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Hi everyone this is my very first fanfic. so i am kind of nervous about how it wuld turn out to be. but if you guys don't like it or anything. please tell me and i will surely fix thngs up and make it worth reading. so thanks in advance!

Well here it is!

Sagar-(thinks to himself) Wow what a great night that was. wait nahi aisa nahi hona chahiye tha. yeh maine kya kya. mein tou yaha vidya ke saath apna rishta torne aya tha.lekin yeh mujhse kya hogaya

Vidya-(tells sagar) app ka bohut bohut dhanywaad ke apne humein apni patni ka darja diya aur hum apse vada karte hain ke hum apke chehre ki muskaan zaroor wapis layege.

Sagar-vidya yeh...yeh...yeh..theek nahi hua.......

Vidya- kya theek nahi hua..(confused)

Sagar- yeh jo humare beech hua isey hona nahi chahiye tha.

Vidya-crying and all tensed) yeh app kya keh rahey hai..yeh tou..yeh tou hum dono ka pyaar tha..dekhiye app aisa nahi kehiya..hum apko yakeen karate hai ke yeh jo bhi hua..sab theek tha..humne kuch nahi galat kiya.

Sagar-(shocked and suprised tells vidya to lets go)

Vidya-w/o a complaint just obeys his orders trying to convince herself that he will get over himself)

Both vidya and Sagar reach home there they find Cm, Aniket, and Sindoora who is totally shocked by seeing Vidya and Sagar together).

Sindoora enters Sagar's room to ask him why did vidya come with him.

Sindoora- Sagar...vidya tumhare saath kyun ayi hai?.tumne tou apna rishta uske saath khatam kardiya hai na.

Sagar-(still in deep shock over hears Sindoora).

Sindoora- beta kya hua..kis kyaal mein tum khoye hue ho.

Sagar- woh woh woh..kuch nahi dids.woh mein mein vidya kou nahi keh saka.

Sindoora- kya matlab..tum nahi keh saake..tum toh isiliye use wahan leke gaye teh na..

Sagar-ha..lekin mujhse ek galti hogayi..maine maine...bas dids mein use keh nahi paya.

Sindoora-kuch nahi hota beta. tum bas relax karo hum baad mein soche gey ke hume kya karna hai.

Sindoora leaves Sagar standing in the middle of the room in which she thinks to herself that vidya has once again has taken over but not for long..ab bas..) Next day Vidya is working in the kitchen and lost to why had sgagr said that it was all a mistake. she wonders about that and just then Chinu and Shalu comes.

Chinu-arey bhabi kya soch rahi hai.

Shalu-Ha vidya kya thinking thinking kar rahi ho.

Vidya- Still lost over hears Chinu and Shalu

Chinu-bhabi

Vidya- Ji bhaiya.. koi kaam tha?

Chinu- kuch nahi bhabi..lekin aap kuch khoi khoi lag rahi hai.kya hua..kisi ne kuch kaha.

Vidya-nahi bhaiya..kuch nahi hum to bas aise hi

Shalu-nahi nahi vidya tum think kuch zaroor kar rahi thi..bolo bolo tell tell.

Vidya- kuch nahi Shalu

Chinu-Dekhiye Bhabi agar app nahi bataye gi tou hum apse naraz ho jayenge

Shalu- mein bhi Chinuji ke saath naraaz ho jaon gi

Vidya-Bhaiya woh bas inko kuch galat fahmi (misunderstanding) ho gayi hai. bas isiliye hum kuch pareshaan the.

Chinu-kya galat fahmi

Vidya-Shys away really quick

Chinu and Shalu understands even though late but still do.

Chinu-bhabi apko dada ko samjhana ho ga ke jo bhi galat fahmi unko hai woh galat hai..warna unki galat fahmi aur bhar jayegi.

Shalu-Ha vidya Chinuji Sahi keh rahe hai.

Vidya-Theek hai bahiya. hum inko baataney ki koshish karege..

Later that day at evening when Sagar comes from work he doesn't wish to see Vidya at all because he is still guilty for that night,

Vidya- ap agaye..ap bethiye hum ap ke liye chaye leke atey hai.

Sagar- Vidya..... nahi...... rehne dou..... mujhe chaye nahi chahiye

Vidya- lekin ap tou humesha office se akey chaye pitey hai.

Sagar-(getting annoyed and talks with a little anger) dekho Vidya...!!!! mujhe chaye nahi chaiye tum bas yahan se chali jaon.please

Vidya- upset and a little angry leaves sagar and thinks to herself.

After some time its Supper~Vidya lays the fod down on the table and is about to go sit wth Sagar when he notices that.

Sagar- Hey sonny boy- idhar ao. apne papa ke saath beth kar dinner karo na.

Sameer- nahi wah tou ma beth thi hai mein yahan hi dinner karoga.

Vidya- (realizes that sagar doesn't want her to eat with him says) sameer beta dekho aisa nahi kartey..apko papa bula rahe hai na tou jaon.

Sameer-lekin ma ap..

Vidya- sameer chalo papa ke saath beth kar dinner karo.

Sameer follows vidya's direction unwillingly beacuse he saw the look on his mother's. Then vidya goes to her room puts the almond milk on the table without talking to sagar knowing that he wouldn't wanna talk to her. So at last she puts the milk down and takes the bedsheet and blankets. She lays it on the floor and goes to sleep there despite of sagar knowing that she is sleeping there.

Next Morning vidya is again in the kitchen preparing breakfast when she sees Chinu, Bharat, and Sagar in the room along with sameer.

Chinu-dada kya kuch problem hai.

Bharat- ha mr. ocean kuch hua ha kya.

Sagar- arey kya hua.. tum saab kya keh rahey ho.

Chinu- yehi ke ap bhabi se baat nahi karahi..bohut rukha rukha bartav kar rahe hai.

Sagar- tumse kisne kaha ke mein asa kar raha hu. Vidya...??

Bharat- nahi mr. ocean mami ne tou hume kuch bhi nahi kaha. hume laga aur humne apse akar kaha.

Sagar- arey nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai.

Sameer- acha tou apne..apne aisa kyun kaha kal ke mein apke saath dinner karu aur ma nahi..

Sagar- woh tou mein tumhare saath yun hi dinner karna chahta tha.

Chinu- theek hai phir hum bhabi ko bula ke puch le the hai.

Sagar suddely gets nervous thinking oh what if vidya tells them the truth that i have been ignoring her.oh my god what shoudl i do. well i will write more later..you know just to keep ot a suspense..

Well please tell me if i should continue and tell me anything i need to add and i will definetly add them..thnxx

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