Nibir SS || Oops I fell in love! || Part 4 - pg 20 [04/02/16] - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
first of all sorry for d late comment
d update was amazing.
kabir has used his k trick to make nisha talk to him by joining her gang..
nisha got hurt by kabir's taunt..
but hope soon kabir will find out d reason of her behaviour..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

first of all sorry for d late comment
d update was amazing.
kabir has used his k trick to make nisha talk to him by joining her gang..
nisha got hurt by kabir's taunt..
but hope soon kabir will find out d reason of her behaviour..


thankyou 😊 nd
plz no need for sorry
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Part = 3

Only one day was left for the party ...nisha , kirti nd kabir , saurav were passing by the corridor when someone came nd hugged kabir , nisha was shocked at this ...but then when she heard what she is saying she became confused ...

girl - oh my god bhayu how are you ?...
kabir breaks the hug nd screams " naina tu yaha"...
girl- or kya app toh mujhe london mei chodke aagy , maine socha mai bhi aajaun ...kabir makes a guilty face ...
she looks around to find the shock faces when she sees nisha "dont tell me nisha "...she said pointing towards her ...nisha finally recognises her " naina , kabir ki behn right , oh my god yaar" ..nd she jumps with joy nd hugs her ...
n - kaisi hai meri bestfriend ..."mai theek hun nisha tu bta "...she breaks the hug ...
n - kahan gayab hogy thi or tu yahan kaise i mean ...
kirti intrups them " guys mujhe koi btayga yahn ho kya rha hai "...naina " oh ya sorry , mai hun kabir ki twin sister naina , nd nisha , mai or kabir ek hi class mei the soo " ...
kirti - "one sec , nisha tu kabir ko pehle se jaanti thi ...nisha bits her tongue...
naina-what nisha tumne inhe btaya nhi that u ...nisha shuts her mouth ...kabir gets confused
n - han vo lekin i mean , hum sirf two yrs ek saath the nd tumm log isse pehle se dosti kar chuke the so maine bhi btana zaroori nhi samjha im really sorry ...kirti first frowns but her act melts her ...kirti - koi baat nhi nd she smiles ...naina - nisha mujhe tujhse bht saari baatein karni h chal na ...
n - yaya chal cafe chalte h...
k - are naina apne bhai se koi baat nhi karni ...
naina - bhayu apki toh maine class leni h bas ek baar ghar chalo aap ..
k - marr gya ..they all laughs seeing kabirs face ...

in the cafe
"nisha tune mujhe chup kyu kara diya tha "...
n - yaar kisi ko nhi pta iss bare mei or na mai unko btana chahti hun that i liked kabir ..
"but yaar"
n - yeh sab chod tu bta london mei jaake toh tune koi contact hi nhi rakha ...
"han yaar vo studies ka pressure itna tha na , mera toh harr kisi se contact toot gya " ...
n - hmm vaise tu achanak college mei ?...
" are maine bhi tumhara college join kar liya hai "...
n - wow yaar thats great ...she said happily...
" tu yeh bta ki tune aise kapde kyu pehne h "...
n - aise hi ..she said lowering her gaze ...
"nisha tu jaanti nhi h toh mai bta dun ki tu mujhse kuch nhi chupa sakti samjhi ab bta kya hua"...nisha then tells her why she have converted herself in a tomboy ..."omg nisha itni si baat ke liye tune apni life mei itna bda change kar liya u r crazy yaar , ek min tu ab bhi bhayu ke liye ... "..
n - pagal h kya not at all ...naina understood her expressions that she still have some feelings which she is trying hard to supress ...
n - acha tujhe kal ki party ke baare mei toh pta hai na ?...
"han , tu aa rhi hai na ?...
n - nhi ...
"kyu"...
n - tujhe theme nhi pta traditional h ...
"so what ?nisha yeh sab past ki baatein h tu puri zindagi aisi bankar nhi reh sakti , tu apni life uss ek cheez ke karan spoil nhi kar sakti , vo tujhe for granted lete h na , ab tu unhe dikha de that u can also change "...
n - nhi yaar ...
"nisha please na ,dekh agar tu nhi jaegi toh mai bhi nhi jaungi "...nd she crosses her arms against her chest ...
n - yeh kaisi zidd hai yaar ...
" matlab tu maan gy "..nisha smiles "yipee "...
n - or han jo aaj hmari baat hui h kisi se share mat kariyo okay ...:
"yaya promisse"

