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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thankyou 😳
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That was so awesome..
First RaTika story
I just loved it
Awww Rajeev's sister is so cute...
Please Update Soon
and add me in your PM list.
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Chapter 2

After getting ready for the shoot Kritika came out of Green Room wearing white colour top ,white shrug and blue jeans and having her hair tied in a pony tail .

(They are going to shoot the scene where Ananya and Kabeer meets for the first time and Ananya starts fumbling seeing Kabir infront of her)

When she came out she saw that Rajeev is talking to a small girl she went to them and said:
K-hello sir who is she?
R-hi kritika ye meri cousin sis hai and please tum mujhe sir mat bulaya karo yaar aise lagta hai ki yaha pe sabse senior main hi hu you can call me by my name.
K-Ok😊(then turning to shriya )aapka naam kya hai?
S-Miss Shriya Khandelwal(she answered innocently)
K(smiles and then extending hands to her says)-hi I am Miss Kritika Kamra.

(then they both shake hands.and then Kritika started talking to Shriya about her school studies etc and Shriya also started liking Kritika and started talking to her freely totally forgetting that there was one more person standing and is listening to their talks and smiling . Rajeev is really shocked that how Kritika in few minutes got mingle with her sister and they are now talking like they both knew each other from years . Rajeev thoughts broke when he heard a voice calling out his name and asking him to come for shoot . he and Kritika went to the spot where the scene has to be shot . Khalid and malvika(megha )are also present there . Then the director(D) started to explain them the scene and then they got ready to shoot that scene)

D-Action

Kabir Malvika Khalid are talking and walking and then they stop at particular place(sorry guys I don't remember that particular dialogue)and stareted talking Ananya is walking from other direction while practicing how to talk with her Kabir Sir and then "bump"and then the person turns . Ananya came to know that it was Kabir and then she tried to introduce herself
A- sssorry hhi I I Ananya vo papa ... article...bbig ffan of yours
And then its time for Rajeev to say his lines but he does not say a single wors he got lost somewhere
R(pov whe she was saying her lines)-She is beautiful , her eyes are really a sight to watch , when she bumped into me I was ready to say my lines but by seeing her eyes from near I got lost in them and how perfectly she plays her role and how perfectly she says her lines I am completely impressed with her she is such a wonderful actress)

"cut it "by hearing the words Rajeev came out of his thought and then he realized that he has not said his line and everybody is staring at him because he was silent from more than 2 minutes.

D-Rajeev you have to say your lines after a small pause. not after a pause of more then few minutes but of only few seconds
R-Sorry main kuch soch raha tha
"kuch soch raha tha ya kisi ke baare mein soch raha tha"said a manly voice
R-Gaurav tum yaha (shockingly)
G-Yes buddy main yaha , kyu main yaha nahi aa sakta
R-ofcourse aa sakte ho lekin tum yahaa aaye kyu ho?
G-Buddy aaj ek hi meeting thi to socha tumse milta chalu after all ghar mein jaake bhi to bore hi hota na.
R-oh ok
G-by the way tumne bataya nahi ki tum kiske khyalo mein khoye hue the
R-Gaurav aisa kuch nahi hai main kisi ke khyalo mein nahi khoya hua tha main to bas ye soch raha tha ki ki(trying to find an excuse)
G- ki Kritika ji kitni beautiful hai?
R(without thinking says immediately)-ha(then after realizing what Gaurav said) what😲? Gaurav ye tum kya keh rahe ho
G-kya kya keh raha hu sach hi to keh raha hu jab itni beautiful naari aapke saamne khadi ho to dialogues kaha se yaad rahenge(then turning toward Kritika)sach mein bhagwaan ne badi fursat se banaya hai aapko,you are really very beautiful.
(Rajeev observes a tinge of redness on her cheeks and he instantly got to know that she is blushing)
K-thanks😳 vaise aap?
G-oh I am sorry aapko dekhkar itna kho gaya ki apne aapko introduce karwana reh gaya my name is Gaurav Khanna , aapne Khanna Industry ke baare mein to suna hi hoga(kritika nods) main uska maalik hu aur Rajeev ka best freind bhi .
K-oh nice to meet you
G-same here vaise aap sham ko kya kar rahi hai
R(instantly says)-shooting (both look at him) aaj , kal , parso vo shooting mein hi busy rehne waali hai
(Rajeev really don't know that how the words of Gaurav started afecting him though he knows that he was doing only healthy flirting but he really don't like it don't know why)
G-really?(asking to Kritika)
K- ya vo actually abhi abhi show start hua to abhi se agar zyada shoot karenge to last mein zyada kaam nahi karna padega
G-oh ok no problem
"Gaurav bhaiya" a voice came from behind and when Gaurav turns to sea from where the voice is coming from and then he saw that Shriya is running towards him and then instantly hug him on his waist . Gaurav picked up Shriya and says
G-meri princess yaha kya kar rahi hai?
S-aapki princess yaha shooting dekhne aayi thi par ab use bahut bore ho raha hai
G- awww no problem princess ke Gaurav bhaiya aaj use ghumaane le jaayenge ok?
Shriya nodded happily and they went after bidding good bye to everyone
after that the scene got shooted one more time and this Rajeev also said his lines😆😆
Then after that shoot some more scenes got shooted and then the director announce pack up for the day so everyone goes to change and then left for home.
Kritika left early as her scenes got over soon but Rajeev has to stay back for some more shots and ofcourse for his JSP. after finishing his work he came to green room and started thinking about the day . and he really cannot hold himself from thinking what happened in the first shot of his day how he got lost in Kritika's beauty and how he does not like his buddy flirting with her but completing his thought aside he left to his home.

