New ishra ss - Tu jo mila ho gaya Sab haasil-pt 8 on pg 127 on 20 feb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: asma18
Very nice update!
Ruman bond. ...
But where is ishita? ??
Update soon. .

Thanks asma for loving the update .

Will cont asap

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: 9900
Nice update pooja di😃
Loved it a lot😃
Loved how raman took care of ruhi😃
He felt ruhi is hungry so asked her😃
But she remembered what her mother said and said that she is not hungry😆
Loved how raman made her agree to have food😃
Poor ruhi is missing her mumma so she wants to have idli😭
Loved how raman fed her😃
Ruhi is so sweet😳
She asked raman to eat as his stomach is paining😃
Loved how raman fed her again seeing her struggling to eat😃
Raman dropped ruhi in the police station but didn't feel like leaving her😃
He went out and came again😃
Then went again when ruhi came out😃
Arrrgh that police man was so rude😡
Raman said he'll take her home😃
Loved their shopping😃
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃

Thanks Pooja for loving the update .

Glad you liked it.

Will update asap

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Divanru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: AttitudeQueen13
😆 hehe sure akka I will read all your stories dheere dheere se 😉 I mean old ones. Coming to current update I was feeling like Raman and Ruhi having strong relationship. Who knows it may be blood relation my sixth sense telling this akka 😉 . Thank god Raman brought ruhi to his home. Lil one was so scared of that police station 😔 . Loved Raman and rooh bonding. Uff you scared me na I also thought Raman lost Ruhi , but glad he found her. It's interesting akka. Waiting for the next update. Thanks for quick update 😊

Thankyou somuch Greece for reading and commenting .

Glad you like the story.

You will get all answers slowly.

Will updt asap

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Awww
RuMan moments are always lovely and so was this

Thanks sukh .

Glad you loved it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: kras
Aww di so cute update
So emotional also
I love raman and ruhi bond
How nicely he handled her
First when he asked her about have something to eat
He read her eyes and facial expressions and got to know that she was hungry
Then his drama about his hunger and stomachache
And ruhi reason for her lie
That reason was so realistic
Every parent teach their kids this lesson
But ruhi is so innocent
He told her that they are friends now
And she accepted it
Then their lunch
Ruhi was missing her mumma a lot
She didn't order pizza burger
She ordered idly
And when raman listen her reason about it
His eyes became teary
So heart touching scene di
In fact entire restaurant scene was so heart touching and heart warming
The way he made her sit on his lap
The way he feed her from his hands
The way she became thoughtful and said her that she will eat with her own hand but couldn't eat properly
And then again raman feed her
So emotional scene
Then their police station scene
He was so emotional
He was so worried for her
He didn't want to leave her
He was feeling guilty for leave her alone
But he thought this is best for her
That's why he left her their
But when ruhi hold his legs
And requested him not to leave her there
That scene was so heart wrenching
She was so scared
And this is true police station is not right place for kids
And then that constable scolded her
And that scene was so realistic
May be their job is like this only
May be in police job they lose their humanity
Or may be they have to make her heart like stone for this job
Any way back to the update
Raman was so angry
He scolded the inspector for this behavior
Inspector apologized to raman
And told him that they will send ruhi to orphanage
But raman can't let this happen
He took her ruhi with him
Then their shopping scene
Ruhi was so happy
Raman bought so many things
And ruhi didn't like it
Does raman know ishita
Do they have any past together
Because he remembered someone from ruhi talk
Any way raman made her understand
Then ruhi lost
Because she wanted a teddy
And lost him
Raman was so worried
But thank god he found her
They both were crying
So emotional scene

Thankyou somuch reeti dear for your lovely and long comment.

Glad you liked the update somuch.

Wait for some more updates ,the story has just started.

