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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: lashyyy
heyya uff finally an update
mujhe to lga tha tu bhul hi gyi isse
but tujhe yaad tha
wow this is such a cute n adorable part
i love the letters
its so beautiful how they share each other feeling through letter!!!
such an adorable part...
is this over???
plz update band mat o want an update

hiihihi yeah i updated...

haahha na yahan over nahi hua tha par aaj over ho gaya... chal ja jaldi padh aur acha sa comment de

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: arima_mallik

Omg the entire part was so cute!! I know m really late in commenting ... Sorry kya karu cant help.

The entire letters and cd session was really well described. Their love, thoughts longing was so bautifully described. It was so sad that he couldnt be there by her side atsuch time but then he came back just during her delivry and supported her so lovingly... Awww ... Tooo cute yaar. And the whole family jo kho gayi bacche ki khushi mein and started fighting to hold hin first...Hhehe... The baby's first feed while she held onto Armaan vo bhi bad cutely described tha. All in all i loved the part, it was absolutely adorable

thank u soo much di...

sachi aapko acha laga... chalo thank god kisi ne toh ye bola ki scene descrip acha tha i mean kisi ne notice kiya nahi toh saare letters ke pch hi padhe hain .. aur mera samjh nahi aa raha ki senti scene cute kyun bol rahe hain POUT...
but hain baby birth time and uske baad cute tha ahhahaha...
i secretly dream of such thing for future..
after all the birth of a baby is due to 2 people na toh they should be holding onto eachother at such time loving the baby together... hihi

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: HR-DMG4life
That was written really nicely
I really liked the letters

thank u HR...

here is the next part have a look.

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#314

Epilogue - Bus Rona Mat

"daaa daaa" a joyfull voice flowing with a wave in the air followed with more joyfull words to the person hearing it..
"daddaaa..daddaa..."
"daddaa... lub ju..."
"lidhan... lub daddaa...mamma"
"lidhan bhi dada jaisa... stlong"
"dadda.. lidhan helo... "
This is the only words surrounding the man sitting in his camp finishing his last min packing to return home after 6 long months away from his family.
He stood up finally packing the stuff left before. Loading the bag-pack over his shoulder he made a move to get settled in the caravan of trucks going to settled area to see soldiers off.

Man have his earphone plugged in his one ear attached to the Walkman in his jacket with smile never leaving his face. All though the journey the walk man played non-stop. There was no exchange of letters wording about armaan's returning back home, so no one in the family was aware of his coming back.

But as soon as he step in his own little world his baby saw his dadda.
He kept his bag silently in a side opening his arms towards the baby.
Who at once slip down from his mamma's arm making a run towards his dadda.
Lady turn around to see where her little 5 year old baby rushing to just to see the owner of her soul standing with their baby in his arms kissing their baby's face with so much love. Soon the man lift his eyes to see his better half looking at him with admiration in her eyes along with the long wait of taking her in his arms.

Man moved in with baby still in his arms who was now hugging his dadda dearly around his dadda's neck. The man moved towards the lady who was earlier talking with the house-helper and took her in his arms hugging her near his heart living the moment while the lady hugged him back wiping her tears over his shoulders.

Man - I love you so much.
Lady - I missed you so much armaan... this is always very hard to not have you beside us.
Armaan - I missed you too.
Baby - I missed you too dadda.
Armaan ridhima pulled apart from each other looking at each other hearing a shaky voice of their baby armaan looked at his baby in his arms who wasn't ready to leave his dadda.
Armaan tried once again but Ridhan didn't bug to leave his dadda.
Armaan sight holding him protectively in his arms caressing his back.

Armaan - dadda missed you to baby...
Ridhan - dadda I missed you...
Ridhan confessed yet again showing his dadda how much he missed his dadda. Ridhima once again lean over armaan on other shoulder keeping her one hand over Ridhan while other was on armaan's waist.

Armaan looked towards ridhima seeing the house is all silent.
Ridhima understand his questioning gaze so replied before words left from his mouth.

Ridhima - vo maa mom mandir gai hui hain aur papa dad dono office. And Nikki is over to her friend's house.
Armaan nodded his head. Armaan moved towards his room with ridhan in his arms and ridhima beside him holding onto her waist.