naina's monologue - ab mai aagy hun nisha tera mai aisa makeover karungi ki bhayu dekhta reh jaega or koi kabhi tera mazak nhi bnaega , tujhe or bhayu ko toh mei ek karke rahungi

~~~~the next day ~~~~
naina went to nisha's house at sharp 5pm , 2hrs before the party
n - yar naina yeh sab kya hai makeup , jewelery ..hum kisi ki shadi pe nhi jaa rhe h ..naina laughed seeing her ..
"are yeh sab toh mai laay hun lekin last choice teri hi hogi for sure..acha ab bta saree konsi blue or red "..she said showing the two ...
n - mm red ...
naina's monologue- oh apna fav colour reject karke kabir's fav colour i like it ...
"acha ab jewelery bta "...
n - mm light honi chahiye not at all heavy ..nd they started selecting the matchings
"nisha tune kisi ko btaya toh nhi na ki tu jaa rhi hai"...
n - nhi yaar tune hi toh mna kiya tha ..
"good girl , ab hum sabko shock karenge " ..*wink*..nisha smiled

nisha changed her tomboy clothes in a sexy backless red saree .."oh my god nisha u r looking ..no words yaar "..she said acting as if she is going to faint ...
n - but naina yeh kuch zada backless nhi hai ..i mean yaar ...
" nisha dont think much ..u looking extremely hot ..ab hai makeover ka time "...nisha sighed and sat down in front of the mirror

naina started doing nisha's makeover first she starts setting up her hair .."nisha itne ache hair tie karke kyu rakhti hai "...
n - yaar naina tomboy aise hi dikhte hai samjhi ...she straightened her tied hair nd curled some in the bottom , she also cuts some flicks however nisha denied a lot but atlast naina won the argument .. ..
n- naina tune yeh sab kahan se seekha ..
"are vo london mei ek course kiya tha " ...then she started doing her makeup ..first a thin eyeliner , then some matching eyeshade , some blusher , nd a lip gloss ...she then made her wear the matching silver earings nd a necklace ..a bracelet nd some red nd golden bangles
she made her stand nd then told her to look at herslelf ...nisha finally looked at the beautiful reflection os her ...she was surprised ...
n - wow naina you are soo talented ..
"acha laga na? "...nisha smiled nd hugged her ...

naina also got ready in a suit nd they drove off for the party

kabir was waiting impatiently at the entrance for naina as she havnt told him where she is going ..just messaged " i will meet u straight at the party "...
k - kahan reh gy yeh ladki ..just then a car stopped before the entrance ..nd the door opened ...kabir heading towards the car
"kahan reh gy thi naina tu na mujhe..." he stopped when nisha stepped out...he was blanked at what he saw ..."is he dreaming " ..he thought for a second ..it seemed that the world have stopped , he felt his heart beat raising , winds blew like dancing at the start of a new love story ...nisha felt shy for the first time due to his intense gaze ...naina accompanied her nd when found kabir lost ..she mumbled " aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hai "..."bhayu kaisi lag rhi hun mai " she asked trying hard to control her laughter as she knew he is not going to listen to her but still she tried

kabir absentmindedly looking at nisha - mesmerising !!...nisha lowered her gaze as somewhere she knew for whom is the complement but she ignored ..."kya "..naina shouted to bring kabir back to his senses nd thnkfully it worked...
k- han ..han nisha tu yahan kya kar rahi hai ?...
n -kyu nhi aa sakti ...
k- nhi mera matlab tu or aise i mean ...
n - i mean kya han bol na ...
"offo ab tum dono ladna band karo or chalo andar party mei "..naina intrupted ...
n - ya naina you are right ...nd they went inside completely ignoring kabir ...
"nisha aaj tune saree pehni hai yaad rakhiyo plz ladkiyon jaise behave or baat kariyo "..naina mumbled to nisha ...
n - yaa i will try ..

nisha called out kirti nd dolly who were busy with their boyfriends ...they looked in the direction nd their face turned as if they have seen a ghost ...
n - kya hua guys itne weird faces kyu bnae h ...
d - kirti mujhe pinch kariyo kahi mai sapna toh nhi dekh rhi ...kirti pinched her ..
d - ouch ..itni zor se kyu kiya ...
k - dolly yeh sach hai ...nd they looked at each other nd passed a smile nd jumped nd hugged nisha with happiness " oh my god nishu thankyou aane ke liye nd tera makeover toh bht sahi lag rha hai "..said they breaking the hug...
n - aww thankyou ...

kabir also comes there..."bhayu zara nazre ghumao dekho toh ladkon ki nazar toh nisha se hatt hi nhi rahi"..mumbled naina ...kabir looks around nd she was right every eye was on her , he was not feeling good

