FF- Pretty Woman || Chapter 11 updated- Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one but I prefer to read ishra story.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2:
*Not proof-read*

Ashok moves closer and kisses Naina's neck. She tries to resist him but gives in and wraps her hands around him. Naina thinks to herself I know this is wrong, he's trying to hurt Raman Bhai how do I fight these emotions ? It's all physical I'm only doing this so I can protect everyone. A simple sacrifice for someone who has gave me so much.

Ashok snaps his fingers in Naina's face ? Ermm hello ? Are you still there or did all my affection and passion tire you out? 😉 She thinks and rolls her eyes of course not ? Is this all you have Mr Khanna ? She leans forward and slowly undo's each button of his shirt and pushes him back, you crawls forward placing her hands on his bare chest 'you look so helpless right now' as she moves her hand forward to touch his face, she moves back & stretches out her hands laying them in his hands whilst she rest her head on his chest.

One by one each article of clothing touched the floor, Ashok noticed a scar on Naina back as he touched it, Naina responds with a simple 'ouch' he asks her 'how did she get such a scar ? On such a beautiful body?' 'Each scar has it's own story & this one carries much pain with it' Ashok moved Naina hair to get a good look at the scar and kisses it 'this may heal the pain just a bit' she rolls over and hugs Ashok, both of them wrapped in silk sheet laying next to one another skin to skin.

The next morning Ashok wakes up and stares at Naina 'how can someone look so innocent in their sleep ?' Naina wakes up & asks what are you looking at ? I have an important even to go to this morning & i have got my assistant to drop my clothes off here ... Im going for a shower, okay ? Ashok smiles and says okay 😊

Suddenly, Suraj slams open the door Ashok ! Ashok ! What are you doing ? I heard there was a girl who slept her last night ? Get her out before the media finds out ! Bhai she's gone, what are you talking about ? Let me get dressed and come downstairs.

Naina wears Ashok shirt as she enters the shower as she turns it on she remember what happened last night & begins to cry 'I feel dirty, I feel like I have betrayed myself and I will have to marry a man who doesn't value a woman' Ashok knocks on the door & says i have left you two towels. Naina quickly washes up & washes her hair, she wraps herself in the towels & steps out 'I have to be strong, this is my mission' and today is my charity event for all those children who can not get an education.

She sits infront of the mirror & dries her hair, Ashok looks from far and wonders 'how Naina will get past Suraj ?' He catches her eyes & Naina smiles at him 'what's wrong she asks ?' Bhai knows a girl was her last night ! I told him that you left but ... But im her sitting in a towel in your room, i think you should go for a shower and then think of what to do. Naina continues to dry her hair, hmm curly hair it is then today ... She applies her makeup & thinks what should I wear to this event ? I want to play with the kids but also want people to take me seriously ? Hmmm you can never go wrong with the chic look ...

(naina's outfit)

Naina looks around to see if anyone is around her and she rings Shagun and Ishita 'Naina tu teek toh ho ?' 'Yes im fine guys, don't worry i have everything under control, just let me know what you want me to do next' Shagun and Ishita say 'we want you to build up Ashok's trust, make him fall in love with you but don't fall yourself' Naina closes her eyes and remembers how she fell weak last night, it won't happen, trust me.

'I'm leaving Ashok ! Meet me at the office' calls out Suraj. Finally, I can leave thinks Naina she writes a note down on the dressing table for Ashok 'I'm leaving for my charity event, try to come if you can' Naina quickly, runs over to the table with her necklace on & switches on the microphone this way Ishita & Shagun can hear everything he plots.

Naina quickly runs out & drivers to her event children come running towards her with balloons as well as thank you cards she smiles and gives them all a big hug ! 'I missed you Naina Di, i missed you too guys ! Normally, we would have to video chat but im here today & i want to hear all about your day and how your studies are going on' The head of the event comes over and hugs Naina 'if it wasn't for your donations we would not be running anymore' Naina smiles and says if it wasn't for people like you reaching out to people like me I wouldn't be able to be apart of such an amazing experience.

A child tugs on Naina's jeans & say's there is someone at the door, asking about you di ? Let me see who it is ... Omg Ashok ! You came ?! These are for you Naina beautiful red roses for a beautiful girl. Roses also have thorns ... But im glad you came, this where i come to relax. Ashok laughs and say's relax ? Children do not let you relax. I love children Naina says they have their innocence and honesty which isn't easy to find now ... The head of the event comes over and asks Naina 'who is this young man ?' Her boyfriend replies Ashok.

The children coming running over, boyfriend ? Ya kya hoota hai ? Naina blushes and one little boy say's 'excuse me uncle, she is my girlfriend... She liked me more than you' Naina nods her head and say's yes Armaan. Ashok looks on in confusion and laughs another girl comes forward and says if you don't mind Naina Di 'I'll make him my boyfriend' Naina smiles and says of course riddhi.

Naina rests her hand on her chin, Ashok nudges her and says 'yeh bacha kya jaana hum kya cheej hai ;)' Naina looks up and says 'hai woh kya jaana ? Ke larkh itna bawkoof hoota hai'

Chapter 3

Edited by Tc_Tc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Great going re..
Ashk & Naina ll fall in love for sure, I think so..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Nycc update
thnxx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Nice
Let's c ashok n naina fell in luv or not
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Both Parts Are Amazing
Continue Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Nice
Let's see what happens next
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
nice update dr.ashok really loves naina?????
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranisa123

nice update dr.ashok really loves naina?????


I'm not going to answer that 😉
Preet will reveal all
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
i think ashok will genuinely fall in love with naina!!!
anyway update soon

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