Armaan lied down on his side of the bed with Ridhan over his chest still hugging his dadda emerging his face in his dadda's shoulder over the right side. While ridhima too lay down beside armaan moving towards him she kept her head on his left shoulder hearing his heartbeats. While armaan keep caressing both his life with either of his arms.

Soon the sleep took over this little family in the same position.
In mean time the mothers have already return to their home followed by Nikki.
Seeing a bag-pack near the door itself they know that armaan have returned back to his family. They all moved towards AR room knocking on it when no one opened the door they peep inside to see the three Malik sleeping cuddling with each other.

They stopped there only to let them sleep peacefully but the love that a mother holds for their child spring up making them move in towards armaan both the mother cares his face. With which his sleep went away at once feeling the warmth.
Armaan opened his eyes to have a look over the mothers standing there with love and tears in their eyes. Armaan tried to sit up but his Padma maa stopped him to move seeing ridhima frowning at being disturbed so they just sit beside the space beside him and caressed his face with all the motherly affection. Then they moved out of the room placing a small kiss on his forehead making him smile. Ananya too kissed her son whispering him her love and asking to take care of his ridhima Ridhan.

Dinner time was a reunion time with all talking laughing over the table. While Ridhan never left his dadda. He had all his meal from his dadda's hand asking his dadda to give him bath too, asking for a piggy-bag ride around the garden in front of the house. Taking his dadda in nearby park to play with him along with his mamma.

At night he left his dadda after the hold day being clinging in his arms. He even took promise from him that his dadda won't vanish away before he woke up the next day. Armaan ridhima loved each other feeling bliss to have other one in their arms after months expressing their desperateness to love and be loved. Expressing their love, wait, care, affection and fear. It's not their need but their wait that unit them again ensuring themselves along that they are in reality not in some dream that would broke apart once they will be up the next morning.

They lay in each other arms wide awake after ensuring the reality and loving each other. Ridhima was playing with her figure over his chest with armaan was caressing her waist with his thumb resting there. Whispering their love to each other once again then fall asleep.

Next morning armaan woke up with a knock on the door.
The person on the other side of the door introduce himself to armaan so he would open the door really fast.

Person - dadda. Ridhan... dadda prince... dadda...
Armaan smiled to himself hearing his baby so grown up that he is introducing to his own father to that door will be opened by his father.
Armaan - wait baby dadda is coming.
Armaan make ridhima sit with his hand support who was still sleeping then slipped the top on her with her lowers. Then moved towards the door to open it.
Ridhan at once jumped in his dadda's arm in a sec of door open.
Armaan again moved towards the bed laying down back on his side he made ridhan sit on his tummy. the baby instantly bend down hugging his father for all the time he has missed on with his dear father...

Ridhan - i missed u dadda...
Armaan get the urgency in his voice that since yesterday their baby is just confessing his love to his dadda again and again in his own innocent ways.

Ridhan - pata hai mein apko kabhut miss karta hun.. jab bhi mamma mera ko daati thi galat baat pe mera ko apki bahut yaad aati hai... jab aap hote ho toh mamma nahi daati aap ke piche chup jata hun... par jab aap nahi hote toh mera ko daat bhi palti hai... daatne ke baad mamma pyaar bhi karti hai pal daati thi toh hai hi na... aur phir mela ko piggy-bag ki ride bhi nahi milti... nana ji dada ji ko mein nahi bolta par phir aap bhi nahi hote mera ko ride dene ke liya. ... aur mera ko aap se dher saari baatein bhi karne ka maan karta hai... aur itni saari masti karne ka... apke sath ghumne ka... apke sath aise sone ka... apko kisi dena good morning ke aath par aap nahi hote... i miss you soo much dadda...

ridhima who had ditched her sleep to listen to the father son duo have tears flowing from her closed eyes earing such a small kid showering his insecurities in front of his father... armaan was just caressing his son lovingly with occasional kisses on his head...

Armaan - dadda sorey hai baby... dadda baby ko time nahi dete na.. nahi dqdda apne ridhan ke sath khelte hain... nahi dadda ridhan ko ghumane le jate hai... u know what baby aaj aapka bday hai na... aaj dadda apko bahut pyaara sa gift denga... kyun ki aaj dadda ka ridhan big boy ho gya hai...

Ridhan - aww... ridhan ka bday hai...
Ridhan sat back on his dadda's tummy asking his dadda with all excitement...

Armaan - hain ji aaj ridhan ka bday hai toh bolo ridhan ko kya chaiye dadda se...