Will update asap

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Divanru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: rufana10
unresed on pg 19

Thanks ,had seen it dear

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: usaonly
OMG I miss this update silly me. Lovely start for Ruman journey now I suspect something the way Taman listen Runi word remind him of someone. But is it mean that person will be Ishu and Ruhi will be his daughter without his knowing. Then it will be very big shocking. Or may be Ishu married to someone else. Thing to follow the story.i love the way Raman Takecare of Ruhi and he try to get her to eat by give his excuse that he also hungry that was lovely. And he feed her till she is full. The police station scence also touching. He had strange feeling to leave her There. And.Ruhi also run after him it prove how much She trust him . She forgot her mother said don't trust stranger and eat his food. 😆😆 . Very lovely story you make me miss the old YHM from the beginning Ruman bonding so well hope time she meet her mother will not make Raman break his heart. Thank you for the loving story and your reminder,Have a great weekend my dear.🤗🤗

Thankyou somuch Jum for loving this story and update.

Its ok ,you must be busy that's why you missed it.

Everything will be revealed slowly.

Will update asap

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Sk-Sharmin
i think der s smthing b/w RKB nd ru...
obviously relation to hoga...
RKB ishu nd ru..md fr each othr hai...
lovely update...
liked d way he tk care of ru...
nw waiting fr ishus entery...
waiting..

Thanks sharmin dear for loving it .

Will update asap

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: riYa09guPta
Hiii...

Awesome story...
Nice start...
Loved Ruman bonding...
Ruman scene is always a treat for us...
Plzzz do PM me for next update...

Thanks Riya for loving it.

Will surely send pm.

Had send buddy request ,accept it.

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Divanru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Hi friends I m back .Here's the next update.

Part 2.

Raman entered the huge bhalla mansion,with ruhi in his arms.He called the maid neelu and handed ruhi to her.

N- bhaiya ,who is she .

R- she is ruhi ,its her stuffs .take her with you ,give bath to her, feed her and then make her sleep as she is very tired,

Neelu nodded as she knows that further questioning him will not make any difference because raman will not answer and of her questions.she took ruhi in her arms and went to a room.she did all the works of ruhi ,till the time raman also freshen up and started his left work.

In the night about 10.30 raman was preparing his project when he heard someones cries ,at first he ignored it thinking it must be his hallucinations as he thought there's no body in house except him.He again resumed his work when he recalled about ruhi.He ran to the hall and found ruhi crying ,she was sitting in couch and was having hicupps as she was crying for long time.

Raman almost run to her and engulfed her in his arms and caress her back and asked concerned " rooh what happened bachcha ,why are you crying".

Ruhi didn't answer him but she has stopped crying.After a while when she was quite raman pulled her from him and asked " why you are crying".

Ru- mujhe mamma me pass jaana hai( I want to go to mu mamma).

Raman felt helpless ,listening to her.He thought for sometimes and then picked ruhi in his arms and walked towards his room.He tucked ruhi in bed and slid beside her .He caress her hairs and said " see rooh now its night and very dark outside ,so we cannot go to her ,if you want I can sing a Lori ( lullaby) for you .want to listen".

Ruhi nodded happily .

Raman started singing " lalla lalla Lori ,doodh ki katori ,doodh mein batashaa ,ruhi Kate tamasaa".

After completing his lines he thought ruhi would have been slept ,he looked at her and saw ruhi was sitting beside him closing her both ears with her both the hands.He shook her ,ruhi saw him ,he asked signalling " what happened ".

Ruhi slowly opened her ears and spoke " uncle aap zindagi mein sab kuch Karna par gaana kabhi mat gaana ".( uncle you do everything in life but never sing a song)

Raman made a sad face and asked " was it that bad".

Ruhi also made same type face and spoke " yes uncle it was very bad."After completing her words she burst in laugh.Raman looked at her and recalled same words of someone.

FLASHBACK

" Rk you do everything in life but please never ever sing ,you are a pathetic singer ."girls voice.

Raman " was it that bad ".

G- yup ,it was very bad.

And the girl laughed aloud.

Raman was lost in his thought when ruhi shook him and he came back to present.

Ru- uncle where are you lost.

R- no where ,so what we were talking .

Ru- nothing ,you were singing a Lori for me .

Saying so she again start laughing. Raman saw her laughing figure and admired as he saw her laughing whole heartedly for the first time ,till now she was sad and was missing her mamma.

Raman then thought something and started doing silly things,making ruhi laugh on him.After a while they slept cuddling eachother ,exhausted by laughing continuously.

Next morning raman woke a felt some weight on his stomach ,he touched there and found ruhi sleeping carelessly ,and almost her half body was on him .she was sleeping burying her head on his stomach and holding him by her little hands.Raman looked her and smiled .He then gently got up ,carefully enough not to disturb ruhi and went to complete his morning chores.

