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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Areesha566

Amazing, superb, fantastic, mindblowing part 👏
Love it 👏
Thanks for pm
Update soon

P.S. sorry for late reply

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal

fabulous update pari di👏👏👏
loved it...
will there be sandhir moments😳😳

thanx dear
lets see😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sreeshya

Awesome...

Superb...😊
Mind Blowing Update...👏

thanx dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jollyangels

Hey Pari,

Aweeesome story!👏
Love Rids for suggesting this!!!
Bondings are gr8!!!
Rd is a hard nut to crack!!! But she'll manage!!
Show some lovey scenes no plz!

Last update ... 28 DEC!!! Are u planning to halt it???
Plz don't!!!
Update soonishhh!
And send me pm plz! I have sent a buddy req!!!
Waiting...

Love u,
Erina!!!😊

thanx a lot dear
i m happy you liked it
well no...it wont go on a haitus😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 32

He drags her from there but sanyu's attention was towards his tear stricken face

On reaching the stairs she stops and as rd was holding her hand he also stops

And looks at her standing behind him

Rd- I said come with me aggarwal

Sanyu-sir...all this time whenever u've asked me to do something u've told me the reason

I hope I will get to know the reason here too

Rd stares at her for a few seconds and thn sits on the stair holding his head

Rd-i...I just...I just don't want to live this hell life

Sanyu-sir...what are you saying

She sits next to him

Rd-what else should I say aggarwal...no one cares what I am how I am...thn

Why should I live like this

Sanyu keeps her hand on his shoulder

Sanyu-u have to live sir...for m...amm I mean for everyone over here...harsh uncle,parth,arpita

They all love you and you have them so don't make them feel like they are not enough

To keep you happy

Rd-I am...I am just fed up of pretending

Sanyu-stop pretending then...be the one you are sir...life will be more easy that way

Rd-I m tired aggarwal

Saying so he slowly keeps his head onto her lap...at first sanyu goes stiff but then she

Starts caressing his hair

sanyu-don't complicate your life sir...let it go the way it is

rd just closes his eyes and sanyu starts rocking slowly as if she is rocking some baby

to sleep still caressing his hair...after some time she feels a little more weight on her lap

which was a sign that rd was asleep she peeks at his face and finds those tear stains still there

she forwards her hand to wipe it but stops before it touches his face

sanyu-you are soo precious that I feel like If I'll touch you...you will be tainted...i am sorry

that someone like me is harboring these type of feelings for you...i will try to get rid

of these

she rests her head on the side railing and closes her eyes whereas three people were

peeking at the duo from behind a wall

arpita-see dad meine kaha tha na that she loves bhai[she dances out of joy]

parth [covers her mouth]-shhh...don't disturb them

arpita-ohh right...awww they look soo cute

parth-but look what is sanyu saying...she is sad abt her own feeling...its not a good sign

arpita[a bit sad]-hmmm...thats right...ab kya karein

harsh-arrey sabse pehle yeh pata karna hai ki rd kya sochta hai

both harsh and arpi look at parth

parth-na na...don't look at me...i m not gonna do that

arpita-baby pls baby

parth-arrey baby...usse pyaar ka p bhi bola to meri shakal bigad dega

arpita-offo parth...tum mere liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte

parth-arrey arrey...accha theek hai mein try karoonga

arpi-sacchi

parth nods his head and arpi hugs him saying a thank you...thats when a servant passes them to go

to rd but harsh stops him

harsh-kaha jaa rahe ho?

Servant-who chote sahab ke pass

Parth and arpi-noo

Servant looks at them confused

Harsh-suno...aaj koi bhi upar ki aur nahi jaega...sab se keh dena...woh dekho

Chote sahab soo rahe hai na...unhe koi pareshaan nahi karega...aur iss taraf ki saari

Lights off kardo...aur sabse keh dena ki koi iss taraf na aae,theek hai?

