina looks nervously at Raman. Ashok says we have so big news to tell you all ! Me and Naina are going to have a baby ! Says Ashok as he goes to hug Raman. Raman and Ishita look at each other in shock, when did you find out ? says Ishita. Naina grabs the reports out of her bag and shows them both, Raman looks on and congratulates them. Naina begins to shed tears, Raman asks her why is she crying ? Naina says this was so hard for me, you tell you the truth without hurting you. Raman hugs Naina and says your happiness comes first before anything else.

Ishita tells Ashok to take Naina up to her room so she can rest. Ashok grabs her the waist and picks her up, he begins to go up the stair. Soon there will be a mini us running around this house says Ashok. Naina says 'mini us huh ? Someone sounds excited ?'. Ashok laughs and says 'Well the child has our genes so it will be cute and sexy all at the same time, like you'. Naina says 'hmm your not bad yourself with that sexy face, you look so damn hot'. Ashok says 'this is how chemistry turned into biology'. Naina smiles and says 'who knew you were this smart'. Ashok places Naina down on the bed he places a pillow behind her and comes closer towards her neck and begins to kiss her. Naina says bhai and bhabi are downstairs and your here doing this ? Ashok says 'I don't want to leave you, I just want stay besides you. Naina lean forward and wraps her hand around him she plays with his hair. She whispers in his ear 'I think you should go down stairs and talk to Bhai and Bhabi'.

Sexy face :-


Ashok vacates the room, Naina relaxes and tries to go to sleep. All of a sudden her phone rings, it was the hospital. She answers the phone, is this Mrs Naina Kapoor ? No but it is Miss Naina Kapoor she says. We would like to inform you Miss Naina that your reports were mixed up by our trainee doctor. Naina takes a deep breathe in a runs down the stairs. They all look at her, you won't believe what just happened ! Im not pregnant my reports were confused with someone else. I knew it ! She looked way to nervous and before giving me the papers she knocked down a stack load of paper ! I should of double checked. They all feel relieved, well that was lucky says Raman 'you can barely take care of yourself'. Ashok laughs well after the wedding we'll have plenty of time to plan for kids and nudges Naina.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Nice .
U have made Ashok totally positive

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