Ridhan - kya ridhan ke dadda hamesha ridhan ke sath rahenga ghar mein... ridhan ke sath soyenga uthenga ridhan ko ghumne le jayenga. Ridhan ke sath khelenga aur ridhan ko apne haatho se roz khana bhi khilayenga...

Armaan smile with his demand "dadda apne ridhan ki koi baat Na mane aisa ho sakta hai... dadda ne already retirement le liya hai... aab se dadda roz ridhan ke sath vo har kaam karenga jo ridhan bolega... "

Ridhan squealed in joy "sachi" armaan rub his nose with ridhan little one uttering "muchi".

Ridhima - armaan...!!

Armaan looked at ridhima who is already looking at him with tears and question in her eyes. "I want to be with my family now ridhima it's been 10 years of us been married and 7 years of my baby... now i want to live these family moment so i took early retirement and will join dad and papa in business if they allow an army man to be in their office. And will live my whole life with you from now one no border no war no good-byes just a small 9-6 separation then i will be all your and for my son...

ridhima hugged armaan so dearly to herself... she have always dreamt of her daily routine life with armaan but once he asked her about his desire to join country men she never denied but went ahead supporting him while forcing all her dreams of daily life with him to be locked in some corner of her heart. But now listening to him brought all those buried dreams back to its own territories with the hope of being full filed very soon...

Days were filled with talk's smiles laughter spreading in the air. After retiring armaan meet abhimanyu too family instantly liked him. They gave there agreement towards the couple who have no bounds of joy. Wedding was delayed all those years due to the AIM the couple have to be successful so they can stand their own living with all happiness. The most appreciation Nikki received about abhimanyu is from her brother as she wanted him to be most happy with her choice. Though he respect her parents and wanted they consent too. But her brother's consent was the most important for her. And now Nikki was married to abhimanyu and they lived with Malik's as abhimanyu's parents a settled abroad for business. Armaan has joined business his fathers (Shashank and billy) have been running since years taking it to levels up with all achievement. Armaan brought up the idea towards his fathers who instantly give their nod to him. It was a proposal of armaan to give the 10% of their profit to the people fighting for them on the boundaries for the weapons food and other needed stuff. Even armaan talked to the government of India asking to have one bullet proof jacket so they can study the material of the jacket so they can try to build more such jacket for the country men. Though he have taken the retirement from the army for his family but still he try to do things for the Jawan' over the borders with full family support.
It was his physical presence that was retired from the army but not his absently presence.

While ridhima even with all responsibilities of the house spend great time with both most important men of her life. Her love and love bud. She wake up admiring armaan sleeping peacefully with his arms around her caging her in love and warmth while ridhan on his chest every morning though every night he sleeps in his own bedroom attached to their room. But every morning he is over his dadda's chest sleeping with smile hugging his dadda around his neck with armaan too smiling holding him with other arm not leaving ridhima anyway.
Then she after couple of min of admiring him move to washroom to start her day where sometimes armaan to join her romancing with her. While other times she wake armaan with all love. Making him go in the washroom to freshen up with ridhan to start their day she move to kitchen to greet nikki present.
Then both ladies with random talks prepared everyone's tea and breakfast.
Serving their tea in bed both of them move back to their own room to get their respective husbands ready with their own romancing while helpers setting table.

Finally after having breakfast with family the young males of the house leave for work with ridhan to be dropped on their way for school.
Then their day goes in a blink waiting for them. After returning ridhan fill his mamma with all the working of the day completing his homework with his Nikki bua and mamma, both. Resting for some time ladies wait for the gents to return with coffee.

Talking about the day they all have coffee followed with dinner. Then all goes to their room what happen behind door is hidden but known to all. *wink

Shashank billy were now retired giving all their responsibilities to their son or may be son-in-laws u can say. While both the elder ladies of the house just laze around the house playing with ridhan as Nikki and ridhima have taken over the house responsibilities entirely from morning bed tea to night's coffee before sleep.

Abhimanyu who have completed his MBA have joined armaan in the business with Nikki helping him from home only as she prefer to stay at home helping her bhabhi. Enjoying her own time with family.