Servant-ji sahab

Arpi shows harsh a thumps up

Arpi-I m proud of u dad...aaj apne prove kardiya ki aap mere hi dad ho

Parth[giggling]-agar prove bhi nahi karte toh bhi dad tumhare hi dad rahenge

Harsh hugs arpita and she sticks her tongue at parth,they go from there and soon the lights on

The steps were dimmed and both of them were peacefully sleeping with sanyu's hand still

Tangled in rd's hair...after taking a nice nap of 2 hrs,rd slowly opens his eyes,at first

He was not able to get his surroundings but soon realization dawns upon him and he

Turns his head to look at the sleeping sanyukta who was sitting in a not so comfortable

Position,he stands up from his place and looks at sanyu's sleeping form

Rd-who are you aggarwal? How the hell did you do this[smiles a not-so-easily-noticeable smile]

He slides his hands under her and takes her to his rooms and lays her on the bed and covers

Her with the quilt

Rd-thank you aggarwal...u don't know what you are doing to me...by each passing day

You are becoming more and more important for me to live than oxygen...i need to have

A break from this...from you...coz I know nothing good stays with me forever...

He turns to go when his glance falls on the cup placed on the side table

Rd-I think this is what she came with earlier

He takes the cup and smells it...thn he drinks it in one go...as soon as it moves down his

Throat...his eyes become blood shot red and his throat was burning as if it was set on fire

He glares at sanyu's sleeping form...tears starts coming out of his eyes

Rd-aggarwal...i m gonna kill you this time[baring is teeth],you just wait and watch

Abhi jitna sona hai soo jao kyuki kal se mein tumhari neende haram karne wala hoon

Saying soo he runs downstairs and towards the kitchen and opens the fridge and drinks

A bottle of milk in a go and finally the burning sensation subsides...he turns to go when harsh

Steps into the kitchen and switches the light on...he sees rd standing there

Harsh-rd beta...tum soye nahi

Rd-aap bhi to nahi soye

Harsh[smiles lightly]-this house holds a lot of bitter sweet memories which I wish to savour

Rd[smiles mockingly]-bitter-sweet? It has always been bitter for me...everything in this

House reminds me what a chaos my birth has caused...how unfortunate

I am to be born

Harsh-rd...

Rd-why? Isn't it true? If wasn't for me...u guys would have been living the life you wished for

Harsh-no rd beta...its not like that

Rd-then how is it?

Harsh-this is your problem rd...this has always been your problem...u make conclusions of your own

You never try to understand what others have to say

Rd-fine...that's the reason I m giving you a chance to say what you have

Harsh-I have always wished for you...for ynaturallour happiness

Rd-ohh really...so this was how you were praying for my happiness...by scratching by wounds

With your mere presence

Harsh-listen rd...there is much more then what u've seen

Rd-its fine...i don't wish to see all those things all over again...good night dad

He goes from there

Harsh-he is such a rebel...like me[smiles]anyways you started calling me dad at least

Rd reaches his room only to find sanyukta sleeping peacefully in his bed and he takes his place on the

Couch opposite the bed and falls asleep sooner than natural.

NEXT DAY

Sanyu wakes up yawning and she looks around with her sleepy eyes

Sanyu-rd sir ka room[the her eyes widens ]oh shit...agar mein yaha to phir sir...

She steps out of her bed and runs downstairs and looks at everyone and breathes a sigh of relief

Relief when she sees rd still there

Arpita-arrey sanyukta aao breakfast karlo

Sanyu[embaressed]-haan who mein abhi aai

She runs back to the room and takes her stuff and runs to the bathroom and was brushing her teeth

When something hits her mind...she runs to the room with her brush still in her mouth and looks for

The cup she brought in the last night with her evil plan...looks into it and finds it empty

Sanyu-ohhh god[makes a crying face] sir ne peeliya...ab mein kya karoongi...mera aaj murder

Pakka

That's when rd enters

Rd-good mrng miss aggarwal

Sanyu was abt to run to the bathroom but rd blocks her way

Rd-eew...what is this aggarwal...dont you know ki ladko ke samne kaise rehna chahiye