just then a guy comes there ..."oh nisha gangwal right , ramesh uncle 's daughter "...nisha sees him "ya but sorry maine pehchana nahi "..." hi iam yash kumar , amit kumar's son if u remember we have met in a party"..."oh ya yash , i remember ,nice to meet you"...yash forwards his hand ...nisha shooks hand with him ..bt suddenly he kisses her hand " you are looking gorgeous "...kabir closes his fist tightly nd looks at him with anger , nisha feels uncomfortable but naina's words stops her ..."thankyou"...nd she takes her hand back
kirti nd dolly were shocked at this act , nisha is talking with a guy so nicely ..they were not able to digest it ...

naina looks at kabir , his expressions were like he is going to kill him but as he takes a step , yash sees him through the corner of his eyes nd excuses himself nd goes from there , naina sighs nd thanks god
"bhayu kya hua "...
k - kuch nhi , he says angrily nd goes from there while naina smirks
nisha sees him going nd she too follows him...he was just going to drink alcohol when nisha stops him " kabir kya kar rha hai, drinking achi baat nahi hoti "...nd she takes the glass nd gives it to the waiter ...kabir's anger suddenly melts seeing her care " tujhe kya farak padta hai"...he said with pain as he was not able to take her rude behaviour towards him anymore , "mujhe farak padta hai kabir"..she said without thinking for a second ... kabir looks into her eyes ..they have an eyelock .." kyu "...he asked with hopes ..."becoz ..becz you are my friend "..she looks down breaking the eyelock .nd she goes from there ... ...kabir felt happy as she called him a 'FRIEND' but sad too ,he dont knw why, he was expecting something else but what ..he was really confused

this whole convo was witnessed by naina " offo yeh dono duffer ke duffer hi rahenge , dil mei pyaar hai lekin zuban pe laate hi nhi or yeh bhayu , yeh toh tubelight hi rahenge " ...she said to herself

kabir went outside nd sits near the fountain trying to clear his thoughts nd understand his feelings ...naina comes there ..."bhayu aap yahn pe kyu baithe ho chalo andar "...said she sitting with him ..."pta nhi naina kuch samjh nhi aa rha ".he said while thinking ..."kya samjh nhi aa rha mujhe btao ho sakta hai mai apki kuch help kardu"...kabir looks at her "yaar nisha..pta nhi use dekhkar kya ho jaata hai , bas har wakt mai uske saath rehna chahta hun , uska rude behaviour mujhse ab sehen nhi hota , uske aansun mujhe takleef dete hai or jab aaj vo yash ne uska .."...she cuts him " haath pakda toh aapko gussa aya right ?"...kabir looks at her surprised nd nodds..naina laughs ..." tu hass kyu rahi hai "...asked kabir faking anger .."bhayu aap kitne bevkoof ho aapko itna samjh mei nhi aya that u love her "...said she nd continued laughing ...

kabir stood angrily nd said "pagal hogy h kya pyaar or vo bhi usse impossible , vo ladki nhi tomboy h "..."bhayu kabhi kabhi insaan ki shakal se nhi uske dil se pyaar ho jaata hai or pta bhi nhi chalta"..she said while getting up ...kabir starts thinking what she said nd nisha's words"aajkal log dil se nhi shakal se pyaar karte hain"...kabir recalled the memories he spent with her , naina was observing him , she intrups his thoughts"ek baar apni aankhen band karo "...kabir followed her nd closed his eyes ..."ab aap uss insaan ke baare mei socho jiski khushi aapke liye sabse zaada matter karti hai ..after a minute "kon dikha ?"..she asked with curiousness however she knew the answer "nisha "..he said similing , he understood his feelings ...she too smiled nd was abt to go when kabir hugged her "thankyou yaar , tujhe nhi pta tune meri kitni help ki , mai toh iss confusion mei pareshan hi hogya tha "...he said breaking the hug "bhayu ke liye kuch bhi or ab jaldi se use propose bhi kar dena usme mat time lagana samjhe ?"..she said teasing ...kabir scratched back of his neck nd smiled foolishly "pagal ".nd she hits his head lightly ...


precap : " and the next jodi choosen for the dance competition is nisha nd yash "...nisha thinks who gave her name nd kabir thinks but he have given his name with nisha , they were hell confused nd shocked while yash smirked evily ..."nd yaa the names cant be taken back"
Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Awesome update 👏
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Aww...
Kitna cute tha
Nishu in backless saree
Kabira latoo ho gaya😆
Finally realise hua
Precap..excited
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Awesome update
Hope Yash doesn't do nything to Nisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Awesome update
Loved it
Update soon
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Fantastic update
kabir was total flat
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Hi tanya..bechare nibir ke pyaar ke dushman har story mei aajate hai 😆

Yash 😡

Nibir 😳

Lovely and cute 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Thnks sujay , sana , alisha , sirat , heema nd sameeha

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