Ridhima was happiest of all to have armaan beside her all the time. And soon they are going to be parents again. This time armaan lived every moment with ridhima that he missed while ridhan's time. Not totally but still missed it as ridhima have saved all the moment in a CD just as armaan. CD have all those moments of ridhima and baby what made anyone miss the heartbeat. Ridhima's tummy showing the little toe pressed against her. Then her having all loving talk with baby telling baby how much she and his dadda love him with background of armaan singing that was the video made by Nikki secretly. And many more.
But seeing it and feeling its lot different and this time armaan will see and feel it not just seeing it. And again ridhima was pampered unlike last time. Last time she was pampered by all the people of the house, but this time it's only armaan pampering her. Don't wonder as why not other people pampering her, they will pamper only if given a chance which armaan don't give at all not even single moment.

Ridhima was too happy to be pampered with 2 heartwarming people around her all the time who are now her reason of existence. What to say about her love, it have increase number of folds for armaan once he was back to her for ever and ever living with no regrets of leaving the army but the glory pride to have his family happy living every single moment with them. Ridhima everyday day confess her love to armaan making armaan smile with a back confession with all the cares and passion.

While ridhan was no left behind. If someone can stop armaan from pampering ridhima for someone else pampering is then by ridhan pampering his mamma... ridhan was excited to have a little sibling who too will be loving him and he will be loving his little baby sister/brother.

This was trio together. All happy with each other and upcoming one construing all their dreams of doing one or the other things once the little one will be in their arms.

The scene fade with armaan happily living with his family holding the new born in his arms, ridhan sitting in his laps looking at his baby sister playing with her small hands, ridhima sitting beside trio with help of pillows smilingly admiring them with family standing beside them on both side of bed looking this little growing family of their own kids.. With fading sound in back ground of armaan's CD playing

Bas Rona Mat...
Agar mujhe kuch ho jaye
Bas Rona Mat...

Agar Na rahun mein is duniya mein
Waada Hay Mera, Mein Laut Ke Ayunga Zarur
Tumhare Pass Hi, Bas Rona Mat...
Mujhko Bhulana Mat...

Luv all
aayushi

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#315

Don't knw kiska asar hai.. Republic Day ya Pathankot attacks.. But seriously Bas Rona Mat was one of d fines work of ur's .. Simple yet elegant.. Heart touching yet pure in nature..
I m speechless.. Don't knw wat to write.. How to do justice to ur writing..
Love u hugs.. And Thank u so much

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Natalya Bedi

@Natalya_bedi

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#316

It was such an emotional ff.
A life of an armyman well described with all his emotions of having a family time but not getting it...
ridz and ridhan's happiness and satisfaction seeing their favorite person was well written.

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#317

That was such a cute n adorable ending!!!
starting was beautiful how armaan is listening to his baby voice while packing n coming back
loved how ar baby us so attached to armaan!!!
loved the bond so cute beautifully written.
everything is so sweet ar n bsby relationship, armaan love for family n his baby that he take early retirement to spend time with family. but his love for country never reduce without joining he help the country in other ways.
seriously every thing is just awesome!!!

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megha bansal

@megbans

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#318

res

unres

Yeh itni jaldi end bhi ho gayi

Bohot hi awsume SS thi yaar... I mean it was so Sweet... So emotional... So loving

AR ki journey was explained so superbly... Bohot hi awsume... Thi... Sachi loved it.. Will miss this SS... :(

Aurvwese bhi it was my b.day gift toh itbwas especial for me... Fter meri aayu jaan ne mere liye likhi thi u know...

Aur about epilogue... It was too good yaar... I mean armaan ne baby ki awaaz record karke apne pass rakhi to hear his sweet vvoice... It was touching yaar...

And armaan took early retirement tAki voh apni family k saath reh sake... Thatbwas awsyme part in this... Sachi.. It was too good... Loved it...

Just gr8 part...

Superb... Luv u for writing sych a wonderful piece as my b.day gift... Luv aayu jaan...

muahh :*

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Edited by megbans - 9 years ago

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megha bansal

@megbans

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

vo kaise yaad aaya... mein toh bhul bhi gai kya tha us mein.. hahahah
achi baat h sab padh le...
rajai ke andar kyun bahar ro leti ... hahahah
24th ko next

Bas aa gayi yaad teri yeh SS padhke...

Haaye yaar tum dono likhte awsume ho...

Superb...

Pagal rajai k bahar roti toh mom sun

leti naaa

Isilie rajai k andar ghooske royi...

Hehhehehee... 😉😛