Sanyu-look who is talking...apko pata hai ki ladkiyo ke samne kaise rehte hai

Mein to wahi kar rahi hoon jo har koi karta hai...brushing...ohh srry aap to

Yeh sab karte hi nahi honge...srry my mistake

Rd-wow! Bada janti ho mere bare mein...waise meine aisa kya kar diya

Sanyu-accha uss din kya kaha tha apne "I can do anything in my room...I can walk

Without any cloths at all" aise kaun bolta hai

Rd-mein bolta hoon...btw thanx yaad dilane ke kiya...I m feeling very tired

I need a hot shower[saying so he takes off his t-shirt]

Sanyu turns the opposite side with her eyes closed tightly

Sanyu-wth...u shameless

Rd-excuse me this is my room too...so the rule is applicable here as well

Sanyu-whatever

Saying so she moves towards the bathroom and was abt to open the door when rd pulls her

And pins her to the door

Rd-didn't you hear me...I was going to take a shower

Sanyu wasn't able to comprehend anything as rd was soo close to her and the heat from his bare

Torso was making her thought process cloudy but somehow she tries to speak smt

Sanyu-s...sir

Rd-yes miss aggarwal

Before anyone could say anything they hear deep intake of breath...both of them turn

To the door to see arpita and parth standing at the door looking shocked and then they

Turn to look at their position which was something like this:rd was half naked who was leaning onto

Sanyukta pinned to the door with both of her hands pinned right above her head by rd and her face

Was flushed ...rd's t-shirt on the floor

Both of them look at each other and then their eyes widens when they realize what parth and

Arpita might have been thinking,sanyu pushes rd and he falls on the floor and she runs inside the

Bathroom and locks the door

Rd gets up from the floor and walks towards parth and arpi

Rd-arpita,parth...its not like what you guys are thinking

Arpita[still a bit shocked]-bhai apke set se call aaya tha...wahi batane aayi thi

Rd-ok...but sach mein jaise tumlog soch rahe ho waisa kuch nahi hai

Parth[smiling cheesily]-its o yaar...humne tokuch poocha hi nahi...too aivye hi

Kyu justification de raha hai...chalo arpita lets go

Arpita starts moving with a knowing smile on her face

Parth-waise meine socha tha kit u bada intelligent hai but sab bekar

Rd[confused]-matlab

Parth-arrey door to close karleta

Parth runs from there

Rd-parth aaj to tera murder pakka hai

Parth[still running]-jake pehle kuch kapde pehen le

That's when rd realizes that he wasn't wearing any shirt and goes back to the room...he takes his

t-shirt and wears it...he looks towards the bathroom from where sound of water was coming

he smiles

rd-miss aggarwal...get ready fast...you have 10 mins

he leaves the room...here inside the bathroom the shower was on but sanyu was sitting at the side

of the bath tub holding her cheeks

sanyu-ab mein yaha se bahar kaise nikongi...arrgh I m gonna kill that akdu[makes a crying face]

"miss aggarwal...get ready fast...you have 10 mins"[she mocks rd]...but wait if he can

You too can sanyukta...yes waise bhi hua kya hai...kuch bhi to nahi...yes just be normal

Saying so she takes a quick shower and was ready to go to work or should I say war


how was it guys...i hope you people enjoyed it

do hit the like button and pls comment😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow, a nice update... brilliant work... rd and feeling always create confusion
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pariii this wass sooo good i was just thinking today to get a update of it and u updated . This was such an awsm part ki m kyaa bolu . Randhir on sanyus lap is a treat to watch . Finally she accepted herself she has feeling for him . Randhir drank that Omg sanyu to gyii ab. And the last part what to say next jaldiii plzzzxxxz 😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
Splendid update!!
Loved it
Best moment when rd slept on sanyu's lap!!
Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome
sanyukta understanding him and taking care of him😳
loved it!

sandhir feeling for each other😛
but as usual they r far from understanding them😆

arpita and parth are such a tease😆
they are always ready with their plans😛

sandhir so close😈
but as usual...kabab mein haddi's🥱

update soon

love
ayushi
Edited by loveparsh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Brilliant Pari di
U r a genius👏

Love ur writing skills
Rd slept on Sanyu's lap😳
Rd drank that awful concoction😲

What is there ahead for Sanyu?😕

Love,
Asmu😳

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