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Posted: 10 years ago

jyada kuch nai bolungi i know iam late i hope this chapter compensates the late update

enjoy reading😊😊


chapter 10:


Nandini:manik watchout!!

Nandini starts running but she couldnt feel anything under her feet.

She looks down and finds that she is on a web but still stands there she is hell shocked and starts panicking

Firstly she is unable to find where she is standing but feels like she is floating in air and secondly she is unable to find where manik has vanished.

She saw him falling down from a corner of this strange spider like web and now could see nothing down.

She thinks to move little ahead so that can watch out for manik but in the fear of falling , also finding herself so weak, she didnt move an inch. she started shivering, sweating alot all over her body and closes her eyes tightly.

Suddenly she felt someone hugging her very tightly, it is impossible for air also to go between them.

She is unable to analyze anything and faints.

After sometime

She slowly starts moving her eyeball all around as if she is seeing a horror dream and suddenly shouts manikkk!!!

Manik:Nandini, nandini calm down Iam here only, right infront of you open your eyes and see mee

But nandini just repeats manik, Manik

Manik feeling more protective and concerned ,couldn't see her in such traumatic state, tightly holds Nandini's shoulder and shouts

Manik : nanduuu!! Get grip over yourself .

and embraces her in pain for hurting her.



Manik pov :

I shouldn't have been stubborn to do this research here. It's all just because of me. Nandini insisted this place is not too good. Still I have been stupid. ( manik is tensed, lost in mixed feelings, more over he is worried and guilty of what is happening around with Nandini )

After sometime manik feel Nandini's breath, slowly breaking the hug and looks at his sleeping beauty sleeping peacefully, slowly adjusts her bed and covers her with a blanket.

Manik sits beside her, mesmerised by her beauty. He dont know how much time it has been, just sat there and staring at her face.

Slowly nandini opens her eyes and finds manik staring at her

Nandini: manik

Manik:yes ,Nandini i am here

She lifts her hand and Caress manik face to confirm he is fine r not

Manik:Nandini, I am fine kya hua tuje ( in a very soft tone)

Nandini :manik wo... wo... ( her weakness can be shown by her voice, she is sounding very low)

Manik:( he being so concerned, which can be seen through his eyes and gestures)

Nandini, relax, okay. first have some water .

Manik makes her drink water .

Manik:now say what happened to you ?

Nandini :woo i saw u falling down , I got freaked out, when I went to reach you, I found nothing under my feet except some kind of threads, I got scared.. and how we came here ?

Manik :Nandini relax, wo haan , i fell down from that web but I fell on the grass, when I was about to call you, I found you stood up and couldn't mange to stand on them. By the time you moved little forward and slipped from the edge. I got hold of you.

Nandini : OMG! I didn't know anything of this. Are you hurt ? I was falling from so height na, it could have hurted u. ( though she couldn't speak much, she couldn't imagine the pain of manik )

Manik: No. When we climbed it was like 50 feet height from where we slept.

Astonishing thing is when I fell down it is only my height from that web. You just look up. Thats the web.

Nandini: manik ! What a stupid joke. There is roof over here. And she checks all around and says , manik are we in a house ? (Widening her eyes in surprise)


Manik: oh ! Yeah. I mean to say we fell on the roof of this tree house. you are shivering, i called you but you are not responding, you fainted so I brought you here

Nandini :where are we now ?

Manik :wo when u fainted na I found this house. Leave this crap now, how are you feeling, tell me that.

Nandini :much better

Manik is not satisfied with the answer, he checked her forehead and freaked out

Manik :oh!! Nandini you have fever. just lay down I will be back.

Nandini : no manik, you don't go anywhere. Iam fine.

Manik: ( putting finger on his lips) chup chap lete rahoo

Then he goes and gets a cloth with cold water.

Nandini pov

So much of concern in manik's face. That too for me ?

This is first time may be he is doing something for me.

It feels like I found some hidden treasure.

He never do anything like this for anyone, exception for family and friends. Yeah, he used to do everything for them also but is never so worried or tensed, no matter how worse the situation is.

So much of caring, I dont believ what is happening.

I think im dreaming.

But this dream is so beautiful where Iam the happiest person.

Manik is so sweet and caring but would never confess that he is such sweet boy.

( smiles to herself) I feel safe with him.

Manik returns and starts doing his work

Dipped the cloth in water and placed on her head

After sometime, my temperature reached normal not totally. But manik is relaxed comparatively from morning. Look at him , he is bringing some fruits to eat.

Nandini :Manik please be relaxed. Iam fine now. stop worrying yourself for me. Dont be guilty, its not because of you.

Manik (suprised look) pov :

How do she know what Iam thinking.

No, I'm not worried for her. Uff. Manik be strong.

Manik : who said I'm worried for you? Huh, I'm worried we will not go out if you are ill

That's it. Nothing much.

Nandini : your eyes, face and your actions tell me that you are worried for me.

Manik : oh really? Let me look at myself. He make faces looking at small piece of mirror he found. He smiles widely and says, see how happy I'm.

Manan smiles looking at each other. Nandini rests again.Manik turning to be doctor, all time he checks her fever and fall a sleep watching her (in sitting position ).

" We turn to be a adventurer, a friend, a doctor, a mother and we become everything to the person we LOVE. "

" Love is not just those three words we say looking at one's beauty. It is the pure bond of heart admiring the beauty of soul."