Here At Kritika's Home

Kritika was standing in her balcony and was thinking about day's event . When Rajeev said that she was not free for today , tomorrow or day after tomorrow she was shocked because she did not expected that Rajeev would give the answer a thought came to her mind that what if Rajeev did not like her going with Gaurav anywhere but then she mentally chidded herself that how can that be possible why would her going out withs someone affect him(and then chuckling to her own thought she goes to her bed and got retired for the day).

Here At Rajeev's Home

Rajeev , Shriya and Gaurav are sitting together and eating dinner . Gaurav is continuously passing Rajeev teasing look and Rajeev is totally ignoring him but Shriya is also noticing Gaurav so she decided to ask him

S-bhaiya kya hua aap rajeev bhaiya ko aise kyu dekh rahe ho ?
G-vo kya haina princess aapke rajeev bhaiya ko aaj kal sabke plans pata hote hai(he said in perfect teasing tone)
R-aisa kuch nahi hai Kritika aur mera time schedule ek jausa hai isliye bas maine kaha after all hum dono ek saath kaam karte hai(he said as a matter of fact)
G-Lekin maine to Kritika ka naam hi nahi liya
R- ha to tu aur kiske plan ke baare mein baat kar raha tha?(trying to cover up)
G-buddy main apne plans ke baare mein baat kar raha tha . tujhe mere plans yaad nahi rehte?
R-nahi mujhe tere plans yaad nahi rehte samjha😡
G-kya yaar kritika ke plans yaad rehte hai aur apne best freind ke nahi veeeryyy baaad . Dekha princess kya zamaana aa gaya hai
at this Shriya giggles and give hi fi to Gaurav.
Rajeev decided to change the topic so he say -accha accha ab ho gaya naatak to sone chale aur shriya kal tumhe school bhi jaana hai na to jao jaake apne room mein so jao.
Shriya went away saying good night to her both brothers and ofcourse their loyal servant Shambhu Bhaiya
G-Shambhu mere liye zara room set kar dena aaj to main idhar hi sounga.
Sh-ji maalik
R-kyu Gaurav ji aap kyu yaha soyenge aapke ghar mein aang lag gayi hai(says in sarcastic and angry tone)
G-nahi yaar socha tere saath thoda time spend karlu after all 2 hafton se hamari thik se baat kaha hui hai
R-oh ok
G-but ek baat bata aaj tak to tune mujhse ye sawaal kabhi nahi pucha phir aaj kyu (before Rajeev can reply)are haan main kaise bhul sakta hu ab to tujhe mujhse zyada kisi aur ka dhyaan rehne lagaa hai kisi aur ke plans yaad rehne lage hai (he said in a very sad tone and then started singing)
dost dost na raha
pyaar pyaar na raha
zindagi hame tera
aitbaar na raha (untill a pillow hits on his face)

R-bas kar nautanki aur aisa kuch bhi nahi jaisa tu soch raha hai vo bas apne kaam ko leke passionate hai aur iski wajah se muy=jhe acchi lagti hai kyuki i respect those people who are passionate about their work.
G-matlab tujhe kuch kuch nahi hota
R-nahi mere baap ab jaake soja
G-matlab main uspe chance maar sakta hu?
R-teri to ruk tujhe abhi batata hu
(and the chase begins they were running in the house like throwing pillows on other untill Gaurav ran to the room and locked the door and said Good Night.
rajeev shook his head and went to sleep)
END

I hope chapter accha tha because ye idea achanak se dimaak mein aa gaya and
Sorry if anybody has not got pm beacause due to some technical problem few pms were not been sent again sorry
Edited by vssdp - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: KaYa_licious

That was so awesome..

First RaTika story
I just loved it
Awww Rajeev's sister is so cute...
Please Update Soon
and add me in your PM list.

thankyou so much dear
I am really a big fan of yours stories
please update soon your fic relationship status its complicated
I just love that fic😊😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dearo..!!! amazing chapter...👏👏😃
so rajeev feels for her...😛
& gaurav is such a naughty...
& no problems continue when ur free... thanQ for the PM...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manaalkhan

hey dearo..!!! amazing chapter...👏👏😃
so rajeev feels for her...😛
& gaurav is such a naughty...
& no problems continue when ur free... thanQ for the PM...

Thankyou so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh Man !! What a concept !! I always wished that Rajeev and Kritika were a real life couple!! They look adorable together !!! I just want to hug you for bringing up this fiction !! Loved both the chapters !! Cant wait to read more !! Please update soon !!
And do PM me regarding the updates !!!
Cheers !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinyshajil

Oh Man !! What a concept !! I always wished that Rajeev and Kritika were a real life couple!! They look adorable together !!! I just want to hug you for bringing up this fiction !! Loved both the chapters !! Cant wait to read more !! Please update soon !!
And do PM me regarding the updates !!!
Cheers !!

Thankyou so much dear 😳
I will update soon and will surely pm you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowww!!!! I just loved both the updates sooo much!!!Looks like Rajeev has started feeling something for Kritika!!Cant wait to read further!!!! update soonest!!N plzz pm me about the future updates😊Lots of love
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Originally posted by: annabethpercy

Wowww!!!! I just loved both the updates sooo much!!!Looks like Rajeev has started feeling something for Kritika!!Cant wait to read further!!!! update soonest!!N plzz pm me about the future updates😊Lots of love

Thankyou so much
I will update tonight or tomorrow and will surely pm you

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