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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanee

hey,dear offscreen romances is my favourite..so I request u to plz plz plzzz continue it n do update regularly n pm me :)

mine too😳
i will update soon thankyou😊
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CHARACTER SKETCH
Rajeev Khandelwal : A 34 years handsome , charming , hot personality who wants to devote his whole life in in his career that is acting and secondly to his small cousin sister.He is a very humble and genuine person and loves his sister a lot and always wants her to be happy. He has also a best friend and shares a joyfull bond with him.
Kritika Kamra : She is a 27 year old beautiful , gorgeous and stunning women who loves to do modelling and acting and therfore started her career as actress in daily soaps. She is a very sweet natured , joy loving girl but quite hot headed.She loves her family and wanted them to be always happy. She also has a best freind and always go to her whenever she was happy,sad,confused,etc
Shriya Khandelwal: A 8 year old girl and small sister of Rajeev Khandelwal . A bubbly girl who respects and loves his brother very much.Due to a big buisness empire her parents cannot give her time so she lives with her older brother in India and is very much fond of him.
Gaurav Khanna : Rajeev Khandelwal's best friend who is of 34 and also treat Shriya as her own sister . He is a buisness man and is also very successful too. He is very jovial person and a bit flirt too who wants everyone around to be happy.
Disha Parmar : A 27 year old sweet natured beautiful girl and best friend of Kritika Who always helps Kritika in any problem and is a successful interior designer of delhi.
All other characters are the cast and crew of the show reporters and if any entry will be there it will be introduced in the story itself.
I will soon update the first part😳


Edited by vssdp - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey lovely ...now since characters are introduced... I'm eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

"Jab tak garibon ki aawaz tv par nahi gunjegi tab tak sudhroge nahi na tum log" he heard her saying when he was coming to meet Mr.Goldi behl (the director of the show reporters) to know the time schedule of shooting and he instantly got an idea that who was she. He had gotten impressed with that women when he met her for first time at photoshoot of reporters as he always respects people who are devoted to their work and are passionate about their work and this girl is surely one of them . He had worked with many ladies but this girl was differnt(no offence to anyone).she is surely very beautiful but she has a power of attracting everyone not just by her beauty but also by her acting. When he saw her saying those lines and acting on it he immediately understood that this girl always acts by her heart and Rajeev Khandelwal always honoured people who do their work by heart.

Tring Tring

his thoughts were broken by the the ring of his cellphone and he immediately stopped the car when he saw the caller ID

R- Hello Princess kya hua ? (though he very well knows ki kya hua😛)
S- Bhaiya you are very bad maine aap ko kaha tha na ki aap aaj
aath baje tak ghar aa jaaoge aur mujhe fir bahaar lekar jaaoge but aap ho ki meri baat maante hi nahi nau baj gaye hai and you are still not at home and this time i will not talk to you.😡
she said in one breath
R - Are princess hello, hello, hello ( 😭but damn the phone got cut)
R(himself)- Rajeev beta jaldi se ghar pahuch varna aaj to teri khair nahi abhi to sirf baat karna band kiya hai baad mein kahi ghar ke darwaaze na band ho jaaye.
then sighing he drove back to home . He parked his car and entered in the mansion and saw his pretty angel sitting on the sofa of the hall with puffed up cheeks and very angry face😡. he slowly goes to her and sat on knees in front of her and held his ear and said
R-I know princess aapke bhaiya ne promise toda hai and promise todna is a bad thing but sacchi mujhe nahi pata tha ki itna time lag jaayega plzz apne bhaiya ko maaf kardo I am really sorry.(he said with a very cute child like face that Shriya got melt but afterall she is an actor's sister thodi nautanki to karegi hi).
S-no bhaiya aap hamesha aisa hi karte ho but this time main aapko maaf nahi karungi you have to compensate.
R- ofcourse I will(his face instantly lit up) , bataao kya chahiye.
S-jo main mangugi vo aap mujhe do ge?
R-ofcouse jo tum chaho vo.
S-ok to kal main school nahi jaaungi aur aapke saath shooting dekhne aaungi(she said with a very very happy face)😆😆
R-what😲😲 but princess kal to tumhara school hai and school bunking is not a good habbit (he said trying to make her understand)
S- oho bhaiya ek din se kuch nahi hota pleeease i really want to go(she said making puppy eyes and rajeev has no other option then to say yes because his sisters was adament)

But Rajeev was really tensed because he knows his sister very much she is world's no 1 mischivious girl and will do something next day and with this thought he went to sleep.

next day in morning at 8:00am a beautiful girl woke up with the buzzing of her alarm and stretched her hands and then she got up from her queen size bed and and moves towards window to get some fresh air . she opens the glasses of window and again stretched her arms and yawned .then she heard a voice calling out her name.
V-kittu kittu
K(littile irritated)-kya hai dishu kyu chilla rahi hai subah subah.
D-Ms.Sleeping Beauty chillau nahi to aur kya karu bhul gayi kya ki aaj bhi aapko shoot pe jaana hai .
K-yaar yaad hai lekin aaj dus baje jaana hai isliye thoda late uthi hu samjhi.
(sorry guys I forget to mention that kritika and disha live in same house)
D-ok meri maa ab jaldi se ready hoja kyuki mujhe nau baje hi jaana hai aur meri car kharaab hai isliye mujhe tu hi drop kar rahi hai ok
K- ok baba ab jaa main aati hu niche ready hokar
D-jaldi aana
K-haa yaar(now got very irritated) ab jaaa😡
D-ok ok yaar gussa kyu ho rahi hai jaa rahi hu na
then disha left the room and kritika went to get ready.
kritika had wore a neavy blue knee length frock looking absolutely perfect and disha had wore a pink frock suit then both the pretty ladies did their breakfast and as decided kittu first drop disha at her work place and then goes to the set for shooting.
Here at other side rajeev khandelwal is already present on the set and is getting ready for the shoot and her littile princess is talking to bikramjeet(khalid , i will represent him as khalid so there will be no confusion).When he got ready for his shoot he told Shriya not to not to do any mischief he will come back in 10 min as he wants to talk to Goldi and at this she nodded and then he goes out of green room.
Kritika was entering on the set when she saw her co actor talking with the director and she went in thoughts seeing him . he is such a handsome man and also a very excellent and talented actor would she will be able to match with him . will she'll able to do acting as good as him beacause she knows that he was a very passionate and marvellous actor and if she has to make her name in this field she has to do lots of hard work and she really wanted that rajeev should guide her in this.
her thoughts were broken when make up artist called her and just then rajeev saw her . Both smiled at each other and then Kritika wents to green room and rajeev wents to Shriya .


Edited by vssdp - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb, always thought they have great chemistry on screen,
Now u r penning it down off screen
Please update regularly

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update dear.plz continue[/QUOTE
Thankyou 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Superb, always thought they have great chemistry on screen,

Now u r penning it down off screen
Please update regularly

Thankyou and sorry kyunki main regular updates to nahi de paungi but i'll try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dearo😉 the first update is rocking👏👏
just loving the concept..😳
continue soon & thanku for the PM...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Magar1992

awesome
pm me also pls

Thankyou and I will surely pm you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manaalkhan

hey dearo😉 the first update is rocking👏👏
just loving the concept..😳
continue soon & thanku for the PM...

Thankyou so much glad you liked it

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