May you all find your soulmate.

Here ends today chapter.

Keep loving friends.

Keep supporting.

I am very sorry that I made you all wait so long.

Story keep continues this way.

Have a good day.

Yours

Kiranmai.

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Posted: 10 years ago
thanx for the pm!...missed your story alot!!...
the update is just awesome n happy birthday to u in advnce! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: parimala94

thanx for the pm!...missed your story alot!!...

the update is just awesome n happy birthday to u in advnce! :)


thanq😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
manan is love... good he is dr taking care of her
cute update ..missed u n ur story
happy u r back
ty for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kimnana

manan is love... good he is dr taking care of her

cute update ..missed u n ur story
happy u r back
ty for pm


Thanq😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
So the mysterious island is back 😉
Awesome yaar...like always !! But this mystery.. Kab solve hogi 😆

Aww..Manik is all caring now 😳 just love this side of him !!

Update fasterr 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Palchinn

So the mysterious island is back 😉
Awesome yaar...like always !! But this mystery.. Kab solve hogi 😆

Aww..Manik is all caring now 😳 just love this side of him !!

Update fasterr 😉


Thanq 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWSM UPDATE
MYSTRY
SO MUCH SUSPENSE
UPDATE SOON
WARNA
SUSPENSE SE HI MAR JAUNGI
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: diyamanan

AWSM UPDATE

MYSTRY
SO MUCH SUSPENSE
UPDATE SOON
WARNA
SUSPENSE SE HI MAR JAUNGI



Thanq😊😊 n i will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 11:

Next morning:

The bright sunlight and shiny leaves welcoming the morning with new surprise to unfold.

Nandini slowly wakes up when she feels something heavy on her hand and sees manik sleeping like a baby.
she just keep staring at him and mesmerised by him..

The cold breeze touching their faces and making their hairs fly and soothing her heart.she ruffles his hair with utmost love in her eyes and that brings a small smile

on maniks face and slowly opens his eyes and sits next to her on bed.

Manik : ab kaisa hai?? (checks her forehead) ab temperature tho nai hain , tujhe kaise lagrahi hain?

Nandini :(holds his hand and looks straight into his eyes) mein theek hu manik,tumho na mere pass khayal rakne ke liye.
mujhe tho theek hona hee tha. (and blushes)

(both lost in each other eyes)
eye lock broke with sudden shake of the tree.
Manan panics with sudden jerk and looks out through window.
They can see tree falling down as if someone is chopping it.

Manik : oh ! no.. whats happening now?

nandini : looks like an earthquake.

Manik : (searching for a possibility to escape but could find nothing) kuch tho rasta hoga, let me see.

Nandini : there is no way out. mujhe tho kuch samaj nai aarahai
manik. hum kya krenge ( ask with fear and holds his hand).

manik : shhh, pareshaan maat ho, kuch tho raasta hoga.

(holding her cheeks with his palms and comforting her)

Nandini : I dont know. Im scared. what if we die?

Manik : (suddenly gazes at nandu ) why would we die? "WE" are born to live together nandu. kuch nai hoga nandu.

Nandini : ( fear is lost and surprises at his words)
really ? why "WE" ? I mean " mai hee kyu ? koi bhi ladki ho sakti hai na manik?"

Manik : there is no place for anyone else apart from you girl. (carressing her )kyu ki...

Nandini : kyu ki ?? boloo...


They lost balance and very thing starts falling down and collapses including with the house.

Manik : (holding her thight in his arms, protecting her from collapsing roof) kyu ki,..


Nandini : shhh... kuch bhi maat bolo manik...

Manik : ( looking into her beautiful eyes ) fir pucha kyu ??

Nandini : now I feel like words are not required, tumhare aankho mey sab kuch dikh raha hai.

Both lost in themselves have no fear of their death. They falling from such heights didnt matter them front of their bond.
Now the rate which the tree falling increased. Both embracing each other, closing their eyes and remains silent.

Manik : It may be our..

Nandini : (she finishes) Best last moment together.

Manik : Im sorry

Nandini : shhh... you didnt get me into any trouble. ye decision maine liya hai

Manik : par aise halat, tujhe mana kardeni chahiye the..

Nandini : tumhara saat ye pal bas, ab kuch aur baate nai... Let us leave it to time

Manik just holds her more tight and comforts her.
The heartbeat of both gets rising as soon as they are reaching the ground. Scared at some point and happy that they are together.

Whole house falls into pieces, as it get inclined manan fall out from window crashing the glass.

They both in air could see everything turning to pieces due to pressure as the fall is from a great height.
Manan loosing their hold from each other.

Nandini : ( shouts tooo loudly) Manik...

Manik : Nandini hold me tight, dont loose the grip. just wrap yourself.

Nandini : (she starts crying) manik, mujhse nai hora. bacho mujhe...

Manik : try karo nandu. you can do it.

Both now could hold their hands tight, rest of the body in leaning position, still in air but moving down faster.

Nandini : aahhh... ( shreiking loudly)

lost hold of hand

Manik : Nandini... ( keeps on shouting)
Without even realising where they fall .

manik : Nandini , nandini...


nandini : Manikkk... aahhh... a last loud shout.


Will they die? Or still alive?

Hey guys,
Here ends todays part.
comment what you think will happen.
Its a bare ending but a beginning too.

Keep loving.
Love you all guys.
Keep supporting.

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