When he came ,he saw ruhi was awake and was rubbing her eyes with her tiny hands and was crying .Raman came to her and asked " hey rooh what happened why are you crying ."

Ru - uncle subah ho gayi ,ab hum mamma ke pass chalenge.(Now its morning ,now we will go to mamma )

Raman again felt helpless, thought something and said " rooh ,at first you go and freshen up ,then we will go to police station."

Ru - no I will not go there.

R- why we will go and ask for your mamma.

Ru -no you will leave me there .

R- no I will not leave you ,we will only ask about your mamma and will come back.

Ru - no you are lying.

R- arey I told you ,I will not .promise .

Ru - ( pinching her neck)no first you say ruhi promise.

R- ( pinching his neck ) achcha baba ruhi promise.but at first you go and freshen up.

Ruhi got up and went to bathroom ,while raman started dressing up.He was ready ,he went to check ruhi .He saw she has taken bath and had wore a pink top and blue denim capri.she was all dressed but was struggling with her hairs as they were long and she was not able to comb them.Raman walked to her ,took the comb and started combing gently ,she smiled looking to him through mirror.

Raman also smiled and asked " you yourself got ready".

Ru - no neelu didi dressed me but she was getting late for preparing bf so went to make it.

R- oh.

After he made her ready both went to dining table and sat for having breakfast.Neelu brought aloo parantha for both of them.Raman tried to fed ruhi but she stopped him and spoke

" uncle I can eat myself ,mamma says I m a big girl "

Raman smiled listening to her words and signalled her to start eating .she started eating slowly and carefully .He observed that she is also a lefty like him and was eating like him.

After having breakfast Raman and ruhi went to police station.

In police station.

R- good morning ,inspector .Did you get any information about ruhi's parents.

PI - I m very sorry Mr bhalla ,we are searching but till now we don't have any information as twenty four hours had not completed yet.

R( narrowing his eyes)- twenty four hours ,what does that mean.

PI - actually sir ,we cannot file a missing complain of a person till twenty four hours get over,so there 's a possibility that the girls missing complain has not been filed yet .we have send her information to all police station in Delhi as soon as the complain will be filed we will find ruhis parent and will inform you asap.Till then can we ask some questions to ruhi to get some information about her parents.

Raman looked at ruhi who was hiding herself in his arms,and was clutching him tightly with her little hands.Raman pulled her from him and spoke " rooh uncle wants to ask some questions about your mamma and papa ,you will answer them na."

Ruhi peeped from his chest and nodded slowly.

PI - ok then tell me beta what's your papas name .

Ru - I don't know ,he don't live with us.

PI - then who lives in your house with you.

Ru - me and mamma.

PI - OK then tell me how you lost .

Ru - mamma was gone to hospital.,me ,vandu chitti ,shravu and chittappa went to park .we were playing hide and sick .I hide in a car and slept.when I woke I was here,shravu and my friends were not there.

Ruhi was almost in the verge of crying.Raman caress her and consoled.

PI - why your mamma went to hospital,was she sick.

Ru - no my mamma is a doctor.

PI - ok mr raman that's enough information we can get from such a small kid ,now we will contact all the doctors in Delhi and will defiantly find her mother asap and will inform you.

R- ok sir.

Saying so raman stood from his place with ruhi in his arms and shook hand with inspector and walked out of police station.

He went to his car sat ruhi in it and spoke " rooh

you go home ,I m going to office will meet in evening".

Ruhi held his hand firmly and said crying " no uncle I will come along with you .I will be scared in home alone".

Raman understood her situation and nodded.He sat in car and said " ok now uncle and rooh will do work together in office."

Ruhi smiled fully ,hugged and kissed him on his cheeks ,he also took her in his embrace and kissed on her forehead and smiled fully while driver dove car towards his office.

Ye moh moh me dhaage

Teri unglion she jaa uljhe

Koi toh toh na laage

Kis tarah girah ye suljhe.

That's all for now friends.I m little unwell and my net is just killing me so adjust with this only.

Hope you will like this part .enjoy reading and do comment.

Next part https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/130540563

Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago