FF-Pyar Ka Asar-2 ||EPILOGUE on pg no-68||COMPLETED!! - Page 38

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Posted: 9 years ago
Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update kr dooo kiran
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Woww awosome amazing part love it love Premeer sceans :)

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Hi Kiran 🤗

Ch 45 page 52

Wow amazing update. Hahaha love the dialogues. Omg you're too good, 😆

Prem is restless and Preet, Kunal and Kiran jiju teasing.😆 So cute!
Heer with G3 was a sweet scene - reminds me of earlier episodes and G3 in show :P
Haha the over protective / possessive lil Prem was really funny😆😆
It's nice how G3 try to reassure Heer.
Wow surprise party really did turn out to be a surprise. 😃
Love how Rajveer came to wish PH 😃 so cool huh
Lol Rishab came to wish and Prem shook hands with him 😆 haha funny and cool how this scene was done.
Kiran enjoyed every line in your update - too cool. You are awesome with words and cracking up jokes.
Love it a lot.
Ty for this update. Hope you continue soon. The most awaited thing : I guess suhaagraath of PH? Or Since Heer stepped out to wash her saree - Rishab gonna attack her and Prem will throw him out of house?
Looking forward to it.

thank u soo much athi for reading and commenting 😳
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Originally posted by: tarannum6

wowww awosome update kiran...👏
amazing dialogues 👏
Heer and gay3 scean was awosome and sweet love it 😃

premeer are soo cute 😊
love it :)
thanks for the PM

eagerly waiting for the next part 😊
please update sooonn 😊

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Awosome superb ff please post next update

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Originally posted by: ragvir92

Wow That was an awesome update dear

Looks like that Tishab had purposely made someone to drop daal on heer
Stupid idiot
Hope Nothing happens to heer
The interaction with Rajveer is absolutely cute
Like that Rajveer is Prem's friend
Heer-G3 bond is also good
Overall a great update yaar
Continue soon

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Originally posted by: swa291

after reading this am back to old premeer days

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Wonderful story!!! Do continue😊

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Kiran please update next part :)

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Please update next part :)

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Waiting for the next part yaar

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Plzzz update soon... Eagerly waiting for next update...🤓

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Posted: 9 years ago
Note:- guys i know that i am suppose to give u guys a very loong update...and i was planning on it also but couldn't complete it because of the sudden death of my grandma..😭
so isilye..jitna maine pehle likha hua tha..utna hi mae update kar rahi hun..so pls bear with it


Chapter-46

In Prem's room

Heer was clean stain of daal from her saree...just then she heard a knock on bathroom's door..

Heer (Thinks) zarur prem ho ga..

Heer (said loudly):- abhi aai prem bas 2 minutes..

After cleaning the stain she came out of the bathroom..And got shocked when she saw Rishab instead of Prem in the room watching her intensely...

Heer:- tumm.??? Tum yahan kya kar ho...???

But Rishab didn't answer her back...continuously looking at her...Seeing rage in his eyes tries to escape...as she run towards the door and try to opened...

Rishab:- koi faida nahi hai...darwaza locked hai..or chabi (keys) mere pas..

Heer gulped and willed her voice to come out more confident then she felt.

Heer:- Rishab ab in sab ka koi faida nahi hai...tumhari lakh koshisho ke baad bhi koi faida nahi hua..finally meri shadi ho hi gain a prem...or tum kuch nahi paye...isiliye ab behetar yahi hai kit um bhi ab yeh baat achi tarha se samajh lo..ki mer sirf or sirf prem ki hoon..or kisi ki nahi..

Rishab smirked..

Rishab:- han tum prem ki ho...lekin duniya ki nazaron mein...par meri nazaron mein tum sirf or sirf meri ho..or aj..abhi..isi waqt tum sahi maino mer ab meri banogi...

Heer got shocked

Heer:- yeh kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum..

Rishab:- bakwas nahi sweatheart..sach bol raha hun..tumhare gale bhale hi mangalsutra or mang mein sindoor prem ke naam ka hun..lekin aj sahi maino mein tum meri biwi banogi...

Heer:- tum pagal ho gaye ho..tumhara dimang kharab ho gaya hai...

Rishab:- han heer mein pagal ho gaya hun..tumhe prem ke sath dekh dekh ke mein pagal ho chukka hun...or ab tum mere pagalpan ki had dekhogi..

Heer eyes got widened when rishab starts heading towards her taking small-small step like predator...

Heer swallow loudly and turned towards the door..Started banging and shouting..

Heer (shouted):- Prem!!!!prem!!!!!!

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In the Hall

Everyone at the table waiting for heer..

Meher:- Kaha rahe gai heer didi abhi tak aai nahi..

Kunal notice something and said to prem in low voice

Kunal:- Prem Rishab party mein kahin dikhai nahi de raha hai..

Prem became anxious..After 2 seconds he immediately got up and ran towards stairs..Followed by kunal..

Lalit (confusingly asked):- ab in dono ko kya hua..

While Teji and gayatri exchange worried glance to each other.

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When Kunal and prem reached Prem's room...they heard Heer's scream..

Prem and kunal started banging the door with full force...

Prem:- Heer!!!!! Heer!!!

And when they exerted full force on door...they able to open the door...

The sight before prem makes his blood boil...

Rishab was trying tear Heer's cloth off and forcing himself on her..

Prem came towards rishab with full rage..and grab rishab's collar in his fist..and pulled from on top of heer...

Heer immediately shifted to the corner hugging her knees..and sobbing hard...

Prem (aggressively):- teri himmat kaise hui meri heer ko haath lagane nhi...

Rishab (smirked):- Teri heer..??? who teri nahi meri heer hai..??

And saying that he received a hard punch on his face from prem... and fell on the floor..

Prem again grab his collar..and drag him out of the room...

Kunal looked at heer who was crying heavenly hugging her body..he tried to go to her but heer flinched away..

Kunal:- Heer..Heer relax..you're fine now..ab kuch nahi hoga..darne ki koi zarurat nahi..its ok...

Kunal took blanket from the bed and hesitantly passed it to heer trying not to freak her out..and left from the room..

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Prem was brutally beating rishab...he smack his fist on rishab's face that he came down rolling from the stairs...

Everyone become shocked seeing prem shivering in the rage...

Prem growled:- teri himmat kaise hui meri heer ko chune ki..mae tujhe zinda nahi chordunga..

Saying this prem gave one more kick..rishab yelped in pain...

Everyone from Juneja's and Maan's understand the situation

Manmeet and Preet came stand either side of prem...

No body dared to stop prem..

Prem grabbed rishbad by his collar..make him stand...only to give another hard punch...blood came oozing out from his nose...

Kunal came down hurriedly and went towards ladies (i.e gayatri..teji..meher..ash..misha..kulraj and shruti)

Kunal:- aunty ap log is waqt heer ke pas jaiye...ap logo ka is waqt usse sambhalna zyada zaruri hai...prem is waqt apne hosh mein nahi hai..

All ladies went upstairs worriedly..

Meanwhile..Rishab stumble on his feet and try to backfire his punch towards prem..but kunal..manmeet..and preet stopped him..

Preet aggresively:- agar mere bhai pe tune ungli tak bhi uthai na..jaan se mar dalunga tujhe...tune jo bhi kiya..mann to kar raha hai tuje abhi isi waqt zinda gard dun..lekin tuje saza dena ka haq sirf mere bhai ka hai...

Saying this preet..kunal..manmeet tossed rishab towards Prem...again prem grabbed him by his collar..and punched him again...

Yeh sab kya ho raha Rishab's father roared angrily...

Rishab's father:- Mr. Lalit Juneja..yeh kya battmezi hai..apne hame yaha bulaya humari bezati karne ke liye...Prem aise kasie hath utha sakta hai mere bete pe...

Lalit:- prem thik ussi tarha apke bete pe haath utha sakta hai...jis tarha apke bete ne meri beti heer par buri nazar dali hai...

Rishab's father:- kya bakwas kar rahe hai ap..

Balraj:- acha to ab khud hi apne bete se puchiye na..

Rishab's father:- rishi..yeh sab kya bol rahe..batade in logo ko ki tera heer se koi rishta nahi hai..

Rishab:- I love her dad!!!

Rishab parents got shocked...and prem again kick him aggresively...

Prem:- Heer sirf meri hai..samjha tu..

Rishab smirked at prem

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In prem's room

Heer was crying her heart out while teji and gayatri was hugging her try to console her..

Teji:- bas beta shant ho..ab koi khatra nahi hai..chup ho ja..

Heer:- nahi ma..woo wapis ajayega..wo muje prem se door kar dega..

Gayatri:- koi tuje tere prem se door nahi karega heer..apne pyar pe or apne prem pe bharosa rakha..

Meher:- Ma maine doctor ko phone kar diya wo bas ate hi hone..

Teji nodded..

Kulraj:- tab tak hum heer ke kapdre badal dete hai..

Meher heer ke liye nahi sari nikal..

Meher:- ji di..

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Rishab:- tujhe kya lagta hai prem..saath phere lene se..gale mein mangalsutra pehenane se..maang mein sindoor bharne se..heer teri ho jayegi..han..nahi kabhi nahi..itna waqt maine heer ka intezar sirf isilye nahi kiya tha..ki usse teri banta hua dekh sakun...heer sirf meri hai...

Prem was about to give another punch but before that rishab's father slapped him across his face...

Rishab was shocked:- dad!

Rishab's father:- dad mat keh mujhe...sharam ati hai muje tuje apna beta kehte hue..tune kisi or ki biwi pe buri nazar dali..ek lardki ke sath zabardasti karne ki koshish ki...chi..sharam ani chahiye tuje..

Rajveer came forward:- as being as a police officer..Mr rishab rampal you are under arrest..in case of attempting sexual assault..

Rajveer gave signal to his security cops.. to arrest him..

Rishab gave a smug smile to prem..:- yeh hatkardiyan (handcuffs) muje meri heer se zyada der tak door nahi kar sakti prem...main aounga..wapis apne heer ko lene..

Prem tried to hit him again but rajveer and kunal stopped..

Rishab laughed loudly while he is getting dragged by the cops..

Rishab scream:- sunlo heer!!! Main wapis zarur aounga tumhe apne sath le jane...

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Heer starlted by rishab's voice and fraked out..

Heer:- ma..dekha wo suna apne..wo rishab muje prem se door kar dega..

Gayatri kuch nahi hoga heer hum sab hai na..tumhare sath..

Heer again started crying..while gayatri hugged her..

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Whole family was waiting outside prem's room as doctor was checking heer..except teji..who was inside with heer..

Prem was pacing around..

Lalit:- prem himmat rakh sab thik hoga..

Just then doctor came out..

Prem run towards the doctor:- doctor heer kaisi hai..wo thik hai..??

Docter:- yes Mr. juenja..Mrs Heer juenja is abosulte fine..apne uhne sahi time pe bacha liya warna...anyways..heer abhi bohot weak hai and she is in trauma..to abhi unhe thorda waqt lage ga normal hone mein unke shareer pe jo ghao hai wo to thik ho jayege but mentally uhne heal hone mein thorda time lagega..

Doctor:- ap logo se yahi request hai ki aj jo bhi hua uska zikar ap heer ke samne zyada na kare..jitna ho sake uske samne normal behave ki jiye or usse khush rakhiye..usse safe feel karwaiye...

Doctor:- and prem ap unke husband hai..to apka role sabse barda hai..make her feel safe with you..kuch bhi unke dimag ya mannn mein chal raha hai..make her share with you..agr wo ro rahi hai..to unhe chup mat karwai ye..unhone rone jiye..bas ap unhe akela mat chordiye..ap samjh rahe hai na mein kya keh rahi hun..

Prem nodded...

Doctor:- abhi meine unhe neend ka injection de diya hai...ab wo subha hi uthengi...ab main chalti hu...

Doctor left..

Lalit:- heer ho ab aram kar rahi hai..ab log bhi aram kar lijiye..kiran..tu piche ka out house khul wade sab wahi rest kar lenge..

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Prem came inside his room saw heer was sleeping...

Prem to teji:- ma main hu heer ke sath..ap jaiye aram kar lijiye..kuch zarurat hogi to mae bula lunga apko..

Teji nodded:- thik hai beta..khayal rakhna..

Saying this teji left the room..prem locked the door and came towards the bed and sit beside heer..took her hand in his..and place a soft kiss on her forehead..

Prem whispered:- main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga heer..i promise..

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sorry for the spelling..typing and grammar mistakes😳

An this time no PMs sorry 😳


Edited by kiran_28 - 9 years ago

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